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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
02-2(话题:景点、美食)“同题异选”
无论是“景点介绍”的写作,还是“美食介绍”的写作,都承载着一项重要的功能——民族优秀文化的传承;这两种话题的写作有时还会出现在一道试题中。
一、景点介绍
高考英语第一节写作就“景点介绍”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的景点及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体的景点,允许考生在题目所设定的框架内自由选择一个或几个景点进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。
本专题的所谓的“景点”主要指著名或知名的旅游胜地/景区,也包括某些地方(大到城市,小到乡村等等)。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“景点”的选择:选择恰当的景点(考生本人对此要十分了解),确保有料可用、可写;二是写作的构思:景点介绍的写作总体来说属于说明文的范畴,但是写作里也有议论。“景点介绍”写作三段式构思:①写作背景(写作的由头<引出话题>、提供景点的概况性信息);②景点大致情况介绍(自然景观、独特之处和文化象征意义);③表达期待、祝福或到此一游的感受或表示强烈推荐;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对景点的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“景点”方面素材的积累。
1. The Great Wall, a UNESCO World Heritage Site, stretches over 13,000 miles, running across North China like a huge dragon, which starts at the Jiayuguan of Gansu Province in the west and ends at the Shanhaiguan of Hebei Province in the east. In fact, the Great Wall began as independent walls for different states when it was first built,and did not become the “Great Wall” until the Qin Dynasty. The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world that created by human beings. As the saying goes, “he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true hero”: If you come to China without climbing the Great Wall, it’s just like going Paris without visiting the Eiffel Tower; or going to Egypt without visiting the Pyramids.长城是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,绵延1.3万英里,它像一条巨龙横亘华北地区,西起甘肃省的嘉峪关,东至河北省的山海关。实际上,长城最初只是一些断断续续的城墙,直到秦朝统一中国后才将其连成长城。长城是人类创造的世界奇迹之一。正如谚语所说的那样:“不到长城非好汉”:如果你到了中国却没去过长城,就像到了巴黎没有去看看菲尔铁塔,或者就像到了埃及没有去看金字塔一样。
2. Mount Huang, not only a well-known tourist attraction worldwide, but also a UNESCO World Heritage , is
located in the south of Anhui province. It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that make it world famous and attractive. Besides, you can also enjoy other spectacular natural scenes there like the sea of clouds and hot springs. It is one of the most popular subjects of traditional Chinese painting and literature, winning high praise from artists both at home and abroad.黄山位于安徽省南部,不仅是世界著名的旅游景点,也是联合国教科文组织世界遗产。它是形状独特的松树和令人惊叹的岩石,使其闻名世界,极具吸引力。此外,您还可以在那里欣赏其他壮观的自然风光,如云海和温泉。它是中国传统绘画和文学中最受欢迎的主题之一,赢得了国内外艺术家的高度赞誉。
3. The Longmen Grottoes stand on the banks of the Yi River, 12.5 kilometers south of Luoyang City in Henan Province. The carving project began in the Northern Wei Dynasty and lasted for more than 400 years until the Northern Song Dynasty. At present there are over 2,300 niches, more than 100,000 images. The grottoes are an important part of ancient Chinese sculptures, and show great changes in ancient Chinese politics, economy, religion, culture and so on.龙门石窟位于河南省洛阳市以南12.5公里的沂河河畔。雕刻工程始于北魏,持续了400多年,直到北宋。目前有2300多个壁龛,100000多张图片。石窟是中国古代雕塑的重要组成部分,展示了中国古代政治、经济、宗教、文化等方面的巨大变化。
4. The Hukou Waterfall is the largest waterfall on the Yellow River, located on the border between Shanxi and
Shaanxi provinces. It is the world’s largest yellow waterfall and the second largest waterfall in China. Visitors can explore the scenic area, hike the trails, and enjoy local cuisine.3.壶口瀑布是黄河上最大的瀑布,位于陕西省和山西省的交界处。它是世界上最大的黄色瀑布,也是中国第二大瀑布。游客可以探索景区,徒步旅行,享受当地美食。
5. The Three Gorges Dam, located on the Yangtze River in China's Hubei province, is the largest hydroelectric dam in the world. The Three Gorges area, with its steep cliffs, crystal-clear water and rich history and culture, is the real highlight of the Yangtze River. Every year millions of tourists are attracted here partly because of its gorgeous scenery and unique historical sites and partly because of the world-famous dam, which has been built to control flooding and provide power for the central region of China.位于中国湖北省长江上的三峡大坝是世界上最大的水电站。三峡地区以其陡峭的悬崖、清澈的海水和丰富的历史文化,是长江真正的亮点。每年都有数百万游客被吸引到这里,部分原因是它美丽的风景和独特的历史遗迹,部分原因则是世界著名的大坝,它的建造是为了控制洪水,为中国中部地区提供电力。
6. Jiuzhaigou, surrounded by mountains with evergreen forests all year round, is an incredible place in the northern part of Si-chuan Province, which is well-known for its beautiful lakes. The lakes are so clear that you can almost see the bottoms. The Jiuzhai Valley National Park in Sichuan province is known for its pristine forests, waterfalls, and crystal-clear lakes and was listed on the World Heritage List in 1992. Jiuzhaigou has become a popular tourist attraction for both Chinese and foreign tourists.九寨沟是四川省北部一个令人难以置信的地方,四周环绕着四季常青的森林,以美丽的湖泊而闻名。湖水清澈见底。九寨沟国家公园以其原始森林、瀑布和清澈的湖泊而闻名,1992年被列入世界遗产名录。九寨沟已成为中外游客的热门旅游景点。
7. The West Lake, an iconic attraction of Hangzhou, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and a scenic spot with stunning views of the lake, islands, and surrounding hills. The West Lake has a long history and is well known for its beautiful scenery. The Legend of White Snake makes it famous in China. 西湖,杭州的标志性景点,是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,风景秀丽,湖、岛、山尽收眼底。西湖历史悠久,以美丽的风景而闻名。《白蛇传》使西湖在中国更加出名。
8. The Mogao Caves located about 25 kilometers southeast of the city of Dunhuang in Gansu Province, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and an important center of Buddhist art and culture. Visitors can explore the caves and view the stunning artwork that dates back over one thousand years.位于甘肃省敦煌市东南约25公里处的莫高窟是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,也是佛教艺术和文化的重要中心。游客可以探索这些洞穴,欣赏这些令人惊叹的艺术品,这些艺术品可以追溯到一千多年前。
9. The Dunhuang Mingsha Sand Dunes in Gansu province offers stunning natural scenery and adventurous activities such as camel riding and sandboarding. Visitors can also explore the nearby Crescent Lake and Mogao Caves.敦煌名沙沙丘位于甘肃省,这里有令人惊叹的自然风光,也有骑骆驼和沙板等冒险活动。游客还可以探索附近的新月湖和莫高窟。
10. The Leshan Giant Buddha is a huge statue carved into the side of Lingyun Mountain, Sichuan Province. It is the tallest and largest Buddha in the world. There is a local saying “The mountain is a Buddha and the Buddha is a mountain.” 乐山大佛是一座巨大的雕像,被雕刻在四川省灵云山的一侧。它是世界上最高和最大的佛。当地有一个的说法:“山是佛,佛是山”。
11. Shaolin Temple was founded in 495 A. D. and it is situated in the heart of Songshan Mountain, the middle one of Five Famous Mountains in China. It is the birthplace of Zen Buddhism in China as well as the cradle of China’s Shaolin Wushu. It is famous for its Shaolin kung fu. Shaolin kung fu obtained its great reputation especially during the Tang Dynasty.少林寺始建于公元495年,位于中国五大名山之一的嵩山中心。它是禅宗在中国的发源地,也是中国少林武术的摇篮。少林寺以少林功夫而闻名。少林功夫尤其在唐代享有盛誉。
12. The Forbidden City, located in the middle of Beijing, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and a symbol of
China’s imperial past. Visitors can explore the palace, halls, and gardens that once housed the emperors of China. 位于北京北城中心的紫禁城是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,也是中国帝国历史的象征。游客可以探索曾经居住过中国皇帝的宫殿、大厅和花园。
13. The Terracotta Army Museum in Xi’an, Shaanxi province, is the largest underground military museum in the world. The vast,final dig site held hundreds of soldiers,lined up in a majestic and slightly eerie show of force.
