第一部分 二、高分写作技巧点拨-【一战成名新中考】2025陕西中考英语·一轮复习·晨读册

晨读册·陕西英语 高 频 话 题 写 作 诵 读 示例 4a:第四档　 12 分标准(结构完整,语言错误较少,但要点不全。) I grew some strawberry plants and looked after them carefully. Every time school over, I went home and I watched the plants. I was happy. After two months, I was surprised to find some strawberries on the plants. I picked them up and shared with my family. The strawberries were so sweet. I got a feeling of satisfaction. And I learnt some knowledge about the strawberry plant. It was really fun to grow plants! 示例 4b:第四档　 12 分标准(结构完整,要点齐全,但有一些语言错误。) I grew a tomato plant in my house on March. I looked after it carefully. After school, I watered it and moved it out to sunshine. When I watched it grew, I was happy to take notes of it􀆳s changes. A few months later, the small tomato come out on the plants. I had a feeling of satisfaction. It􀆳s fun to grow vegetables. I􀆳ve learned many useful knowledge and skills from it. 示例 5:第五档　 14 分标准(语言流畅生动,要点齐全,但有极个别语言错误。) I grew some plants at home at the begining of this term. Every morning when I got up, I went to see if they grew better. I looked after them carefully and often watched how they have changed. Also, I recorded the changes in my notebook. I was very excited when I saw the flowers on the plants. I took some photos and showed them to my parents. I got a lot of fun and had a feeling of satisfaction. I also learned much knowledge about growing plants. 示例 6:第五档　 15 分标准(行文流畅、语言生动,几乎无语言瑕疵。) At the beginning of the school term, the teacher asked us to plant something. I chose to grow a rose. My parents bought a young rose plant online and I started to plant it. I watered the rose and watched it carefully. I took notes to record how it grew. Finally, when flowers started to come out, I was so happy and had a feeling of satisfaction. I gave the rose to my English teacher to show my love and thanks, because she had helped me so much and I had learned a lot from her! 注意:书写不规范,字迹不清晰,影响阅卷,会酌情扣分;词数少于 70 的,每 10 个单词扣 1 分。 二、高分写作技巧点拨 依据《义务教育英语课程标准(2022 年版)》语言能力学段目标三级要求可知,书面表达要求考生能围绕 相关主题,选用不同句式结构和时态,描述和介绍身边的人、事物或事件,表达情感、态度、观点和意图等。 考生在写作时,要围绕标题和要点展开写作。 在写作过程中,各个段落要有主题句,并且有具体的支撑 句丰富细节,支撑主题句。 高分书面表达要从以下四点入手: 1. 审题准确 认真审题,确定文章的写作要点、体裁、人称和时态。 写作要点通常在题干中或参考词汇中已经给出,考生需要根据写作要点联想可能用到的词汇、短语和句 型,并运用恰当的衔接词将句子衔接起来,确保文章连贯、通畅。 2. “总—分—总”三段式结构 三段式写作:第一段:点题,说明要介绍的人或物;第二段:条理清晰地叙述或介绍与主题相关的内容; 第三段:总结或升华文章主题。 (1)记叙文要求考生描述个人经历及感受。 常见的写作模式如下: 4 晨读册·陕西英语 高 频 话 题 写 作 诵 读 (2)说明文 / 应用文通常考查做法建议、计划安排和事物(地点)介绍等。 但应注意应用文的正确格式,如书 信、邮件等。 3. 用词得当 (1)用词准确,避免重复; (2)引用名言警句,为文章添彩; (3)恰当选用连接词来衔接各句,使行文连贯,逻辑清晰。 常用的连接词(组)具体如下: 作用 连接词(组) 表示并列 and; both􀆺and􀆺; not only􀆺but also􀆺; either􀆺or􀆺; neither􀆺nor􀆺; as well as 表示转折 but; yet; however; while; though; instead; unluckily; unfortunately; after all; otherwise 表示顺序 first( ly); second(ly); third(ly); to begin with; to start with; first of all; at last; in the end; next; then; after that; finally 表示递进 besides; what􀆳s more; what􀆳s worse; in addition 表示时间 when; while; as; now; at present; recently; before; after; after a while; at first; later; soon; suddenly; as soon as; from now on; till 表示条件 if; unless; as long as 表示原因 because; because of; as; for; since; thanks to; for the reason that 表示结果 so; therefore; as a result; so􀆺that􀆺 表示让步 though; although; even if / though; no matter what / how / who / when; whatever; however; whoever; whenever 表示目的 so that; in order that; in order to; so as to 表示对比 while; on (the) one hand􀆺, on the other hand􀆺 表示举例 for example; for instance; such as; like; take􀆺for example 表示观点 in my opinion; in my view; as for me; from my point of view; as far as I􀆳m concerned 表示解释说明 in fact; actually; in addition; in that case 5 晨读册·陕西英语 高 频 话 题 写 作 诵 读 续表 作用 连接词(组) 表示强调 in fact; above all 表示总结、概括 in a word; in short; in conclusion; on the whole; generally speaking; all in all 4. 