Unit 6 作文训练课件 2024-2025学年人教版七年级英语上册

unit6 A Day in the Life. introduce one's school day 根据内容要点,请以My School Life为题,写一篇70词左右的短文,介绍你的学校生活。 内容要点： 1. 八点上课,上午四节课,下午两节课；所学科目……,最喜欢的科目……,课外活动…… 2. 请谈一谈你对校园生活的感想。 写作要求： 1. 必须包括全部内容要点,可适当发挥； 2. 不要出现你的姓名和班级名称。 My School Life _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题】 审主题：介绍校园学习生活；； 审体裁: 说明文 审人称：第一人称为主 审时态: 一般现在时态； 审要点：主要是日常活动，穿插课程安排，比如上课时间，所学科目等，可补充描述最喜欢的科目以及丰富的课外活动等。最后，描述自己对于校园生学习生活的感想。 开头部分：引入主题，介绍自己的身份, 表明主题 name: I am .../ My name is ... age: I am ...years old./= I am a/an 数字-year-old boy/ girl. live : I live with + sb + in + 地方. 主题： This is my school day routine. Let me tell you about my daily routine. I ‘d like to share my daily routine with you. I want to introduce my daily routine to you. before school get up起床 listen to the news and music do morning reading brush teeth刷牙 get dressed穿衣服 have breakfast吃早餐 take a shower洗澡 go to school去上学 walk to school 句型： I usually 活动 at 时间 . After that, I +活动. Then I often + 活动 升级句型： I walk to school. It’s a 10-minute walk. 我走路上学，十分钟的路程。 in the school：have class 上课/ have lunch We have classes in the morning and classes in the afternoon. 上午几节，下午几节 The lessons begin at and finish at . We have many subjects, like Chinese, English, maths, history and so on. After that, I have lunch at ... 高级句型： Each lesson is 45 minutes long. 每节课45分钟长。 There is a break between lessons. 课件有段休息时间。 Lunch is from to . 午饭是从...到... We have lessons from to . 我们从...到...上课。 after school go home回家 get home 到家 take a shower淋浴 do homework 做作业 play sport 做运动 read for a while 读会书 prepare the schoolbag for the next day 为第二天准备好书包 go to bed上床睡觉 After school, I usually +活动 . After dinner, I sometimes .... Before bed, I [活动]. 高级句型： At 9:30 , it’s time for me to go to bed. When I get home, I do my homework first. 当我回到家时，我先做家庭作业。 As a saying goes, “Early to bed and early to rise”. 早睡早起 结尾句: feeling I am very busy, but I am very happy.我很忙，但我很开心。 I love my school life.我爱我的校园生活。 I have a good time at school. 我在学校玩的开心。 I have fun at school. 我在学校玩的开心。 高级句型： I think I have a busy but happy life.我认为我有着繁忙却快乐的生活。 What a busy but happy day! 多么繁忙却快乐的一天啊！ My School Life I’m a junior high school student. I love going to school. Our classes usually begin at 8 and finish at 4. We have four classes in the morning and two classes in the afternoon. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, English, Maths, Science and so on. My favourite subject is Chinese, because I can learn a lot from it. And my Chinese teacher is also friendly to me. After school, I often spend half an hour doing my homework. And then I play basketball with my friends together. We join the school basketball club and practice basketball three times a week. I always have a good time at school. (范文解析1) 《我的学校生活》 我是一名初中生。我喜欢上学。 我们的课程通常在8点开始，4点结束。我们上午有四节课，下午有两节课。我们有许多科目，例如语文、英语、数学、科学等等。我最喜欢的科目是语文，因为我能从中学到很多东西。而且我的语文老师对我也很友好。放学后，我经常花半个小时做我的作业。然后我和我的朋友们一起打篮球。我们加入了学校篮球俱乐部，每周练习三次篮球。 我在学校总是过得很愉快。 (范文解析1) 知识重点 1. 日常活动的描述：文中描述了作者在学校的日常学习和课后活动，包括上课时间、喜欢的科目、课后作业以及参加的俱乐部活动。 