2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+风雪途中：德州司机的惊险遭遇 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 风雪途中：德州司机的惊险遭遇 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 As a Texan, I’m not experienced in driving in snowy, icy road conditions. So, that snowy February morning I was unwilling to travel twenty-five miles to work, hoping to receive a text message from my school telling me that school would be closed for the day. However, the text message never came. So I warmed up my car, melting (融化) the fresh layer of ice on the window, and then left for campus, slowly driving my car along city streets. To my relief, the road workers had treated streets with sand and salt, making them less dangerous. Nevertheless, I still drove carefully, keeping a safe distance between my car and the cars in front of me. Despite all my carefulness, I was still afraid of hitting another car because of the bad road conditions. 4 4 续写原文 My heart raced and I told myself, “Relax. You will be fine.”But in a flash, the clouds disappeared and blinding snow came. My heart beat even faster. Within minutes, the blowing snow mixed together with the existing snow. Visibility was instantly reduced to near zero. Directional signs quickly were out of sight. The road itself disappeared, as did all the cars around me. I had no sense of direction, and no idea what I should do. Suddenly, I hit a large piece of ice and my car began sliding. I was scared out of my mind. There were too many vehicles running slowly on the street. A sense of complete helplessness and fear enveloped me. I held the steering wheel (方向盘) harder, staring at my sweaty, trembling (颤抖的) hands, unsure what to do because I didn’t have the skills or experience to control myself out of the slide, let alone avoid crashing into other cars. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1: Just then, a truck appeared out of nowhere. Paragraph 2: I thanked the driver again, watching him disappearing in his damaged truck. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文中讲述了作为不擅在冰雪路况行驶的德州人，“我” 在一个二月的雪天极不情愿地开车去二十五英里外的学校上班，盼着学校因雪停课的短信却未能如愿。上路后虽有道路工人撒沙盐处理，但 “我” 仍小心翼翼驾驶。然而，天气突变，暴雪骤至，能见度瞬间归零，“我” 迷失方向且极度恐惧。接着车子撞上冰块开始打滑，“我” 惊恐万分，面对满街缓行车辆，因缺乏应对经验而手足无措，不知如何控制车子避免碰撞，陷入深深的无助与绝望之中，在风雪中经历着一场惊心动魄的驾车危机。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1: Just then, a truck appeared out of nowhere． Just then, a truck appeared out of nowhere. 就在我陷入极度恐慌，感觉车子即将失控撞上其他车辆之际，一辆卡车仿佛从天而降般出现在我的视野中。它缓缓地朝着我靠近，车身在纷飞的大雪中若隐若现。我瞪大了眼睛，心中满是惊讶与疑惑，不知道这辆卡车的出现意味着什么。紧接着，卡车在我前方不远处稳稳停下，车门打开，一位身着厚重棉袄、满脸风霜的司机走了下来，他的眼神坚定而镇定，仿佛给这冰天雪地带来了一丝温暖与希望，让我在绝望中看到了一丝曙光。 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: I thanked the driver again, watching him disappearing in his damaged truck. I thanked the driver again, watching him disappearing in his damaged truck. 司机熟练地操控着他的卡车，用车身挡住了部分风雪，为我开辟出一条相对安全的道路，引导着我慢慢脱离了那片危险区域，最终抵达了安全地带。我停下车，长舒一口气，内心的感激之情难以言表。我赶紧跑向司机，紧紧握住他的手，一遍又一遍地道谢。他只是微笑着摆摆手，叮嘱我几句后便转身回到他的卡车里。我站在原地，望着他那辆在风雪中略显破旧且带着些许刮痕的卡车缓缓驶离，直到它消失在茫茫雪幕之中，而这位雪中送炭的司机身影，却深深地印在了我的脑海里，成为这个寒冷冬日里最温暖的记忆。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Just then, a truck emerged seemingly from thin air. In the midst of the blinding snowstorm, as my car continued its perilous slide, the unexpected sight of the truck filled me with a glimmer of hope. Its headlights cut through the thick curtain of snow, approaching steadily. As it drew nearer, I could make out the silhouette of a burly driver, his face set with determination. Without hesitation, he maneuvered the truck expertly, positioning it in a way that shielded me from the worst of the blizzard. The sound of the truck's engine was a reassuring rumble in the chaos, and I felt a sense of relief wash over me, knowing that help had arrived in this most desperate of moments. 13 13 范文呈现 I thanked the driver once more, my eyes fixed on him as he climbed back into his battered truck. After he had guided me to safety, I pulled over, my hands still trembling from the ordeal. Rushing over to him, I poured out my gratitude, words tumbling out in a rush. He simply nodded, a weary smile on his face, and told me to be more careful in the future. As he closed the door and started the engine, I stood there, watching the truck trundle away. The snowflakes swirled around it, gradually obscuring it from view. The image of the damaged truck and the kind driver was etched into my memory, a reminder of the unexpected kindness that can surface even in the harshest of conditions. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Just then, out of the swirling chaos of snow, a truck made its appearance as if conjured from the very elements. In the heart of that blinding blizzard, with my car careening helplessly on the icy surface, the sudden emergence of the truck was like a beacon of hope. Its headlights, piercing through the dense veil of snowflakes, advanced resolutely. As it neared, I beheld a stout driver, his countenance etched with determination. Swiftly and skillfully, he positioned the truck so as to afford me some respite from the fury of the storm. The growling engine of the truck was a comforting sound amidst the mayhem. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I thanked the driver profusely, my gaze following his every move as he re-entered his battered vehicle. Having been guided to safety, I pulled over, my heart still pounding. Hastening to his side, I expressed my gratitude with words that spilled forth in a torrent. With a simple nod and a fatigued smile, he advised caution. Then, as he closed the door and the engine roared to life, I watched, motionless, as the truck rumbled away, swallowed up by the snowstorm. Truly, it was in this moment of extremity that the kindness of a stranger shone through, an act that would be indelibly imprinted on my memory. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$