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八上 Unit4 Task I
A DIY story
There will be a DIY story writing competition
in English Week.
Notice
A DIY story writing competition will be held. Please write it down and hand it to your English teacher.
What did you make?
A DIY job
Why did you make it?
Think
What do we usually write in a DIY story?
DIY story
Read and think
Which person(人称) do we usually use in our own story?
What tense(时态) do we use in a story?
A. First person. B. Second person. C. Third person
Simple present tense.
Simple past tense.
C. Simple future tense.
Tip 1
Use the first person.
Tip 2
Use the simple past tense.
A DIY story
What did she make?
Read and find
____(who) did_________(what)_____________(when). Read her diary entry.
Where did she make it?
Why did she make it?
Suzy
a DIY job
at the weekend
Reaon
what
when
why
where
Read and Talk
who
Reason
A DIY story
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2
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She planned to make the card with some roses on it.
She wrote the sentence “Happy Birthday, mum”.
Read and find
How did she make the birthday card?
Sandy helped her with the drawing.
Finally, she coloured the roses red, blue and pink.
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She also cut out a picture of colourful balloons and stuck it on the cover.
A DIY story
How did she feel?
Do you think it’s easy for Suzy to make this card? Why?
Read and think
It’s inexpensive but meaningful.
It is a hard job. But why did she do it by herself instead of buying one?
Detail
Suzy did a DIY job at the weekend. Read her diary entry.
real
rich
Process
What’s her hope?
Hope
A DIY story
Read and share
Share the process of your DIY story with your partner.
A: What did you make?
B: ...
A:How did you make it?
B:…
A: How long did it take you to make it?/ How much time did you spend on it?
B: ...
A: Did you meet any trouble?
B:...
A:How did you feel?
B:...
Read and appreciate
1.Mum’s birthday is coming. I decided to make her a birthday card by myself.
Mum’s birthday is coming, so I decided to make her a birthday card by myself.
2.I completed the card. There was paint on everything.
When I completed the card, there was paint on everything.
Tip 3
Use correct transitions and clauses. Try to make your expressions coherent and different.
Practice
1.Time seemed to go faster. I drew a rose.
Time seemed to go faster when I drew a rose.
When I drew a rose, time seemed to go faster.
2. I decided to add some salad cream. I made them taste better.
I decided to add some salad cream to make them taste better.
To make them taste better, I decided to add some salad cream.
I decided to add some salad cream because I wanted to make them taste better.
I wanted to make them taste better, so I decided to add some salad cream.
My DIY story
Writing
My DIY story
Write down your DIY story please.
Writing
Items Standards Points Scores
Structure Clear paragraphs 1
Correct transitions and clauses 2
Content Reason 2
Process 2
Hope 1
Language No grammatical mistakes 3
Different and useful expressions 2
Others Tidy handwriting 1
Correct punctuation 1
Homework
1.Finish writing your DIY story.
2.Check whether you have clear steps and feelings in your story.
THANK YOU
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