2. 时间的表达：使用“begin at”和“finish at”来描述课程的开始和结束时间。 3. 科目名称：列举了一些常见的初中科目，如Chinese（语文）、English（英语）、Maths（数学）、Science（科学）。 4. 喜欢的表达：使用“My favourite subject is...”来表达最喜欢的科目。 5. 频率的表达：使用“three times a week”来描述每周的活动频率。 (范文解析1) 句型运用 1. 自我介绍：I'm a junior high school student. 2. 日常活动：Our classes usually begin at...and finish at... 3. 列举事物：We have many subjects, such as... 4. 表达喜好：My favourite subject is...because... 5. 花费时间做某事：I often spend...doing... 6. 频率表达：...times a week. (范文解析1) 句型拓展 1. 自我介绍： - I'm a primary school student.（我是一名小学生。） - I'm a high school student.（我是一名高中生。） 2. 日常活动： - Our classes usually begin at 9 and finish at 3.（我们的课通常9点开始，3点结束。） - Our club activities usually begin at 4 and finish at 5.（我们的社团活动通常4点开始，5点结束。） (范文解析1) 句型拓展 3. 列举事物： - We have many fruits, such as apples, bananas, and oranges.（我们有许多水果，例如苹果、香蕉和橙子。） - We have many hobbies, such as reading, painting, and singing.（我们有许多爱好，例如阅读、绘画和唱歌。） 4. 表达喜好： - My favourite fruit is apple because it is sweet.（我最喜欢的水果是苹果，因为它很甜。） - My favourite hobby is reading because it can make me learn a lot.（我最喜欢的爱好是阅读，因为它能让我学到很多东西。） (范文解析1) 句型拓展 5. 花费时间做某事： - I often spend an hour reading books.（我经常花一个小时读书。） - I often spend half an hour practicing the piano.（我经常花半个小时练习钢琴。） 6. 频率表达： - We have music classes two times a week.（我们每周上两次音乐课。） - They play football four times a week.（他们每周踢四次足球。） (范文解析1) I’m glad to receive your email. Let me tell you my daily routine. I am busy on school days. (开篇点题) I usually get up at 7:00 in the morning. Then I go to school at 7:30 after breakfast. My school starts at 8 o’clock. I often have lunch at 12 o'clock. The afternoon classes begin at 2：10 and finish at 5：10. Sometimes I play sports for an hour after school. Then I go home. After having dinner, I do my homework. At 10：00, it’s time for me to go to bed. (描述一天的活动) Early to bed and early to rise is good for my health. I think I have a healthy lifestyle.(感受) (范文解析2) 我很高兴收到你的邮件。让我来告诉你我的日常安排。 我在上学的日子里很忙。（开篇点题）我通常早上7点起床。然后我在早餐后7点30分去上学。我的学校8点开始上课。我通常12点吃午饭。下午的课2点10分开始，5点10分结束。有时放学后我会做一个小时的运动。然后我回家。吃完晚餐后，我会做家庭作业。10点的时候，我就该上床睡觉了。（描述一天的活动） 早睡早起对我的健康有好处。我认为我有一个健康的生活方式。（感受） (范文解析2) 知识重点 1. 日常活动的描述：文章详细描述了作者在上学日的日常活动安排，包括起床时间、上学时间、上课时间、午餐时间、下午课时间、运动时间、回家时间、晚餐时间、做作业时间和睡觉时间。 2. 时间的表达：文中多次使用“at + 具体时间”来表示具体的时间点，例如“at 7:00”、“at 7:30”等。 3. 频率的表达：使用“Sometimes”来表示有时做某事，例如“Sometimes I play sports for an hour after school.” (范文解析2) 句型运用 1. 表示高兴收到信件/邮件：I'm glad to receive your email. 2. 描述日常活动：I usually get up at... Then I... 3. 表示学校的开始时间：My school starts at... 4. 表示吃饭时间：I often have lunch at... 5. 表示课程的开始和结束时间：The afternoon classes begin at... and finish at... (范文解析2) 句型运用 6. 表示有时做某事：Sometimes I... 7. 表示做某事的时间：After having dinner, I... 8. 表示该做某事的时间了：It's time for me to... 9. 表达对健康生活方式的看法：Early to bed and early to rise is good for my health. I think I have a healthy lifestyle. (范文解析2) 句型拓展 1. 表示高兴收到信件/邮件 - I'm glad to receive your letter.（我很高兴收到你的信。） - I'm glad to receive your message.（我很高兴收到你的消息。） 2. 