2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+峡谷绝境：我与爱犬的求生三日 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 峡谷绝境：我与爱犬的求生三日 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 It was a cold, sunny December day when I set out for a run in Moab, Utah, with my dog, Taz. I often went for training runs by myself and had done this particular route before. About an hour into my run along a remote canyon (峡谷) trail, I hit a patch of black ice and then fell 60 feet into the canyon, landing on a ledge (岩脊) above a sheer (陡峭的) drop. I wasn’t paralyzed, but I was in great pain. Taz had managed to find his way back to me, so there must be a way out of the canyon, but I couldn’t stand or even crawl. I shouted for help and was intent on dragging myself to the bottom of the canyon. Every inch was an effort. It took me five hours to go a quarter of a mile. Eventually, it got so dark that I had to stay where I was for the night, next to a puddle of water. At night the temperature dropped below freezing. Taz stayed with me, providing some warmth. 4 4 续写原文 The next morning, I couldn’t move at all I tried to stay positive. I was sure somebody would hear me screaming for help. The second night in the canyon seemed even longer and colder. The puddle turned to ice, and I had to crack through it to get water. On the third day, I felt myself growing weaker. I was coming to terms with the fact that I might die. In a last-ditch effort, I called Taz over and told him to go and get help. Taz took off through the canyon and I lay there thinking about my family and friends. There was more that I wanted from life. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1： Taz returned, alone. Paragraph 2：After leaving the hospital, I was in a wheelchair for three months. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 背景与开端：在寒冷但阳光明媚的 12 月，“我” 像往常一样带着狗 Taz 在犹他州莫阿布的一条熟悉的峡谷小道上跑步，却意外踩到黑冰，跌入 60 英尺深的峡谷，落在陡峭悬崖上方的岩脊上，受伤无法行动，开启了艰难的求生之旅。 第一天的挣扎：“我” 试图拖着身体向峡谷底部移动，每前进一点都异常艰难，花了五个小时才移动了四分之一英里，天黑后只能在水坑边过夜，Taz 陪伴着 “我”，给 “我” 些许温暖。 第二天的困境：早晨 “我” 完全无法移动，但仍保持乐观，期待有人能听到呼救声。夜晚更加寒冷，水坑结冰，“我” 不得不破冰取水。 第三天的绝望与希望：“我” 感到身体越来越虚弱，意识到可能会死，于是做了最后的努力，让 Taz 去寻求帮助，自己躺在那里思念家人和朋友，渴望活下去。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Para 1： Taz returned, alone. Taz 回来了，却是独自回来的。我的心瞬间沉了下去，原本寄予厚望的救援并未出现，绝望再次笼罩。看着 Taz 无助的眼神，我强忍着内心的悲痛，轻轻抚摸着它，试图从它的陪伴中汲取一丝力量。在这寒冷孤寂的峡谷中，我抱紧 Taz，感受着它的体温，不知道还能坚持多久，只是不断在心中祈祷着奇迹的发生，哪怕只有一丝希望，我也不想放弃活下去的信念，就这样和 Taz 相互依偎，等待着未知的命运。 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 2：After leaving the hospital, I was in a wheelchair for three months. 离开医院后，我在轮椅上度过了漫长的三个月。身体的伤痛时刻提醒着我那段可怕的经历，但我从未停止康复训练，每一次努力都伴随着汗水与坚持。回想起峡谷中的生死挣扎，我对生命有了新的敬畏和珍惜。我开始重新审视生活的意义，积极参与各种活动，与家人朋友的关系也变得更加亲密。曾经以为遥不可及的平凡日常，如今都变得无比珍贵。虽然行动暂时受限，但我的心更加坚定，决心以全新的姿态重新拥抱生活，去追寻那些未完成的梦想，让生命绽放出更绚烂的光彩。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Taz returned, alone. My heart sank as I saw him without any sign of help. Disappointment and despair overwhelmed me once again. I reached out and gently stroked his head, trying to draw some strength from his presence. In the cold and lonely canyon, I huddled closer to Taz, feeling his body warmth, not knowing how much longer I could hold on. All I could do was pray for a miracle in my heart. Even with just a glimmer of hope, I refused to give up my will to live. We stayed like this, relying on each other, waiting for the unknown fate. 13 13 范文呈现 After leaving the hospital, I was in a wheelchair for three months. The physical pain constantly reminded me of that dreadful experience. However, I never stopped my rehabilitation training. Every effort was accompanied by sweat and perseverance. Recalling the life-and-death struggle in the canyon, I developed a newfound respect and appreciation for life. I began to reevaluate the meaning of life and actively participated in various activities. My relationships with family and friends grew even closer. The ordinary days that I once took for granted now seemed incredibly precious. Although my mobility was temporarily restricted, my heart became even stronger. I was determined to embrace life anew and pursue the unfulfilled dreams, allowing my life to shine more brightly. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Taz returned, alone. A wave of dismay crashed over me as I beheld him without a single sign of rescue. There I was, stranded in the desolate canyon, with only Taz by my side. Darkness seemed to close in, and it was not until then that I truly felt the pangs of hopelessness. Hugging Taz tightly, I whispered words of comfort to both him and myself, trying to muster the courage to face the unknown. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 After leaving the hospital, I was confined to a wheelchair for three months. The physical agony was a constant reminder of that harrowing ordeal. Yet, with unwavering determination, I threw myself into rehabilitation. It was during those arduous sessions that I realized how precious life is. Never had I been so eager to regain my mobility. Through sheer willpower, I gradually made progress. Now, having emerged from that dark chapter, I cherish every moment and am resolved to embrace life with newfound gratitude and enthusiasm. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$