句式丰富 (1)巧用特殊句式 ①it 相关句型 句型 例句 It􀆳s+adj. ( +for sb. ) +to do sth. 做某事(对某人来说)是……的。 Skating is easy for me. →It is easy for me to skate. It􀆳s+adj. ( +of sb. ) +to do sth. (某人)做某事是……的。 He helped me work out this problem. He is kind. →It􀆳s kind of him to help me work out this problem. It􀆳s time to do sth. / It􀆳s time for (doing) sth. 到(做)某事的时间了。 It􀆳s time to go to school. It􀆳s time for school. It􀆳s one􀆳s turn to do sth. 轮到某人做某事了。 It􀆳s my turn to do the dishes. It takes / took (sb. ) +一段时间+to do sth. 做某事花费(某人)……时间。 He spent two days making the kite. →It took him two days to make the kite. It is+adj. +that 从句 ……是……的。 We should arrive on time. This is important. →It is important that we should arrive on time. It seems / seemed that􀆺 似乎 / 好像…… It seems that everyone likes him. ②比较等级的特殊句型 形式 句型 例句 原级 as+形容词 / 副词原级+as􀆺和……一样…… I think history is as interesting as geography. 比较级 the+比较级􀆺, the+比较级􀆺 越……,就越…… The more we communicate with our parents, the fewer problems we will have. ①比较级+and+比较级 越来越…… ②more and more+多音节形容词或副词原级 越来 越…… Our life is becoming better and better. This village is becoming more and more beautiful. 最高级 one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数 最……的……之一 Plastic pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in the world. the+序数词+形容词最高级+名词+范围 ……中第几最……的…… China is the third largest country in area in the world. ③感叹句增强感情 ▶The mooncake is delicious. →How delicious the mooncake is! ▶Du Fu is a great poet. →What a great poet Du Fu is! ④强调句提升档次 ▶My mother always takes good care of me. →It is my mother who always takes good care of me. ▶I met him in the library. →It was in the library that I met him. 6 晨读册·陕西英语 高 频 话 题 写 作 诵 读 (2)巧用从句 ①宾语从句 句式 例句 陈述句式 The moon moves around the earth. I know the truth. →I know that the moon moves around the earth. ②定语从句 先行词 例句 人 The man is making a speech. The man is my father. →The man who / that is making a speech is my father. 物 I􀆳ll never forget those days. We spent those days together. →I􀆳ll never forget those days that / which we spent together. 时间 I will always remember those days. We shared happiness and sadness during those days. →I will always remember those days when we shared happiness and sadness. 地点 This is a small town. I was born in the small town. →This is the small town where I was born. 原因 Tina was late for the sports meeting. I don􀆳t know the reason. →I don􀆳t know the reason why Tina was late for the sports meeting. ③状语从句 类型 例句 时间状语从句 I will go shopping now. After that, I will meet my friends. →After I go shopping, I will meet my friends. 条件状语从句 It will snow tomorrow. We will make a snowman. →If it snows tomorrow, we will make a snowman. 原因状语从句 He was ill. He didn􀆳t go to school. →He didn􀆳t go to school because he was ill. 让步状语从句 She is young. She has the dream of being a hero like her father. →Although / Though she is young, she has the dream of being a hero like her father. 目的状语从句 He gets up early today. He wants to hold a birthday party for his mother. →He gets up early today so that he can hold a birthday party for his mother. 结果状语从句 The math problem was very easy. I worked it out quickly. →The math problem was so easy that I worked it out quickly. 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀤂 􀦂 􀦂 􀦂􀦂 注意 在写句子的时候,可以先写简单的主谓宾结构,然后对所写的句子进行修饰,比如加从句修饰, 或用不同的表达方式来表达同一个意思。 (例:I am a student. 加从句修饰后为 I am a student who has made many achievements at college. ) 7