Unit 2 作文训练课件- 2024-2025学年人教版七年级英语上册

2024版人教英语七年级 上册Unit2作文范文 话题分析：本单元的话题为“我们一家人”，要求我们能够用英文介绍家人。写作时，需要弄清人物之间的关系，家人的外貌特征及喜好等。 话题写作指导：介绍家人 Unit 2 We are Family! 1. 首先明确要介绍家人，所以开头点明家里有几口人。 2. 然后分别描述家人。对于父亲，先描述外貌特征（tall and strong，short black hair，a pair of big eyes），再介绍喜好（likes reading books）。 3. 接着描述母亲，同样先外貌（long curly hair，a kind face）后喜好（is good at cooking）。 4. 再描述自己，外貌（black hair and black eyes）和喜好（like playing basketball）。 5. 最后总结这是一个幸福的家庭，家人彼此相爱。 写作逻辑 对于这篇《My Family》的作文，写作时的注意点有以下几点： 1. 内容完整且逻辑清晰：要确保对每个家庭成员的描述都涵盖了外貌、性格和兴趣爱好等方面，且各个部分之间的过渡自然流畅，使整个文章有清晰的逻辑结构。 2. 词汇和语法正确：使用恰当、准确的词汇来表达意思，避免词汇重复和滥用。同时，注意语法错误，比如主谓一致、时态等的正确运用。 3. 突出特点：在描述家庭成员时，要突出每个成员的独特特点，让读者能够清晰地区分不同的人物。 4. 情感表达：要在文中体现出对家庭成员的爱和家庭的温暖，使文章富有情感。 5. 语言简洁生动：避免冗长复杂的句子，尽量使用简洁明了的语言，同时可以运用一些形容词、动词使描述更加生动形象。 6. 字数控制：根据具体的写作要求，合理控制作文的字数，避免过短无法充分描述，也不要过长显得啰嗦。 1. 介绍家庭成员数量 ①- There are... people in my family.（我家有……口人。） ②- My family consists of... members.（我的家庭由……成员组成。） ③- This is my...（这是我的……）用于引出对每个家庭成员的介绍。 ④- I have a...（我有一个……），例如：“I have a little sister.”（我有一个小妹妹。） 写作句型 2. 描述外貌 ①- He/She is + 形容词（tall, short, handsome, beautiful等），如“He is tall and handsome.”（他又高又帅。） ②- He/She has + 身体部位（hair, eyes等）+ 形容词（long, short, big, small等），例如“She has short hair.”（她留着短发。） ③- My father/mother/sibling is... (tall/short/fat/thin).（我的爸爸/妈妈/兄弟姐妹是……[高的/矮的/胖的/瘦的]） ④- He/She has... (big/small) eyes and... (long/short) hair.（他/她有……[大/小]眼睛和……[长/短]头发。） 写作句型 3. 描述性格 ①- He/She is + 性格形容词（quiet, active, friendly等），比如“He is very friendly.”（他非常友好。） ②- My... is very (kind/funny/serious/quiet).（我的……非常[友善/风趣/严肃/安静]） ③- He/She is a... (optimistic/pessimistic/gentle) person.（他/She是一个……[乐观的/悲观的/温和的]人。） 写作句型 4. 描述兴趣爱好 ①- My father/mother/sibling loves/likes...（我的爸爸/妈妈/兄弟姐妹喜欢……） ②- He/She is fond of...（他/她喜欢……） ③- His/Her hobby is...（他/她的爱好是……） ④- He/She likes/ loves + 名词（运动、动物、乐器等）或动名词（playing sports, reading等）。例如“He loves playing basketball.”（他喜欢打篮球。）“She likes animals.”（她喜欢动物。） ⑤- His/Her favorite + 名词（sport, animal, instrument等）+ is...，如“His favorite sport is basketball.”（他最喜欢的运动是篮球。） 写作句型 5. 表达情感联系 ①- He/She is good at + 名词/动名词，像“She is good at playing the violin.”（她擅长拉小提琴。） -② We love each other very much.（我们彼此非常相爱。） ③- My family is a place full of love and warmth.（我的家庭是一个充满爱与温暖的地方。） 写作句型 This is my father. He is tall and handsome. He really likes sport. His favourite sport is basketball. He plays basketball every day. Here's my mother. She looks different. She's quiet. She has short hair. She really likes animals. Her favourite animal is dogs. She has a pet dog. This is my little sister. She is short and clever. She likes playing the violin. She plays the violin really well. 写作范文（1） 这是我的父亲。他又高又帅。他非常喜欢运动。他最喜欢的运动是篮球。他每天都打篮球。这是我的母亲。她看起来不一样。她很文静。她留着短发。她非常喜欢动物。她最喜欢的动物是狗。她有一只宠物狗。这是我的小妹妹。她又矮又聪明。她喜欢拉小提琴。她小提琴拉得非常好。 以下是本作文的重难点词汇，要重点关注哦～ handsome：英俊的 favourite：最喜欢的 quiet：文静的 pet：宠物 clever：聪明的 play the violin：拉小提琴 This is my mother. She's 42. She's beautiful and has long hair. She's a bit quiet but very smart. She likes watching films. This is my father. He is 43. He is a little fat but handsome. He is kind and funny. He always makes us laugh. This is my brother. He is nine years old. He has big eyes and ears. He is clever and friendly. He loves books. He reads a lot. These are my grandparents. My grandpa is 70. But he looks young. He likes fishing. My grandma is 69. She loves gardening. She has many plants and flowers. 