描述日常活动 - I usually get up at 6:00. Then I go for a run.（我通常6点起床，然后去跑步。） - I usually get up at 8:00. Then I have a quick breakfast.（我通常8点起床，然后快速吃个早餐。） 3. 表示学校的开始时间 - My school starts at 9:00.（我的学校9点开始上课。） - My school starts at 8:30.（我的学校8点30分开始上课。） (范文解析2) 句型拓展 4. 表示吃饭时间 - I often have lunch at 12:30.（我通常12点30分吃午饭。） - I often have dinner at 6:00.（我通常6点吃晚饭。） 5. 表示课程的开始和结束时间 - The afternoon classes begin at 1:30 and finish at 4:30.（下午的课1点30分开始，4点30分结束。） - The morning classes begin at 9:00 and finish at 12:00.（上午的课9点开始，12点结束。） (范文解析2) 句型拓展 6. 表示有时做某事 - Sometimes I watch TV for an hour after dinner.（有时我晚饭后看一个小时的电视。） - Sometimes I read a book before going to bed.（有时我睡觉前读一本书。） 7. 表示做某事的时间 - After having lunch, I take a short nap.（吃完午饭后，我会小睡一会儿。） - After having breakfast, I check my emails.（吃完早餐后，我会查看我的邮件。） (范文解析2) 句型拓展 8. 表示该做某事的时间了 - It's time for me to go to work.（我该去上班了。） - It's time for me to start cooking dinner.（我该开始做晚饭了。） 9. 表达对健康生活方式的看法 - Eating fruits every day is good for my health. I think I have a healthy habit.（每天吃水果对我的健康有好处。我认为我有一个健康的习惯。） - Drinking enough water is good for my body. I think I have a healthy routine.（喝足够的水对我的身体有好处。我认为我有一个健康的日常习惯。） (范文解析2) My School Life I love my school very much. It's very big and beautiful. There are three buildings and a library with a lot of books in it. We have lessons from8:00a. m. to4:00p.m. We have 4 classes in the morning and 2 classes in the afternoon. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, math, geography, computer and so on. My favorite subject is Chinese, because I can learn a lot from it. And our Chinese teacher is kind to us. Every day we only need to spend about half an hour doing our homework so we have enough time to take part in after-school activities. We also have many interesting groups and clubs. We always have fun in my school. (例文1) My School Life I have a wonderful school life. Classes begin at 8 o'clock. We have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. The subjects we study include Math, English, Science and Art. My favorite subject is Art because I love drawing and creating. After school, I often play basketball with my friends. I think my school life is colorful and I enjoy it very much. (例文2) My School Life My school life is both busy and enjoyable. We have lessons at 8 every morning. There are four classes before lunch and two in the afternoon. We have various subjects like Chinese, History, and Music. I am particularly fond of Music as it allows me to relax. In the afternoon, there are extracurricular activities such as reading clubs and sports teams. I feel happy and fulfilled in school every day. (例文2) My School Life I love my school days. They start at 8 a.m. with four fascinating classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. We have subjects like Physics, Chemistry and PE. My favorite is PE because I can exercise and have fun. After school, I sometimes take part in volunteer activities. I think my school life is meaningful and it helps me grow. (例文3) $$