2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+佛罗里达夏日：小 “我” 与独眼狗的故事 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 佛罗里达夏日：小 “我” 与独眼狗的故事 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was a hot day in Florida. The school year had just ended and it was time for summer vacation. We had just gotten a little black dog who we named One-Eyed. We chose that name because he could only see out of one eye. Everybody wanted to do something for the dog: feed him, teach him tricks and take long walks with him. Everybody was so happy to have this active, playful and shaggy new addition to our family. Everybody, that is, except my mom and me. All my mom saw when she looked at the dog was someone else to clean up after. Shedding, messy, muddy, he pounced all over the house. All Mom seemed to care about was getting the house cleaned. My mom began to put Clorox (高乐氏漂白水) in the bathtub. There was no messing with Mom when she started cleaning, so I decided to move out of the way. Actually, getting out of the way is a move I’d been practicing for a long time. 4 4 续写原文 Being the youngest in my family has had its advantages, of course. More than a few times I was spoiled or everyone said I was the cutest. But being the youngest also came with its fair share of troubles. “You’re too young! ” “You’ll mess this up! ” they’d often say. I knew that my family loved me but I couldn’t wait to show them I could do things by myself. Every time I asked my brother or my sister if I could pet One-Eyed, they would shout, “No! ” or tell me that I had germs and if I touched One-Eyed he would die! I really believed them. Once I even confessed to my mom that I touched the dog when no one noticed. At first, my mom seemed very confused about what I was telling her, but then she realized. My mom scolded my brother and sister, “You better stop teasing your little brother! ” Little brother! That’s exactly what I was. That really got my blood boiling! Secretly, I decided, “Ill show them what a little kid can do! ” 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： I looked at the driver helplessly, at his eyes under his thick, bushy brown eyebrows. Paragraph 2： I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 文章讲述了在佛罗里达炎热的暑假，家里迎来了一只独眼小黑狗，大家都对它喜爱有加，唯有 “我” 和妈妈例外。妈妈嫌小狗掉毛、弄脏屋子，总是忙着打扫，而 “我” 作为家里最小的孩子，常被哥哥姐姐以 “年纪小会搞砸事情” 为由拒绝让我亲近小狗，甚至被吓唬说摸了小狗它就会死。有一次 “我” 忍不住摸了小狗后向妈妈坦白，妈妈责骂了哥哥姐姐，这让 “我” 更加渴望证明自己，决定要做出一番让家人刮目相看的事情，故事围绕着 “我” 在家庭中的处境以及与小狗的关联展开。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： That afternoon, I took the dog and sneaked into the bathroom. 那天下午，家人都在各自忙碌，我瞅准时机，悄悄解开了拴着小狗的绳子，小心翼翼地抱起它，然后像个做贼似的，轻手轻脚地溜进了浴室。我的心脏砰砰直跳，既紧张又兴奋，深怕被人发现。一进浴室，我赶紧关上了门，靠在门上喘了口气。看着怀里的小狗，我小声地对它说：“今天就由我来给你洗澡，让他们看看我能行。” 接着，我便开始手忙脚乱地准备给小狗洗澡的东西，把水温调好，拿上毛巾和沐浴露，心里想着一定要把小狗洗得干干净净，漂漂亮亮的。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2： I thought my mom would punish me, but she was just standing there and laughing. 我本以为妈妈发现后一定会大发雷霆，狠狠地惩罚我。当我胆战心惊地打开浴室门，准备面对妈妈的怒火时，却看到妈妈就站在门口。她的脸上没有我预想中的愤怒，而是带着一丝惊讶和笑意。我愣在了原地，不知所措地看着妈妈，怀里的小狗还在不停地扭动着身子。妈妈笑着走过来，摸了摸我的头，又看了看小狗，说：“你这小家伙，还挺有想法的。” 我这才回过神来，心里满是疑惑，不明白妈妈为什么没有生气，只是呆呆地站在那里，看着妈妈笑。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 That afternoon, with the house momentarily quiet and everyone occupied with their own affairs, I mustered up all my courage and untied the little black dog's leash. I scooped him up gently into my arms, being extra cautious not to make a sound. My heart was pounding like a drum as I tiptoed towards the bathroom, glancing around furtively to ensure no one was watching. Once inside, I quickly but quietly shut the door and leaned against it, taking a deep breath to calm my nerves. Looking down at the dog, I whispered, "Today, I'm going to give you a bath and show them what I can do." I then set about preparing the bath things in a flurry of activity. I adjusted the water temperature to what I hoped was just right, fetched a towel and the dog shampoo, all the while my mind racing with thoughts of how clean and nice the dog would look after I was done. 13 13 范文呈现 I thought my mom would punish me. I had envisioned her angry face and the scolding that would surely follow my act of disobedience. With trembling hands and a sinking feeling in my stomach, I slowly opened the bathroom door, bracing myself for the worst. But to my utter astonishment, there she was, just standing there and laughing. Her laughter rang out in the hallway, a sound I had not expected at all. I froze in my tracks, my eyes wide with confusion and disbelief as I stared at her. The dog wriggled in my arms, seemingly oblivious to the tension in the air. My mom then walked over to me, still chuckling, and ruffled my hair affectionately. She looked at the dog and said, "You little rascal, you sure have some big ideas." I remained rooted to the spot, completely bewildered as to why she wasn't angry, simply gaping at her as she continued to laugh. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 That afternoon, seizing the moment when the house was enveloped in a temporary lull and everyone was engrossed in their respective tasks, I summoned up my nerve and stealthily untied the leash of the little black dog, One-Eyed. Holding him gingerly in my arms, I crept towards the bathroom, my heart thumping violently like a wild bird trapped in a cage. Once inside, with the door shut softly behind me, I set about preparing the bath essentials hurriedly, adjusting the water temperature with great care. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 Hardly had I started bathing the dog when the door swung open. I was convinced that my mom would punish me severely for my disobedience. However, much to my amazement, there she stood, not with an angry frown but with a face beaming with laughter. It was then that I realized that perhaps my attempt to prove myself wasn't going to end in the disaster I had feared. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$