Each obviously different individual makes the tremendous terracotta warriors’ group more lively, real and animated.位于陕西省西安市的兵马俑博物馆是世界最大的地下军事博物馆。这个巨大的坑里容纳着数以百计的士兵。他们排列整齐,威严而又略带诡异地炫耀着武力。许多显然不同的个体,使整个群体更显得活跃、真实、富有生气。
14. The Dujiangyan Irrigation System in Sichuan province is an ancient engineering marvel that still functions today to irrigate the fields and prevent floods. 四川都江堰灌溉系统是一个古老的工程奇迹,至今仍发挥着灌溉农田和防止洪水的作用。
15. The Zhangjiajie National Forest Park in Hunan province is a stunning natural attraction with unique sandstone pillars and rock formations that inspired the movie “Avatar.” Zhangjiajie was awarded the title of “World Geological Park” in 2014。位于湖南省的张家界国家森林公园是一个令人惊叹的自然景点,其独特的砂岩柱和岩层激发了电影《阿凡达》的灵感。张家界在2014年被授予“世界地质公园”的称号。
16. Although located in Yunnan, Shangri-La has many old villages with a unique countryside life. The
beautiful city was formerly called Zhongdian that was burnt by a big fire on January 11, 2014, but it has been rebuilt quickly. The winter is pretty cold in Shangri-La, but for those who are not afraid of the cold temperature, to see the snow here is very attractive!虽然位于云南,但它有许多古老的村庄,有着独特的乡村生活。这座美丽的城市原名中甸,于2014年1月11日被大火烧毁,但很快重建了起来。香格里拉的冬天很冷,但对于那些不怕寒冷温度的人来说,看到这里的雪很有吸引力!
17. Of the world’s three major garden systems, the Chinese classical garden is hailed as one of the origins of the world’s garden due to its long history and abundant connotations. The Chinese classical garden is a precious treasure of our ancient Chinese architecture. It is a kind of environment art, which systematically combines artificial mountains and rivers,plants and buildings with the natural landscape. When you go sightseeing in a Chinese classical garden,you should be able to appreciate its artistic concept which “makes use of the natural landscape to create the real fun of mountains and rivers for viewers.” For example, the Yu Garden in Shanghai is a traditional Chinese garden with stunning architecture and picturesque landscapes. Suzhou Classical Gardens are noted for their exquisite design and layout. They’re outstanding examples of southern China’s private gardens. Landscape and buildings are perfectly integrated in Suzhou classical gardens,creating a great harmony between man and nature.在世界三大园林体系中,中国园林历史悠久、内涵丰富,被誉为世界造园史上的渊源之一。中国园林是把人造的山水、植物、建筑等与自然地貌有机结合的环境艺术,是我国古代建筑艺术的珍宝。游赏中国古典园林,能充分领略“假自然之景,创山水真趣”的园林意境。例如,上海豫园是一座传统的中国园林,有着令人惊叹的建筑和如画的风景。苏州园林以精致的布局设计而闻名。它们是中国南方园林的杰出典范。景观和建筑完美融合,缔造了人与自然的和谐之美。
18. Located in the northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is known as one of the best ancient royal gardens. Dating back to the 18th century, it was once a summer resort belonging to the emperors. The palace consists of hundreds of striking buildings and halls. That is why it is always crowded with tourists. If you keep your eyes open, you will be surprised to find the Chinese wisdom hidden in architecture. Furthermore, you can gain a better understanding of Chinese history.颐和园位于北京西北部,被称为最好的古代皇家园林之一。它的历史可以追溯到18世纪,曾经是皇帝的避暑胜地。这座宫殿由数百座引人注目的建筑和大厅组成。这就是为什么它总是挤满了游客。如果你睁大眼睛,你会惊讶地发现隐藏在建筑中的中国智慧。此外,你可以更好地了解中国历史。
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
内容包括:1. 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
2. 该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful City in China
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【答案】
A Beautiful City in China
Learning that your website has added the most beautiful China column, I want to introduce you to the most
beautiful city in China, the capital of China, Beijing.
Located in the north of China, Beijing is China’s political and cultural center. When you visit Beijing, you can
not only feel the ancient architectural styles such as the old Beijing Hutong, the Forbidden City, but also feel the fashionable buildings such as Dird’s Nest and Water Cube full of the flavor of modern metropolis. The Great Wall of Beijing is a good place not to be missed. As the saying goes, “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”
For me, Beijing has special feelings. It is a gathering place where we Chinese people yearn for a better life. I
love Beijing with amazing history and culture.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给某英文网站投稿,以推广中国城市,增加对外交流。稿件的主要内容是介绍考生自己喜欢的或去过的一个城市,如名称、方位、文化、景点特色等,并表达考生自己对该城市的印象和感受。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
增加:added → increased
漂亮的:beautiful →pretty
有……的味道:the flavor of → the taste of
到达:reach→ arrive in
2. 句式拓展
原 句:He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.
拓展句:If he doesn’t reach the Great Wall, he will not a true man.
【高分句型】
1. Located in the north of China, Beijing is China’s political and cultural center(运用了过去分词短语作状语)
2. Learning that your website has added the most beautiful China column, I want to introduce you to the most
beautiful city in China, the capital of China, Beijing.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
【官方答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Learning that your website has added the most beautiful China column, I want to introduce you to one of the
most beautiful provinces in China, Sichuan Province.
