2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习 法国小镇上的追船还包之旅 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 法国小镇上的追船还包之旅 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 Race at River’s Edge When we arrived in Tournus, my cousin Gabriel and I parked our bikes and walked to the town square. We’d just ridden 33 kilometers, and we were starving. We planned to get lunch and then ride back to Macon, a small city in France on the SaÂne River. I was spending the summer there with Gabriel’s family. It was market day. Locals are busy filling their baskets with groceries. Tourists hunted for souvenirs. Gabriel and I bought a long, thin loaf of bread and some cheese I’m obsessed with. It tastes awesome. As we ate, I noticed a girl wearing a USA Basketball T-shirt. She smiled at us. Basketball is big in France too. You can even watch NBA games on TV. The girl stopped to shop with someone that I guessed was her mom because they looked so much alike. 4 4 续写原文 I saw them again by the river. They sat on a bench enjoying their snacks in front of a long, narrow riverboat named Voyageur, which had docked (停靠码头) earlier. Then they boarded the boat. It was preparing to leave. As the ship started to pull away, I spotted a colorful shopping bag on the bench. The girl had left it! I looked up. Some passengers were gathering on the upper deck of the riverboat, including the girl and her mom. I held up the bag and waved it to get their attention while Gabriel called to them. When the girl noticed the bag, she opened her mouth in surprise. But her face fell as the boat started to pull away from the dock. She didn’t think she’d get her stuff back. 5 5 续写原文 “Maybe we can throw it to her, Hugo! ” Gabriel said. “It’s too light, ” I said. “It would end up in the river. We have to find a way to return it! ” Running alongside the boat, Gabriel learned from a sailor that the boat’s next stop was Macon—our destination as well. “Do you think we can keep up? ” I asked. Gabriel laughed. “We’re about to find out! ” 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. Paragraph 2：We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ” 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了“我” 和表哥加布里埃尔骑行 33 公里到达图尔尼后，在集市买了食物充饥，期间注意到一个穿美国篮球 T 恤的女孩。之后在河边，女孩和母亲登上名为 “旅行者” 号的船离开时落下一个购物袋。船开动后，“我” 和加布里埃尔发现女孩在船上且意识到包落下了。由于包太轻扔不过去，又得知船的下一站是 “我们” 要回的马孔，于是两人决定沿着河岸追赶船只，试图将包归还给女孩，一场充满意外与挑战的还包之旅就此展开，他们也踏上了未知能否成功的追船征程。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1：I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. 我把包挎在肩上，和加布里埃尔一起沿着河岸朝着马孔的方向奋力骑行。我们的呼吸急促而沉重，汗水不停地从额头滚落，双腿也因长时间的运动而逐渐酸痛乏力，但我们丝毫不敢停歇。一路上，我们既要留意脚下崎岖的道路，又要紧紧盯着前方河面上渐渐远去的 “旅行者” 号，生怕跟丢。尽管疲惫不堪，但归还女孩购物袋的决心让我们咬牙坚持，与船并行的每一刻都充满了紧张与期待。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them! ” 我们最终抵达了马孔，满心以为追不上船归还计划已经失败，心情无比失落。就在这时，加布里埃尔突然大声喊道：“我看到她们了！” 我猛地抬起头，顺着他手指的方向望去，果然看到女孩和她的妈妈正站在不远处的岸边。一瞬间，沮丧的情绪一扫而空，我们急忙朝着她们跑去，手中紧紧握着那个购物袋。女孩看到我们后，脸上露出惊喜与感动的神情，我们将购物袋递还给她，她连声道谢，而我们也因为成功归还物品，内心满是成就感和温暖。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. With determination burning in our eyes, Gabriel and I pedaled furiously along the riverbank, chasing after the Voyageur. The wind whipped past our faces, making it difficult to hear anything but the pounding of our hearts and the whirring of the bicycle wheels. The path was uneven, and we had to dodge rocks and potholes while keeping our eyes fixed on the boat. My legs were already aching from the long ride earlier, but the thought of returning the girl's bag spurred me on. We passed by patches of greenery and the occasional fisherman, but our focus remained unshaken. As we rode, I could feel the weight of the bag on my shoulder, a reminder of our mission. 14 14 范文呈现 We finally got to Macon, thinking we’d failed, when Gabriel suddenly shouted, “I see them!” Exhausted and disheartened, I had almost given up hope. But at his words, my head snapped up, and there they were, the girl and her mother, standing on the dock. A surge of energy coursed through me, and we quickly dismounted our bikes and rushed towards them. The girl's eyes widened in surprise and then filled with gratitude as we handed her the bag. She thanked us profusely, and we grinned at each other, knowing that our efforts had been worth it. In that moment, the weariness of the long ride vanished, replaced by a sense of accomplishment and satisfaction that warmed our hearts. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 I threw the bag over my shoulder, and we set off. Hearts aflame with determination, Gabriel and I sped along the riverbank, the wind howling past us as if urging us on. Our legs, already fatigued from the prior 33-kilometer ride, pumped with renewed vigor. The uneven path beneath our wheels, littered with rocks and potholes, failed to deter us; instead, it was as if the very thought of the girl's lost bag propelled us forward. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 We finally reached Macon, crestfallen and convinced of our failure. Then, out of the blue, Gabriel exclaimed, "I see them!" It was at that moment that a spark of hope reignited within us. There on the dock stood the girl and her mother. With a rush of adrenaline, we hastened towards them. The girl's eyes widened in astonishment and gratitude as we returned the bag. It was not just a simple act of kindness; it was a testament to our perseverance, and in that instant, all our weariness dissolved, replaced by a profound sense of fulfillment. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$