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九年级上期期末考点大串讲（冀教版） 专题07 书面表达题型 （原卷版） 1．（以“A special dish for my friend”为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following questions are for reference only. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What is the special dish? 2. How do you make it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Dennis给你发来了邮件。请你根据电子邮件内容，写一封70词左右的回复。 要求： 1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。 Hi Dennis, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．每个人心中都有偶像，不同的人对待偶像的态度也各不相同。有些人模仿偶像的一切，有些人则从偶像身上汲取营养，学习优点。假如你是Tom，请你给Lucy回信介绍你自己的偶像。 Dear friends,     Since the film YOLO came out, Jia Ling, the director and actress, has become my idol (偶像). I learn a lot from her and improve myself. Who is your idol? Why do you like him/her? What do you learn from him/her?     Share with me! Yours, Lucy 要求： （1）你的回信中要包含上文中提到的内容（黑体部分）； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, I am happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 4．从古至今，我们从未缺少英雄：他们可能是功勋卓著的大人物，也可能是默默无闻的身边人。假如你是李辉，请写一篇演讲稿，参加学校以“The hero in my heart”为题的英语演讲比赛。 内容要点如下： 1. 你心中的英雄是谁； 2. 说明理由； 3. 你想对他/她说的话。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about the hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．有志者事竟成。完形填空A部分介绍了戴眼镜飞天第一人桂海潮从大学教授“变身”航天员的事迹。假如你校微信公众号Role Model栏目正面向全校学生征文。请你根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的榜样——桂海潮并投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What do you know about him? Introduce him in a few words. He was born in… What’s more… From him, I’ve learned… … 2. Why do you regard him as your role model? 3. What have you learned from him? 要求：1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥： 2.词数80~120，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：教授 professor Gui Haichao is my role model. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“向英雄致敬，向英雄学习”的征文活动，请你以“My hero”为题写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1.他（她）的基本情况 2.其主要事迹 3.你的感想 写作要求： 1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数100个左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．转眼间，初中生活已过去两年多，回首过去的时光，你还记得对你影响最大的某个人或某件事吗？请以“I will never forget”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1) 你不能忘记的是哪个人或哪件事； 2) 这个人或这件事是如何对你产生影响的； 3) 这个人或这件事给你带来的感受。 2. 要求：1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2) 词数100左右。 I will never forget ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．    假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“创建绿色校园，我们都是参与者”的活动。学校微信公众号计划做关于绿色校园的系列推送，现就绿色环保这一话题在校内收集材料。请你用英文给微信公众号留言，向同学们提出倡议，请大家谈谈保护校园环境的重要性，以及怎样做才能使校园环境更美好。 提示词: healthy and happy, duty (责任), take care of, clean, rubbish. 提示问题： ●In your opinion, why is it important to protect the school environment? ●What can you do to make your school greener? 要求： 1.不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。2. 词数 90 个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 题型分析：从学生的角度谈论如何创建一个绿色校园。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时，适当使用情态动词即可。 行文思路：根据提示的问题，短文可以分两部分阐述。 第一部分阐述创建绿色校园的重要性； 第二部分详细阐述如何创建绿色校园，可以从身边的事情说起，如定时清洁校园、不要乱涂乱画、不要随意踩踏草地和乱扔垃圾等。 高分点拨：本次作文可以分为三段：第一段，补充完已给出的开头，阐述为什么要创建绿色校园，点题； 第二段，分几个小点来详细论述创建绿色校园的意见； 第三段，简明扼要地扣题。适当使用连词 and, if, when, what’s more. 佳作展示： I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I think protecting the school environment is very important. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do it from now on. Thanks. 9．救死扶伤的医生，诲人不倦的教师，为国争光的运动员……这些普通人一直在用实际行动诠释榜样的力量，请以“I want to be a person like him/her”为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你心中的榜样是谁？ 2. 你心中的榜样是什么样的？(如善良、乐于助人……) 3. 为了成为像他/她一样的人，你打算怎么做？(如努力学习、培养爱好……) 注意： 1. 内容必须包含所给信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人信息； 4. 词数80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇： be ready to help others (乐于助人), develop one’s hobbies (培养个人爱好) I want to be a person like him/her There are many ordinary people who have made our life full of love and warmth. But the model in my mind is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．最近，连山区电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，在你成长的过程中，有无数的人给你温暖、快乐、幸福……回忆其中的点点滴滴，你的心里一定充满了感激。你想感谢身边某一位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友……），请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； （2）发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； （3）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and friends, Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 11．假如你是 China Daily中学生版的记者，请根据下面材料写篇报道。背景：这所学校建于三年前，当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学，后来人们为“希望工程(Project Hope)”捐款200余万元，当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。现状：教师60人，学生900人，教学楼内有18个教室，另有1200平方米的操场，微机室、语音室、图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名，学生们都很努力，因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。 12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite kind of English homework”. (以”我最喜欢的英语作业”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。) 寒假来临，你希望老师布置什么样的英语作业：读英语小故事(reading English short stories)、 朗读课文并录音 (reading the texts and recording)、给动画配音 (dubbing cartoons)、写英语日记 (keeping English diaries)、角色扮演 (role playing) 还是做练习(doing exercises)？ 为什么？说说你的理由。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你在报纸上看到一个令人感动的事迹报道。请根据以下提示，给你的英国好友Peter写一封信，与他分享你的感动。 （1）宁老师是我的英语老师。 （2）她很严格，人也很好。 （3）从2010年以来，她已捐款80,000余元。 （4）迄今为止，她已默默地资助了百余名贫困学生。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：捐赠 donate 默默地 silently 迄今为止 so far 要求： （1）词数：80～100个。 （2）短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 14．话题作文：俗话说：“没有规矩不成方圆。”为了创建和谐的、融洽的学习和生活氛围，并使青少年身心健康、茁壮成长，学校和家庭都会立很多规矩。请你根据下面提示，以“A Rule I Agree With”为题，选择一条规矩，发表你的观点和看法。 提示: （1）Which rule do you agree with? （2）Why do you agree with the rule? （3）What do you expect? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．校园生活是丰富、充实、积极向上的，时刻带给我们激励和喜悦。请你以“Our Colorful School Life”为题，根据以下信息，用英语写一篇小短文，介绍我们的校园生活。内容包括： 1.课程设置； 2.课后活动（例如：英语俱乐部、志愿者活动等）； 3.人际关系； 4.你的感受和祝福。 注意： 1.词数 80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。 Our Colorful School Life Our school life is very colorful. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．假定你是学生李辉，你的英国笔友Mike打算到中国学习。他写信向你咨询在中国可能会遇到的文化冲击, 请你给他写一封回信, 要点如下： 1. 表达写信目的； 2. 可能会遇到的文化冲击； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80-100, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear Mike, You asked me about what culture shock you will meet in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 17．不同的国家有不同的习俗。请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇短文，开头已给出。 要求：词数80左右。书写工整，语言流畅。 In America be supposed to, shake hands, party, bring a gift, eat, knife and fork In France kiss, not supposed to, bread, plate, elbows, table In China shake hands, impolite, stick...into..., chopsticks, hit an empty bowl, point at, anyone Different countries have different customs. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．假如你是李华， 你有幸作为交流生被邀请下个月去英国某校交流学习， 但你对当地风俗不甚了解。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写一封e­-mail向他求助。 要求： 1. 80­—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1. 介绍本次交流活动（时间、内容……）； 2. 遇到的问题（如：口语不流利，不了解英国的风俗……）； 3. 请求帮助。 Dear Jack, How’s everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 19．假定你是李辉，开学准备参加学校英语社团组织的“春节的记忆”为主题的演讲活动，根据下面的写作要求写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。 注意： 1．短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数 Hello everyone, I am Li Hui. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 20．中华文化，博大精深。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Steve想了解更多的中国文化。请你给他写一封信，向他简单介绍中国的特色文化。 ① Festivals the Spring Festival ② Traditional art forms paper-cutting ③ Music or traditional musical instruments erhu … ④ Others 要求： 1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 3. 请在表格中已给出的三项内容中选写两项，并添加一项其他内容。 Dear Steve, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 21．真正的朋友应该善于倾听，并给出良好的建议。你的朋友唐君向你倾诉：她上初三感到压力很大，和父母经常吵架，向你寻求帮助。请你给她一些建议，帮助她和父母好好相处。 内容包括： 1. 尊重父母，多与父母沟通； 2. 多帮忙做家务； 3. 学会自控，周末不要浪费太多时间玩电脑游戏。 写作要求： 1. 词数90词左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 22．步入九年级后，你一定体验到了学习任务的繁重，但有张有弛的生活才会让人感到充实而快乐。你想要的生活是什么样子的呢？下面请你写一篇作文来表达你的想法。内容包括： 1.你觉得父母对你生活中的哪些安排或规定需要改变？为什么？ 2.当有了更多的空闲时间，你想做什么呢？是听音乐或歌曲？还是看电影？又或者是读书？还是弹奏乐器？你的爱好带给你的感受是什么呢？ 具体要求： 1.内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3.短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。 Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 23．假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近因为一些事情和父母发生了争吵，你和他也有类似的经历。请你根据以下信息给他写封信，说说中学生如何合理安排自己的课余（after-school）活动。 写作要点： 1. 表达对Mike的理解。 2. 和Mike类似的经历： (1) 因考试不及格而和父母争吵。 (2) 父母不满意你周末画画时间长。 3. 说说中学生如何合理安排（arrange properly）课余活动。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 24．假如你是李华，中秋将至，你的美国好友Mark给你发来电子邮件询问令你难忘的一次中秋节经历。请你根据以下内容提示， 给他回复一封电子邮件，内容提示： ①Your unforgettable Mid-Autumn Festival experience; ②The reason why you think it’s special. 要求： ①内容需包括内容提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ②语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； ③80词左右，电子邮件的格式，开头及结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Mark, I’m glad to hear from you. Let me share my unforgettable Mid-Autumn festival experiences with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to share one of your festival experiences with me? Yours, Li Hua 25．假如你是李华，你和你的家人想在新家举办一次乔迁聚会 (a housewarming party)，请根据下面要点和要求，用英文给你的朋友们写一则不少于40词的邀请函。 要点：1. 新家地址—和平路5号； 2. 开始时间—本周日晚上7点； 3. 提供服务—美食和饮料； 4. 回复时间—本周五之前。 要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。（答题卡上直接写正文） Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 26．关于读书的益处，古今中外有许多名人名言。高尔基说过：书籍是人类进步的阶梯；杜甫诗云：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。读书对每个人来说都有着非常重要的意义，尤其是每一本好书。本学期学校将举办“读一本好书”读书活动，要求各班在主题班会上进行讨论。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿在班会上发言。 提示要点： 1. How often do you read books? 2. Why do you like reading? 3. What kind of books do you like reading? 4. What is your reading plan during the vacation? 要求： 1. 文章须包含提示中的全部信息，可以适当发挥。 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，意思连贯，书写工整。 3. 词数80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear classmates, I’m glad to share something about reading with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s read together! That’s all! Thanks for listening! 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 九年级上期期末考点大串讲（冀教版） 专题07 书面表达题型 （解析版） 1．（以“A special dish for my friend”为题，写一段不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。） The following questions are for reference only. （以下问题仅供参考） 1. What is the special dish? 2. How do you make it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Today is my friend’s birthday. I make a special dish for him, it is scrambled eggs with tomatoes. First, buy three tomatoes, two eggs. Next, cut up tomatoes and broke eggs. Then, fry tomatoes and eggs. After a few minutes, add some salt. Finally, put in the scallions, and the dish is ready. My friend says it is very nice after eating it. I’m very glad that he likes the dish. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出主题，为朋友做了一份特别的菜。 第二步，介绍做菜的过程。 第三步，表达朋友和自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①cut up切开 ②after a few minutes几分钟后 [高分句型] ①I’m very glad that he likes the dish. (宾语从句) 2．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Dennis给你发来了邮件。请你根据电子邮件内容，写一封70词左右的回复。 要求： 1. 书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。 Hi Dennis, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Hi Dennis, I usually eat beef, tomatoes and rice for dinner. I think they are healthy. My mom cooks well, so the food is always delicious. In China, we always have long noodles on birthdays because they are a symbol of long life. It’s getting popular to have cake on our birthdays. We usually make a wish before eating the cake. I also eat eggs and my mom says eggs are a symbol of life and good luck. I love to eat them. What do you eat on your birthday? Maybe, you can try long noodles and eggs!                                                          Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。 ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据电子邮件的问题提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己通常吃什么； 第二步，介绍中国人在生日时会吃什么； 第三步，最后问对方生日吃什么。 [亮点词汇] ① a symbol of long life长寿的象征 ② make a wish许愿 ③ good luck好运 [高分句型] In China, we always have long noodles on birthdays because they are a symbol of long life.（because引导的原因状语从句） 3．每个人心中都有偶像，不同的人对待偶像的态度也各不相同。有些人模仿偶像的一切，有些人则从偶像身上汲取营养，学习优点。假如你是Tom，请你给Lucy回信介绍你自己的偶像。 Dear friends,     Since the film YOLO came out, Jia Ling, the director and actress, has become my idol (偶像). I learn a lot from her and improve myself. Who is your idol? Why do you like him/her? What do you learn from him/her?     Share with me! Yours, Lucy 要求： （1）你的回信中要包含上文中提到的内容（黑体部分）； （2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名； （3）词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Lucy, I am happy to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Lucy, I am happy to hear from you. My idol is Andy Lau. He is a very famous super star in Hong Kong. The reason why I like him is that he is very hard-working. He is successful not only in acting but also in singing. What’s more, it is reported that he loves his parents very much and he is filial to them. Besides, he is extremely handsome. As a result of above, I want to grow into a person like him, who always sets a positive example for the youngsters. Moreover, I have learned a truth from him: No pain, no gain. Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的偶像，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的偶像是谁； 第二步，介绍为什么喜欢他/她； 第三步，介绍你从他/她那里学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①hear from收到……的来信 ②it is reported that据报道 ③set a positive example for为……树立了一个积极的榜样 [高分句型] The reason why I like him is that he is very hard-working. (why引导的定语从句，that引导的表语从句) 4．从古至今，我们从未缺少英雄：他们可能是功勋卓著的大人物，也可能是默默无闻的身边人。假如你是李辉，请写一篇演讲稿，参加学校以“The hero in my heart”为题的英语演讲比赛。 内容要点如下： 1. 你心中的英雄是谁； 2. 说明理由； 3. 你想对他/她说的话。 注意： 1. 词数80～100，开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about the hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about the hero in my heart. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my hero in my heart. He graduated from Beijing Medical College. He is one of the famous doctors in China. In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against it. He worked hard day and night treating the patients. With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control. He is a good doctor as well as a great hero in my heart. I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others. I want to tell him that you are the pride of us Chinese people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己心中的英雄，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你心中的英雄是谁； 第二步，说明为什么他是自己心中的英雄； 第三步，介绍你想对他/她说的话。 [亮点词汇] ①graduate from从……毕业 ②break out爆发 ③take an active part in积极参加 [高分句型] I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others. (宾语从句) 5．有志者事竟成。完形填空A部分介绍了戴眼镜飞天第一人桂海潮从大学教授“变身”航天员的事迹。假如你校微信公众号Role Model栏目正面向全校学生征文。请你根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的榜样——桂海潮并投稿。 写作要点 参考句型 1. What do you know about him? Introduce him in a few words. He was born in… What’s more… From him, I’ve learned… … 2. Why do you regard him as your role model? 3. What have you learned from him? 要求：1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥： 2.词数80~120，短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：教授 professor Gui Haichao is my role model. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】     Gui Haichao is my role model. When he was a university professor, he studied and trained so hard that he finally became an astronaut. On May 30th, 2023, he flew into space by Shenzhou 16 and realized his space dream. He became China’s first payload expert to carry out manned missions and made his flying dream come true.     Through his story, I understand that as long as we have dreams in our hearts and work hard for them, our dreams will come true. So no matter what problems we meet, we can not give up. If we are brave enough to challenge difficulties, we will certainly win. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“桂海潮是我的榜样”来引出重点介绍的内容。 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——有关他的介绍、成为我的榜样的原因、收获等均要一一阐述。 第三步：书写结语。表达“只要我们勇于向困难挑战，就一定能够取得胜利。”的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out 执行 ②come true实现 ③as long as只要 [高分句型] ①When he was a university professor, he studied and trained so hard that he finally became an astronaut. (When引导的时间状语从句） ②If we are brave enough to challenge difficulties, we will certainly win. (If引导的条件状语从句) 6．假如你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“向英雄致敬，向英雄学习”的征文活动，请你以“My hero”为题写一篇短文参赛。内容包括： 1.他（她）的基本情况 2.其主要事迹 3.你的感想 写作要求： 1.不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。 2. 语句连贯，词数100个左右。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 My hero My hero is Lei Feng, a selfless soldier from China. He devoted his life to helping others, whether it was through small acts of kindness or participating in community service projects. Lei Feng teaches us the importance of kindness, compassion, and service to others. His willingness to put the needs of others before his own set an example for us all. His virtue of selflessness inspires generations to follow. In conclusion, Lei Feng may have lived decades ago, but his spirit of selflessness continues to resonate with people today. He reminds us that even the smallest acts of kindness can make a big difference in the lives of others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇征文，为材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明“我”心目中的英雄的基本情况和主要事迹； 第二步，说明“我”心目中的英雄产生的影响； 第三步，描写“我”的感想。 [亮点词汇] ①devote… to…致力于 ②set an example树立榜样 ③make a big difference产生重大影响 [高分句型] ①His willingness to put the needs of others before his own set an example for us all. (不定式作后置定语) ②He reminds us that even the smallest acts of kindness can make a big difference in the lives of others. (that引导宾语从句) 7．转眼间，初中生活已过去两年多，回首过去的时光，你还记得对你影响最大的某个人或某件事吗？请以“I will never forget”为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。 1. 要点： 1) 你不能忘记的是哪个人或哪件事； 2) 这个人或这件事是如何对你产生影响的； 3) 这个人或这件事给你带来的感受。 2. 要求：1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名； 2) 词数100左右。 