专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末复习（人教版）

专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24八年级上·浙江台州·期末） 新年将至，校刊开展以“人间烟火抚人心，千丝万缕家乡(Hometown)情”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你结合自己的生活实际，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 My Lovely Hometown What do you like best about your hometown? (food, place,…) What improvement does your hometown need? (environment, traffic (交通)...) What can you do to make it a better place? … 要求： (1)内容包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。 (2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名。 (3)词数：80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Lovely Hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Lovely Hometown Beijing is my hometown. It is the capital of China. There are many places of interest in my hometown. I like the Summer Palace best because I think it is very beautiful. And I like Beijing duck best and it is delicious. However, I think my hometown also needs to take measures to improve the traffic. There are so many cars on the road that we can’t go to school quickly. What’s more, the air pollution is becoming worse and worse, so it is time to do something. I will ask my parents not to drive cars so often. I can ride bikes to school and I can also clean up the parks in my free time. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍喜欢家乡的什么； 第二步，介绍家乡需要改善什么； 第三步，介绍你可以做什么让家乡成为一个更好的地方。 [亮点词汇] ①the capital of……的首都 ②take measures采取措施 ③clean up打扫 [高分句型] ①I like the Summer Palace best because I think it is very beautiful. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②There are so many cars on the road that we can’t go to school quickly. (so...that引导的结果状语从句) 2.（22-23八年级上·浙江金华·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy发来邮件向你征求学好中文的建议。请根据表格内容给她回复邮件。 My advice Reasons listen to Chinese songs improve listening ... read a Chinese book every month build up vocabulary; learn about Chinese culture(文化) ... …… …… 注意： (1)短文内容必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息； (3)词数：80~100；短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, Glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll have fun learning Chinese. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lucy, Glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice for you. First, you can listen to Chinese songs so that you can improve your listening. Second, read a Chinese book every month. It can build up vocabulary and learn about Chinese culture. Third, you can listen Chinese songs and watch TV programs. You can learn more new words by them. Last but not least, to improve your speaking skills, you can communicate with local people. Hope you’ll have fun learning Chinese. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“向对方提出学好中文”的建议； 第二步，根据提示材料，提出自己的建议； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①build up建立 ②communicate with 与……沟通 ③have fun doing sth 乐于做某事 [高分句型] ①Here is my advice for you.（倒装句） ②First, you can listen to Chinese songs so that you can improve your listening（so that引导目的状语从句） 3.（23-24八年级上·山东潍坊·期末） 下面是110热线记录下的一份交通事故报告表，请根据表格中提供的信息，用第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文。 提示： Accident A motorbike hit a car. The motorbike was broken (损坏). Date and time 6:30 pm, October 18th Place Cambridge Road Reason Rainy Weather Victims (受害者) Jim (the driver of the car): OK, but felt afraid. Nick (the driver of the motorbike): His right arm was hurt. Action The police arrived at 6:35 pm and took Nick to the hospital nearby at 6:50 pm. 要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 There was an accident on Cambridge Road at 6:30 pm on October 18th. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There was an accident on Cambridge Road at 6:30 p.m. on October 18th. A motorbike hit a car and the motorbike was broken. That’s because it was a rainy day. As we know, rainy days always bring accidents. Jim was the driver of the car and Nick, whose right arm was hurt, was the driver of the motorbike. When Jim saw the broken motorbike and painful Nick, he was afraid. Five minutes later, the police arrived and took Nick to the hospital nearby at 6:50 p.m. As a student, every one of us should follow the traffic rules. We should pay attention to the traffic around us, especially on rainy days. Be careful while you are walking or riding a bike on the road. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：内容要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，以第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍事故发生的时间及地点； 第二步，具体介绍事故发生的起因、经过及结果； 第三步，呼吁人们遵守交通规则。 [亮点词汇] ① traffic rules交通规则 ② pay attention to注意 [高分句型] ① That’s because it was a rainy day.（because引导的表语从句） ② Jim was the driver of the car and Nick, whose right arm was hurt, was the driver of the motorbike.（whose引导的定语从句） ③ When Jim saw the broken motorbike and painful Nick, he was afraid.（when引导的时间状语从句） 4.