2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+贫困家庭孩子的圣诞惊喜行动 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 贫困家庭孩子的圣诞惊喜行动 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 As Christmas decorations appeared in town, our parents called my two younger brothers and me together. At first, I thought someone had died, because I had never seen my parents look so sad. My brothers and I stood waiting for the awful news. Mom hugged me as she murmured, “Christmas is going to be different this year. We won't be having a tree or presents. We can barely afford food. ”Dad, resting on the couch, beckoned (招手示意) the boys into his arms. “Things will change when I get back to work. ” My family was poorer than dirt. Dad, the only bread-earner in our family, worked in a coal mine. However, soon after returning to work at the end of a long strike, Dad was hurt in a rock fall that broke bones in his foot. Lying on the couch with the swollen foot high on pillows, he didn't talk or smile much. There was little to smile about. No work, no income. 4 4 续写原文 At nine years old, I mothered my younger brothers: Rodney, aged six, and Stevie, three. We shared a small bedroom. That night, after our parents’ announcement, we talked. Rodney began. “Em, did you see how sad Mommy and Daddy looked? I thought Mommy was gonna cry. “Me, too. Daddy's foot’s … this big” whispered Stevie, holding out his arms. “Yeah. . We're in hard times, " I said. “It makes Mommy and Daddy sad. " “But we don't have to be sad, " I added, hoping to brighten the mood. 5 5 续写原文 “Since there are still several weeks to go, maybe we can do something to cheer them up, " I said with overdone enthusiasm. The boys proposed, “We can take the money from our piggy bank. . . earn some more. . and surprise them with gifts! " “I can run errands(跑腿) for Aunt Em and neighbors to earn money, " I offered. “Yeah, " Rodney added, “I and Stevie can return bottles and save the deposit money. . . instead of buying candy! " He pushed Stevie gently with his elbow. “Yeah! ”Stevie clutched his hands together. We had a plan! Until they nodded off, I coached my little brothers (especially Stevie) in ways to guard our secret. “Don't talk about it during the day. " 6 6 段首句 Paragraph 1： We awoke in the morning, transforming from sad children to the secret agents on an important mission! Paragraph 2：On Christmas morning, we hurried into the living room and handed the gifts to Mommy and Daddy. 7 7 Part 2 题目分析 8 8 续写原文分析 9 文章讲述了*圣诞节将至，父母却把“我”和两个弟弟叫到一起，告知今年因家庭贫困，爸爸受伤失去收入，无法准备圣诞树和礼物，甚至连食物都快负担不起。年仅九岁的“我”承担起照顾弟弟们的责任，看到父母的悲伤，“我”提议在圣诞节前想办法赚钱，给父母一个惊喜。弟弟们积极响应，计划用存钱罐的钱，还打算通过跑腿、回收瓶子等方式挣钱买礼物。“我”不断叮嘱弟弟们保守秘密，一家人在艰难时刻相互温暖，孩子们的计划为这个贫困的家庭带来了一丝希望和温情。 9 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 10 10 续写思路分析 Para 1： We awoke in the morning, transforming from sad children to the secret agents on an important mission! 我们在清晨醒来，就像经历了一场奇妙的变身，从原本悲伤失落的孩子，瞬间变成了身负重要使命的秘密特工！我们迅速洗漱完毕，眼神中闪烁着兴奋与坚定的光芒。我仔细地给弟弟们分配任务，就像一个经验丰富的指挥官。罗德尼小心翼翼地将存钱罐里的钱倒出来，数了又数，然后把它们小心地放进一个小布袋里。我则开始整理要去跑腿的清单，把邻居们可能需要帮忙的事项一一罗列清楚。而斯蒂维，虽然年纪最小，但也干劲十足，他认真地把我们收集来准备拿去回收换钱的瓶子摆放整齐，小小的身影充满了力量。我们怀揣着对未来几周的期待，悄无声息却又满怀热情地开启了我们的 “秘密行动”，准备用自己的努力为这个艰难的家庭带来一丝温暖和希望，让爸爸妈妈重新露出笑容。 11 11 续写思路分析 Para 2：On Christmas morning, we hurried into the living room and handed the gifts to Mommy and Daddy. 终于，到了圣诞节的早晨，整个屋子弥漫着一种紧张又兴奋的气息。我们迫不及待地早早起床，匆匆忙忙地冲进客厅，手里紧紧握着这几周辛苦努力换来的成果 —— 给爸爸妈妈的礼物。这些礼物虽然并不昂贵，甚至有些简陋，但每一份都饱含着我们对父母深深的爱和无尽的心意。我怀着忐忑的心情，将一份我用跑腿挣来的钱买的手套递给了爸爸，希望能温暖他那因生活奔波而疲惫的双手；罗德尼则有些羞涩地把用回收瓶子换来的钱买的围巾送给妈妈，轻轻地说：“妈妈，这样你冬天出门就不会冷了。” 斯蒂维也不甘示弱，他迈着小步跑到爸爸妈妈跟前，递上自己用积攒的零花钱买的一小盒护手霜，奶声奶气地说：“爸爸妈妈，擦了这个手就不会疼啦。” 爸爸妈妈接过礼物的那一刻，他们的眼中满是惊讶和感动，随后，泪水夺眶而出，那是欣慰和幸福的泪水。