I will never forget ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 I will never forget my English teacher Looking back to the past two years, we have experienced many unforgettable things. I will never forget the help my English teacher gave me. I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it. I lost my confidence and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher knew it, she had a long talk with me about how to learn English well. She always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress. With her help, I was interested in English and improved myself a lot. Though I have to say goodbye to her very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be her student. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，点明“难忘的英语老师”； 第二步，具体阐述英语老师如何让作者难忘； 第三步，书写结语表达对老师的不舍和感谢之情。 [亮点词汇] ①look back to回顾 ②give up放弃 ③as soon as一……就…… [高分句型] ①She always encouraged me whenever I made a little progress.（whenever引导时间状语从句） ②Though I have to say goodbye to her very soon, I still think I am so lucky to be her student.（though引导让步状语从句） 8．    假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“创建绿色校园，我们都是参与者”的活动。学校微信公众号计划做关于绿色校园的系列推送，现就绿色环保这一话题在校内收集材料。请你用英文给微信公众号留言，向同学们提出倡议，请大家谈谈保护校园环境的重要性，以及怎样做才能使校园环境更美好。 提示词: healthy and happy, duty (责任), take care of, clean, rubbish. 提示问题： ●In your opinion, why is it important to protect the school environment? ●What can you do to make your school greener? 要求： 1.不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。2. 词数 90 个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 题型分析：从学生的角度谈论如何创建一个绿色校园。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时，适当使用情态动词即可。 行文思路：根据提示的问题，短文可以分两部分阐述。 第一部分阐述创建绿色校园的重要性； 第二部分详细阐述如何创建绿色校园，可以从身边的事情说起，如定时清洁校园、不要乱涂乱画、不要随意踩踏草地和乱扔垃圾等。 高分点拨：本次作文可以分为三段：第一段，补充完已给出的开头，阐述为什么要创建绿色校园，点题； 第二段，分几个小点来详细论述创建绿色校园的意见； 第三段，简明扼要地扣题。适当使用连词 and, if, when, what’s more. 佳作展示： I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I think protecting the school environment is very important. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s do it from now on. Thanks. 【优秀满分范文】 I’m Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. I think protecting the school environment is very important. Because a clean and pleasant environment can make us healthy and happy. What’s more, it’s our duty to take good care of our school and protect our school environment. To protect our school environment, we should clean the school every day. When we clean, do it carefully and try to make everything clean. We shouldn’t throw rubbish here and there. When we see it on the ground, we should pick it up. And we shouldn’t pick the flowers in the school garden. What’s more, drawing on the wall is terrible. We mustn’t do it. If we have a good school environment, we can study better. Let’s do it from now on. Thanks! 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，指出保护校园环境很重要； 第二步，具体阐述如何创建绿色校园； 第三步，书写结语，号召从现在做起。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of好好照顾 ②here and there各处 ③pick up捡起 [高分句型] ①To protect our school environment, we should clean the school every day. （动词不定式作目的状语） ②If we have a good school environment, we can study better.（if引导的条件状语从句） 9．救死扶伤的医生，诲人不倦的教师，为国争光的运动员……这些普通人一直在用实际行动诠释榜样的力量，请以“I want to be a person like him/her”为题写一篇英语短文。 内容包括： 1. 你心中的榜样是谁？ 2. 你心中的榜样是什么样的？(如善良、乐于助人……) 3. 为了成为像他/她一样的人，你打算怎么做？(如努力学习、培养爱好……) 注意： 1. 内容必须包含所给信息； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得透露个人信息； 4. 词数80左右(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇： be ready to help others (乐于助人), develop one’s hobbies (培养个人爱好) I want to be a person like him/her There are many ordinary people who have made our life full of love and warmth. But the model in my mind is __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 There are many ordinary people who have made our life full of love and warmth. But the model in my mind is my English teacher. As a serious but kind teacher, she is experienced and very patient with all of us. She is ready to help us at any time. She has spent most of her time teaching. She loves us. We love her, too. I want to be a teacher like her in the future. To achieve my dream, I will do my best to study hard. Also, it is necessary to get on well with others. In this way, I can know more about others and learn a lot from them. I will develop my hobbies and learn new skills. I believe my dream will come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作时必须包括三个提示内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意语句通顺、意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确“在我心中的榜样是谁”； 第二步，介绍心目中的榜样的特点； 第三步，介绍自己打算怎么做以成为像榜样那样的人； 第四步，希望自己的梦想能实现，与开头呼应。 [亮点词汇] ①be patient with对……有耐心 ②be ready to do sth.准备做某事 ③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事 ④do one’s best to do sth尽力做某事 [高分句型] ①Also, it is necessary to get on well with others.（it代替动词不定式作形式主语） ②To achieve my dream, I will do my best to study hard.（动词不定式表示目的） 10．最近，连山区电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假设你是李华，在你成长的过程中，有无数的人给你温暖、快乐、幸福……回忆其中的点点滴滴，你的心里一定充满了感激。你想感谢身边某一位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友……），请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。 注意： （1）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； （2）发言稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； （3）词数80～100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and friends, Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【优秀满分范文】 Dear teachers and friends, Good afternoon, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to speak here. In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee. Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development. That’s all for my speech. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明最想感谢的人是谁； 第二步，介绍该人的外貌、性格、经历和对你的影响等； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①helps me a lot对我帮助很大 ②be in trouble处于困境 ③cheered me up让我振作起来 ④made great progress取得巨大进步 [高分句型] ①When I’m in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.（并列句） 11．假如你是 China Daily中学生版的记者，请根据下面材料写篇报道。背景：这所学校建于三年前，当时有数百名儿童因贫困而失学，后来人们为“希望工程(Project Hope)”捐款200余万元，当地政府用这笔款项兴建了这所学校。现状：教师60人，学生900人，教学楼内有18个教室，另有1200平方米的操场，微机室、语音室、图书馆各一个。这所学校已远近闻名，学生们都很努力，因为是希望工程给了他们学习的机会。 