句式提升非谓语写作课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

句式升级 非谓语写作 1 1 分析高考作文评分 2 小心探索写作步骤 3 意气风发写非谓 CONTENTS 非谓语 写作 5 4 高考作文谁怕谁 年少有为不自卑 分析高考作文评分 PART 01 细节定分 高考 评分 内容定档 谋篇 每段内容 好词 好句 造句 Part 01 分析高考作文评分 4 小心探索写作步骤 PART 02 基本句式 特殊句式 从句 非谓语 非谓语 站在食物链顶端的王者 从句 非谓语 Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 因为得到了老师的鼓励，我决定勇敢面对挑战。 Because I get encouraged by my teacher , I decided to face the challenges. Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 一去从句连词 有从句有连词 变非谓无连词 (if ，when , after , before , while , because , since , who , which ......) Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 因为得到了老师的鼓励，我决定勇敢面对挑战。 Because I get encouraged by my teacher , I decided to face the challenges. Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 一去从句连词 有从句有连词 变非谓无连词 (if ，when , after , before , while , because , since , who , which ......) 二去从句主语 主语相同就可去 主语不同不能去 Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 因为得到了老师的鼓励，我决定勇敢面对挑战。 Because I get encouraged by my teacher , I decided to face the challenges. Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 一去从句连词 有从句有连词 变非谓无连词 (if ，when , after , before , while , because , since , who , which ......) 二去从句主语 主语相同就可去 主语不同不能去 三变从句谓语 do/does/did am, is , are,was, were doing have/has/had done am/is/are/was/were done have/has/had been done doing having done done having been done = done doing Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 因为得到了老师的鼓励，我决定勇敢面对挑战。 Because I get encouraged by my teacher , I decided to face the challenges. Encouraged by my teacher , I decided to face the challenges. Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 一去从句连词 二去从句主语 三变从句谓语 从句 非谓语 Part 02 小心探索写作步骤 意气风发写非谓 PART 03 1.When you attend learning groups, you can check learning results with group members. 2.Because I have attended many activities of this kind, I am experienced in coping with any emergencies. 3.Because I don’t know what to do next, I came to ask for your help. Attending learning groups, you can check learning results with group members. Having attended many activities of this kind, I am experienced in coping with any emergencies. Not knowing what to do next, I came to ask for your help.(否定句） 4. If you are interested in this position, you are encouraged to contact me for further information. 5. lf l am given this valuable chance, I will perform my duty and provide translation service. Interested in this position, you are encouraged to contact me for further information. If interested in this position, you are encouraged to contact me for further information. 状语从句的连词，可以保留，方便读者理解 可以删掉，但是不方便读者理解 lf given this valuable chance, I will perform my duty and provide translation service. 6. If weather permits, we will carry out an outdoor activity.7. If your time permits, I would like to invite you to give performance in the music festival. 8. This paper-cutting art show will start from June 10th to June 14th, which lasts for 5 days. Weather permitting, we will carry out an outdoor activity. 主从句主语不一致，形成独立主格结构 Your time permitting, I would like to invite you to give performance in the music festival. This paper-cutting art show will start from June 10th to June 14th, lasting for 5 days.(定语从句改为非谓语) 9. This photography show, which is themed with environmental protection, welcomes anyone to participate. 10. We had a brilliant time in the past two weeks,shared learning methods and told life stories to each other.(并列的三个动词) This photography show, themed with environmental protection, welcomes anyone to participate. Themed with environmental protection, this photography show welcomes anyone to participate. did A, did B and did C did A, doing B and doing C We had a brilliant time in the past two weeks,sharing learning methods and telling life stories to each other. 11. Some of us approve of staying at home in the summer vacation, and they say that they can save money.(2006陕西) Some of us approve of staying at home in the summer vacation, saying that they can save money. 赞同(agree)，explaining..... 反对(oppose)，arguing.... 相信(believe)，claiming.... 非谓语写作的总结 一去从句连词 状从连词可保留，方便读者理解 二去从句主语 主语相同才可去 变成非谓语 主语不同不能去 变成独立主格结构 三变从句谓语 do/does/did am/is/are/was/were doing have/has/had done am/is/are/was/were done have/has/had been done 赞同(agree)，explaining..... 反对(oppose)，arguing.... 相信(believe)，claiming.... 状语从句 定语从句 do, do and do 并列结构 doing doing having done done having been done = done do, doing and doing 年少有为不自卑 PART 04 1.读贵报时，我可以了解国内外发生的大事。(2021新高考一) 2.知道你要来我家共度春节，我已经为我们制定了一个详细的假期计划。(2017年11月浙江) 3.因为学习中国画超过五年了，我充分掌握了绘画技能。(2019年全国一卷) 4.你可以在北京做很多有趣且有意义的事情，品尝当时美食，参观名胜古迹。(2019北京) When reading your newspaper, I can understand major events both at home and abroad. Knowing that you are coming to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival, I have made a detailed holiday plan for us. Having studied Chinese painting for more than 5 years, I have fully mastered the skills of painting . You can do many interesting and meaningful things in Beijing, tasting local food and visiting famous scenic spots. 5.如果能认真阅读，这些书籍能让你们拓宽视野，培养对中国文化的兴趣。(2015天津) 6.在农历一月一日降临(fall)，春节代表着全新一年的开始。(2017浙江卷11月) 7.我们学校体育馆3年前建成,可以容纳1000人 (2018课标三卷) If read carefully, these books can broaden your horizons and develop an interest in Chinese culture. Falling on January first in Chinese Lunar Calender,the Spring Festival stands for a new start of the year. Built 3 years ago,our school gym can contain 1,000 people . 8.当你面对棘手任务时，你应该保持冷静。(2014四川) 9.读中文书籍书籍，你可以扩大词汇量，提升写作能力。(2008全国二卷) 10.如果时间允许的话，我想邀请你下周末和我外出旅行。(2021北京) Faced with a difficult task, you should remain calm. Reading Chinese books, you can expand your vocabulary and improve your writing skills. Time permitting, I would like to invite you to take a trip with me next weekend. 高考作文谁怕谁 PART 05 山东省潍坊市2023-2024学年上学期高三期中英语试题阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇 完整的短文。That Saturday , after an early morning cup of coffee with Mama , Leonard, our grown brother, picked up his heavy tools and headed out for the old henhouse. Mama wanted him to tear it down for she was scared of me and Angie to play near it.I was twelve and dogged Leonard's every step. Angie, our six-year-old sister, insisted she wanted to help, too. Mama told we would be in the way, but Leonard said, “Oh, they'll be all right.” “Well , alright , but you girls watch out for rusty(生锈的) nails. ”Leonard worked hard to pry(撬) the stubborn , gray boards. Angie and I carried the boards to a pile he would later burn.Suddenly, Angie started to scream and Mama came running. Sure enough, she had stepped on a rusty nail. Mama examined my sister's foot while Leonard looked at mine. On my way to see about Angie, I'd stepped on a nail, too. The grownups agreed we needed tetanus(破伤风)shots.I hated shots. I would rather swallow a thousand pills for a thousand days than have one shot. While Leonard drove us to hospital, Mama cupped a hand around my ear. “Arlene, I need you to be brave so Angie won't be too scared. You know how she can put up a fight.” Determined to be a brave girl, I didn't cry a single tear though my arm felt like it was on fire. Then Mama lowered Angie onto the table to get the shot. That's when she made her big mistake. “Arlene , tell Angie it didn't hurt at all. ” Her huge blue eyes stared into mine. I thought about how Angie trusted me the way I trusted Leonard. “If I tell her it won't hurt” ,I thought, “she won't ever believe me again.” I knew what I had to do. I cupped my hands around my mouth and yelled, “DONT LET THEM DO IT TO YOU, ANGIE!” 注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Several things happened all at once. On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder. Several things happened all at once. Angie screamed loudly, jumping down the table and running towards the door. Looking at me, Mama was surprised and then angry. Leonard moved fast to catch Angie, took her back and kept her on the table. Angie got the shot with Mama and Leonard keeping her on the table, crying loudly. I was crying too, because it was I who made it a mess. On the way home after our shots, a tiny finger touched my shoulder. I turned around and saw Angie's smoking face. "You were so brave that you didn't cry a tear," she said. I was moved and realized that I should set a good example to let her believe me. It didn't matter whether I told a lie or not. I hugged her, saying just as Leonard would say,"You are brave too. We must get a shot to ensure our health."I understood the responsibility of a big sister. Thank you ! 30 $$