Unit7写作指导话题作文2024-2025学年鲁教版（五四学制）（2024）六年级英语下册

主题分析——指明方向 主题：本单元写作情境属于“ 人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”，涉及子主题“理性消费”。 内容：制定合理的购物计划以及比较不同的购物方式优缺点。 要求：1.能比较并阐述不同购物形式的优缺点。 2.能制定合理的购物计划并简单阐述其合理性，培养理性消费意识。 典例研磨——示范引领 随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格所给的提示信息，以 “Shopping online” 为题写一篇关于网上购物的文章。 优点 1、足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。2、价格通常比较便宜。 3、可供选择的范围广，品种多。 缺点 1、只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2、容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。 1. 句子通顺, 语意连贯, 可适当发挥, 条理及段落清晰, 字迹工整, 大方; 2. 不少于70 词. Step 1:审题·研要求 1.人称:第一人称 2.时态:一般现在时 3.核心:网购 Step 2:列纲·研结构 ( 开篇点题 优缺点介绍 总结 介绍目前网购已成为时尚 优点：省时、省力、品种多样 缺点：看不到实物，容易买多 总结自己的看法 ) Step 3 遣词造句 推敲词汇 1.在线 __________ 2.时尚 __________ 3.优点 __________ 4.对........感兴趣 __________ 5.一方面，另一方面 __________ 6. 总而言之 __________ 1.online 2.fashion 3.advantage 4.be interested in 5.on the one hand;on the other hand 6.all in all 基础句式： 1.很多人习惯于网购。 Many people ______ _____ ________shopping online. 2.你可以买自己感兴趣的。 You can buy what you’re ______ ______. 3.你不必出门。 You don’t need to______ ______ . 4.很容易买到跟你在网上看的图片不同的商品。 It’s very easy for you ______ ______ goods _______ _______ the pictures you see on the Internet. 5.总之，我爱在线购物。 All in all, I ______ _______ online. 升级句式： 将基础句式2&3升级。 You can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. 答案：1.are used to 2.interested in 3.go outdoors most 4.to buy;different from 5.love shopping Step 4 润色成篇 Many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can not get tired and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more kinds of goods. Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not needed. That’s a waste of money. All in all, I love shopping online. ①开篇点题，使用be used to doing结构引出主题。 ②主题句放在段首脉络清晰。 ③使用三个排比句介绍网购的优点结构清晰。 ④使用on the one hand;on the other hand从两个方面介绍网购的缺点。It is +形容词+for sb. to do sth.句型的使用升级了句式。 实战写作——迁移创新 最近，你班召开了一次以“How can we use pocket money wisely? ”为主题的班会。请综合以下同学的做法，说说你是如何使用零花钱的，并就如何更理智地使用零花钱谈谈你的看法。 写作要求： 1. 写作内容必须包含基本信息，可适当发挥； 2. 内容连贯，书写正确规范； 3. 写作词数80词左右。 How can we use pocket money wisely?      Nowadays, many students have their own pocket money. How can we use pocket money wisely? Here is some advice.      First, make a list. We had better start with the thing we want most. We can also write down how much it cost or how important in our life. Second, help others. We can use our pocket money to help others in need. Last but not least, save as much as we can. A wallet sometimes might be the best place to save money because it may make it easier. Follow these suggestions, we may use pocket money more wisely. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$