【优秀满分范文】 The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by Project Hope. Thus the school came into being. Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1200 square meters. The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is Project Hope that has given them the chance to go to school. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍一所由“希望工程”建造的学校，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍这所学校的建造背景； 第二步，介绍这所学校的现状； 第三步，介绍学校的学生学习很努力。 [亮点词汇] ①hundreds of数百的 ②come into being形成 [高分句型] ①Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school because they were very poor. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②The students there study very hard because they all know that it is Project Hope that has given them the chance to go to school. (because引导的原因状语从句，that引导的宾语从句，强调句) 12．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite kind of English homework”. (以”我最喜欢的英语作业”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。) 寒假来临，你希望老师布置什么样的英语作业：读英语小故事(reading English short stories)、 朗读课文并录音 (reading the texts and recording)、给动画配音 (dubbing cartoons)、写英语日记 (keeping English diaries)、角色扮演 (role playing) 还是做练习(doing exercises)？ 为什么？说说你的理由。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 My favorite English homework Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to read English short stories. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn new sentences, since most of us love reading. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops. I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“希望老师布置什么样的英语作业”；“为什么喜欢某种英语作业”；以及“自己的理由”等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己喜欢的英语作业并点题。 第二步，紧扣文章给出的要点，继续分享为什么这种英语作业。 第三步，介绍自己的理由，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①creative有创造性的 ②understanding理解 [高分句型] ①In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to read English short stories.（运用了it is+名词+to do的句型） ②I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.（宾语从句） 13．假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你在报纸上看到一个令人感动的事迹报道。请根据以下提示，给你的英国好友Peter写一封信，与他分享你的感动。 （1）宁老师是我的英语老师。 （2）她很严格，人也很好。 （3）从2010年以来，她已捐款80,000余元。 （4）迄今为止，她已默默地资助了百余名贫困学生。 （5）你认为…… 参考词汇：捐赠 donate 默默地 silently 迄今为止 so far 要求： （1）词数：80～100个。 （2）短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Dear Peter, How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Peter, How are you? I have a moving story to tell you. Miss Ning teaches me English. She is not only strict with us but also very nice. Recently, I have read a report about Miss Ning in the newspaper. Miss Ning has donated more than eighty thousand yuan to the poor children since 2010. With the money, she has silently helped over about one hundred students from all parts of China so far. Thanks to her, these students can study in bright classrooms. Her kindness has touched the heart of me. As far as I’m concerned, she is a teacher who is full of love. She is always ready to help the people who are in need. She has set a good example for me. I will study hard to become a teacher like Miss Ning in the future. Do you have a story to share? Hope to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信，为应用文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点”中你的看法，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接叙述你有一个感人的故事要告诉Peter，引出重点介绍的内容(短文已给出)； 第二步，介绍宁老师是自己的英语老师，并介绍宁老师的性格、事迹； 第三步，介绍自己对宁老师的评价以及她对自己的影响； 第四步，询问对方是否有故事和自己分享。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also...不仅……而且…… ②be strict with sb.对某人要求严格 ③more than超过 ④so far到目前为止 ⑤as far as就……而言 ⑥be full of充满 ⑦be ready to do sth.准备好做某事 ⑧set a good example for sb.为某人树立好榜样 [高分句型] ①As far as I’m concerned, she is a teacher who is full of love. (who引导定语从句） ②I will study hard to become a teacher like Miss Ning in the future. (动词不定式作目的状语) 14．话题作文：俗话说：“没有规矩不成方圆。”为了创建和谐的、融洽的学习和生活氛围，并使青少年身心健康、茁壮成长，学校和家庭都会立很多规矩。请你根据下面提示，以“A Rule I Agree With”为题，选择一条规矩，发表你的观点和看法。 提示: （1）Which rule do you agree with? （2）Why do you agree with the rule? （3）What do you expect? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 A Rule I Agree With Most of the rules in our school are fair and reasonable. Among them I like the one best—we should take exercise for at least an hour every day. Here are some reasons for agreeing with it. For one thing, if we don’t exercise in such a busy day, we’ll get weak and fall ill easily. For another thing, exercise really helps us to keep our mind active. It can help us learn things more quickly and get better grades at school. In a word, students should do more sports rather than study all the time. With the rule, we students will think more about how to improve our learning abilities and keep healthier as well. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍自己赞成的规则； 第二步，阐述原因； 第三步，阐述期望。 [亮点词汇] ①at least至少 ②in a word总而言之 ③rather than而不是 [高分句型] ①For one thing, if we don’t exercise in such a busy day, we'll get weak and fall ill easily.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②With the rule, we students will think more about how to improve our learning abilities and keep healthier as well.（宾语从句） 15．校园生活是丰富、充实、积极向上的，时刻带给我们激励和喜悦。请你以“Our Colorful School Life”为题，根据以下信息，用英语写一篇小短文，介绍我们的校园生活。内容包括： 1.课程设置； 2.课后活动（例如：英语俱乐部、志愿者活动等）； 3.人际关系； 4.你的感受和祝福。 注意： 1.词数 80—100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.短文须包括所给内容信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实姓名和校名。 Our Colorful School Life Our school life is very colorful. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Our Colorful School Life Our school life is very colorful. On weekdays, there are four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon. We have different subjects, such as English, Chinese, maths, music. Among these subjects, I like music best. After school, we can join our favourite clubs such as English club, tennis club and music club. On weekends, our school sometimes organizes activities such as doing some cleaning in the park and going to the old people’s home. These activities help us learn more outside the classroom. What’s more, our school is like a big family. Everyone is friendly here and we get along well with each other. Although my school life is coming to an end, I will never forget the people and the things here. I hope our school will become better and better. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写你的感受和祝福，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍你的校园生活； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课程设置、课后活动、人际关系”等方面介绍你的校园生活； 第三步，书写结语。表达你的感受和祝福。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②organize组织 ③help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事 ④what’s more而且 ⑤get along well with sb.与某人相处融洽 [高分句型] ①Although my school life is coming to an end, I will never forget the people and the things here.（although引导的让步状语从句） ②I hope our school will become better and better.（省略that的宾语从句） 16．假定你是学生李辉，你的英国笔友Mike打算到中国学习。他写信向你咨询在中国可能会遇到的文化冲击, 请你给他写一封回信, 要点如下： 1. 表达写信目的； 2. 可能会遇到的文化冲击； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80-100, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。 Dear Mike, You asked me about what culture shock you will meet in China.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mike, You asked me about what culture shock you will meet in China. Here are my suggestions about your behavior in a Chinese family. As far as I am concerned, helping your host family with some housework is definitely an effective approach to engaging with them. Furthermore, a warm and harmonious atmosphere can be created. When it comes to table manners, we often let the seniors eat first to show respect for them. Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. In fact, the best policy is “When in Rome, do as the Romans do”. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hui 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示内容；不得出现真实姓名及校名；可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达写信目的； 第二步，阐述可能会遇到的文化冲击及具体建议； 第三步，表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①as far as I am concerned就我而言 ②when it comes to...当提到…… ③in fact事实上 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①You asked me about what culture shock you will meet in China. (what引导的宾语从句) ②Besides, you should avoid tapping the bowls with chopsticks, which is impolite. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 17．不同的国家有不同的习俗。请根据下面的表格内容，写一篇短文，开头已给出。 要求：词数80左右。书写工整，语言流畅。 In America be supposed to, shake hands, party, bring a gift, eat, knife and fork In France kiss, not supposed to, bread, plate, elbows, table In China shake hands, impolite, stick...into..., chopsticks, hit an empty bowl, point at, anyone Different countries have different customs. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Different countries have different customs. In America, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet for the first time. If you are invited to a party, you had better bring a small gift, such as a flower. You should eat with a knife and fork. In France, people often kiss on their cheeks. You aren’t supposed to put bread on the plate and your elbows shouldn’t be on the table. In China, we can shake hands with others. But it is very impolite to stick your chopsticks into the rice. And never hit an empty bowl or point at anyone with chopsticks. So before you go to another country, learn about their customs. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍不同国家的风俗，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格内容介绍不同国家的风俗； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be supposed to应该做某事 ②such as例如 ③stick...into...把……插入……里 ④point at指着 [高分句型] ①In America, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet for the first time. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If you are invited to a party, you had better bring a small gift, such as a flower. (if引导的条件状语从句) 18．假如你是李华， 你有幸作为交流生被邀请下个月去英国某校交流学习， 但你对当地风俗不甚了解。请你给你的英国朋友Jack写一封e­-mail向他求助。 要求： 1. 80­—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息： 1. 介绍本次交流活动（时间、内容……）； 2. 遇到的问题（如：口语不流利，不了解英国的风俗……）； 3. 请求帮助。 Dear Jack, How’s everything going? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Jack, How’s everything going? I am so glad to be invited to visit a school in the UK as an exchange student next month. However, I am afraid that I can’t get used to the new environment because there are many culture differences. So I am writing to you to ask you for some advice. First of all, my spoken English is not as fluent as I expect. So I am worried that I will make some mistakes when I communicate with local people. Secondly, I am not familiar with British customs. So I wonder what differences are between England and Chinese on table manners, daily communication, social habits and so on. I would appreciate it if you could give me some useful suggestions. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要是一般现在时； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要漏写去英国的时间，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明被邀请下个月去英国作交流生，想向Jack寻求一些建议； 第二步，阐述你遇到的问题和引起这些问题的原因； 第三步，书写结语。表示期待尽快收到Jack的回信。 [亮点词汇] ①spoken English英语口语 ②be glad to do很乐意做某事 ③get used to习惯于 ④make mistakes犯错 ⑤look forward to doing sth.期待做某事 [高分句型] ①However, I am afraid that I can’t get used to the new environment because there are many culture differences.（that引导的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句） ②So I am worried that I will make some mistakes when I communicate with local people.（that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句） ③I would appreciate it if you could give me some useful suggestions.（if引导的条件状语从句） 19．假定你是李辉，开学准备参加学校英语社团组织的“春节的记忆”为主题的演讲活动，根据下面的写作要求写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。 注意： 1．短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2．开头已给出，不计入总词数 Hello everyone, I am Li Hui. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for listening. 【优秀满分范文】 Hello everyone, I am Li Hui. I stand here with a heart full of warmth and memories. This past Spring Festival, my family and I gathered together, just like the reunion of a dragon dance, filled with energy and tradition. The wonderful fireworks, the laughter and joy, and the retelling of old tales—it was a celebration that filled our home with love. It reminded me of the power of family and the beauty of our rich cultural heritage. This unforgettable experience taught me that the simple moments with loved ones are the most precious. Thank you for listening. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；   ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引出本文主题；   第二步，讲述自己对于春节的记忆。 [亮点词汇]   ①full of充满   ②remind sb of sth使某人想起某事 ③thank sb for doing sth因某事感谢某人   [高分句型]   ①This unforgettable experience taught me that the simple moments with loved ones are the most precious.（宾语从句）   20．中华文化，博大精深。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Steve想了解更多的中国文化。请你给他写一封信，向他简单介绍中国的特色文化。 ① Festivals the Spring Festival ② Traditional art forms paper-cutting ③ Music or traditional musical instruments erhu … ④ Others 要求： 1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 2. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名。 3. 请在表格中已给出的三项内容中选写两项，并添加一项其他内容。 Dear Steve, How is everything going? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Steve, How is everything going? I’m glad you like China and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I’ll tell you something about Chinese culture. There are several traditional festivals in China, among which the Spring Festival is my favorite. During the Spring Festival, we often get together as a family and eat dumplings, because it is a symbol of reunion and good luck. In terms of traditional art forms, paper-cutting is a beautiful craft that embodies our love for intricate designs and symbolism. It’s used for decorations during festivals and special occasions. When it comes to the national drink in China, it must be tea with pleasant scent and sweet taste. Why not come to China to experience Chinese culture in person? Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“提示信息”的几个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我来告诉你一些关于中国文化的事情”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点：春节、传统剪纸艺术、喝茶一一阐述； 第三步：书写结语。表达“我期待早早收到你的来信”。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②a symbol of……的象征 ③In terms of在……方面 ④be used for被用来 ⑤look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①I’m glad you like China and you are interested in Chinese culture.（省略that的宾语从句；and并列句） ②There are several traditional festivals in China, among which the Spring Festival is my favorite. (There be句型；非限制性定语从句) 21．真正的朋友应该善于倾听，并给出良好的建议。你的朋友唐君向你倾诉：她上初三感到压力很大，和父母经常吵架，向你寻求帮助。请你给她一些建议，帮助她和父母好好相处。 内容包括： 1. 尊重父母，多与父母沟通； 2. 多帮忙做家务； 3. 学会自控，周末不要浪费太多时间玩电脑游戏。 写作要求： 1. 词数90词左右； 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 I know you quarreled with your parents and you are very upset now. I understand your troubles. Many teenagers have trouble communicating with their parents, so you are not alone. I want to share my opinions about it with you. First of all, arguing with parents is not a good way to deal with the problems between you and your parents. As a child, you should respect your parents and try to communicate with them more often. Remember to be patient with them because they work very hard to make a better life for you. They are really tired every day, so you must say sorry to your parents. Also, I think you should find a proper chance to communicate with your parents, so that they can understand your feelings. After all, proper communication can make it easier for you to understand each other. Then, I think you should try to help with the housework, such as cooking meals or washing some dishes. What’s more, you should learn to control yourself better. Don’t spend too much time playing computer games at the weekend. Pay more attention to your study. I hope my advice can help you a lot. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤］ 第一步，安慰对方，告诉对方与父母不能友好相处是一个普遍现象，愿与对方分享你的想法； 第二步，依据要点提示，给出一些具体的建议； 第三步，书写结语，希望建议对对方有帮助。 [亮点词汇］ ① deal with 处理，应付 ② after all 毕竟 ③ pay attention to 关注 [高分句型］ ① First of all, arguing with parents is not a good way to deal with the problems between you and your parents. (动名词作主语) ② I hope my advice can help you a lot. (宾语从句) 22．步入九年级后，你一定体验到了学习任务的繁重，但有张有弛的生活才会让人感到充实而快乐。你想要的生活是什么样子的呢？下面请你写一篇作文来表达你的想法。内容包括： 1.你觉得父母对你生活中的哪些安排或规定需要改变？为什么？ 2.当有了更多的空闲时间，你想做什么呢？是听音乐或歌曲？还是看电影？又或者是读书？还是弹奏乐器？你的爱好带给你的感受是什么呢？ 具体要求： 1.内容完整，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3.短文开头已给出，不记入总词数。 Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【优秀满分范文】 Since entering Grade Nine, I’ve been busy with my schoolwork. But once in a while, I want to stop to have a rest. When I stop to watch TV and listen to music, my mother always says that I should study hard or I won’t go to a good high school. What’s worse, she doesn’t allow me to attend my friends’ parties because she thinks nothing is more important than study. I’m filled with much pressure. I should have my own time to relax so that I can be full of energy to work hard. I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me. I hope I can have more time to do something I like. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，介绍父母对你生活中的安排或规定需要改变及原因； 第二步，具体介绍自己空闲时间想做的事情； 第三步，表达期许。 [亮点词汇] ①be filled with充满 ②be good for有益于…… [高分句型] ①I will watch English movies which are useful and important for me to improve my English if I have more free time. (定语从句) ②Not only is it good for my study, but also I can relax myself and strengthen the relationship between my friends and me. (倒装句) 23．假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近因为一些事情和父母发生了争吵，你和他也有类似的经历。请你根据以下信息给他写封信，说说中学生如何合理安排自己的课余（after-school）活动。 写作要点： 1. 表达对Mike的理解。 2. 和Mike类似的经历： (1) 因考试不及格而和父母争吵。 (2) 父母不满意你周末画画时间长。 3. 说说中学生如何合理安排（arrange properly）课余活动。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。 4. 至少80词。 Dear Mike, How are you doing? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mike, How are you doing? I heard you and your parents had an argument about studying. I have had the same experiences as you, so I understood you very well. I argued with my parents about the failure in the exam last Sunday. My parents are not satisfied with me because I spend a lot of time drawing on weekends. How can we arrange our extracurricular life properly? Firstly, we can relax ourselves by listening to music, drawing, watching TV, and so on. Secondly, we should take up some hobbies. Thirdly, it is very important for us to communicate openly and share our interests and pleasures with parents as much as possible. I hope we should learn to relax ourselves while studying, so that we can learn better. In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind. Best wishes! Yours, Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”与“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，通过Mike与父母发生的问题表达自己的理解； 第二步，具体阐述与Mike类似的经历以及中学生如何合理安排课余活动； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be satisfied with对……感到满意 ②arrange安排 ③as much as possible尽可能多 [高分句型] ①My parents are not satisfied with me because I spend a lot of time drawing on weekends.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②Thirdly, it is very important for us to communicate openly and share our interests and pleasures with parents as much as possible.（it固定句式） 24．假如你是李华，中秋将至，你的美国好友Mark给你发来电子邮件询问令你难忘的一次中秋节经历。请你根据以下内容提示， 给他回复一封电子邮件，内容提示： ①Your unforgettable Mid-Autumn Festival experience; ②The reason why you think it’s special. 要求： ①内容需包括内容提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； ②语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； ③80词左右，电子邮件的格式，开头及结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Mark, I’m glad to hear from you. Let me share my unforgettable Mid-Autumn festival experiences with you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to share one of your festival experiences with me? Yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Mark,      I’m glad to hear from you. Let me share my unforgettable Mid-Autumn festival experiences with you.     On the Mid-Autumn Festival, I got up early because my family would go to grandma’s house for the Mid-Autumn Festival. After breakfast, we set off with gifts. On the street, people were all carrying gifts and busy going home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. Their faces were full of joy and everywhere was full of the happy atmosphere of the festival.     Many guests came to grandma’s house, including aunts and uncles. We sat together and chatted while eating moon cakes, which are the special food for this festival. As a child, everyone asked me about my study and encouraged me to study hard. At noon, we came to a dumpling restaurant. We wanted to have a reunion dinner here. Everyone raised their glasses and wished a Happy Mid-Autumn Festival!     It is a special day because my family can get together and have great fun.     Would you like to share one of your festival experiences with me? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：材料所给提示不得遗漏，写作过程中注意动词的过去式形式和书信格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，详细阐述难忘的中秋节发生的事情； 第三步，说明这次经历特别的原因，并提议对方分享自己的经历。 [亮点词汇] ①set off动身；出发 ②be full of充满 ③encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①I got up early because my family would go to grandma’s house for the Mid-Autumn Festival.（原因状语从句） ②We sat together and chatted while eating moon cakes, which are the special food for this festival. （定语从句） 25．假如你是李华，你和你的家人想在新家举办一次乔迁聚会 (a housewarming party)，请根据下面要点和要求，用英文给你的朋友们写一则不少于40词的邀请函。 要点：1. 新家地址—和平路5号； 2. 开始时间—本周日晚上7点； 3. 提供服务—美食和饮料； 4. 回复时间—本周五之前。 要求：字迹工整；要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。（答题卡上直接写正文） Dear friends, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear friends,             We’re planning a housewarming party at our new house this Sunday. Can you come? Our house is at 5 Heping Road. The party will begin at 7:00 p.m. We will serve delicious food and drink. Please let us know by Friday if you can come. Hope you can make it! Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是邀请函； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“你的家人和你想在新家举行一次乔迁聚会”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，分别从聚会的时间，地址，美食，饮料及回复时间等方面去叙述。 [亮点词汇] ①a housewarming party乔迁聚会 ②serve上菜 [高分句型] ①Please let us know by Friday if you can come.（“if”引导宾语从句） ②Hope you can make it!（祈使句） 26．关于读书的益处，古今中外有许多名人名言。高尔基说过：书籍是人类进步的阶梯；杜甫诗云：读书破万卷，下笔如有神。读书对每个人来说都有着非常重要的意义，尤其是每一本好书。本学期学校将举办“读一本好书”读书活动，要求各班在主题班会上进行讨论。请你根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿在班会上发言。 提示要点： 1. How often do you read books? 2. Why do you like reading? 3. What kind of books do you like reading? 4. What is your reading plan during the vacation? 要求： 1. 文章须包含提示中的全部信息，可以适当发挥。 2. 语句通顺，语法正确，意思连贯，书写工整。 3. 词数80-100；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear classmates, I’m glad to share something about reading with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Let’s read together! That’s all! Thanks for listening! 【优秀满分范文】范文： Dear classmates, I’m glad to share something about reading with you. As the saying goes, “A good book is a good friend.” Without doubt, reading is a good way for us to learn about the world as well as improve ourselves. I spend most of my free time reading every day. And the books really touch my heart. Among all kinds of books, I’m interested in science books most. That’s because I want to be a scientist in the future. The new term has begun. I’ll spend more time reading, about two hours a day. And I’m going to the library more often to look for some great books. The more books we read, the more learned we become. Let’s read together! That’s all! Thanks for listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，主要是关于读书的一篇英文发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：需注意时态的一致性，按照提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥；准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，并保证语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明主题（开头已给出）； 第二步，说明喜欢阅读的原因，读书的频率，最喜欢读的书的种类以及假期的阅读计划。 第三步，总结全文（文章已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①without doubt毫无疑问 ②learn about学习关于 ③as well as和，以及 ④be interested in对……感兴趣 ⑤spend time doing sth花费时间做某事 [高分句型] ①That’s because I want to be a scientist in the future.（because引导的表语从句） ②And I’m going to the library more often to look for some great books.（动词不定式作目的状语） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $