湖南省衡阳市祁东县2023-2024学年高一下学期期末统考英语试卷英语读后续写--跨越终点的 “三人团”：马拉松的温情时刻 讲义

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Training for a marathon is one of the most physically demanding activities you car willingly put yourself through, And when the race day finally comes after months of training and hours spent running on the playground you want to finish the race well, But sometimes, that just doesn't happen. A warm moment happened among three runners, and with the help of two other runners, there was a runner who reached the finish line and finished the race. It's reported that the three runners didn't know each other before the race. That moment happened at the 203 London Marathon. A runner named Louis experienced this as he worked his way towards the end of the race, The man began to double over(弯腰)and was on the edge of collapsing(昏倒) as other runners passed by. Clearly, he was too tired to finish the race, But it was only 200 meters left. And he might fall to the ground at any time. So tired, Louis fell to the ground and looked white and upset, At that moment, a runner saw Louis who needed help, so the runner ran to him and picked him up. “Are you OK?” the runner asked Louis. “I am too tired to keep running, , Louis replied. “Come on! Let me support you to the finish line 200 meters away, ” the runner said and grabbed his arm. “It is very kind of you, ” Louis said happily. With the help of the runner, there were only 150 meters away from the finish line. But it seemed that he couldn't hold Louis steady enough, Louis was in a bad condition and would fall to the ground at any time, The runner was very anxious and watched helplessly as other runners ran to the finish line, not knowing what to do. Although the runner tried his best to support Louis steady, Louis fell to the ground again. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. ________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意： 马拉松训练艰苦，比赛日选手都期望顺利完赛，但有时事与愿违。在 203 伦敦马拉松赛上，路易斯在距终点 200 米处体力不支，一位选手见状前来搀扶，然而因路易斯状态太差，两人在距终点 150 米处再次摔倒。关键时刻，另一位选手加入，最终三人共同跨过终点线，展现了陌生人之间的互助精神和体育赛事中的温暖情谊，诠释了人性的善良与友爱在竞技场上的闪耀时刻。 故事山分析： · 开端：开篇介绍马拉松训练的艰辛以及选手对完赛的期待，为故事营造出紧张且充满挑战的氛围，同时也让读者感受到马拉松赛事的不易，引发读者对比赛过程中可能发生的故事的好奇，为后续路易斯的困境做铺垫，吸引读者关注故事走向。 · 发展：路易斯在接近终点时体力不支，一位选手前来帮助，这一情节推动故事发展，展现出赛事中的突发状况以及选手间的初步互助，使读者的注意力集中在他们能否顺利到达终点，增加了故事的紧张感和可读性，也为后续的困难和更多人的参与埋下伏笔，进一步丰富了故事的情节。 · 高潮：尽管第一位选手努力搀扶，但路易斯再次摔倒，此时另一位选手及时出现，三人共同面对困境，这是故事的高潮部分，将读者的情绪推向顶点，突出了赛事的艰难以及陌生人之间的善良和团结，增强了故事的戏剧性和感染力，也让读者更加期待他们最终能否成功跨越终点线，使故事充满悬念和吸引力。 · 结局：在两位选手的帮助下，路易斯最终到达终点，人群欢呼，故事圆满结束，给读者带来温暖和感动，同时也升华了陌生人互助、友爱至上的主题，让读者在感受到体育精神的同时，也能体会到人性的美好，具有深刻的教育意义和启示作用，使读者对故事留下深刻的印象，并引发对人与人之间关系的思考。 五处伏笔及续写中的回应： 1. 伏笔：“Training for a marathon is one of the most physically demanding activities you can willingly put yourself through. And when the race day finally comes after months of training and hours spent running on the playground you want to finish the race well, But sometimes, that just doesn't happen.”（马拉松训练是你自愿经历的对身体要求最高的活动之一。经过数月的训练和在操场上花费数小时的跑步后，当比赛日终于到来时，你希望能顺利完成比赛，但有时，事情并非如此。） · 回应：此伏笔为故事的发生提供了背景，强调了马拉松比赛的艰难，暗示了比赛中可能出现意外情况，为路易斯在接近终点时体力不支的情节做铺垫。续写中，路易斯的困境以及其他选手的帮助，都体现了马拉松比赛的不可预测性和挑战性，与开头的描述相呼应，使故事的发展更加自然合理，也让读者更加深刻地理解马拉松比赛的艰辛，进一步突出了在困难面前互助的重要性和可贵性，深化了故事的主题，使读者更加认同人与人之间应该相互扶持、共克难关的价值观，增强了故事的教育意义和感染力。 