写作范文（2） 这是我的妈妈。她42岁了。她很漂亮并且留着长发。她有点安静但非常聪明。她喜欢看电影。 这是我的爸爸。他43岁了。他有点胖但很英俊。他很和蔼并且很风趣。他总是让我们开怀大笑。 这是我的弟弟。他九岁了。他有大眼睛和大耳朵。他既聪明又友好。他热爱书籍。他读很多书。 这些是我的（外）祖父母。我的爷爷70岁了，但他看起来很年轻。他喜欢钓鱼。我的奶奶69岁了。她非常喜欢园艺。她在家里有很多植物和花卉。 写作范文（2） 以上作文的重难点词汇，要重点关注哦～ bit：一点 smart：聪明的 kind - hearted：和蔼的 book - lover：书迷 gardening：园艺 写作范文（2） This is my father. He is tall and handsome. He really likes sport. His favourite sport is basketball. He plays basketball every day. Here's my mother. She looks different. She's quiet. She has short hair. She really likes animals. Her favourite animal is dogs. She has a pet dog. This is my little sister. She is short and clever. She likes playing the violin. She plays the violin really well. 写作范文（3） 这是我的父亲。他又高又帅。他非常喜欢运动。他最喜欢的运动是篮球。他每天都打篮球。这是我的母亲。她看起来不一样。她很文静。她留着短发。她非常喜欢动物。她最喜欢的动物是狗。她有一只宠物狗。这是我的小妹妹。她又矮又聪明。她喜欢拉小提琴。她小提琴拉得非常好。 写作范文（3） 以上作文的重难点词汇，要重点关注哦～ ①- handsome：形容词，英俊的。例句：He is a very handsome boy.（他是一个非常英俊的男孩。） ②- favourite：形容词，最喜欢的。例句：My favourite colour is blue.（我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。） ③- quiet：形容词，安静的，文静的。例句：The library is very quiet.（图书馆非常安静。） ④- clever：形容词，聪明的。例句：The little monkey is very clever.（小猴子非常聪明。） I have a lovely family. There are four people in my family, my parents, my elder sister and me. My father is a doctor. He is always busy helping patients. He is kind and patient. "Honesty is the best policy." This is what he often tells me. My mother is a teacher. She teaches students with love and care. "Love makes the world go round." That's her belief. My elder sister is very smart. She is good at math and often helps me with my studies. I love my family very much. We are happy together. 写作范文（4） 重要短语和句子： 1. a lovely family 一个可爱的家庭 2. be busy doing sth. 忙于做某事 3. with love and care 带着爱和关怀 4. be good at 擅长 5. help sb. with sth. 帮助某人做某事 写作范文（4） My family is like a warm harbor for me. There are three members in my family: my father, my mother and I. My father is a hardworking man. He works as an engineer. "Where there is a will, there is a way." He always encourages me to work hard. My mother is a housewife. She takes good care of our daily life. She is like a superwoman. I am a student. I study hard to make them proud. We love each other and support each other. 写作范文（5） 重要短语和句子： 1. a warm harbor 一个温暖的港湾 2. take good care of 悉心照顾 3. make sb. proud 让某人骄傲 4. love each other 彼此相爱 5. support each other 相互支持 写作范文（5） I have a happy family. My father, my mother and I get along very well。 My father is tall and strong. He is a policeman. "No pain, no gain." He teaches me to be brave and never give up。 My mother is a nurse. She is very gentle and friendly. I am a middle school student. I try my best to study well。 Our family is full of love and laughter。 写作范文（4） 重要短语和句子： 1. get along well 相处得好 2. be full of 充满 3. try one's best 尽某人最大的努力 写作范文（5） $$