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is
its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
二、美食介绍
高考英语第一节写作就“美食介绍”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的美食及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体的美食,允许考生在试题所设定的框架内自由选择一个或几个美食进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。
本专题的所谓的“美食”外延扩展到具有特色的农家菜、小吃、零食等等。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“美食”的选择:选择恰当的美食加以介绍(考生本人对此要十分了解),确保有料可用、可写;二是写作的构思:美食介绍的写作总体来说属于说明文的范畴,但是写作里也有议论。“美食介绍”写作三段式构思:①写作背景(写作的由头<引出话题>、提供美食的概况性信息);②描述美食(独特之处、制作方法、食用方式以及文化象征意义等);③食客的评价(对该“美食”的总体印象)或表示强烈推荐或表达期待;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对景点的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“美食介绍”方面常用的套句。
1. As a Chinese, I take pride in our rich and diverse food culture. Among the many delicious dishes, …, also known as…, is my favorite.作为一名中国人,我为我们丰富多样的饮食文化感到自豪。在众多美味的菜肴中,…(也称为……)是我最喜欢的。
2. Traditional Chinese food, a shining pearl in the treasure of Chinese culture, enjoys high reputation at home and abroad. As for my favourite one, … ranks top of my recommendation list.中国传统美食是中华文化宝库中的一颗璀璨明珠,在国内外享有盛誉。至于我最喜欢的一个,……在我的推荐名单上排名第一。
3. Enjoying high reputation worldwide, Chinese food boasts its unique and various kinds. Among them, what stands out most is …, which I'd like to recommend.中国菜在世界范围内享有很高的声誉,以其独特和种类繁多而闻名。其中,最突出的是……,我想推荐一下。
4. …, a must-try dish for anyone who loves Chinese cuisine, which can date back to ... Dynasty /have/boast a long/profound history of ...对于任何喜欢中国菜的人来说,这是一道必尝的菜,可以追溯到……朝代/有着悠久而深厚的历史。
5. ... are one of the Chinese people's favorite traditional dishes.There's an old saying that claims,“Nothing could be more delicious than ...”.……是深受中国人民喜爱的传统食品。民间有“好吃不过……”的俗语。
6. ... is a traditional Chinese food represents.It can fully reflects the culture of 5000 years of Chinese civilization.
……可谓是中华传统美食的代表!它充分体现出中华5000年文明的底蕴。
7. Chinese cuisine is a general term for the various dishes from diverse regions and ethnic groups of China.
中国菜是中国各地区、各民族多种菜肴的统称。
8. China covers a large territory and has many nationalities,hence a variety of Chinese food with different but fantastic and mouthwatering flavor.中国地域辽阔,民族众多,因此各种中国饮食口味不同,却都味美,令人垂涎。
9. Chincse cuisine culture is extensive and profound.And as one of the Three World Cuisines,Chinese cuisine enjoys a reputation at home and abroad.中国饮食文化博大精深,作为世界三大菜系之一的中国菜在海内外享有盛誉。
10. Chinese food has diversified color,aromatic flavor,and excellent taste as its main features.中国菜色香味俱全。
11. One of the characteristics of Chinese cuisine is “sweet in the south,salty in the north,spicy in the east and sour in the west”.中国人的饮食有着“南甜北咸,东辣西酸”的特点。
12. Tastes of Chinese food are traditionally categorized into five flavors:sour,sweet,bitter,spicy,and salty.Chinese emphasize the harmony of the five flavors.中国食物的味道习惯上分为五种:酸、甜、苦、辣、咸。中国人强调五味调和。
13. … is made with … and a variety of …, such as …, …, and…. Boiled, steamed, or fried, it is often served during festivals and family gatherings.饺子是用……和各种……制成的,如……和……。它可以煮、蒸或炸,经常在节日和家庭聚会期间食用。
14. Unique in taste and cultural significance, ... is a must-try that not only satisfies your appetite but also offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.……在味道和文化意义上都是独一无二的,它不仅能满足你的胃口,还能让你一窥我们深厚而迷人的文化。
15. … symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.……在中国文化中象征着财富和好运。
16. In conclusion, Chinese cuisine is not only delicious but also full of cultural connotations.总之,中国菜不仅美味可口,而且富有文化内涵。
17. Chinese cuisine is not only about taste but also an art form.中国美食不仅是一种味道,也是一种艺术形式。
18. In conclusion, Chinese cuisine culture is a treasure that reflects the wisdom and creativity of the Chinese people.总之,中国饮食文化是反映中国人民智慧和创造力的瑰宝。
19. I love Chinese cuisine and I hope more people can enjoy its charm.我喜欢中国菜,我希望更多的人能享受它的魅力
20. Thus, don’t miss the opportunity to taste authentic … and experience the warmth and comfort it brings.因此,不要错过品尝正宗的……机会,体验它带来的温暖和舒适。
友情提醒:关于“中华传统美食”,请考生要多多关注新高考英语有关语法填空的练习。
(广西南宁市2024届高三上学期12月阶段性检测,也是2022年成都市第二次诊断考试)假定你是李华,你校英语报“Food and Culture”栏目正在征集有关中国传统美食的文章,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,推荐一道中国传统美食。
内容包括:1. 美食介绍:
2. 推荐理由
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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【答案】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Food
As a Chinese, I take pride in our rich and diverse food culture. Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, also
known as dumplings is my favorite.
Jiaozi is made with dough skin and a variety of fillings, such as meat, vegetables, and seafood. Boiled,
steamed, or fried, it is often served during festivals and family gatherings. With its shape resembling ancient Chinese currency, Jiaozi symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.
Unique in taste and cultural significance, Jiaozi is a must-try that not only satisfies your stomach but also
offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生向校英语报“Food and Culture”栏目投稿,推荐一道中国传统美食。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
以……为荣:take pride in→ be proud of
各种各样的:a variety of → varieties of/various
重要性:significance→ importance
迷人的:fascinating→ charming/enchanting
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, also known as dumplings is my favorite.
拓展句:Among the many delicious dishes, Jiaozi, which is also known as dumplings, is my favorite.
【高分句型】
1. With its shape resembling ancient Chinese currency, Jiaozi symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.(运用了with复合结构)
2. Unique in taste and cultural significance, Jiaozi is a must-try that not only satisfies your stomach but also
offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
说明:以下1-6题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。为了避免考生写作时的重复,教师可以在考生写作前,对所要介绍的“景点”给出一定的范围。
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(湖南省长沙市雅礼中学等多校2024届高三上学期月考五)你们学校正在举办“讲好中国故事”英语征文活动,请你以一个名胜古迹为主题,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 古迹的简介和历史;
2. 意义或启示。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案1】
The Legacy of the Great Wall
The Great Wall, a marvel of human ingenuity and determination, stretches across northern China, weaving
through mountains and deserts. This ancient fortification, dating back to the 7th century BC, was initially built to protect against invaders. Over centuries, it grew to become a symbol of Chinese unity and a testament to the resilience of its people. The Great Wall teaches us that unity, hard work, and perseverance are keys to overcoming challenges and defending what we hold dear. Its legacy continues to inspire generations, reminding us of our shared humanity and the power of unity in the face of adversity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在举办“讲好中国故事”英语征文活动,要求考生以一个名胜古迹为主题,写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
奇迹:marvel→ miracle
智慧:ingenuity→ wisdom
决心:determination→ resolution
最初:initially→ originally
2. 句式拓展
原 句:The Great Wall, a marvel of human ingenuity and determination, stretches across northern China, weaving through mountains and deserts.