2. 伏笔：“The man began to double over (弯腰) and was on the edge of collapsing (昏倒) as other runners passed by.”（当其他选手经过时，这个人开始弯腰，快要昏倒了。） 4. 回应：生动地描绘了路易斯体力不支的状态，引起读者对他的同情和对后续发展的担忧，为第一位选手的出现和帮助提供了契机。续写中，第一位选手的及时援手以及后续遇到的困难，都与路易斯的身体状况紧密相连，使故事的情节更加连贯，也让读者更加关注他们能否克服困难，进一步增强了故事的紧张感和吸引力，同时也体现了在他人困难时伸出援手的善良和勇敢，深化了故事的主题，使读者更加敬佩那些在关键时刻帮助他人的人，也更加愿意在生活中践行这种善良和互助的精神。 3. 伏笔：“‘Come on! Let me support you to the finish line 200 meters away,’ the runner said and grabbed his arm.”（“来吧！让我扶你到 200 米外的终点线，” 这位选手说着抓住了他的胳膊。） 4. 回应：体现了第一位选手的善良和乐于助人，推动故事朝着他们共同向终点前进的方向发展，同时也为后续可能出现的困难埋下伏笔，让读者期待他们能否顺利到达终点。续写中，尽管第一位选手努力了，但由于路易斯的状况不佳，他们还是遇到了困难，这与之前的情节相呼应，使故事更加真实可信，也让读者看到在帮助他人的过程中可能会遇到的挑战，进一步突出了坚持和团结的重要性，深化了故事的主题，即面对困难时，不放弃并相互支持才能最终实现目标，增强了故事的教育效果和启示作用，使读者更加深刻地体会到团结协作的力量。 4. 伏笔：“With the help of the runner, there were only 150 meters away from the finish line. But it seemed that he couldn't hold Louis steady enough, Louis was in a bad condition and would fall to the ground at any time.”（在这位选手的帮助下，离终点线只有 150 米了。但他似乎无法稳稳地扶住路易斯，路易斯的状况很糟糕，随时可能摔倒在地。） 4. 回应：再次强调了他们面临的困难，使故事的紧张氛围进一步升级，也为第二位选手的出现做铺垫，引发读者对他们将如何解决困境的好奇。续写中，第二位选手的及时出现和三人的合作，与这一伏笔相呼应，使故事的发展更加合理，也让读者看到在困境中，众人的力量是如何汇聚起来克服困难的，进一步突出了团结互助的主题，使读者更加深刻地感受到在困难时刻，陌生人之间的相互帮助是多么珍贵和强大，增强了故事的情感共鸣和感染力，也让读者更加珍惜生活中的互助之情，激发他们在他人需要时主动伸出援手的意愿。 5. 伏笔：“The runner was very anxious and watched helplessly as other runners ran to the finish line, not knowing what to do.”（这位选手非常焦虑，无助地看着其他选手跑向终点线，不知道该怎么办。） 4. 回应：表现出第一位选手在困境中的无助和焦虑，更加凸显了他们所处情况的艰难，为第二位选手的出现和带来转机做铺垫，也让读者更加深入地感受到比赛的紧张和残酷。续写中，第二位选手的出现缓解了第一位选手的困境，三人共同努力，这一情节与之前的无助形成对比，使故事更加富有戏剧性，也让读者看到希望和转机往往在最困难的时候出现，进一步深化了故事的主题，即无论困难多大，只要有人伸出援手，团结一心，就有可能战胜困难，实现目标，增强了故事的教育意义和鼓舞人心的力量，使读者在面对困难时更有信心和勇气去寻求帮助和合作。 续写要点： 第一段： · 情节：详细描述第二位选手出现后的情景，他迅速跑到路易斯另一侧，眼神坚定而关切，与第一位选手简单交流几句后，两人默契地再次扶起路易斯。此时，路易斯几乎已经失去意识，身体沉重地依靠在他们身上，但两位选手没有丝毫退缩，他们调整姿势，让路易斯更加舒适和稳定，一步一步艰难地向前挪动。周围的观众被这一幕深深感动，纷纷为他们加油鼓劲，现场气氛热烈而紧张。在前进的过程中，第二位选手不断鼓励路易斯和第一位选手，说一些诸如 “坚持住，我们马上就到了”“大家一起加油” 的话语，给大家带来信心和力量，为故事营造出紧张而感人的氛围，使读者更加关注他们能否成功到达终点，也为后续的结局做铺垫，让读者期待看到三人最终跨越终点线的那一刻。 · 情感：第二位选手的情感是坚定、善良和充满责任感，他毫不犹豫地加入帮助路易斯的行列，展现出人性的美好；第一位选手则从之前的焦虑和无助转变为看到希望后的振奋和感激，对第二位选手的到来充满感激；路易斯虽然意识模糊，但内心也感受到了温暖和力量，对两位选手充满感恩；观众们的情感是感动和激动，他们为三位选手的团结互助而鼓掌欢呼，这种情感的交融使整个场景充满了温情和力量，也让读者更加深入地感受到人与人之间的善良和互助是如此珍贵，增强了故事的情感共鸣和可读性，同时也使读者更加期待故事的结局，希望看到他们能够成功克服困难，实现目标。 第二段： · 情节：描绘三人最终到达终点线的场景，当他们的脚跨过终点线的那一刻，全场响起了雷鸣般的掌声和欢呼声。路易斯的脸上露出了欣慰的笑容，尽管疲惫不堪，但眼中闪烁着激动的泪花。两位选手也松了一口气，脸上洋溢着自豪和喜悦的神情。工作人员迅速上前，为他们送上奖牌和水，同时询问路易斯的身体状况。路易斯紧紧握住两位选手的手，声音颤抖地说：“谢谢你们，如果没有你们，我根本无法完成比赛，你们是我见过最善良的人。” 两位选手笑着回答：“这就是马拉松精神，我们是一个整体，互相帮助是应该的。” 之后，三人一起拍照留念，记录下这难忘的一刻。这一事件在社交媒体上迅速传播开来，引发了广泛的关注和赞扬，人们纷纷为他们的善良和团结点赞，将故事推向一个温馨、感人的高潮，升华故事的主题，让读者深刻体会到在困难面前，团结互助的力量是无穷的，也给人以鼓舞和启示，使读者在感动之余，能够反思自己在生活中是否也能像他们一样，在他人需要时伸出援手，进一步强化了故事的教育意义和价值。 · 情感：路易斯的情感从之前的痛苦和绝望转变为现在的幸福和感激，他对两位选手的帮助铭记在心，也为自己能够完成比赛而感到自豪；两位选手则充满了成就感和满足感，他们的善举得到了大家的认可和赞扬，同时也为能够帮助路易斯实现梦想而感到开心；观众和网友们的情感是敬佩和感动，他们被三人的故事所打动，对这种团结互助的精神充满敬意，这种情感的传递和升华使整个故事充满了正能量和温暖，也让读者深刻感受到在帮助他人的过程中，每个人都能收获心灵的满足和成长，进一步强化了故事的主题，即善良和团结是人类最美好的品质，我们应该积极弘扬和践行，让世界变得更加美好，同时也使读者更加珍惜生活中的善良和温暖，增强了故事的教育效果和启示作用。 