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高考英语读后续写语篇练习 相信的力量 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 The power of belief “You will never walk again. You will have to use a wheelchair. ” Unprepared for the doctor’s judgment, I heard his words fall heavily on my ears, numbing my soul. My serious car accident had left me unconscious and in critical condition. I awakened to find both leg: wrapped in casts (石膏). Lying in my bed motionless and relying on prayer, I wondered how I could give my ten-year-old son hope that Mom would heal. He’d been cheerful on every visit, but I saw the fear in his eyes. The thought of having a totally handicapped (残疾的) mother was weighing heavily on his little shoulder. He needed the ray of hope that I would not be in a wheelchair forever. 4 4 续写原文 Just maybe, I thought, I could use this experience to teach what to do when disasters strike. I needed something besides my physical healing to sink my Irish stubbornness into—it’s that personality that kept me going through the toughest challenge of my life It didn’t take me long to become impatient with the pace the doctors were willing to go with me. I determined to learn everything they showed me. I needed to make things happen my way. And being confined (限制) to a wheelchair the rest of my life didn’t fit into my plans. 5 5 续写原文 At first, I taught myself to move from the bed to the wheelchair. I made tiny movements for weeks, afraid of falling, but more afraid to just lie in bed. I reached a point where my arms were strong enough to carry me into the chair. Getting out of the chair and back into bed proved more difficult, but I soon developed a method of grabbing the sheets. I often wondered what the nurses and doctors would have done if they’d seen me struggling on my own. Once sure I could return myself to the bed from the wheelchair, I began to use a walker that had been left in my room by a former hospital roommate. 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： Every night, when I knew I wouldn’t be interrupted (打扰), I would start to train. Paragraph 2：It came time to share my achievements with the person most important to me. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了作者遭遇严重车祸后，被医生判定可能再也无法行走，只能依靠轮椅生活，这一消息让作者深受打击。儿子的探视，其眼中的恐惧让作者意识到必须振作，于是决定利用这次经历教导儿子如何面对灾难。作者很快对医生的治疗进度失去耐心，凭借自身顽强的爱尔兰式倔强，开始自学从床上移动到轮椅，经过数周的微小移动练习，手臂力量增强后能够坐到轮椅上，又摸索出从轮椅回到床上的方法，还开始使用前室友留下的助行器，展现出不向命运低头、努力康复的坚强精神。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： Every night, when I knew I wouldn’t be interrupted (打扰), I would start to train. 每当夜幕降临，万籁俱寂，确定不会被任何人打扰后，我便开启艰难的训练之旅。我咬紧牙关，双手紧紧抓住床边的栏杆，拼尽全力想要撑起自己虚弱无力的身体，豆大的汗珠从额头滚落，浸湿了枕头。每一次尝试移动，腿部传来的疼痛都如针般刺扎，但心中那团渴望重新行走的火焰从未熄灭。我在黑暗中独自摸索，从最初简单的肢体伸展，到逐渐增加难度的坐立练习，一点点地挑战着身体的极限，心中默默为自己加油打气，期待着能够早日恢复行走能力，哪怕只是一小步。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：It came time to share my achievements with the person most important to me. 经过一段时间艰苦卓绝的努力，我终于迎来了这个重要的时刻 —— 与我生命中最重要的人，也就是我的儿子，分享我的训练成果。那天，阳光透过窗户洒在病房的地上，像是为这个特殊的时刻铺上了金色的地毯。我特意让儿子来到病房，在他充满期待与好奇的目光中，我深吸一口气，双手紧紧握住助行器，缓缓地、稳稳地从床边站起身来。儿子的眼中先是闪过一丝惊讶，继而被满满的惊喜与自豪所取代。我一步一步，缓慢却坚定地走向他，每一步都承载着无数个日夜的汗水与坚持，当我终于走到他面前，紧紧地抱住他时，我看到他眼中闪烁着激动的泪花，而我也深知，这一切的付出都是值得的。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 Every night, when I knew I wouldn't be interrupted, I would start to train. As the world outside fell silent and the hospital corridors dimmed, I summoned all my strength and determination. Lying in bed, I'd first focus on my breathing, trying to calm the nerves that always seemed to surface at this hour. Then, with great effort, I'd slowly move my legs under the sheets, wincing at the pain that shot through them. Inch by inch, I'd edge myself closer to the side of the bed, my hands gripping the mattress tightly. Once in position, I'd take a deep breath and, using the momentum, push myself up into a sitting position. It was a struggle that left me exhausted, but I refused to give up. I'd repeat this process over and over, sometimes falling back onto the bed in defeat, but always getting up again, fueled by the hope of one day walking out of that hospital on my own two feet. 14 14 范文呈现 It came time to share my achievements with the person most important to me. I had carefully planned this moment, wanting it to be perfect. I asked the nurse to bring my son to my room. As I waited, I adjusted my position in the wheelchair, making sure I looked as strong and confident as possible. When he walked through the door, his eyes widened with anticipation. I smiled at him, a smile that masked the pain and exhaustion I felt. With a deep breath, I placed my hands on the armrests of the wheelchair and, slowly, with all the grace I could muster, I pushed myself up. My legs trembled beneath me, but I held my ground. I took a tentative step forward, then another. His eyes filled with tears as he watched me, and I could see the pride and joy in his expression. It was a moment I would cherish forever, knowing that all my hard work had been worth it just to see that look on his face. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Every night, when convinced that no interruption would come my way, I embarked on my arduous training journey. With the stillness of the night enveloping the hospital, I, lying in bed, would first steady my breath, trying hard to overcome the nerves that always lurked. Then, pain shooting through my legs, I'd inch myself towards the edge of the bed, hands gripping the mattress tightly. It was my unwavering determination that kept me going, no matter how many times I fell back. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 Finally came the moment to share my achievements with the one dearest to me. I had the nurse bring my son to my room. As he entered, eyes wide with anticipation, I pushed myself up from the wheelchair. Trembling legs notwithstanding, I took those steps forward. Only then did I see the pride and joy in his eyes. How rewarding it was! It was through this struggle that I showed him the power of perseverance. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$