拓展句:The Great Wall, a marvel of human ingenuity and determination, stretches across northern China, which weaves through mountains and deserts.
【高分句型】
1. The Great Wall, a marvel of human ingenuity and determination, stretches across northern China, weaving
through mountains and deserts.(运用了现在分词weaving作状语)
2. The Great Wall teaches us that unity, hard work, and perseverance are keys to overcoming challenges and
defending what we hold dear.(运用了that和what引导的宾语从句)
【答案2】
The Enchanting Terracotta Warriors
Located in Xi’an, China, the Terracotta Warriors are a marvel of ancient craftsmanship.
Dating back over 2, 000 years, these life-sized statues were created to guard the tomb of Emperor Qin Shi
Huang. Each warrior has a unique facial expression and pose, showcasing the skill and dedication of the ancient artisans. Not only are they a testament to ancient military might, but they also offer a window into China’s rich cultural and historical heritage. The Terracotta Warriors remind us of the legacy of Emperor Qin Shi Huang and his vision for a unified and prosperous nation. They stand as a symbol of resilience, unity, and the enduring spirit of the Chinese people.
【答案3】
The Legacy of the Forbidden City
The Forbidden City, located in Beijing, is a magnificent complex of palaces and temples that once served as
the royal court of China’s Emperors.
This walled city within a city is a masterpiece of ancient architecture, with intricate carvings and vibrant
paintings adorning its walls. For over five centuries, it was the center of political power in China, housing over 24 Emperors who ruled the vast Ming and Qing empires. The Forbidden City is not only a symbol of China’s rich cultural heritage but also a testament to the resilience and unity of the Chinese people. It teaches us about the importance of tradition and respect for history, reminding us that we are the guardians of our cultural legacy.
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(广东省肇庆市肇庆鼎湖中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中)假设你是李华,最近你校正准备组织学生进行旅行活动,但关于旅游景点还未决定,学校特向同学们征求意见,请你给林董事长写一封英文信。
内容包括:1. 推荐一个旅游城市;
2. 推荐理由(2~3个);
3. 希望董事长考虑。
要求:1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头与结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Lin,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Lin,
Knowing that our school is asking for our opinions about which city to travel to, I would like to recommend a
famous one—Guilin. The reasons are as follows.
Lying along the Lijiang River, Guilin is a key tourist city which is famous for its beautiful scenery in the
world. With clear water and green hills, it attracts thousands of tourists every year. Besides, it’s a charming city with rich culture and a long history, where you can enjoy various caves and carvings.
I will be extremely glad and honored if you could take it into consideration!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的口吻给给林董事长推荐学校校正准备组织学生去游玩的一个旅游城市。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
想要做某事: would like to do→feel like doing
推荐:recommend→suggest
另外:besides→in addition
各种各样的:various→a variety of
2. 句式拓展
原 句:With clear water and green hills, it attracts thousands of tourists every year.
拓展句:Beacuse there is clear water and green hills to enjoy, it attracts thousands of tourists every year.
【高分句型】
1. Knowing that our school is asking for our opinions about which city to travel to, I would like to recommend a
famous one — Guilin. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2. Lying along the Lijiang River, Guilin is a key tourist city which is famous for its beautiful scenery in the
world. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
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(2024届河南省郑州市高三下学期第三次质量预测)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍该景点;
2. 说明推荐的理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Leta,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Leta,
Knowing you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
There’re many famous places of interest in China, among which the Palace Museum is most worth visiting.
Located in the center of Beijing, it’s the classic example of Chinese palace architecture of the Ming and Qing dynasties. I strongly recommend you have a look at the entire palace area surrounded by tall walls, the great halls and the red and yellow colors representing royal power. It’s really the best place to learn about Chinese culture and history.
Hope you’ll like it!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
出名的:famous→noted, well-known
位于:locate→situate
代表:represent→stand for
喜欢:like→be fond of
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Knowing you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
拓展句:When I know you’re coming to China for a trip, I’d like to give you a warm welcome.
【高分句型】
1. There’re many famous places of interest in China, among which the Palace Museum is most worth visiting.
(运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句)
2. I strongly recommend you have a look at the entire palace area surrounded by tall walls, the great halls and the
red and yellow colors representing royal power.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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(2024届河南省普通高等学校招生全国统一考试诊断A卷英语试题)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Tom寒假期间想在中国旅游,请你给他写一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 推荐一处旅游目的地;
2. 介绍主要景点;
3. 温馨提示。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m so glad to hear that you want to travel in China during the winter vacation. I would like to recommend
Sanya to you.
Sanya is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather. You can enjoy the sunshine, go swimming and try various water sports there. The Yalong Bay is a must-see place, where you can see the beautiful sea view and take a lot of nice pictures.
Remember to bring your sunscreen and hat to protect yourself from the sun. And it’s better to book a hotel in
advance to avoid trouble. I hope you have a great time in China!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生给交换生朋友Tom写封信,就其寒假来中国旅游向其推荐一处旅游目的地。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy/delighted
想要:would like → want
各种各样的:various → a variety of
许多:a lot of→ lots of/a great many
2. 句式拓展
原 句:I would like to recommend Sanya to you. It is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful
beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather.
拓展句:I would like to recommend Sanya to you, which is a beautiful city in Hainan Province, with beautiful beaches, clear blue sky and warm weather.
【高分句型】
1. I’m so glad to hear that you want to travel in China during the winter vacation.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
2. The Yalong Bay is a must-see place, where you can see the beautiful sea view and take a lot of nice pictures.
(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
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(贵州省黔东南州2024-2025学年高三上学期开学联考)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Steve想要来你的家乡旅游。请你给他写一封邮件,推荐一个旅游景点。
内容包括:1. 欢迎他的到来;
2. 推荐景点及理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
I’m excited to know that you are planning to visit Guizhou, my hometown. I highly recommend you visit
Huangguoshu Waterfall. It is one of the largest and most spectacular waterfalls in China. The waterfall is a breathtaking sight, and you can even walk behind it to experience its power up close. The surrounding area is equally beautiful, with lush greenery, unique rock formations, and scenic spots perfect for hiking and photography.
Additionally, the local culture and cuisine are fascinating. You will have the opportunity to try some traditional
Guizhou dishes and learn about the local customs.
I hope you can have an unforgettable time exploring this natural wonder and enjoy your stay in Guizhou!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Steve写封邮件,推荐一个家乡的旅游景点。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
机会:opportunity→chance
传统的:traditional→conventional
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable
2. 句式拓展
原 句:I highly recommend you visit Huangguoshu Waterfall.
拓展句:I highly recommend you visit Huangguoshu Waterfall, which is a must-see attraction.
【高分句型】
1. I’m excited to know that you are planning to visit Guizhou, my hometown.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
2. I hope you can have an unforgettable time exploring this natural wonder and enjoy your stay in Guizhou!
(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
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(2024届湖北省高三下学期新高考信息卷三模)假定你是湖北省的一位高中生李华,你的加拿大笔友Mark想来你的家乡旅游,请你给他写一封邮件介绍相关景点。
内容包括:1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍景点;
3. 表达你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mark,
It’s great to hear that you are coming to my hometown Wuhan to pay a visit. Welcome! Now I will briefly
introduce this beautiful city to you.