情感线： 故事开始，路易斯在马拉松比赛接近终点时体力不支，处于极度疲惫、痛苦甚至绝望的情感状态，担心自己无法完成比赛；第一位选手看到后，出于善良和同情，决定帮助路易斯，此时他的情感是坚定和勇敢的，想要帮助路易斯实现完赛的愿望；随着情况的发展，路易斯的状况愈发糟糕，第一位选手感到焦虑和无助，害怕无法帮助路易斯到达终点；第二位选手的出现带来了转机，他的坚定和善良给大家注入了新的希望，此时第一位选手转为振奋和感激，三人共同怀着坚持和团结的情感向终点迈进；最终到达终点时，路易斯从绝望变为幸福和感激，两位选手则充满成就感和喜悦，观众也被他们的团结互助所感动，整个情感线从疲惫绝望、善良坚定、焦虑无助、希望振奋到幸福感激、成就喜悦、感动敬佩，充分展现了人物在故事发展过程中的情感变化，也让读者深刻感受到在困难时刻，人与人之间的情感纽带是如何通过互助和善良得以加强，引发读者对自己在面对他人困难时情感反应的思考与共鸣，体会到善良和团结能够带来的积极情感体验和强大力量，具有深刻的情感教育意义和感染力。 故事线： 1. 马拉松训练艰苦，选手期望完赛但比赛中常有意外。 2. 203 伦敦马拉松上，路易斯距终点 200 米处体力不支，第一位选手来帮。 3. 两人走到距终点 150 米处，路易斯再次摔倒，第一位选手无助。 4. 第二位选手出现，与第一位选手一起扶起路易斯继续前进。 5. 三人在观众加油声中艰难向终点挪动，第二位选手不断鼓励。 6. 最终三人跨过终点线，引发关注赞扬，体现团结互助精神。 主旨升华句（英文）： 1. In the marathon of life, we may all stumble and falter, but it is the helping hands of strangers that lift us up and carry us forward, proving that the true finish line is not just a mark on the ground, but the unity and kindness we share along the way.（在人生的马拉松中，我们可能都会跌倒和蹒跚，但正是陌生人的援手将我们扶起并推动我们前进，证明真正的终点线不仅仅是地上的一个标记，而是我们一路上共同拥有的团结和善良。） 2. When exhaustion tries to silence our footsteps and defeat looms on the horizon, it is the spirit of camaraderie that reignites the fire within us. For in helping others reach their goals, we discover the strength to overcome our own limitations and cross the finish line of life's most challenging races.（当疲惫试图让我们的脚步沉默，失败在地平线上若隐若现，是同志情谊的精神重新点燃了我们内心的火焰。因为在帮助他人实现目标的过程中，我们发现了克服自身局限并跨越人生最具挑战性比赛终点线的力量。） 3. A single act of kindness in the midst of a grueling race can ripple outwards, inspiring a chain reaction of compassion and unity. Let us be the catalysts for such change, and in doing so, transform not only the lives of those we help, but also the very fabric of the world we live in.（在一场艰苦的比赛中，一个小小的善举可以向外扩散，激发同情和团结的连锁反应。让我们成为这种变化的催化剂，这样做，不仅改变我们所帮助的人的生活，也改变我们所生活的世界的结构。） 4. The finish line is not the end; it is the beginning of a journey that leads us to discover the beauty of human connection. For in the act of reaching out to a stranger in need, we find that the greatest reward is not the medal around our neck, but the warmth in our hearts and the knowledge that we have made a difference.（终点线不是终点；它是一段旅程的开始，引领我们发现人际关系的美好。因为在向一个需要帮助的陌生人伸出援手的过程中，我们发现最大的回报不是脖子上的奖牌，而是心中的温暖和我们有所作为的认知。） 5. In the face of physical and mental exhaustion, the power of unity and kindness prevails. We are all runners on the same track of life, and when we lift each other up, we create a symphony of hope and triumph that echoes through the ages, reminding us that together, we are unstoppable.（在身心疲惫面前，团结和善良的力量占上风。我们都是人生同一条跑道上的赛跑者，当我们互相扶持时，我们创造了一曲希望和胜利的交响乐，回荡千古，提醒我们，团结起来，我们是不可阻挡的。） 写作示范： 第一篇 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. He saw the struggle and without hesitation, rushed to the other side of Louis. “Let’s do this together,” he said with determination. The two runners locked eyes and nodded, a silent agreement passing between them. They hoisted Louis up again, this time with more stability. The crowd, sensing the drama, cheered even louder. With each step, they inched closer to the finish line. Louis, though barely conscious, felt the support and managed to mumble a few words of gratitude. The new runner encouraged them, “Keep going, we’re almost there. We won’t let you down.” With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. The roar of the crowd was deafening as they crossed the