2025年浙江省中考英语外研版总复习课件：话题写作(01)　学习提高

话题写作 话题写作(一)　学习提高 八上 Module 1　How to learn English 九下 Module 7　English for you and me 教材话题链接 该话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面,主要涉及描述学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等。 话题点睛 　　假如你是李华,最近,你校正在开展题为“My reading life”的征文活动,请你根据方框内主题征文的内容信息,写一篇征文并向校英文报刊投稿。 典例分析 1.How long do you read everyday? 2.What kind of books do you like? 3.What’s your favourite book? What’s it about? 4.Why is reading good for you? [注意] 1.短文必须包括方框内的所有信息,可适当增加细节; 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; 3.词数:100左右; 4.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。 My reading life 　　Books are my good friends and I love reading very much.               1.要点提炼:短文通过介绍“我”的阅读生活,激发学生的阅读兴趣,呼吁大家多阅读。写作内容可以从以下几个方面展开: (1)首句仅作参考,但必须表达出“我”对阅读的喜欢; (2)具体回答方框中提出的问题; (3)注意语篇的篇章结构,问题1—3是事实性问题,问题4是观点性问题,由此,短文可以分成两段。 2.确定时态:一般现在时,现在完成时 3.确定人称:第一人称 ❘思路点拨❘ ❘ 写作架构❘ 根据所给提示写句子。 1.基础句 在工作日,我每天至少阅读半小时。在周末,我会花更多的时间。(at least)                         →升格句 在工作日,我每天至少阅读半小时,而在周末,我会花更多的时间。(while)                         ❘基础写作❘ On weekdays, I read for at least half an hour every day. On weekends, I spend more time on it. On weekdays, I read for at least half an hour every day, while on weekends, I spend more time on it. 2.基础句 它增长了我的知识,让我的生活更加有意义。(and)                         →升格句 它不仅增长了我的知识,而且让我的生活更加有意义。(not only…but also…)                         It improves my knowledge and makes my life more meaningful. It has not only improved my knowledge, but also made my life more meaningful. 3.基础句 阅读帮助我学到了东西。(learn something)             →升格句阅读帮助我学到了课堂上学不到的东西。(使用定语从句)                         Reading has helped me learn something. Reading has helped me learn something that won’t be taught in class. My reading life 　　Books are my good friends and I love reading very much. On weekdays, I read for at least half an hour every day, while on weekends, I spend more time on it. I like all kinds of books, including novels, geography books and science books. Journey to the West is my favourite book. It’s about four main characters’ journey to the West. Although they faced lots of difficulties, they worked together to achieve their dream.  ❘连句成篇❘ 　　Reading makes me a better man! It has not only improved my knowledge, but also made my life more meaningful. Besides, reading has broadened my horizons and helped me learn something that won’t be taught in class. be afraid of 害怕 be helpful to 有助于 take notes 做笔记 set goals 设定目标 make mistakes 犯错误 make good use of 充分利用 review regularly 定期复习 pay attention in class 上课专心听讲 拓展积累 ❘相关短语❘ broaden one’s horizons 开阔某人的眼界 as much as possible 尽可能多地 have a chance to do sth. 有机会做某事 try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 use resources effectively 有效利用资源 seek help when needed 需要时寻求帮助 ask questions when in doubt 有疑问时提问 develop good study habits 养成良好的学习习惯 break the task into smaller parts 将任务分解为较小的部分 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.No pain, no gain.不劳则无获。 3.Genius is nothing but labour and diligence. 天才不过是勤奋而已。 4.There is no royal road to learning. 书山有路勤为径,学海无涯苦作舟。 5.It is never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。 ❘参考谚语❘ 6.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只学习不玩耍,聪明的小孩也变傻。 7.Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body. 读书健脑,运动强身。 8.Knowledge starts with practice. 实践出真知。 学习方法 1.We can get knowledge by reading a lot of good books. 2.I’m writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well. 3.It is helpful to read some good Chinese newspapers and magazines. 4.Try to speak Chinese as much as possible and don’t be afraid of making mistakes. 5.We’d better make good use of time. ❘亮点句型❘ 学习体验 1.It can not only broaden our horizons but also make us wise and happy. 2.Reading also helps us grow better. 3.In this way your reading ability can be improved. 4.The more you speak, the better your spoken Chinese will be. 5.Not only can they help develop our ability to study independently, but also we can have more chances to show ourselves. A 　　假如你是光明中学英语社团的成员,本周末社团将演出课本剧 《愚公移山》,校园广播站准备通知在学校访问的外国学生前去观看,请你用英语写一篇广播稿。 要点提示: 1.The time and place of the textbook drama: on Sunday afternoon, in the music hall; 2.What the drama is about and its meaning; 3.Some advice on the drama is welcome. 实战演练 [注意] 1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数); 2.须包含所有要点提示,并可适当补充,以使行文连贯; 3.不得出现真实的个人姓名、校名等信息。 　　Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.       　　Thanks for your attention! [答案]One possible version: Good morning, everyone! This is an announcement for all the foreign students visiting our school.  A textbook drama called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains will be put on in the music hall on Sunday afternoon. It’s about an old man called Yu Gong. There were two high mountains near his home. They were so high that it took him a long time to walk to the other side. So he decided to move the mountains. Yu Gong and his family began to move the mountains. They kept moving them day after day, year after year. Finally, a god was so moved that he moved the mountains away. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. I hope all of you come to enjoy it and give us some advice. Thanks for your attention!  B 以下是杂志KIDVOICE的一则征文启事,请根据下列信息,以“Kids and Learning”为题,用英语写一篇短文,发表你的看法。 KIDS HAVE AN OPINION TOO! 　　Hi! I’m Sigmund Friend, the editor(编辑) of a new magazine—KIDVOICE. 　　We like hearing from kids. We know you’ve got things to say. We want to hear from you. 　　Here is a topic you might have an opinion about… [注意] 1.对所有要点逐一陈述,可适当发挥; 2.词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。 Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning.                          [答案]One possible version: Kids and Learning All kids want to be good at learning. However, it’s not easy. In my opinion, those kids who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. They not only work hard at their subjects but also enjoy playing games. Playing also helps them learn better.  As to how kids balance learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the rule—work while you work and play while you play. Moreover, kids should learn to work happily and relax totally. I’m sure a good balance between learning and playing can make a great contribution to kids’ growth. 英语写作能力的提升离不开美文的学习、欣赏与借鉴。同学们,开始你们的提升之旅吧! 佳作赏析 说明 A 　　学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情,不过万事都有规律可循。请根据思维导图提示的语言学习经历和经验,以“How can we become good language learners?”为题,写一篇英语短文。 [注意] 1.短文应包含思维导图提示中的所有要点,可适当进行拓展; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数; 3.词数:80左右。 (画出文中的好词好句,并背诵下来吧!) How can we become good language learners? What makes a good language learner? There are some things that good language learners do and some things they don’t do. 【结构】 文章条理清晰,依次谈论了五条建议。大部分建议都以祈使句的形式呈现,为引导读者成为好的语言学习者指明了方向。 佳作展台 亮点借鉴 (续表) ①First, don’t be afraid of making mistakes. People often get things wrong and they feel discouraged. But good language learners notice their mistakes, take notes and learn from them. Then, do group work. Good language learners use the language to communicate with other people. 【词汇】 文章中使用了“First” “Then” “Also”等词汇,体现了文章的逻辑层次;同时使用了一系列话题相关词汇,如mistakes, discouraged, learn from, communicate, have fun等,充分说明了与语言学习有关的内容,清晰地传达了作者的观点。 (续表) Also, be sure to use a dictionary. ②Good language learners often use dictionaries to check the meanings of the words they don’t know. What’s more, good language learners have fun with the language. ③They learn it by watching films, listening to songs, playing video games or reading books. 【句式】 ①此句为第一条建议,使用了祈使句;making mistakes作为介词of的宾语。 ②此句中动词不定式to check the meanings of the words作目的状语,说明好的语言学习者经常使用词典的目的;定语从句they don’t know修饰the words。 (续表) At last, think in the language you’re learning outside the classroom. Don’t forget that it’s never too late to become a good language learner. (103 words) ③此句使用by doing sth.的结构来列举好的语言学习者学习语言的众多方式,从而丰富文章的细节。 (续表) 1.你可以通过经常练习口语来提高你的英语技能。(by doing)               2.开始一项新爱好永远不会太晚。(It’s never too…to…)   活学活用 You can improve your English skills by practising speaking regularly. It’s never too late to start a new hobby. (续表) 3.不要害怕在公众场合演讲,因为这是展示你的想法和建立自信的机会。(be afraid of)                Don’t be afraid of speaking in public because it is an opportunity to show your ideas and build confidence. B 　　最近,你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状(结果见下面图表)。请你就此用英语写一篇短文,在英语课上进行汇报,并谈谈你的看法和建议。 [注意] 1.文章必须包括图表中的四项内容,可适当增加细节; 2.看法和建议至少两条; 3.词数:80~100。 参考词汇:recite 背诵 (画出文中的好词好句,并背诵下来吧!) 　　①Recently I have done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read and recite English words. They think vocabulary is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students do a lot of written exercises.   【结构】 文章首先介绍了一项关于学生在课外如何学习英语的调查,然后提供了调查结果,并在最后给出了作者自己的观点和建议。 佳作展台 亮点借鉴 (续表) Some students review their notes they have taken in class. ②However, only a few students spend time practising listening and speaking. 【词汇】 在说明调查结果时,文中使用了“However”进行转折,从而为后文作者针对听说训练偏少的现状发表自己的看法做铺垫;在陈述作者的观点时,用“In my opinion”和“Also”使文章衔接自然;同时也使用了一些常见的词汇,如read and recite, the most important, written exercises, review, listening and speaking等,这些词汇与文章的主题紧密相关。 (续表) ③In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful. (105 words) 【句式】 ①此句为现在完成时态,同时用宾语从句how…of class来说明调查的主题。 ②此句用“However”与前面的陈述形成对比;使用了spend time (in) doing sth.的表达。 ③此句用“In my opinion”来引出作者的观点;用动名词listening and speaking作主语,表示听和说对于成为优秀的语言学习者至关重要。 (续表) 1.练习对于提高音乐技能是最重要的。(important)   2.我喜欢在睡前花时间读书。(spend)   3.在我看来,做一个好的决定是成功的关键。(in my opinion)   活学活用 Practice is the most important for improving musical skills. I like spending time reading books before going to bed. In my opinion, making a good decision is the key to success. $$