Located in the middle of China, with Yangtze River running through her, Wuhan is home to awesome scenery.
The most famous attraction is the Yellow Crane Tower, which overlooks the Yangtze River for thousands of years. Standing on the top of the tower to admire the ancient and modern city will take your breath away. If you are interested in history, you may also want to visit Hubei Provincial Museum where thousands of valuable historical collections are displayed. And don’t miss cycling along the picturesque East Lake, which is absolutely relaxing and fun!
I’m sure you will have a great time in Wuhan. Come soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给加拿大笔友Mark写一封邮件,介绍家乡的旅游景点。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
风景:scenery→landscape
最著名的景点:the most famous attraction→the most popular tourist spot
欣赏:admire→enjoy the view of
优美的:picturesque→scenic
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Located in the middle of China, with Yangtze River running through her, Wuhan is home to awesome scenery.
拓展句:Wuhan, which is located in the middle of China and has the Yangtze River running through it, is home to awesome scenery.
【高分句型】
1. It’s great to hear that you are coming to my hometown Wuhan to pay a visit.(that引导的宾语从句)
2. The most famous attraction is the Yellow Crane Tower, which overlooks the Yangtze River for thousands of
years.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
说明:以下第7题,既有“美景”又有“美食”;8-10题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。为了避免考生写作时的重复,教师可以在考生写作前,对所要介绍的“美食”给出一定的范围。
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(安徽省名校联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期实验班12月大联考)假定你是李华。十一国庆假期你去安徽旅行了,请你给你的加拿大好友Jack写一封信,分享你的旅游见闻。
内容包括:1. 安徽的美景和美食;
2. 邀请他寒假来安徽游玩。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing to share with you my recent travel experience to Anhui during the
National Day holiday.
Mount Huang is a must to visit when you come to Anhui. The splendid waterfalls and unique rock formations
make it a truly scenic paradise. Additionally, I explored the ancient villages of Xidi and Hongcun, which impressed me most. What’s more, Anhui is well-known for its mouthwatering dishes, ranging from braised bamboo shoots to
stinky tofu. Each dish has its own unique flavors.
Welcome to Anhui during the winter vacation. I’d be glad to be your guide.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。十一国庆假期你去安徽旅行了,请你给你的加拿大好友Jack写一封信,分享你的旅游见闻。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
参观:visit→pay a visit to
此外:additionally→in addition
著名的:well-known→celebrated
高兴的:glad→delighted
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Mount Huang is a must to visit when you come to Anhui. The splendid waterfalls and unique rock formations make it a truly scenic paradise.
拓展句:Mount Huang where the splendid waterfalls and unique rock formations make it a truly scenic paradise, is a must to visit when you come to Anhui.
【高分句型】
1. Additionally, I explored the ancient villages of Xidi and Hongcun, which impressed me most.
(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. What’s more, Anhui is well-known for its mouthwatering dishes, ranging from braised bamboo shoots to
stinky tofu.(运用了现在分词作状语)
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(广西南宁市二中2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)假如你是李华,你的外教Peter对中国饮食文化非常感兴趣,他想请你推荐一道你最喜欢的传统美食。请你给他写封信。
内容包括:1. 美食名称;
2. 简要描述该美食;
3. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数 80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I know you are enthusiastic about Chinese food and drinks, so I am writing to recommend a popular Chinese
drink for breakfast— oybean drink.
Just like tofu, soybean drink can also date back to the Han Dynasty. Its white color makes it look like milk, but
it is actually made from beans. When heated, it gives off a refreshing smell. Additionally, it is not only delicious but also nutritious since it’s rich in vegetable protein.
If you are interested, why not have a try? I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于推荐信。要求考生以李华的身份向外教Peter推荐一道自己最喜欢的传统美食,包括美食名称、简要描述以及推荐理由。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
热情:enthusiastic → passionate
追溯到:date back to → date from/trace back to
实际上:actually → in fact
另外:additionally → besides/in addition
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Its white color makes it look like milk.
拓展句:The white color gives it an appearance that is similar to milk, but it is actually made from beans.
【高分句型】
1. If you are interested, why not have a try?(运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句)
2. I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句)
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(2024届福建省厦门市高三下学期第四次质量检测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信,告知他计划今年暑假来你的家乡体验美食。请你写一封邮件,向他推荐一款传统名吃。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown this summer to try out the local cuisine. I highly
recommend you to sample a well-known traditional dish called “Xiaolongbao”, which is a type of steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup broth.
The time-honoured dish originated from my hometown — the Jiangnan region of China, especially Shanghai
and Wuxi. It is traditionally steamed in small bamboo baskets, hence the name (xiaolong is literally small steaming basket), and has become famous all over China. You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here. It’s a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
Looking forward to your visit and trying out some delicious Xiaolongbao together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Peter写信,推荐一款家乡的传统名吃。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
打算做某事:plan to do → intend to do
装满:filled with → stuffed with
源自于:originate from → stem from
2. 句式拓展
原 句:You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here. It’s a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
拓展句:You can easily find Xiaolongbao in most restaurants and food stalls here, which is a must-try dish that you won’t regret.
【高分句型】
1. I highly recommend you to sample a well-known traditional dish called “Xiaolongbao”, which is a type of
steamed bun filled with savory pork and soup broth.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2. I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit my hometown this summer to try out the local cuisine.
(运用了that引导宾语从句)
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(云南省红河州一中2024届学年高三上学期11月期中)假如你是李华、你的外国朋友David酷爱中国美食,想要学习一道家常菜,请你给他写一封信,向他简要介绍烹饪方法。
内容包括:1.所需食材;
2.制作过程。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear David,
Knowing that you are interested in Chinese food, I am happy to recommend you a dish called scrambled eggs
and tomatoes, which is delicious and nutritious.
First, crack the eggs into a bowl, add some salt and mix them up. Next, slice the tomatoes into small pieces.
Then pour some cooking oil into the pan. When the oil is hot, put the eggs into the pan to cook until they are golden. Then set the scrambled eggs aside. Put the tomatoes into the pan and stir them for two minutes and then add the scrambled eggs into the tomatoes.
It is easy to make and you may give it a try.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求给外国朋友写信介绍一道中国菜肴的烹饪方法。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
开心的:happy→delighted
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have an interest in
放置一边:set ... aside→put ... aside
尝试:give it a try→give it a shot
2. 句式拓展
原 句:Put the tomatoes into the pan and stir them for two minutes and then add the scrambled eggs into the tomatoes.
拓展句:Put the tomatoes into the pan and stir them for two minutes, after which you add the scrambled eggs into the tomatoes.