（23-24八年级上·海南海口·期末） 某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市的概况（如：地理位置、人口、气候等）、你喜欢它的原因、最佳游览时间以及注意事项等。 提示：1. What is your favourite city like? 2. Why do you like it? 3. When is the best time to visit it? 4. ... 注意：1.包括所给提示内容，并适当增加细节； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数 100 左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: My favourite city is Haikou. It is in the south of China with a population of about 2.9 million. It’s a small but very beautiful city. The best thing to do in Haikou is to visit Qilou. You can know a lot about history and culture of Haikou and at the same time, you can enjoy delicious local food there. Haikou is a good place for foods, so you must try seafood and different kinds of snacks such as, Qingbuliang, Hainan noodles and so on. Not far away from Qilou, you can see Zhonglou which is the landmark building in Haikou. If you walk along the seaside near Zhonglou, you can see modern buildings: Century Bridge and Yundong Library. The weather in Haikou is fine all year round. Take your swimming clothes because you can go swimming in the sea, even in December. So you can come to Haikou any time you like. Welcome to Haikou. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己最喜欢的城市是海口； 第二步，具体介绍该城市是什么样的，为什么喜欢它； 第三步，介绍最佳参观时间。 [亮点词汇] ①in the south of在……的南部 ②at the same time同时 ③different kinds of不同种类的 [高分句型] ①You can know a lot about history and culture of Haikou and at the same time, you can enjoy delicious local food there.（并列句） ②If you walk along the seaside near Zhonglou, you can see modern buildings: Century Bridge and Yundong Library.（条件状语从句） 5.（23-24八年级上·山东临沂·期末） 春晚歌曲《我和2035有个约》里唱到：“奇迹不断地涌现，期待那时再相见，我和2035有个约，约在欢呼雀跃那一天，我亲爱的祖国更加美丽和谐，昂扬屹立新世界。”亲爱的同学们，假如你是李华，请以“My Life in 2035”为题畅想未来生活。请从以下几个方面进行陈述。 1. What will you be in 2035? 2. Where will you live? 3. What will you do in your free time? 4. What will the environment, cities, schools or other things will be like? 要求：1.文中要包括问题所提到的内容，可适当发挥，词数80左右； 2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Life in 2035     It is really hard to imagine what my life will be like in the year 2035. But I’m sure it will be greatly different from what it is now.     I will be a computer programmer and live in a glass house. All my work will be done online at home. I will have two robots and they will help me with the housework. They will cook the meals, do the cleaning and even be able to be my driver. In my free time, I will travel all over the world by high-speed train and it will be faster than the plane. In order to save paper and protect the environment, I will only read e-books. There will be less pollution and more trees. The cities will be more beautiful. Students won’t go to school. They’ll study at home on computers. People will have more free time because there will be fewer things to do.     I don’t think my life in 2035 is a dream. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般将来时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写对环境、城市、学校的畅想，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直切主题。通过说明2035年的生活将不同于现在的生活，引出下文对未来生活的具体描写； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业、住所、空闲活动、环境、城市、学校”等方面畅想未来的生活； 第三步，书写结语。表示相信自己对未来生活的畅想不会是梦。 [亮点词汇] ①be different from不同于 ②help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人 ③be able to do sth.能够做某事 ④all over the world全世界 ⑤in order to为了 [高分句型] ①But I’m sure it will be greatly different from what it is now.（宾语从句） ②People will have more free time because there will be fewer things to do.（原因状语从句） ③I don’t think my life in 2035 is not a dream.（宾语从句） 6.（23-24八年级上·河北石家庄·期末） 自主学习，是学生打开知识大门的金钥匙。 学校英文网站正在开展以“自主学习（autonomous learning）”为主题的征文活动。假如你李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你寒假期间将如何进行自主学习，以及这样做的原因。 提示词语：make a timetable, ask...for help, a strong will, goal, keep trying 提示问题：·What will you do to be an autonomous learner this winter vacation? ·Why will you start autonomous learning? 注意：1.语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.字数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Autonomous Learning Plan for Winter Vacation I will start autonomous learning this winter vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: I will start autonomous learning this winter vacation. First of all, I will make a vacation plan and put it up on the wall. Maybe it’s better for me to start with small tasks, like reading English books for 30 minutes every day. Second, I will set a timetable for my daily activities to help me make full use of time. What’s more, if I have difficulties in learning, I will ask my teachers or friends for help on WeChat. In order to improve my learning efficiency, I am going to study with my friends together. I believe I can benefit a lot from autonomous learning. It will not only help me to develop a strong will, but also help me to achieve my goals. I will keep trying to be a successful autonomous learner. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是一篇记叙文，谈论自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习。 ②时态: 本文以“一般将来时”为主。 ③提示: 题目要求根据提示描述谈一下自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习，并说明原因。写作时，注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当增加细节，使文章连贯、通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。（已给出） 第二步，根据所给要点，依次讲述自己在寒假期间将如何进行自主学习。 第三步，对自主学习的原因进行分析说明。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all首先 ②put up张贴 ③set a timetable制作时间表 [高分句型] ①Maybe it’s better for me to start with small tasks, like reading English books for 30 minutes every day（it作形式主语） ②Second, I will set a timetable for my daily activities to help me make full use of time.（不定式作目的状语） 7.（23-24八年级上·北京丰台·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想和你交流上学路上安全的问题，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你选择何种交通方式上学及原因，并给出安全出行的建议。 提示词语：e-scooter（电动自行车）, underground, dangerous, fast 提示问题：●How do you often go to school? ●Why do you go to school in this way? ●What advice can you give to keep safe on the road? Dear Peter, I’m very happy to share something about keeping safe on the way to school with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you want to know more, be free to email me. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m very happy to share something about keeping safe on the way to school with you. My home is far from the school, so I often go to school by underground. It takes about 8 minutes to get to school, because it is very fast. And it is very safe. Sometimes, my mother takes me to school by e-scooter. And it’s convenient. We must obey the traffic rules to keep safe on the road. No matter which way you choose to go to school, we must realize these traffic rules are good to keep our lives safe. According to these traffic rules, we can live a safe and happy life. If you want to know more, be free to email me. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给的提示问题完成写作，介绍自己上学采用的交通方式，并给出原因，以及出行建议，可适当增加细节，注意语句通顺，避免语法和拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的（已给出）； 第二步，介绍自己上学采用的交通方式和原因，并给出出行建议； 第三步，书写结语（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①be far from离……远 ②by underground乘地铁 ③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则 [高分句型] ①It takes about 8 minutes to get to school, because it is very fast.（动词不定式作主语；because引导的原因状语从句） ②No matter which way you choose to go to school, we must realize these traffic rules are good to keep our lives safe（no matter which引导的让步状语从句） 8.（23-24八年级上·北京朝阳·期末） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mike要来北京体验中国文化（Chinese culture），他想向你了解来北京旅游的最佳时间、出行方式以及在京期间能体验中国文化的活动。请根据他的问题回复邮件。 提示词语：autumn, comfortable, tea, Beijing Opera 提示问题：●When is the best time to visit Beijing? ●How do I travel around Beijing? ●What can I do to experience Chinese culture in Beijing? Dear Mike, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing and experience Chinese culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Mike, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing and experience Chinese culture. I’d like to give you some advice to help you make a perfect travel plan. I think that the best time to visit Beijing is in autumn because the weather is the most comfortable during this time of the year. It is neither too hot nor too cold. You can visit Beijing by subway or bus. If you want to know more about Chinese culture, the Qianmen area is worth visiting because there are a lot of things to do. You can drink tea and enjoy Beijing Opera in Lao She Teahouse. You will also have a chance to taste many delicious local foods there. The Palace Museum is a good place to visit, too. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍参观北京的最佳时间； 第二步，介绍环游北京的交通方式； 第三步，介绍如何在北京体验中国文化。 [亮点词汇] ①the best time to do sth做某事的最佳时间 ②be worth doing sth值得做某事 ③look forward to期待 [高分句型] I think the best time to visit Beijing is in autumn because the weather is the most comfortable during this time of the year.（because引导原因状语从句） 9.（23-24八年级上·黑龙江绥化·期末） 人们学英语的原因和方法各有不同，请以“My Views (观点) on Learning English”为题写一篇文章，说说你对学习英语的看法。 写作要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称或学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Views on Learning English ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Views on Learning English Nowadays, more and more people learn English with different reasons and ways. In my opinion, learning English gives us a way to see the world. We can learn not only a language but also cultures of different countries. So it’s necessary for us to learn English. And how can we improve our English? Here are two suggestions. First of all, listen to the teachers and take notes carefully in class. If you have any questions, you can ask your teacher for help after class. Moreover, use your English more often. There are many ways to practice your English, such as talking with your classmates and writing movie reviews in English. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文主要是介绍你对学习英语的看法，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确提出学习英语的好处； 第二步，逐条阐述提高英语的方法建议。 [亮点词汇] ①in my opinion 依我看来 ②not only...but also… 不但……而且…… ③first of all 首先 [高分句型] ①So it’s necessary for us to learn English.（it作形式主语） ②If you have any questions, you can go and ask your teacher after class.（if引导的条件状语从句） ③As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” （引用谚语） 10.（22-23八年级上·陕西渭南·期末） 假如你是李华，你喜欢旅行，你下周一要从家乡去北京旅游。你可以乘飞机、长途汽车或火车。请你分析每个交通方式的优缺点，并给出最佳的旅行方式。请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文。（提示信息：from…to…从……到……，the most comfortable最舒服的，coach长途汽车） 要求： 1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4, 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） I am Li Hua and I enjoy travelling. I’m going to visit Beijing next Monday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I am Li Hua and I enjoy travelling. I’m going to visit Beijing next Monday. There are three ways to travel. I can go there by plane, coach or train. The plane is the fastest but it is the most expensive way. Coach is the slowest and the least comfortable way. But travelling by train is cheaper and faster than taking the coach. At the same time, traveling by train is the most comfortable way, because we can enjoy the scenery along the road. So I will choose to go to Beijing by train. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍去北京有三种交通方式； 第二步，详细描述三种方式的优缺点。 [亮点词汇] ①the least comfortable最不舒服的 ②At the same time同时 ③choose to do选择做 [高分句型] At the same time, traveling by train is the most comfortable way, because we can enjoy the scenery along the road.（原因状语从句） 11.（22-23八年级上·河南南阳·期末） 假如你是张丽，你校下周要举行主题为“畅想未来城市”的英语演讲比赛，你对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，以 The city in the future 为题写一篇演讲稿，为比赛做准备。 写作要求： 1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息， 可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数90 左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：environment 环境 The city in the future Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhang Li. I think the city in the future will be better. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m glad to share all my ideas about the future city with all of you. Thank you! 【答案】例文： The city in the future Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhang Li. I think the city in the future will be better. It will be bigger because more and more people will move to the city. And there will be enough apartments for them to live in. The environment will become more beautiful, because people will plant more trees and grow more flowers in the city. To make the air cleaner, people will travel by bus or bike more often and then the roads won’t be as crowded as they are today. Also, people will be happier. They’ll spend more time improving themselves, such as learning a new language, playing a new sport and reading more books. They will try their best and build a better life together. I’m glad to share all my ideas about the future city with all of you. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示内容畅想未来的城市，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，从面积、环境、交通以及居民等几方面介绍未来的城市情况； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①live in居住在 ②as crowded as和……一样拥挤 ③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ④try their best尽他们最大的努力 [高分句型] ①The environment will become more beautiful, because people will plant more trees and grow more flowers in the city. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②To make the air cleaner, people will travel by bus or bike more often and then the roads won’t be as crowded as they are today. (动词不定式作目的状语) 12.（22-23八年级上·山东德州·期末） At the foot of thousands of acres of good land, only love home an inch of land. Gold nest and silver nest are not as poor as their hometown.（脚下良田千万亩，只爱家乡一寸土。金窝银窝，比不上家乡的穷窝窝。) 家乡是母亲温暖的怀抱，是我们灵魂的港湾。谁又不爱自己的家乡呢? 请对比下表家乡近些年的变化，以“I Love my hometown”为题，写一篇文章，抒发对家乡的喜爱赞美之情。 In the past Now Transport bike, bus... bike, bus, car, high-speed train.... Weather usually below 38℃ in summer, cold in winter, snow... often above 39℃ in summer warmer than before, less snow... Population most people in the country... most people in the county and city... Environment dirty streets, old,low houses... wide,clean streets, flowers and trees, lakes, parks and squares... Ways of life slow... fast... 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3)词数：80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 I Love My Hometown Gold nest and silver nest are not as poor as their hometown. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Love My Hometown Gold nest and silver nest are not as poor as their hometown. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. First, in the past, we went out by bike or by bus. We take the car or take the high-speed train to go out now. Second, it was usually below 38℃ in summer and cold in winter. Now, it is often above 39℃ in summer and warmer than before. There is less snow in winter. Third, most people were in the country in the past, but now most people are in the county and city. Besides, there were dirty streets and old and low houses, but now there are wide and clean streets, flowers and trees, lakes, parks and squares. Last but not the least, in the past, people’s pace of life was very slow, but now people’s pace of life is very fast. I love my hometown. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己家乡的变化； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“交通方式、天气、人口、环境、生活”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，表达对家乡的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②besides此外 ③last but not the least最后但同样重要的是 [高分句型] ①There is less snow in winter.（there be句型） 13.（22-23八年级上·河南郑州·期末） 陶行知先生说：“劳动即生活、生活既教育。”请你根据以下要点提示，用英语介绍你本学期的计划及理由。 要点：1. 学习方面； 2. 劳动等生活方面； 3. …… 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The new term is coming again. It’s my pleasure to share my plans with you. First of all, I am going to make a practical plan for finishing all my homework. Then I will go over what I have learnt before so that I can remember it deeply. Besides, it is a good way for me to insist on reading for at least an hour every day because reading can open up a whole new world to me. Just as a saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” I will try to achieve a balance between homework and hobbies. There are so many activities for me to choose from, such as exercising, attending concerts, watching films and so on. In my spare time, I’d like to share housework with my parents so that all of us will feel much more relaxed. Moreover, I will try to do some charity work to make my life meaningful. I wish my plans will come true through my hard work and all the people around me will live a healthy and happy life in the coming new term. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“计划的理由”需要补充相关内容，注意行为逻辑要通顺，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出“我新学期的计划”这个话题。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从信息提示中“学习、劳动生活方面的计划以及原因等”几个重点方面提出你的想法。 第三步，书写结语。表达“希望计划实现以及身边所有人在新学期都能过上幸福健康的生活”。 [亮点词汇] ①insist on doing sth坚持做某事 ②achieve a balance达到平衡 ③charity慈善 [高分句型] ①It’s my pleasure to share my plans with you.（it作形式主语） ②All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.（谚语） ③Besides, it is a good way for me to insist on reading for at least an hour every day because reading can open up a whole new world to me.（because引导原因状语从句） 14.（22-23八年级上·河南南阳·期末） 好的习惯很能使我们受益终身。请你根据以下提示，以“My Good Habits”为题写一篇英语短文，结合自身经历与感受，介绍一些好的学习或生活习惯（至少选择两条）。词数100左右。 1. listen carefully in class 2. finish the schoolwork on time 3. do sports for over an hour 4. do something to relax 5. read some books My Good Habits _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Good Habits It is very important for us students to have good habits, both in study and life. Now I would like to share some of my good habits. In class, I listen to the teachers carefully and take some notes. The notes can help me go over my lessons after class. When the school is over, I always finish my homework as soon as possible. Before I hand in my homework, I usually check it again. It’s a good habit of study. Taking exercise is necessary for us. I do outdoor sports for over an hour every day. It can build me up and keep me healthy. When I am free, I like listening to some classical music. It helps me relax my mind. All in all, with good habits, I live a colorful and happy life. I think I will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我的好习惯”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“听课和锻炼”方面介绍好习惯； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①as soon as possible尽快 ②hand in上交 ③build sb. up增强某人的体质 [高分句型] ①It is very important for us students to have good habits, both in study and life.（it固定句式） ②I think I will become better and better.（宾语从句） 15.（22-23八年级上·湖北孝感·期末） 本学期马上就要结束了，请你根据自己在这个学期的表现写一份总结，并谈谈自己对新学期的规划。 写作提示：1. What progress (进步) did you make in your study and life this term? 2. Did you develop (培养) your hobbies this term? How often did you practice them? What do you think of them? 3. What’s your resolution for the new term? How are you going to achieve (实现) it? 写作要求：1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实，意思连贯，表达流畅； 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80 词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 This term will be over. When I look back, I find that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word (总之), I will try my best to be a better student next term. 【答案】例文 This term will be over. When I look back, I find that my math improved a lot because of my hard work. However, my English is still not so good as some students in my class. I plan to work harder at English next term. I’m going to remember more words and read more books about English. In my free time, I took guitar lessons twice a week. It’s interesting to play the guitar, so I will keep on taking guitar lessons next term. I also plan to join a swimming club in the new term because swimming is good for my health. In a word, I will try my best to be a better student next term. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，使内容更加充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍学习上取得的进步和遇到的困难，以及下学期在学习方面的计划； 第二步，介绍文娱体育方面的发展情况，以及下学期的计划； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①because of 因为 ②plan to do sth. 计划做某事 ③play the guitar 弹吉他 ④keep on doing sth. 继续做某事 ⑤be good for 对……有好处 [高分句型] ①It’s interesting to play the guitar, so I will keep on taking guitar lessons next term.（不定式作主语） ②I also plan to join a swimming club in the new term because swimming is good for my health.（because引导的原因状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题09 书面表达解题要点及专项训练 应试策略 1.审题目：要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2.圈要点：防止遗漏要点。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。 3.列提纲：为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词记下，形成提纲。 4.定基调：定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。 5.写全文：写短文时要做到以下六个方面： (1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。 (3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1）语态、时态要准确无误。 2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4）注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 (4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2）服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。 3）内心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。 4）感情描写：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。 5）动作描写：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。 (5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序（时间或空间），使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法： 1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列举的：for example , such as… 7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking… (6)不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 (6)改病句：认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手： 1）格式是否有错。 2）拼写有无错误。 3）语言是否用错。 4）时态、语态错误。 5）标点错误。 6）人称是否用错。 注意事项 书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。阅卷老师工作量大，时间紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。 1.（23-24八年级上·浙江台州·期末） 新年将至，校刊开展以“人间烟火抚人心，千丝万缕家乡(Hometown)情”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你结合自己的生活实际，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 My Lovely Hometown What do you like best about your hometown? (food, place,…) What improvement does your hometown need? (environment, traffic (交通)...) What can you do to make it a better place? … 要求： (1)内容包括所有要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺、意思连贯。 (2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名、校名。 (3)词数：80词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 My Lovely Hometown ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.（22-23八年级上·浙江金华·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy发来邮件向你征求学好中文的建议。请根据表格内容给她回复邮件。 My advice Reasons listen to Chinese songs improve listening ... read a Chinese book every month build up vocabulary; learn about Chinese culture(文化) ... …… …… 注意： (1)短文内容必须包括表格中的所有信息，可以适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息； (3)词数：80~100；短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, Glad to hear from you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope you’ll have fun learning Chinese. Yours, Li Hua 3.（23-24八年级上·山东潍坊·期末） 下面是110热线记录下的一份交通事故报告表，请根据表格中提供的信息，用第三人称将所发生的事故写成一篇短文。 提示： Accident A motorbike hit a car. The motorbike was broken (损坏). Date and time 6:30 pm, October 18th Place Cambridge Road Reason Rainy Weather Victims (受害者) Jim (the driver of the car): OK, but felt afraid. Nick (the driver of the motorbike): His right arm was hurt. Action The police arrived at 6:35 pm and took Nick to the hospital nearby at 6:50 pm. 要求：1.语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数。 There was an accident on Cambridge Road at 6:30 pm on October 18th. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.（23-24八年级上·海南海口·期末） 某英文网站正在开展以“我最喜爱的中国城市”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜爱的一座中国城市的概况（如：地理位置、人口、气候等）、你喜欢它的原因、最佳游览时间以及注意事项等。 提示：1. What is your favourite city like? 2. Why do you like it? 3. When is the best time to visit it? 4. ... 注意：1.包括所给提示内容，并适当增加细节； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数 100 左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.（23-24八年级上·山东临沂·期末） 春晚歌曲《我和2035有个约》里唱到：“奇迹不断地涌现，期待那时再相见，我和2035有个约，约在欢呼雀跃那一天，我亲爱的祖国更加美丽和谐，昂扬屹立新世界。”亲爱的同学们，假如你是李华，请以“My Life in 2035”为题畅想未来生活。请从以下几个方面进行陈述。 1. What will you be in 2035? 2. Where will you live? 3. What will you do in your free time? 4. What will the environment, cities, schools or other things will be like? 要求：1.文中要包括问题所提到的内容，可适当发挥，词数80左右； 2.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.（23-24八年级上·河北石家庄·期末） 自主学习，是学生打开知识大门的金钥匙。 学校英文网站正在开展以“自主学习（autonomous learning）”为主题的征文活动。假如你李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你寒假期间将如何进行自主学习，以及这样做的原因。 提示词语：make a timetable, ask...for help, a strong will, goal, keep trying 提示问题：·What will you do to be an autonomous learner this winter vacation? ·Why will you start autonomous learning? 注意：1.语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 3.字数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Autonomous Learning Plan for Winter Vacation I will start autonomous learning this winter vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.（23-24八年级上·北京丰台·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter想和你交流上学路上安全的问题，请你用英语给他回复一封邮件，谈谈你选择何种交通方式上学及原因，并给出安全出行的建议。 提示词语：e-scooter（电动自行车）, underground, dangerous, fast 提示问题：●How do you often go to school? ●Why do you go to school in this way? ●What advice can you give to keep safe on the road? Dear Peter, I’m very happy to share something about keeping safe on the way to school with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you want to know more, be free to email me. Yours, Li Hua 8.（23-24八年级上·北京朝阳·期末） 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Mike要来北京体验中国文化（Chinese culture），他想向你了解来北京旅游的最佳时间、出行方式以及在京期间能体验中国文化的活动。请根据他的问题回复邮件。 提示词语：autumn, comfortable, tea, Beijing Opera 提示问题：●When is the best time to visit Beijing? ●How do I travel around Beijing? ●What can I do to experience Chinese culture in Beijing? Dear Mike, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing and experience Chinese culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. Yours, Li Hua 9.（23-24八年级上·黑龙江绥化·期末） 人们学英语的原因和方法各有不同，请以“My Views (观点) on Learning English”为题写一篇文章，说说你对学习英语的看法。 写作要求： 1. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称或学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Views on Learning English ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.（22-23八年级上·陕西渭南·期末） 假如你是李华，你喜欢旅行，你下周一要从家乡去北京旅游。你可以乘飞机、长途汽车或火车。请你分析每个交通方式的优缺点，并给出最佳的旅行方式。请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文。（提示信息：from…to…从……到……，the most comfortable最舒服的，coach长途汽车） 要求： 1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4, 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） I am Li Hua and I enjoy travelling. I’m going to visit Beijing next Monday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11.（22-23八年级上·河南南阳·期末） 假如你是张丽，你校下周要举行主题为“畅想未来城市”的英语演讲比赛，你对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，以 The city in the future 为题写一篇演讲稿，为比赛做准备。 写作要求： 1) 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息， 可适当发挥； 2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3) 词数90 左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：environment 环境 The city in the future Hello, everybody! My name’s Zhang Li. I think the city in the future will be better. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m glad to share all my ideas about the future city with all of you. Thank you! 12.（22-23八年级上·山东德州·期末） At the foot of thousands of acres of good land, only love home an inch of land. Gold nest and silver nest are not as poor as their hometown.（脚下良田千万亩，只爱家乡一寸土。金窝银窝，比不上家乡的穷窝窝。) 家乡是母亲温暖的怀抱，是我们灵魂的港湾。谁又不爱自己的家乡呢? 请对比下表家乡近些年的变化，以“I Love my hometown”为题，写一篇文章，抒发对家乡的喜爱赞美之情。 In the past Now Transport bike, bus... bike, bus, car, high-speed train.... Weather usually below 38℃ in summer, cold in winter, snow... often above 39℃ in summer warmer than before, less snow... Population most people in the country... most people in the county and city... Environment dirty streets, old,low houses... wide,clean streets, flowers and trees, lakes, parks and squares... Ways of life slow... fast... 要求： 1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2)必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3)词数：80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 I Love My Hometown Gold nest and silver nest are not as poor as their hometown. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13.（22-23八年级上·河南郑州·期末） 陶行知先生说：“劳动即生活、生活既教育。”请你根据以下要点提示，用英语介绍你本学期的计划及理由。 要点：1. 学习方面； 2. 劳动等生活方面； 3. …… 要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2. 词数80左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14.（22-23八年级上·河南南阳·期末） 好的习惯很能使我们受益终身。请你根据以下提示，以“My Good Habits”为题写一篇英语短文，结合自身经历与感受，介绍一些好的学习或生活习惯（至少选择两条）。词数100左右。 1. listen carefully in class 2. finish the schoolwork on time 3. do sports for over an hour 4. do something to relax 5. read some books My Good Habits _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15.（22-23八年级上·湖北孝感·期末） 本学期马上就要结束了，请你根据自己在这个学期的表现写一份总结，并谈谈自己对新学期的规划。 写作提示：1. What progress (进步) did you make in your study and life this term? 2. Did you develop (培养) your hobbies this term? How often did you practice them? What do you think of them? 3. What’s your resolution for the new term? How are you going to achieve (实现) it? 写作要求：1. 围绕以上提示展开作文并适当发挥补充，使文章内容充实，意思连贯，表达流畅； 2. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80 词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 This term will be over. When I look back, I find that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word (总之), I will try my best to be a better student next term. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$