一家人紧紧相拥，在这个寒冷的圣诞节早晨，被浓浓的爱和温暖包围着，仿佛所有的困难都在这一刻消散。 12 12 Part 3 范文呈现 13 13 范文呈现 We awoke in the morning, transforming from sad children to the secret agents on an important mission! As the first rays of sunlight peeked through the window, we sprang out of bed with a newfound determination. I quickly gathered my younger brothers, Rodney and Stevie, and we huddled together, our eyes gleaming with excitement and purpose. We began to strategize in hushed tones, like seasoned spies planning a covert operation. Rodney retrieved our piggy bank and carefully counted the coins, his small fingers handling each one with great care. I took out the list of errands I had prepared the night before, mentally going through the tasks and the neighbors who might need our help. Stevie, though the youngest, was eager to contribute. He busied himself with sorting the bottles we had collected for recycling, arranging them neatly by the door. With a sense of adventure and a strong will to bring some cheer to our parents, we set out on our mission, ready to face whatever challenges came our way, all while keeping our plan a closely guarded secret. 14 14 范文呈现 On Christmas morning, we hurried into the living room and handed the gifts to Mommy and Daddy. The air was filled with a mixture of anticipation and nervousness. We had spent weeks working hard, saving every penny and doing odd jobs to afford these presents. My heart pounded in my chest as I held out the warm gloves I had bought for Dad, hoping they would ease the chill of the winter days when he went out looking for work. Rodney shyly presented the soft scarf to Mom, his eyes filled with pride and affection. Stevie, with a big grin on his face, toddled over and handed them the small tube of hand cream he had chosen, his tiny voice declaring, "For your hands, Mommy and Daddy." As our parents took the gifts, their eyes widened in surprise and then filled with tears. They were speechless for a moment, overcome with emotion. Then, they pulled us into a tight embrace, their arms wrapping around us with love and gratitude. In that moment, the room was filled with warmth and happiness, and we knew that all our efforts had been worth it. This Christmas, despite the hardships, would be one we would always remember, a time when our love and determination had brought our family closer together. 15 15 升级版范文呈现 As the dawn broke, we awakened, magically transforming from crestfallen children into resolute secret agents on a momentous mission! With the sun's first light filtering through the window pane, we leaped out of bed, our eyes ablaze with excitement and determination. Rodney, meticulously counting the coins from our piggy bank, was focused intently on amassing our meager funds. I, meanwhile, reviewed the list of errands I had painstakingly compiled, determined to offer our neighbors every possible assistance. Stevie, the youngest yet the most enthusiastic, busied himself sorting the bottles for recycling, his small frame radiating energy. 16 16 升级版范文呈现 On Christmas morn, into the living room we hastened, bearing the gifts we had so arduously procured. Never had we seen our parents' eyes so wide with astonishment as they beheld the tokens of our love. It was these simple presents that thawed the icy grip of our family's hardship, filling the room with warmth and love. This Christmas, against all odds, would be etched indelibly in our hearts as a testament to the power of family and the strength of our love. 17 17 Part 4 努力方向 18 18 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 19 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 19 20 Thank you! $$