【高分句型】
1. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese food, I am happy to recommend you a dish called scrambled eggs
and tomatoes, which is delicious and nutritious. (运用了现在分词作状语,that引导的宾语从句和which引
导的非限制性定语从句)
2. When the oil is hot, put the eggs into the pan to cook until they are golden.
(运用了when和until引导的时间状语从句)
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“同题异构”提升应用文写作训练的效率之专题
02-2(话题:景点、美食)“同题异选”
无论是“景点介绍”的写作,还是“美食介绍”的写作,都承载着一项重要的功能——民族优秀文化的传承;这两种话题的写作有时还会出现在一道试题中。
一、景点介绍
高考英语第一节写作就“景点介绍”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的景点及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体的景点,允许考生在题目所设定的框架内自由选择一个或几个景点进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。
本专题的所谓的“景点”主要指著名或知名的旅游胜地/景区,也包括某些地方(大到城市,小到乡村等等)。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“景点”的选择:选择恰当的景点(考生本人对此要十分了解),确保有料可用、可写;二是写作的构思:景点介绍的写作总体来说属于说明文的范畴,但是写作里也有议论。“景点介绍”写作三段式构思:①写作背景(写作的由头<引出话题>、提供景点的概况性信息);②景点大致情况介绍(自然景观、独特之处和文化象征意义);③表达期待、祝福或到此一游的感受或表示强烈推荐;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对景点的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“景点”方面素材的积累。
1. The Great Wall, a UNESCO World Heritage Site, stretches over 13,000 miles, running across North China like a huge dragon, which starts at the Jiayuguan of Gansu Province in the west and ends at the Shanhaiguan of Hebei Province in the east. In fact, the Great Wall began as independent walls for different states when it was first built,and did not become the “Great Wall” until the Qin Dynasty. The Great Wall is one of the wonders of the world that created by human beings. As the saying goes, “he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true hero”: If you come to China without climbing the Great Wall, it’s just like going Paris without visiting the Eiffel Tower; or going to Egypt without visiting the Pyramids.长城是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,绵延1.3万英里,它像一条巨龙横亘华北地区,西起甘肃省的嘉峪关,东至河北省的山海关。实际上,长城最初只是一些断断续续的城墙,直到秦朝统一中国后才将其连成长城。长城是人类创造的世界奇迹之一。正如谚语所说的那样:“不到长城非好汉”:如果你到了中国却没去过长城,就像到了巴黎没有去看看菲尔铁塔,或者就像到了埃及没有去看金字塔一样。
2. Mount Huang, not only a well-known tourist attraction worldwide, but also a UNESCO World Heritage , is
located in the south of Anhui province. It is uniquely shaped pine trees and breathtaking rocks that make it world famous and attractive. Besides, you can also enjoy other spectacular natural scenes there like the sea of clouds and hot springs. It is one of the most popular subjects of traditional Chinese painting and literature, winning high praise from artists both at home and abroad.黄山位于安徽省南部,不仅是世界著名的旅游景点,也是联合国教科文组织世界遗产。它是形状独特的松树和令人惊叹的岩石,使其闻名世界,极具吸引力。此外,您还可以在那里欣赏其他壮观的自然风光,如云海和温泉。它是中国传统绘画和文学中最受欢迎的主题之一,赢得了国内外艺术家的高度赞誉。
3. The Longmen Grottoes stand on the banks of the Yi River, 12.5 kilometers south of Luoyang City in Henan Province. The carving project began in the Northern Wei Dynasty and lasted for more than 400 years until the Northern Song Dynasty. At present there are over 2,300 niches, more than 100,000 images. The grottoes are an important part of ancient Chinese sculptures, and show great changes in ancient Chinese politics, economy, religion, culture and so on.龙门石窟位于河南省洛阳市以南12.5公里的沂河河畔。雕刻工程始于北魏,持续了400多年,直到北宋。目前有2300多个壁龛,100000多张图片。石窟是中国古代雕塑的重要组成部分,展示了中国古代政治、经济、宗教、文化等方面的巨大变化。
4. The Hukou Waterfall is the largest waterfall on the Yellow River, located on the border between Shanxi and
Shaanxi provinces. It is the world’s largest yellow waterfall and the second largest waterfall in China. Visitors can explore the scenic area, hike the trails, and enjoy local cuisine.3.壶口瀑布是黄河上最大的瀑布,位于陕西省和山西省的交界处。它是世界上最大的黄色瀑布,也是中国第二大瀑布。游客可以探索景区,徒步旅行,享受当地美食。
5. The Three Gorges Dam, located on the Yangtze River in China's Hubei province, is the largest hydroelectric dam in the world. The Three Gorges area, with its steep cliffs, crystal-clear water and rich history and culture, is the real highlight of the Yangtze River. Every year millions of tourists are attracted here partly because of its gorgeous scenery and unique historical sites and partly because of the world-famous dam, which has been built to control flooding and provide power for the central region of China.位于中国湖北省长江上的三峡大坝是世界上最大的水电站。三峡地区以其陡峭的悬崖、清澈的海水和丰富的历史文化,是长江真正的亮点。每年都有数百万游客被吸引到这里,部分原因是它美丽的风景和独特的历史遗迹,部分原因则是世界著名的大坝,它的建造是为了控制洪水,为中国中部地区提供电力。
6. Jiuzhaigou, surrounded by mountains with evergreen forests all year round, is an incredible place in the northern part of Si-chuan Province, which is well-known for its beautiful lakes. The lakes are so clear that you can almost see the bottoms. The Jiuzhai Valley National Park in Sichuan province is known for its pristine forests, waterfalls, and crystal-clear lakes and was listed on the World Heritage List in 1992. Jiuzhaigou has become a popular tourist attraction for both Chinese and foreign tourists.九寨沟是四川省北部一个令人难以置信的地方,四周环绕着四季常青的森林,以美丽的湖泊而闻名。湖水清澈见底。九寨沟国家公园以其原始森林、瀑布和清澈的湖泊而闻名,1992年被列入世界遗产名录。九寨沟已成为中外游客的热门旅游景点。
7. The West Lake, an iconic attraction of Hangzhou, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and a scenic spot with stunning views of the lake, islands, and surrounding hills. The West Lake has a long history and is well known for its beautiful scenery. The Legend of White Snake makes it famous in China. 西湖,杭州的标志性景点,是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,风景秀丽,湖、岛、山尽收眼底。西湖历史悠久,以美丽的风景而闻名。《白蛇传》使西湖在中国更加出名。
8. The Mogao Caves located about 25 kilometers southeast of the city of Dunhuang in Gansu Province, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and an important center of Buddhist art and culture. Visitors can explore the caves and view the stunning artwork that dates back over one thousand years.位于甘肃省敦煌市东南约25公里处的莫高窟是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,也是佛教艺术和文化的重要中心。游客可以探索这些洞穴,欣赏这些令人惊叹的艺术品,这些艺术品可以追溯到一千多年前。
9. The Dunhuang Mingsha Sand Dunes in Gansu province offers stunning natural scenery and adventurous activities such as camel riding and sandboarding. Visitors can also explore the nearby Crescent Lake and Mogao Caves.敦煌名沙沙丘位于甘肃省,这里有令人惊叹的自然风光,也有骑骆驼和沙板等冒险活动。游客还可以探索附近的新月湖和莫高窟。
10. The Leshan Giant Buddha is a huge statue carved into the side of Lingyun Mountain, Sichuan Province. It is the tallest and largest Buddha in the world. There is a local saying “The mountain is a Buddha and the Buddha is a mountain.” 乐山大佛是一座巨大的雕像,被雕刻在四川省灵云山的一侧。它是世界上最高和最大的佛。当地有一个的说法:“山是佛,佛是山”。
11. Shaolin Temple was founded in 495 A. D. and it is situated in the heart of Songshan Mountain, the middle one of Five Famous Mountains in China. It is the birthplace of Zen Buddhism in China as well as the cradle of China’s Shaolin Wushu. It is famous for its Shaolin kung fu. Shaolin kung fu obtained its great reputation especially during the Tang Dynasty.少林寺始建于公元495年,位于中国五大名山之一的嵩山中心。它是禅宗在中国的发源地,也是中国少林武术的摇篮。少林寺以少林功夫而闻名。少林功夫尤其在唐代享有盛誉。
12. The Forbidden City, located in the middle of Beijing, is a UNESCO World Heritage Site and a symbol of
China’s imperial past. Visitors can explore the palace, halls, and gardens that once housed the emperors of China. 位于北京北城中心的紫禁城是联合国教科文组织世界遗产,也是中国帝国历史的象征。游客可以探索曾经居住过中国皇帝的宫殿、大厅和花园。
13. The Terracotta Army Museum in Xi’an, Shaanxi province, is the largest underground military museum in the world. The vast,final dig site held hundreds of soldiers,lined up in a majestic and slightly eerie show of force.