line. Louis was overcome with emotion, tears streaming down his face. He looked at his two saviors and tried to express his thanks, but words failed him. The runners smiled, patting him on the back. “You did it, man,” one of them said. The organizers quickly came over, awarding them all medals. This moment was captured by cameras and soon went viral. People were touched by the display of kindness and unity. It became a symbol of the true spirit of the marathon, not just about winning, but about helping others along the way. This act of kindness would be remembered and talked about for years to come, inspiring countless others to reach out and offer a helping hand in times of need. 第二篇 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. His eyes widened at the sight of the struggling pair, and without a second thought, he joined in. “I’ve got you,” he said, as he took some of Louis’s weight. The first runner looked at him with relief and gratitude. Together, they adjusted their grip and started moving forward again. The onlookers were on the edge of their seats, shouting words of encouragement. The new runner was strong and steady, providing the support they needed. “Just a little further,” he kept repeating, his voice full of determination. With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. As they crossed, the crowd erupted into wild applause and cheers. Louis’s legs gave way, but the runners held him up, their faces beaming with pride. A sense of accomplishment filled the air. Louis was given water and medical attention, while the two runners were hailed as heroes. They hugged each other, knowing they had done something special. This event not only completed Louis’s race but also completed a story of human kindness and perseverance. It showed that in the toughest of times, the kindness of strangers can make all the difference, and that the power of unity can overcome any obstacle. This heartwarming moment would be etched in the memories of all who witnessed it, serving as a reminder to always be there for one another. 参考答案 Just at that moment, another runner came from behind Louis. Shortly after, the runner appeared on Louis' other side, grabbed his arm and held Louis steady enough to keep going. “Let me help you, ” the runner said to Louis. Louis' eyes were filled with tears. Then they three ran together and encouraged each other. With these two runners' help, there were only 50 meters away from the finish line. All the runners cheered on them, "Come on! You can do it!”They kept running to the finish line and sweat streamed down their faces. With the help of the two runners, Louis finally reached the finish line. The two runners quickly took good care of Louis. Louis hugged them and showed great thanks to them. The two runners who selflessly helped Louis became famous on the Internet. The three runners became good friends and decided to meet at next year's London Marathon. Together, the three runners made their way to the finish line. The warm moment became a part of what made the experience so special. Though the three guys didn't finish first, they won that day. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$