Unit 2 Let’s celebrate 单元话题满分范文必背-2024-2025学年高一英语必修第二册单元重难点易错题精练（外研版2019）

Unit 2 Let’s celebrate！ 单元话题满分范文必背 1．（24-25高一上·山东泰安·期中）假如你是李平，收到英国笔友Peter的信，说他对我们中国的国庆节很感兴趣，现在请你给他写一封回信，说明： 1. 国庆节的起源； 2.通常的庆祝方式； 3. 你认为的它的意义所在。 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2. 词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter. The National Day of China was established to commemorate the founding of the People’s Republic of China on October 1, 1949. On this day, there are various celebration activities. Grand parades are held in some cities to show the strength and prosperity of the country. Fireworks light up the night sky, creating a beautiful and festive atmosphere. People also take this opportunity to travel, visit relatives and friends, and enjoy the long holiday. In my opinion, National Day is of great significance. It is a symbol of national unity and pride, reminding people of the hard-won peace and development. Yours, Li Ping 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Peter写信介绍国庆节。 【详解】1.词汇积累 举行：hold→host 各种各样：various→a variety of 机会：opportunity→chance 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I can see 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It is a symbol of national unity and pride, reminding people of the hard-won peace and development. 拓展句：It is a symbol of national unity and pride, which reminds people of the hard-won peace and development. 【点睛】[高分句型1] It is a symbol of national unity and pride, reminding people of the hard-won peace and development. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] Grand parades are held in some cities to show the strength and prosperity of the country. (运用了不定式作目的状语) 2．（24-25高一上·四川眉山·期中）中国传统节日春节将至，你的英国同学Mike将留在中国过春节，请给Mike写一封邮件，邮件内容包含： 1.  邀请Mike在春节期间来你家做客 2.  春节对中国人的意义 3.  春节期间你家的安排 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已为你写好。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mike, How’s everything going? As the weather gets colder and colder, the Spring Festival is coming. I heard you are staying in China during the festival for exploring Chinese culture this year, so I’d like to invite you to join my family to celebrate the Spring Festival. As the most important festival for Chinese people, the Spring Festival has a wide variety of meanings for us. It is the time for family to get together for reunion and celebrate the coming new year to have a good fortune or luck for ourselves. As well, what the most important is to build up strong family relationship and power for love and care between us. Here are various activities for my family as follows. We are going to have a traditional dinner as a family on the Spring Festival Eve and various traditional food during the festival. Besides, we can visit some relatives and have fun with my cousins. For kids, we are happy to get red package with money from our parents or grandparents for growing up. What’s more, we can watch traditional performances such as Beijing opera and bamboo arts. I really hope you can join us then. Please reply as soon.                   Yours,                     Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给英国同学Mike写封信，邀请其在春节期间来家里做客。 【详解】1.词汇积累 重要的：important→ significant 此外：what’s more→ in addition 高兴的：happy→ delighted 各种各样的：various→ all kinds of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：It is the time for family to get together for reunion and celebrate the coming new year to have a good fortune or luck for ourselves. 拓展句：It is the time for family to get together for reunion and celebrate the coming new year so that we can have a good fortune or luck for ourselves. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As the weather gets colder and colder, the Spring Festival is coming.（运用了as引导的状语从句） 【高分句型2】As well, what is the most important is to build up strong family relationship and power for love and care between us.（运用了what引导的主语从句） 3．（24-25高一上·广东揭阳·期中）假设你是李华。你校交换生Steven对中国传统文化很感兴趣，希望你为他推荐一个相关的社团，以便下学期加入。请你给他写一封信推荐“历史漫游”社， 要点：1．写邮件的目的；2．简要介绍该社团；3．推荐的理由。 注意：1．写作词数应为100左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇：“历史漫游”社     “History Wandering” Club Dear Steven, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Steven,     I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, so I sincerely recommend the  “History Wandering” Club of our school to you.   “History Wandering” Club was founded in 2006, which is the club with the most members in our school. Every weekend, the club will carry out activities, mainly to study excellent Chinese traditional culture and popularize relevant historical knowledge, and organize members to visit local museums every weekend. I believe you will learn a lot of Chinese traditional culture in the club and enrich your knowledge.    Finally, I extend my sincere greetings to you.                                                                                                                                              Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给交换生Steven写一封信，为他推荐和中国传统文化相关的学校社团“历史漫游”社。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→delighted 诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely 相关的：relevant→related 表达：extend→express 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Every weekend, the club will carry out activities, mainly to study excellent Chinese traditional culture and popularize relevant historical knowledge, and organize members to visit local museums every weekend. 拓展句：Every weekend, the club will carry out activities, whose purpose is mainly to study excellent Chinese traditional culture and popularize relevant historical knowledge, and organize members to visit local museums every weekend. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm glad to hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, so I sincerely recommend the “History Wandering” Club of our school to you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】“History Wandering” Club was founded in 2006, which is the club with the most members in our school. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 4．（24-25高一上·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。他写信询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日——中秋节。请你给他写一封回信，向他介绍这一传统节日，内容包括：1. 节日的时间；2. 庆祝该节日的主要活动。 注意：1. 结构完整，语句流畅，条理清晰，语法正确，表达规范，书写工整。 2. 词数80左右，开头结尾已给出，不算字数。 活动 activity, 庆祝 celebrate, 传统食物 traditional food Dear Clara, I’m very glad to know that you take great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about my favorite Chinese festival. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Peter, I’m very glad to know that you take great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about my favorite Chinese festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival usually comes in September or October. On this special day, families come together to celebrate. We have a big and delicious dinner with all kinds of dishes. Mooncakes are the traditional food that we enjoy a lot. They come in various flavors like sweet bean paste, lotus seed paste and fruit. After dinner, we go outside and admire the beautiful full moon. The bright moon hangs high in the sky, making the night peaceful and charming. Meanwhile, we share stories about Chang’e and the jade rabbit, which are part of the traditional folklore related to the festival. It’s a time filled with joy and warmth. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友 Peter介绍中国传统节日——中秋节。 【详解】1.词汇积累 聚集：come together→ get together 各种各样的：various →a variety of 与此同时：Meanwhile → meantime 喜悦：joy →delight 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We have a big and delicious dinner with all kinds of dishes. 拓展句：We have a big and delicious dinner which has all kinds of dishes. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, we share stories about Chang’e and the jade rabbit, which are part of the traditional folklore related to the festival. （运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） 【高分句型2】It’s a time filled with joy and warmth. （运用了过去分词短语作定语that引导的定语从句） 5．（23-24高一下·陕西渭南·期中）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom向你询问中国人如何庆祝元宵节的，请你给他写封回信。要点如下： 1. 节日时间； 2. 节日的庆祝活动； 3. 发出邀请。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Tom, The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month in the Chinese lunar solar calendar. It is a traditional festival in China. During the festival, various activities are held to celebrate. People usually hang up colorful lanterns, which come in different shapes and sizes, adding a charming atmosphere to the night. we also enjoy guessing riddles, a fun and intellectually challenging activity. Moreover, yuanxiao, a kind of sweet dumpling, is a must-have delicacy. The whole city is beautifully decorated with lights, making it a lively and cheerful scene. I sincerely hope you can come to China to experience this wonderful festival. I believe you will have an unforgettable time. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的告知信。要求考生给美国朋友Tom写封回信，向其介绍中国的元宵节并发出邀请。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 各种各样的：various→ a variety of 此外：moreover→ what’s more 增加：add→ increase 真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month in the Chinese lunar solar calendar. It is a traditional festival in China. 拓展句：The Lantern Festival, which is a traditional festival in China, falls on the fifteenth day of the first month in the Chinese lunar solar calendar. 【点睛】【高分句型1】People usually hang up colorful lanterns, which come in different shapes and sizes, adding a charming atmosphere to the night. (运用了which引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】I sincerely hope you can come to China to experience this wonderful festival. (运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句) 6．（23-24高一下·广西河池·期末）假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Jack酷爱中国文化。他写信向你询问月亮在中国文化中代表的寓意。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1.介绍月亮代表的寓意； 2.欢迎他来中国体验中国文化。