Each obviously different individual makes the tremendous terracotta warriors’ group more lively, real and animated.位于陕西省西安市的兵马俑博物馆是世界最大的地下军事博物馆。这个巨大的坑里容纳着数以百计的士兵。他们排列整齐,威严而又略带诡异地炫耀着武力。许多显然不同的个体,使整个群体更显得活跃、真实、富有生气。
14. The Dujiangyan Irrigation System in Sichuan province is an ancient engineering marvel that still functions today to irrigate the fields and prevent floods. 四川都江堰灌溉系统是一个古老的工程奇迹,至今仍发挥着灌溉农田和防止洪水的作用。
15. The Zhangjiajie National Forest Park in Hunan province is a stunning natural attraction with unique sandstone pillars and rock formations that inspired the movie “Avatar.” Zhangjiajie was awarded the title of “World Geological Park” in 2014。位于湖南省的张家界国家森林公园是一个令人惊叹的自然景点,其独特的砂岩柱和岩层激发了电影《阿凡达》的灵感。张家界在2014年被授予“世界地质公园”的称号。
16. Although located in Yunnan, Shangri-La has many old villages with a unique countryside life. The
beautiful city was formerly called Zhongdian that was burnt by a big fire on January 11, 2014, but it has been rebuilt quickly. The winter is pretty cold in Shangri-La, but for those who are not afraid of the cold temperature, to see the snow here is very attractive!虽然位于云南,但它有许多古老的村庄,有着独特的乡村生活。这座美丽的城市原名中甸,于2014年1月11日被大火烧毁,但很快重建了起来。香格里拉的冬天很冷,但对于那些不怕寒冷温度的人来说,看到这里的雪很有吸引力!
17. Of the world’s three major garden systems, the Chinese classical garden is hailed as one of the origins of the world’s garden due to its long history and abundant connotations. The Chinese classical garden is a precious treasure of our ancient Chinese architecture. It is a kind of environment art, which systematically combines artificial mountains and rivers,plants and buildings with the natural landscape. When you go sightseeing in a Chinese classical garden,you should be able to appreciate its artistic concept which “makes use of the natural landscape to create the real fun of mountains and rivers for viewers.” For example, the Yu Garden in Shanghai is a traditional Chinese garden with stunning architecture and picturesque landscapes. Suzhou Classical Gardens are noted for their exquisite design and layout. They’re outstanding examples of southern China’s private gardens. Landscape and buildings are perfectly integrated in Suzhou classical gardens,creating a great harmony between man and nature.在世界三大园林体系中,中国园林历史悠久、内涵丰富,被誉为世界造园史上的渊源之一。中国园林是把人造的山水、植物、建筑等与自然地貌有机结合的环境艺术,是我国古代建筑艺术的珍宝。游赏中国古典园林,能充分领略“假自然之景,创山水真趣”的园林意境。例如,上海豫园是一座传统的中国园林,有着令人惊叹的建筑和如画的风景。苏州园林以精致的布局设计而闻名。它们是中国南方园林的杰出典范。景观和建筑完美融合,缔造了人与自然的和谐之美。
18. Located in the northwest of Beijing, the Summer Palace is known as one of the best ancient royal gardens. Dating back to the 18th century, it was once a summer resort belonging to the emperors. The palace consists of hundreds of striking buildings and halls. That is why it is always crowded with tourists. If you keep your eyes open, you will be surprised to find the Chinese wisdom hidden in architecture. Furthermore, you can gain a better understanding of Chinese history.颐和园位于北京西北部,被称为最好的古代皇家园林之一。它的历史可以追溯到18世纪,曾经是皇帝的避暑胜地。这座宫殿由数百座引人注目的建筑和大厅组成。这就是为什么它总是挤满了游客。如果你睁大眼睛,你会惊讶地发现隐藏在建筑中的中国智慧。此外,你可以更好地了解中国历史。
(2021·天津·高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
内容包括:1. 该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
2. 该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful City in China
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二、美食介绍
高考英语第一节写作就“美食介绍”的命题方式一般有两种:一种是给出指定的美食及其文字简介,并提出相应的要求让考生写作;另一种不指定具体的美食,允许考生在试题所设定的框架内自由选择一个或几个美食进行写作。比较而言,前者的写作相对容易,而后者的写作难度则相当大。本专题所涉及的内容为后者的写作。
本专题的所谓的“美食”外延扩展到具有特色的农家菜、小吃、零食等等。写好此类短文考生首先需要解决以下三个难点:一是“美食”的选择:选择恰当的美食加以介绍(考生本人对此要十分了解),确保有料可用、可写;二是写作的构思:美食介绍的写作总体来说属于说明文的范畴,但是写作里也有议论。“美食介绍”写作三段式构思:①写作背景(写作的由头<引出话题>、提供美食的概况性信息);②描述美食(独特之处、制作方法、食用方式以及文化象征意义等);③食客的评价(对该“美食”的总体印象)或表示强烈推荐或表达期待;三是语言的表达:使用恰当的逻辑词串起对景点的描述,使其言简意赅,同时注意高级词汇的灵活运用。其次,考生在高考复习中需要注重有关“美食介绍”方面常用的套句。
1. As a Chinese, I take pride in our rich and diverse food culture. Among the many delicious dishes, …, also known as…, is my favorite.作为一名中国人,我为我们丰富多样的饮食文化感到自豪。在众多美味的菜肴中,…(也称为……)是我最喜欢的。
2. Traditional Chinese food, a shining pearl in the treasure of Chinese culture, enjoys high reputation at home and abroad. As for my favourite one, … ranks top of my recommendation list.中国传统美食是中华文化宝库中的一颗璀璨明珠,在国内外享有盛誉。至于我最喜欢的一个,……在我的推荐名单上排名第一。
3. Enjoying high reputation worldwide, Chinese food boasts its unique and various kinds. Among them, what stands out most is …, which I'd like to recommend.中国菜在世界范围内享有很高的声誉,以其独特和种类繁多而闻名。其中,最突出的是……,我想推荐一下。
4. …, a must-try dish for anyone who loves Chinese cuisine, which can date back to ... Dynasty /have/boast a long/profound history of ...对于任何喜欢中国菜的人来说,这是一道必尝的菜,可以追溯到……朝代/有着悠久而深厚的历史。
5. ... are one of the Chinese people's favorite traditional dishes.There's an old saying that claims,“Nothing could be more delicious than ...”.……是深受中国人民喜爱的传统食品。民间有“好吃不过……”的俗语。
6. ... is a traditional Chinese food represents.It can fully reflects the culture of 5000 years of Chinese civilization.
……可谓是中华传统美食的代表!它充分体现出中华5000年文明的底蕴。
7. Chinese cuisine is a general term for the various dishes from diverse regions and ethnic groups of China.
中国菜是中国各地区、各民族多种菜肴的统称。
8. China covers a large territory and has many nationalities,hence a variety of Chinese food with different but fantastic and mouthwatering flavor.中国地域辽阔,民族众多,因此各种中国饮食口味不同,却都味美,令人垂涎。
9. Chincse cuisine culture is extensive and profound.And as one of the Three World Cuisines,Chinese cuisine enjoys a reputation at home and abroad.中国饮食文化博大精深,作为世界三大菜系之一的中国菜在海内外享有盛誉。
10. Chinese food has diversified color,aromatic flavor,and excellent taste as its main features.中国菜色香味俱全。
11. One of the characteristics of Chinese cuisine is “sweet in the south,salty in the north,spicy in the east and sour in the west”.中国人的饮食有着“南甜北咸,东辣西酸”的特点。
12. Tastes of Chinese food are traditionally categorized into five flavors:sour,sweet,bitter,spicy,and salty.Chinese emphasize the harmony of the five flavors.中国食物的味道习惯上分为五种:酸、甜、苦、辣、咸。中国人强调五味调和。
13. … is made with … and a variety of …, such as …, …, and…. Boiled, steamed, or fried, it is often served during festivals and family gatherings.饺子是用……和各种……制成的,如……和……。它可以煮、蒸或炸,经常在节日和家庭聚会期间食用。
14. Unique in taste and cultural significance, ... is a must-try that not only satisfies your appetite but also offers a glimpse into our profound and fascinating culture.……在味道和文化意义上都是独一无二的,它不仅能满足你的胃口,还能让你一窥我们深厚而迷人的文化。
15. … symbolizes wealth and good luck in Chinese culture.……在中国文化中象征着财富和好运。
16. In conclusion, Chinese cuisine is not only delicious but also full of cultural connotations.总之,中国菜不仅美味可口,而且富有文化内涵。
17. Chinese cuisine is not only about taste but also an art form.中国美食不仅是一种味道,也是一种艺术形式。
18. In conclusion, Chinese cuisine culture is a treasure that reflects the wisdom and creativity of the Chinese people.总之,中国饮食文化是反映中国人民智慧和创造力的瑰宝。
19. I love Chinese cuisine and I hope more people can enjoy its charm.我喜欢中国菜,我希望更多的人能享受它的魅力
20. Thus, don’t miss the opportunity to taste authentic … and experience the warmth and comfort it brings.因此,不要错过品尝正宗的……机会,体验它带来的温暖和舒适。
(广西南宁市2024届高三上学期12月阶段性检测,也是2022年成都市第二次诊断考试)假定你是李华,你校英语报“Food and Culture”栏目正在征集有关中国传统美食的文章,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,推荐一道中国传统美食。
内容包括:1. 美食介绍:
2. 推荐理由
注意:1. 词数 80 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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说明:以下1-6题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。考生所要介绍的“景点”不要重复。
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(湖南省长沙市雅礼中学等多校2024届高三上学期月考五)你们学校正在举办“讲好中国故事”英语征文活动,请你以一个名胜古迹为主题,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 古迹的简介和历史;
2. 意义或启示。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(广东省肇庆市肇庆鼎湖中学2022-2023学年高二上学期期中)假设你是李华,最近你校正准备组织学生进行旅行活动,但关于旅游景点还未决定,学校特向同学们征求意见,请你给林董事长写一封英文信。
内容包括:1. 推荐一个旅游城市;
2. 推荐理由(2~3个);
3. 希望董事长考虑。
要求:1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头与结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Lin,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(2024届河南省郑州市高三下学期第三次质量预测)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Leta发邮件说她打算来中国旅游,想让你为她推荐一个最值得参观的景点。请给她回复邮件。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍该景点;
2. 说明推荐的理由。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Leta,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(2024届河南省普通高等学校招生全国统一考试诊断A卷英语试题)假定你是李华,你的交换生朋友Tom寒假期间想在中国旅游,请你给他写一封邮件。
内容包括:1. 推荐一处旅游目的地;
2. 介绍主要景点;
3. 温馨提示。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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(贵州省黔东南州2024-2025学年高三上学期开学联考)假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Steve想要来你的家乡旅游。请你给他写一封邮件,推荐一个旅游景点。
内容包括:1. 欢迎他的到来;
2. 推荐景点及理由;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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(2024届湖北省高三下学期新高考信息卷三模)假定你是湖北省的一位高中生李华,你的加拿大笔友Mark想来你的家乡旅游,请你给他写一封邮件介绍相关景点。
内容包括:1. 表示欢迎;
2. 介绍景点;
3. 表达你的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
说明:以下第7题,既有“美景”又有“美食”;8-10题从题材上说都属于“同题”。为了练习的方便,笔者分开单列。考生所要介绍的“美食”不要重复。
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(安徽省名校联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期实验班12月大联考)假定你是李华。十一国庆假期你去安徽旅行了,请你给你的加拿大好友Jack写一封信,分享你的旅游见闻。
内容包括:1. 安徽的美景和美食;
2. 邀请他寒假来安徽游玩。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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(广西南宁市二中2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考)假如你是李华,你的外教Peter对中国饮食文化非常感兴趣,他想请你推荐一道你最喜欢的传统美食。请你给他写封信。
内容包括:1. 美食名称;
2. 简要描述该美食;
3. 推荐理由。
注意:1. 词数 80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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(2024届福建省厦门市高三下学期第四次质量检测)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信,告知他计划今年暑假来你的家乡体验美食。请你写一封邮件,向他推荐一款传统名吃。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(云南省红河州一中2024届学年高三上学期11月期中)假如你是李华、你的外国朋友David酷爱中国美食,想要学习一道家常菜,请你给他写一封信,向他简要介绍烹饪方法。
内容包括:1.所需食材;
2.制作过程。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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