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in Chinese culture! In Chinese culture, the moon holds deep symbolic meanings. It often represents reunion and harmony, as families gather under the full moon during festivals, such as the Mid-Autumn Festival. The moon is also seen as a bridge connecting loved ones who are far apart, evoking feelings of longing and nostalgia. Whenever you have a chance, you’re always welcome to visit China and experience our rich culture firsthand. It’ll be an unforgettable journey that brings you closer to the essence of our traditions. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给新西兰笔友Jack介绍月亮在中国文化中代表的寓意。 【详解】1.词汇积累 激动的：thrilled→excited 代表：represents→on behalf 乡愁：nostalgia→homesickness 难忘的：unforgettable→memorable 2.句式拓展 同义句替换 原句：Whenever you have a chance, you’re always welcome to visit China and experience our rich culture firsthand. 同义句：You are always cordially invited to visit China whenever your schedule allows, and immerse yourself in our country's deep and diverse cultural heritage. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The moon is also seen as a bridge connecting loved ones who are far apart, evoking feelings of longing and nostalgia.(运用了who引导的定语从句) 【高分句型2】It’ll be an unforgettable journey that brings you closer to the essence of our traditions.(运用了that引导的定语从句) 7．（23-24高一下·贵州铜仁·期末）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Alan上周来信，想了解你们贵州当地人五月份过龙舟节的情况，请你用英语给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.龙舟节庆祝活动； 2.你的感想和期盼。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Alan, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Alan, I’m glad to hear from you and learn about your interest in our local Dragon Boat Festival. During the festival, colorful dragon boats dot the river, with teams competing vigorously. The atmosphere is electric, filled with the cheers of spectators and the rhythmic drumming of the boats. For me, the Dragon Boat Festival brings our community together, strengthening our bonds. I look forward to this festival every year, not just for the excitement of the races, but also for the opportunity to connect with my roots and traditions. I hope one day you can experience this vibrant festival with us. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】这是一封介绍信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你的英国笔友 Alan上周来信，想了解你们贵州当地人五月份过龙舟节的情况一事，用英语给他写封邮件。 【详解】1.词汇积累 装饰、点缀：dot → adorn 激烈竞争：competing vigorously → fiercely contending 加强联系：strengthening our bonds → reinforcing our connections 期待：look forward to → anticipate 2.句式拓展 同义句改写 原句：I look forward to this festival every year. 拓展句：Every year, I eagerly anticipate the arrival of this festival, cherishing the moments spent in unity and tradition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】During the festival, colorful dragon boats dot the river, with teams competing vigorously.（使用了“with+宾语+宾补”结构） 【高分句型2】I look forward to this festival every year, not just for the excitement of the races, but also for the opportunity to connect with my roots and traditions.（使用了not just...but also...结构） 8．（23-24高一下·吉林白山·期末）假定你是李华，端午节（Dragon Boat Festival）即将来临，你的英国笔友Jack对这个节日非常感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件，向他介绍一下端午节的相关信息，内容包括： 1.端午节的时间； 2.端午节的活动（吃粽子，赛龙舟等）； 3.邀请他来中国体验。 注意： 1.写作词数应该为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack, Hearing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m writing to introduce you something about it. The Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on May 5th according to the lunar calendar. During this festival, people always eat delicious zongzi which is made of sticky rice, meat, jujube and so on. What’s more, people always watch or participate in dragon boat competitions in honour of Qu Yuan who is a great patriotic poet in Chinese history. I know you’re fascinated by this festival, so I’d like to extend a personal invitation for you to come and experience it in person. Looking forward to your visit during this festive time. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。端午节即将来临，英国笔友Jack对这个节日非常感兴趣，要求考生按照要求给他写一封邮件，向他介绍一下端午节的相关信息。 【详解】1.词汇积累 对……感兴趣：be interested in→ go in for 庆祝：celebrate→ observe 美味的：delicious→ tasty 参加：participate in→ engage in 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m writing to introduce you something about it. 拓展句：After hearing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m writing to introduce you something about it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are interested in the Dragon Boat Festival, I’m writing to introduce you something about it.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】What’s more, people always watch or participate in dragon boat competitions in honour of Qu Yuan who is a great patriotic poet in Chinese history.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句） 9．（23-24高一下·安徽合肥·期末）假定你是李华，在外教Mr. Smith回国前，你给他准备了一件代表中国传统文化的艺术品作为临别礼物。请给他写封邮件告知此事。 内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 简单介绍该艺术品。 注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Mr. Smith, With the date of your return approaching, I’ve prepared a special gift, a set of Chinese paper cuttings for you. Originated from ancient handcraft arts, Chinese paper cuttings have been considered a unique way to convey good wishes. Chinese characters, “Fu”, “Shou” and “Xi” represent fortune, longevity and happiness respectively. As traditional Chinese culture spreads across the world, paper cuttings have become the collection of many art lovers. You can paste them on your windows or doors to create a festival atmosphere. Wish you a pleasant journey back home! Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Smith写封邮件，告知给他准备了一件代表中国传统文化的艺术品作为临别礼物，内容包括写信目的并简单介绍该艺术品。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 临近：approach →draw near 认为：consider →think 代表，象征：represent →stand for 贴：paste →stick 2. 句式拓展 句型转换 原句：As traditional Chinese culture spreads across the world, paper cuttings have become the collection of many art lovers. 拓展句：With traditional Chinese culture spreading across the world, paper cuttings have become the collection of many art lovers. 【点睛】【高分句型1】With the date of your return approaching, I’ve prepared a special gift, a set of Chinese paper cuttings for you. (运用了“with+宾语+宾补”with结构以及名词短语作同位语） 【高分句型2】Originated from ancient handcraft arts, Chinese paper cuttings have been considered a unique way to convey good wishes. (运用了过去分词短语作状语和动词不定式作定语修饰名词way） 10．（23-24高一下·江西南昌·期末）假定你是李华，上周五你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 活动内容； 3. 活动反响。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Traditional Chinese Culture Week A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture. During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much. The campaign is a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为上周学校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道。 【详解】1.词汇积累 增强：enhance→boost 参加：participate in→take part in 许多：numerous→a number of 玩得开心：enjoy oneself→have a good time 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. 拓展句：During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, which included singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals. 【点睛】【高分句型1】A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance students’ confidence in our national culture. (运用了不定式作目的状语) 【高分句型2】The campaign is a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us to further spread Chinese culture in future. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$Unit 2 Let's celebrate ! 单元话题满分范文必背 1. (24-25高一上山东泰安期中)假如你是李平,收到英国笔友Peter的信,说他对我们中国的国庆节很 感兴趣,现在请你给他写一封回信,说明; 1. 国庆节的起源; 2通常的庆祝方式 3. 你认为的它的意义所在。 注意: 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称 2. 词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, I'm glad to receive your letter Yours. LiPing 2.(24-25高一上.四川眉山期中)中国传统节日春节将至,你的英国同学Mike将留在中国过春节,请给 Mike写一封邮件,邮件内容包含: 1. 邀请Mike在春节期间来你家做客 2. 春节对中国人的意义 3. 春节期间你家的安排 注意: 1. 词数100左右;2 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已为你写好。 3.(24-25高一上广东揭阳期中)假设你是李华。你校交换生Steven对中国传统文化很感兴趣, 希望你 为他推荐一个相关的社团,以便下学期加入。请你给他写一封信推荐“历史漫游”社 要点:1. 写邮件的目的;2. 简要介绍该社团;3. 推荐的理由。 注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 参考词汇:“历史漫游社 "History Wandering"Club Dear Steven. Yours. Li Hua 4.(24-25高一上:内蒙古呼伦贝尔阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter对中国文化很感兴趣。 他写信询问你最喜欢的中国传统节日-中秋节。请你给他写一封回信,向他介绍这一传统节日,内容包 括:1. 节日的时间;2. 庆祝该节日的主要活动。 注意:1. 结构完整,语句流畅,条理清晰,语法正确,表达规范,书写工整。 2. 词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不算字数。 活动activity:庆祝 celebrate. 传统食物 traditional food DearClara, I'm very glad to know that you take great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about my favorite Chinese festival Yours Li Hua 5.(23-24高一下陕西渭南;期中)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom向你询问中国人如何庆祝元宵节的 请你给他写封回信。要点如下: 1. 节日时间: 2. 节日的庆祝活动 3. 发出邀请。 注意: 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Tom. Yours. Li Hua 6.(23-24高一下广西河池·期末)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Jack酷爱中国文化。他写信向你询问 月亮在中国文化中代表的寓意。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。内容包括: 1介绍月亮代表的寓意; 2.欢迎他来中国体验中国文化。 注意: 1写作词数应为80左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack. Yours. Li Hua 7.(23-24高一下贵州铜仁期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Alan上周来信,想了解你们贵州当地人 五月份过龙舟节的情况,请你用英语给他写封邮件,内容包括: 1.龙舟节庆祝活动; 2.你的感想和期盼。 注意:1写作词数应为80左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 DearAlan, Yours. Li Hua 8.(23-24高一下吉林白山期末)假定你是李华,端午节(DragonBoatFestival)即将来临,你的英国笔 友Jack对这个节日非常感兴趣,请你给他写一封邮件,向他介绍一下端午节的相关信息,内容包括 1端午节的时间; 2.端午节的活动(吃棕子,赛龙舟等): 3.邀请他来中国体验。 注意: 1写作词数应该为80个左右: 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jack. Yours. Li Hua 9.(23-24高一下安微合肥;期末)假定你是李华,在外教Mr.Smith回国前,你给他准备了一件代表中国 传统文化的艺术品作为临别礼物。请给他写封邮件告知此事。 内容包括:1:写信目的;2. 简单介绍该艺术品。 注意:1 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 10.(23-24高一下江西南昌;期末)假定你是李华,上周五你校举办了中国传统文化周活动。请你为校英 文报写一篇报道,内容包括: 1.活动目的; 2. 活动内容; 3. 活动反响。 注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。