专题04 书面表达【考点串讲】-2024-2025学年八年级英语上学期期末考点大串讲(鲁教版五四制)

2024-2025学年八年级上期末考点大串讲（鲁教版五四制） 专题04 书面表达 考点串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 主题一：劳动实践,与劳动品质 内容要求: 发表自己的见解, 说明自己是否应该做家务; 记述一次帮父母做家务的经历, 并谈一谈自己的感受；谈论观点时, 正确使用情态动词; 叙述经历时正确使用一般过去时。 【写作示例】 　　家务是生活中的一部分, 我们应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me 　　　”为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 叙述你做家务的一次经历, 并谈谈你的体会。  要求: 词数不少于60个。 【参考范文】 Doing Housework Makes Me Happy It’s necessary to share housework with other family members. I’d like to tell you one of my experiences. ① 　　Last Mother’s Day, I made a special dinner for my mom. ② It didn’t work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots, and I forgot to put the salt in the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said, “Good girl! ” From this experience, I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up, but also bring happiness to my family. ③ ①开篇点题, 介绍自己做家务的经历。 ②段首使用了段落主题句, 自然引入细节描写。 ③通过表达收获与感悟, 自然收篇结尾, 使文章结构紧凑完整; 句中not only. . . but also的使用, 充分体现了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 主题二：良好的人际关系与人际交往 内容要求: 陈述困难或麻烦; 针对困难提出解决办法和建议；正确运用各种提建议的句型; 学会命题作文的写作方法和技巧。 【写作示例】 　　假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了一封电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求: 1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范; 2. 词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Li Lei, 　　My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do? Anna Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is my advice. 【参考范文】 Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is my advice. ① 　　Firstly②, maybe your parents won’t know how you feel if you don’t talk to them about it. You should③ tell them that you’re interested in sports instead of music. Secondly②, you’d better③ tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions. Thirdly②, try to③ get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better④ and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you. 　　Hope things work out⑤. Li Lei ①开篇点题, 引出建议。 ②运用Firstly, . . . Secondly, . . . Thirdly, . . . 介绍建议, 层次清晰分明。 ③使用You should. . . , you’d better. . . 和祈使句描述建议, 体现了句式的多样性。 ④倒装句的使用, 体现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ⑤用Hope. . . 表达期待, 自然收尾。 主题三：勤学善思 内容要求: 记叙过去的活动或发生的事件；正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时；写人时, 关注人物的；叙事时, 关注事情发生的前因后果及发展过程。 【写作示例】 　　在你的生活中有哪些经历是难以忘怀的? 当事情发生的时候你又在做什么呢? 请你根据自己的亲身体会以及下面的提示, 写一篇短文描述一件你最难忘的经历, 然后发表在某英文论坛上。不少于70词。 提示: 1. When and where did it happen? 2. What were you doing when it happened? 3. How do you feel about it? 【参考范文】 　　Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in a nearby park. ①② When I came back③, a dog was walking③ after me. It followed③ me until I got to the door of my house. 　　While I was opening③ the door, it was sitting③ on the ground and looking at me, as if it was saying, “I got lost. Would you please help me? ”“What a poor dog! ” I thought. Then I let it in and fed it with some food and water. ② After that, I put up a Dog-Found-Notice at the gate of our neighborhood. 　　The next day, the owner of the dog came to my house and picked it up. He thanked me a lot before leaving. ④ I was very happy to see the little dog go home with its owner, and I felt proud that I was able to give others a helping hand. ②④ ①开篇点题, 用确切的时间引入。 ②结构层次分明。话题引入→如何帮助小狗→感想。 ③一般过去时、过去进行时以及各种从句等使用正确、规范, 无语法错误, 彰显了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 ④结尾感情真挚。 主题四：文化自信 内容要求: 从故事发生的时间、地点、人物和故事情节入手, 叙述故事的发展、结局和影响；正确使用一般过去时; 写作时注意故事“六要素”。 【写作示例】 　　同学们都听说过神话故事《后羿射日》吧! 请根据下面提示词及图片用英语来描述这个小故事。 　　提示词: heat热, 热量; prevent阻止; creature动物; die of死于; human beings人类; protection保护 【参考范文】 　　Once upon a time, there were ten suns in the sky. The weather was so dry that no food would grow. ① People lived a sad life. 　　A brave man, Hou Yi, decided to save people. ② He was good at shooting, so he began to shoot the suns. ③ After shooting down nine suns, the last sun begged Hou Yi to leave him. He promised to give the earth sunshine and warmth. As soon as Hou Yi heard this, he stopped shooting. 　　From then on, the earth was better and better and people enjoyed a happy life. ④ ①灵活运用所学知识, 描述了十个太阳带来的危害。 ②运用短语decide to do sth. 描述后羿的决心。 ③运用短语be good at和连词so, 使文章更生动。 ④运用比较级句型, 描述后羿射日的影响。 主题五：地理位置与自然景观 内容:要求 介绍自然奇观、著名的景点或者是保护环境和濒危动物；正确使用一般现在时; 正确使用形容词和副词的比较等级; 正确运用情态动词。 【写作示例】 　　大熊猫是生存在我国的珍贵的(valuable)野生动物, 但它们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们应采取哪些措施来保护它们? 根据所给提示写一篇70词左右的短文陈述你的观点。 　　提示: 过度砍伐森林以建农田或盖房子; 竹子越来越少; 猎人(hunter)为皮毛(fur)而捕杀它们。 采取措施: 建立自然保护区(reserve); 不买皮毛制的衣服。 最后结果: 大熊猫将越来越多。 【参考范文】 　　Pandas are valuable but endangered animals. They are in great danger today. ① 　　Why are pandas in danger? ② Many years ago, people cut down too many forests to make farmland or build houses. Bamboo forests are getting fewer and fewer. Also, hunters kill pandas for their fur. ③ 　　Now, it’s time to take action to protect pandas. ② We should build more panda reserves, and teach people not to buy clothes made of animal fur. 　　If we follow these rules, we will have more and more pandas in the near future. ④ ①连词but和形容词great的运用使导入简练直接 ②第二、三段主题句的运用, 使文章结构、内容清晰有条理 ③副词Also的运用使陈述简洁、连贯 ④结尾句运用“主将从现”句型, 号召大家落实到行动中去 主题六：中外文学史上有代表性的作家和作品 内容要求: 记述自己阅读或听音乐的亲身经历和体会；正确运用一般现在时和现在完成时; 注意描述经历, 在结尾处恰当表达感悟。 【写作示例】 　　读书可以成就更美好的自己, 让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示, 以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文, 介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗, 并建议大家多读书, 读好书。词数80左右。 要点提示: 读书的重要性 1. 获取知识, 开阔眼界 2. 提升自我, 增强自信 读过的一本书或一首诗 1. 作品内容简介 2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响 多读书, 读好书 1. 利用闲暇时间多读书, 养成读书的好习惯 2. 多读经典文学作品 参考词汇: classic经典作品; open up one’s eyes开阔眼界; improve oneself提升自我; be more confident更自信 【参考范文】 Growing up with Reading 　　Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics 4 on CCTV? ①This program makes us more interested in reading books. Reading can not only open up our eyes, but also make us cleverer and happier. ②It can help improve ourselves if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn. ③ 　　I have already read Little Women. It’s about four sisters growing up. It was very good. I think it could help me become more confident. 　　So I suggest that everyone should read more books in his or her spare time, especially classics so that we can greatly widen our horizons. ④Let’s start reading now. ⑤ ①以问句开头, 引起读者兴趣。 ②not only. . . but also. . . 的运用, 体现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ③使用高级句式, 提升文章档次。 ④用宾语从句和目的状语从句提出建议, 为文章添彩。 ⑤运用祈使句提出倡议, 自然收篇结尾。 主题七：丰富的生活 内容要求: 介绍旅游景点; 描述去过的有趣的地方; 讲述自己的经历及感受；正确使用现在完成时; 写作时要注意时间、事情的经过等; 在结尾处恰当表达自己的感受。 【写作示例】 　　请根据提示, 写一篇80词以上的英语短文介绍西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷(the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon), 可适当拓展。提示: 1. 是自然世界最伟大的奇迹之一; 2. 不仅是世界上最长的峡谷, 还是世界上最深的峡谷。长度: 504. 6千米; 深度: 6 009米(最深处); 美誉: 植物博物馆、动物王国; 3. 最佳旅游季节: 春、夏。 【参考范文】 　　The Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is one of the greatest wonders of the natural world. It lies in Xizang, China. ① The Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is not only the world’s longest canyon, but also the world’s deepest canyon. ② It’s 504. 6 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches 6, 009 metres. On the one hand, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to millions of plants and animals③. Some people call it “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. On the other hand, it’s a wonderful place for nature lovers. Every year, millions of people come to visit it④. The best time to visit it is spring and summer. Welcome to the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon and enjoy yourself ⑤. ①总述大峡谷的特征及地理位置, 简明扼要, 开篇点题 ②运用not only. . . but also连接并列成分, 突出大峡谷既长又深的特征 ③巧用home, 生动形象 ④适当拓展, 丰富文章内容 ⑤运用祈使句, 表达愿景, 首尾呼应, 自然收篇结尾 主题八：家乡和社会的变迁 内容要求: 描述身边的环境, 人和事物的变化; 表达自己的感受；正确运用现在完成时; 写作时要注意描述环境, 人和事物的变化, 在结尾处恰当表达出自己的感受。 【写作示例】 　　校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”, 请你根据下面的提示完成短文, 并向校英语报投稿。 提示: 1. What did your hometown look like in the past? 2. What does your hometown look like now? 3. What do you think of these changes? 要求: 1. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 可适当发挥; 2. 80词左右。 【参考范文】 　　My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. ① In the past②, there weren’t many tall buildings in the city and the buildings were old. But now② many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory② there was only one small park in the city. But now② I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past②, but now② they have become clean and wide. I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better. ③ ①导入话题: 家乡发生了很大变化。 ②过去和现在的家乡情况对比: 大楼、公园、道路。 ③表达祝愿: 希望家乡越来越好。 考点精练 1．假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动，请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。 现存现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法 许多学生不愿做家务，原因如下： 1. 认为做家务是父母的工作； 2. 做家务占用学习的时间。 ●整理床铺 ●浇花 ●打扫房间 ●倒垃圾 …… …… 要求：1. 表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右。 We Should Do Chores at Home ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．十，一百，一千……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归为零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位……一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，结合以下图示，用英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。 注意事项：（1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Ways to Keep Healthy As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李辉，即将参加学校的英语演讲比赛。请以”读历史故事”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1.你喜欢读的历史故事； 2.读历史故事的好处； 3.对全校学生提出号召。 写作要求：1.字数在80—100，作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 作文必须包含所给的内容，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 3.文中不许出现真实班级及姓名。 Dear teachers and students, I’m happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有着比较深刻的印象。请根据所学的内容及以下提示，以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题，把这个故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。 要求： 1.用以上提示，丰富内容； 2.书写规范，逻辑清晰； 3.100 词左右。 提示词：move the mountains, Zhi Sou, sons, grandsons, continue, god, be moved, help ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你的朋友将要到你的城市游玩，请你根据下面的表格提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你的朋友介绍一下你所在城市的一些有特色的地方。 Place The best Reason park Zhongshan Park the most beautiful library the City Library the most quiet museum the History Museum the biggest 注意： （1）短文须包括所有的内容要点，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 In my city, there are some good places. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．史密斯夫人最近遇上了烦恼，她给某医学杂志的专栏作者琳达写了下面这封信，以寻求帮助。请你根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮琳达给史密斯夫人写一封70词左右的回信。 提示： 1.尽量放松，不要想太多； 2.睡前做些运动； 3.在床上听一些轻音乐。 Dear Linda, I was very healthy before, but these days I can’t sleep well. I always can’t stop thinking about the things in daytime. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me? Thanks a lot! Yours, Jenny Smith Dear Mrs. Smith, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda 7．假如你是八年级一班的李华，你想加入你们学校的DIY俱乐部，需要给负责人李老师用英文写一封申请信，内容必须包含以下要点： 自我介绍 1. 擅长手工； 2. 有耐心。 一次DIY经历 …… 你的希望 1. 对DIY了解更多； 2. 交更多的朋友。 注意：1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Dear Mr Li, I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Eight. I want to join the DIY Club. I’m writing to introduce myself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope I can be a member of you. Yours Li Hua 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I was in trouble that day”. （以“那天， 我遇到了麻烦”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、班名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考） When did you meet with the trouble? What was the trouble about? How did you deal with the trouble? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．家乡，这个词语如同一曲悠长的歌谣，在每一个人的心头级级流淌，它不仅仅是地理坐标上的一个点，更是灵魂深处永恒的港湾。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一场主题为“我和家乡”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的家乡，表达你对家乡的热爱之情。 提示： 1. Where is your hometown? 2. Which is the oldest building? / What place is popular?/ … 3. How do you like your hometown? 要求： 1. 短文须包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 10．假如你是在中国学习的美国学生Frank，请根据下面表格中的信息，给你的妈妈写一封电子邮件，介绍你的好朋友李华，以及你们上周去公园野餐的情况。 性格 比我更外向…… 外貌 高…… 最喜欢的电视节目 新闻，因为…… 最喜欢的电影院 万达影院，因为……     上周活动     地点：中央公园 活动：野餐，骑自行车…… 注意： (1)短文须包括表格中的全部信息，并适当发挥。     (2)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：中央公园Central Park万达影院Wanda Cinema野餐have a picnic Dear mom, How is it going? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．为倡导健康生活方式，近日校英语报开展了“The Best Way to Relax”主题征文活动。请根据以下最受欢迎的课余活动问卷调查结果图，谈论你心目中最好的放松方式，向校英语报投稿。词数80词左右。 内容包括：1. 简要描述调查结果；2. 谈论你心目中最好的放松方式并说明理由。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。 The Best Way to Relax Our school did a survey about the most popular after-class activity. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假如你是 Jane，给你的朋友Sarah写信介绍你在新学校的生活。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 个性特征 自己变得更外向；最受欢迎的学生之一；并表达你对交朋友这件事的观点。 周末活动 打篮球，一周至少两次；去图书馆看书，主要的原因之一是有很多好书。 文娱爱好 无法忍受肥皂剧；喜欢京剧 (Beijing Opera) ，因为它比肥皂剧更有意义，计划每周看一次。 最大梦想 …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80—120词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Sarah, I miss you very much. I have been studying in this new school for one year. Let me tell you something about my life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your life? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jane 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年八年级上期末考点大串讲（鲁教版五四制） 专题04 书面表达 考点串讲 1. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 主题一：劳动实践,与劳动品质 内容要求: 发表自己的见解, 说明自己是否应该做家务; 记述一次帮父母做家务的经历, 并谈一谈自己的感受；谈论观点时, 正确使用情态动词; 叙述经历时正确使用一般过去时。 【写作示例】 　　家务是生活中的一部分, 我们应该学会分担家务。请以“Doing Housework Makes Me 　　　”为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 叙述你做家务的一次经历, 并谈谈你的体会。  要求: 词数不少于60个。 【参考范文】 Doing Housework Makes Me Happy It’s necessary to share housework with other family members. I’d like to tell you one of my experiences. ① 　　Last Mother’s Day, I made a special dinner for my mom. ② It didn’t work as well as I thought. I hurt my fingers while cutting carrots, and I forgot to put the salt in the dishes. When my mom came back home, she was happy to taste them. Then she hugged me and said, “Good girl! ” From this experience, I’ve learned doing housework can not only help me grow up, but also bring happiness to my family. ③ ①开篇点题, 介绍自己做家务的经历。 ②段首使用了段落主题句, 自然引入细节描写。 ③通过表达收获与感悟, 自然收篇结尾, 使文章结构紧凑完整; 句中not only. . . but also的使用, 充分体现了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 主题二：良好的人际关系与人际交往 内容要求: 陈述困难或麻烦; 针对困难提出解决办法和建议；正确运用各种提建议的句型; 学会命题作文的写作方法和技巧。 【写作示例】 　　假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了一封电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。 要求: 1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范; 2. 词数100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Dear Li Lei, 　　My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do? Anna Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is my advice. 【参考范文】 Dear Anna, 　　I understand your feeling. Here is my advice. ① 　　Firstly②, maybe your parents won’t know how you feel if you don’t talk to them about it. You should③ tell them that you’re interested in sports instead of music. Secondly②, you’d better③ tell them you have had a clear life goal and are old enough to make your own decisions. Thirdly②, try to③ get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better④ and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you. 　　Hope things work out⑤. Li Lei ①开篇点题, 引出建议。 ②运用Firstly, . . . Secondly, . . . Thirdly, . . . 介绍建议, 层次清晰分明。 ③使用You should. . . , you’d better. . . 和祈使句描述建议, 体现了句式的多样性。 ④倒装句的使用, 体现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ⑤用Hope. . . 表达期待, 自然收尾。 主题三：勤学善思 内容要求: 记叙过去的活动或发生的事件；正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时；写人时, 关注人物的；叙事时, 关注事情发生的前因后果及发展过程。 【写作示例】 　　在你的生活中有哪些经历是难以忘怀的? 当事情发生的时候你又在做什么呢? 请你根据自己的亲身体会以及下面的提示, 写一篇短文描述一件你最难忘的经历, 然后发表在某英文论坛上。不少于70词。 提示: 1. When and where did it happen? 2. What were you doing when it happened? 3. How do you feel about it? 【参考范文】 　　Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in a nearby park. ①② When I came back③, a dog was walking③ after me. It followed③ me until I got to the door of my house. 　　While I was opening③ the door, it was sitting③ on the ground and looking at me, as if it was saying, “I got lost. Would you please help me? ”“What a poor dog! ” I thought. Then I let it in and fed it with some food and water. ② After that, I put up a Dog-Found-Notice at the gate of our neighborhood. 　　The next day, the owner of the dog came to my house and picked it up. He thanked me a lot before leaving. ④ I was very happy to see the little dog go home with its owner, and I felt proud that I was able to give others a helping hand. ②④ ①开篇点题, 用确切的时间引入。 ②结构层次分明。话题引入→如何帮助小狗→感想。 ③一般过去时、过去进行时以及各种从句等使用正确、规范, 无语法错误, 彰显了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 ④结尾感情真挚。 主题四：文化自信 内容要求: 从故事发生的时间、地点、人物和故事情节入手, 叙述故事的发展、结局和影响；正确使用一般过去时; 写作时注意故事“六要素”。 【写作示例】 　　同学们都听说过神话故事《后羿射日》吧! 请根据下面提示词及图片用英语来描述这个小故事。 　　提示词: heat热, 热量; prevent阻止; creature动物; die of死于; human beings人类; protection保护 【参考范文】 　　Once upon a time, there were ten suns in the sky. The weather was so dry that no food would grow. ① People lived a sad life. 　　A brave man, Hou Yi, decided to save people. ② He was good at shooting, so he began to shoot the suns. ③ After shooting down nine suns, the last sun begged Hou Yi to leave him. He promised to give the earth sunshine and warmth. As soon as Hou Yi heard this, he stopped shooting. 　　From then on, the earth was better and better and people enjoyed a happy life. ④ ①灵活运用所学知识, 描述了十个太阳带来的危害。 ②运用短语decide to do sth. 描述后羿的决心。 ③运用短语be good at和连词so, 使文章更生动。 ④运用比较级句型, 描述后羿射日的影响。 主题五：地理位置与自然景观 内容:要求 介绍自然奇观、著名的景点或者是保护环境和濒危动物；正确使用一般现在时; 正确使用形容词和副词的比较等级; 正确运用情态动词。 【写作示例】 　　大熊猫是生存在我国的珍贵的(valuable)野生动物, 但它们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们应采取哪些措施来保护它们? 根据所给提示写一篇70词左右的短文陈述你的观点。 　　提示: 过度砍伐森林以建农田或盖房子; 竹子越来越少; 猎人(hunter)为皮毛(fur)而捕杀它们。 采取措施: 建立自然保护区(reserve); 不买皮毛制的衣服。 最后结果: 大熊猫将越来越多。 【参考范文】 　　Pandas are valuable but endangered animals. They are in great danger today. ① 　　Why are pandas in danger? ② Many years ago, people cut down too many forests to make farmland or build houses. Bamboo forests are getting fewer and fewer. Also, hunters kill pandas for their fur. ③ 　　Now, it’s time to take action to protect pandas. ② We should build more panda reserves, and teach people not to buy clothes made of animal fur. 　　If we follow these rules, we will have more and more pandas in the near future. ④ ①连词but和形容词great的运用使导入简练直接 ②第二、三段主题句的运用, 使文章结构、内容清晰有条理 ③副词Also的运用使陈述简洁、连贯 ④结尾句运用“主将从现”句型, 号召大家落实到行动中去 主题六：中外文学史上有代表性的作家和作品 内容要求: 记述自己阅读或听音乐的亲身经历和体会；正确运用一般现在时和现在完成时; 注意描述经历, 在结尾处恰当表达感悟。 【写作示例】 　　读书可以成就更美好的自己, 让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示, 以“Growing up with Reading”为题写一篇英语短文, 介绍你曾经读过的一本书或一首诗, 并建议大家多读书, 读好书。词数80左右。 要点提示: 读书的重要性 1. 获取知识, 开阔眼界 2. 提升自我, 增强自信 读过的一本书或一首诗 1. 作品内容简介 2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响 多读书, 读好书 1. 利用闲暇时间多读书, 养成读书的好习惯 2. 多读经典文学作品 参考词汇: classic经典作品; open up one’s eyes开阔眼界; improve oneself提升自我; be more confident更自信 【参考范文】 Growing up with Reading 　　Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics 4 on CCTV? ①This program makes us more interested in reading books. Reading can not only open up our eyes, but also make us cleverer and happier. ②It can help improve ourselves if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn. ③ 　　I have already read Little Women. It’s about four sisters growing up. It was very good. I think it could help me become more confident. 　　So I suggest that everyone should read more books in his or her spare time, especially classics so that we can greatly widen our horizons. ④Let’s start reading now. ⑤ ①以问句开头, 引起读者兴趣。 ②not only. . . but also. . . 的运用, 体现了作者深厚的语言功底。 ③使用高级句式, 提升文章档次。 ④用宾语从句和目的状语从句提出建议, 为文章添彩。 ⑤运用祈使句提出倡议, 自然收篇结尾。 主题七：丰富的生活 内容要求: 介绍旅游景点; 描述去过的有趣的地方; 讲述自己的经历及感受；正确使用现在完成时; 写作时要注意时间、事情的经过等; 在结尾处恰当表达自己的感受。 【写作示例】 　　请根据提示, 写一篇80词以上的英语短文介绍西藏的雅鲁藏布大峡谷(the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon), 可适当拓展。提示: 1. 是自然世界最伟大的奇迹之一; 2. 不仅是世界上最长的峡谷, 还是世界上最深的峡谷。长度: 504. 6千米; 深度: 6 009米(最深处); 美誉: 植物博物馆、动物王国; 3. 最佳旅游季节: 春、夏。 【参考范文】 　　The Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is one of the greatest wonders of the natural world. It lies in Xizang, China. ① The Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is not only the world’s longest canyon, but also the world’s deepest canyon. ② It’s 504. 6 kilometres long. The deepest depth of it reaches 6, 009 metres. On the one hand, the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon is home to millions of plants and animals③. Some people call it “the plant museum” and “the animal kingdom”. On the other hand, it’s a wonderful place for nature lovers. Every year, millions of people come to visit it④. The best time to visit it is spring and summer. Welcome to the Yarlung Tsangpo Grand Canyon and enjoy yourself ⑤. ①总述大峡谷的特征及地理位置, 简明扼要, 开篇点题 ②运用not only. . . but also连接并列成分, 突出大峡谷既长又深的特征 ③巧用home, 生动形象 ④适当拓展, 丰富文章内容 ⑤运用祈使句, 表达愿景, 首尾呼应, 自然收篇结尾 主题八：家乡和社会的变迁 内容要求: 描述身边的环境, 人和事物的变化; 表达自己的感受；正确运用现在完成时; 写作时要注意描述环境, 人和事物的变化, 在结尾处恰当表达出自己的感受。 【写作示例】 　　校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”, 请你根据下面的提示完成短文, 并向校英语报投稿。 提示: 1. What did your hometown look like in the past? 2. What does your hometown look like now? 3. What do you think of these changes? 要求: 1. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 可适当发挥; 2. 80词左右。 【参考范文】 　　My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. ① In the past②, there weren’t many tall buildings in the city and the buildings were old. But now② many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory② there was only one small park in the city. But now② I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past②, but now② they have become clean and wide. I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better. ③ ①导入话题: 家乡发生了很大变化。 ②过去和现在的家乡情况对比: 大楼、公园、道路。 ③表达祝愿: 希望家乡越来越好。 考点精练 1．假如某报社正在以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题进行征文比赛活动，请你根据表格中的提示内容用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。 现存现象 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法 许多学生不愿做家务，原因如下： 1. 认为做家务是父母的工作； 2. 做家务占用学习的时间。 ●整理床铺 ●浇花 ●打扫房间 ●倒垃圾 …… …… 要求：1. 表达准确，语句通顺； 2. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右。 We Should Do Chores at Home ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．十，一百，一千……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归为零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位……一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，结合以下图示，用英语写一篇短文。词数80左右。 注意事项：（1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Ways to Keep Healthy As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是李辉，即将参加学校的英语演讲比赛。请以”读历史故事”为主题写一篇演讲稿。 内容包括：1.你喜欢读的历史故事； 2.读历史故事的好处； 3.对全校学生提出号召。 写作要求：1.字数在80—100，作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 2. 作文必须包含所给的内容，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 3.文中不许出现真实班级及姓名。 Dear teachers and students, I’m happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．同学们对《愚公移山》的故事一定有着比较深刻的印象。请根据所学的内容及以下提示，以“The Story of Yu Gong”为题，把这个故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。 要求： 1.用以上提示，丰富内容； 2.书写规范，逻辑清晰； 3.100 词左右。 提示词：move the mountains, Zhi Sou, sons, grandsons, continue, god, be moved, help ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你的朋友将要到你的城市游玩，请你根据下面的表格提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，向你的朋友介绍一下你所在城市的一些有特色的地方。 Place The best Reason park Zhongshan Park the most beautiful library the City Library the most quiet museum the History Museum the biggest 注意： （1）短文须包括所有的内容要点，可适当发挥。 （2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 In my city, there are some good places. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．史密斯夫人最近遇上了烦恼，她给某医学杂志的专栏作者琳达写了下面这封信，以寻求帮助。请你根据信件内容及下列提示内容，帮琳达给史密斯夫人写一封70词左右的回信。 提示： 1.尽量放松，不要想太多； 2.睡前做些运动； 3.在床上听一些轻音乐。 Dear Linda, I was very healthy before, but these days I can’t sleep well. I always can’t stop thinking about the things in daytime. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me? Thanks a lot! Yours, Jenny Smith Dear Mrs. Smith, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Linda 7．假如你是八年级一班的李华，你想加入你们学校的DIY俱乐部，需要给负责人李老师用英文写一封申请信，内容必须包含以下要点： 自我介绍 1. 擅长手工； 2. 有耐心。 一次DIY经历 …… 你的希望 1. 对DIY了解更多； 2. 交更多的朋友。 注意：1. 80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。 Dear Mr Li, I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Eight. I want to join the DIY Club. I’m writing to introduce myself. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I really hope I can be a member of you. Yours Li Hua 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I was in trouble that day”. （以“那天， 我遇到了麻烦”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现真实的姓名、班名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考） When did you meet with the trouble? What was the trouble about? How did you deal with the trouble? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．家乡，这个词语如同一曲悠长的歌谣，在每一个人的心头级级流淌，它不仅仅是地理坐标上的一个点，更是灵魂深处永恒的港湾。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办一场主题为“我和家乡”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍自己的家乡，表达你对家乡的热爱之情。 提示： 1. Where is your hometown? 2. Which is the oldest building? / What place is popular?/ … 3. How do you like your hometown? 要求： 1. 短文须包含提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for listening! 10．假如你是在中国学习的美国学生Frank，请根据下面表格中的信息，给你的妈妈写一封电子邮件，介绍你的好朋友李华，以及你们上周去公园野餐的情况。 性格 比我更外向…… 外貌 高…… 最喜欢的电视节目 新闻，因为…… 最喜欢的电影院 万达影院，因为……     上周活动     地点：中央公园 活动：野餐，骑自行车…… 注意： (1)短文须包括表格中的全部信息，并适当发挥。     (2)词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 参考词汇：中央公园Central Park万达影院Wanda Cinema野餐have a picnic Dear mom, How is it going? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．为倡导健康生活方式，近日校英语报开展了“The Best Way to Relax”主题征文活动。请根据以下最受欢迎的课余活动问卷调查结果图，谈论你心目中最好的放松方式，向校英语报投稿。词数80词左右。 内容包括：1. 简要描述调查结果；2. 谈论你心目中最好的放松方式并说明理由。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。 The Best Way to Relax Our school did a survey about the most popular after-class activity. Here are the results. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假如你是 Jane，给你的朋友Sarah写信介绍你在新学校的生活。写作要点如下： 项目 内容 个性特征 自己变得更外向；最受欢迎的学生之一；并表达你对交朋友这件事的观点。 周末活动 打篮球，一周至少两次；去图书馆看书，主要的原因之一是有很多好书。 文娱爱好 无法忍受肥皂剧；喜欢京剧 (Beijing Opera) ，因为它比肥皂剧更有意义，计划每周看一次。 最大梦想 …… 要求： 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，可以在此基础上适当发挥。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数80—120词左右。（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Sarah, I miss you very much. I have been studying in this new school for one year. Let me tell you something about my life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ How about your life? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jane 参考答案 1． We Should Do Chores at Home Now many students don’t like doing chores at home. There are mainly two reasons. One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home. The other is that they think doing chores takes up their time for study. But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work. I often do chores at home, like making the bed, watering the flowers, cleaning the rooms, taking out the rubbish and doing the dishes. I think doing chores makes us relaxing. I also feel great to help my parents. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，写短文表达在家应该做家务这一看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍许多学生不愿做家务这一现象并分析原因； 第二步，介绍自己的观点并列举自己常做的家务； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受及看法。 [亮点词汇] ①do chores 做家务 ②one ... the other ... 一个……另一个…… ③take up 占据 ④be busy with sth. 忙于某事 [高分句型] ①There are mainly two reasons.（There be句型） ②One is that they think it’s their parents’ job to do chores at home.（that引导表语从句；省略that的宾语从句；it固定句式） ③But I think we should help to do chores at home because our parents are busy with their work and are often tired after work.（because引导的原因状语从句） 2． Ways to Keep Healthy As far as we know, it is very important to keep healthy. Here are some ways to keep healthy. First, I think we must have enough healthy food. Breakfast is necessary. It gives energy to our body. And, remember to eat more fruit and vegetables. Second, it’s necessary for us to do exercise. It helps keep us active and strong. Third, never stay up late. If we can’t get enough sleep, our body won’t work well. Last, learning to reduce pressure is also important for your health. Listening to some music may help you relax. Follow the advice, and you will be healthy! [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据导图中所给的信息提示完成写作，介绍保持健康的方法，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，点明健康的重要性，并引出下文的方法； 第二步，从“饮食、睡眠、锻炼及自己的建议”四方面详细介绍如何保持健康； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①As far as we know据我们所知 ②remember to do记得要做某事 ③stay up late熬夜 ④do exercise做运动 [高分句型] ① First, I think we must have enough healthy food. (宾语从句) ② If we can’t get enough sleep, our body won’t work well. (if引导的条件状语从句) 3． Dear teachers and students, I’m happy to share my experience of reading history stories with you. I love the stories about the Three Kingdoms period in China, especially the stories of wise and heroic characters like Zhuge Liang and Guan Yu. Reading history stories has many benefits. First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. Second, it teaches us valuable lessons about life, such as perseverance and leadership. Third, it can improve our reading and analytical skills. I encourage all of you to read more history stories. They are not only interesting but also educational. Let’s make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future. Thank you for listening! [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：根据提示内容完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你喜欢的历史故事； 第二步，说明阅读历史故事的好处； 第三步，号召全校学生多读历史故事。 [亮点词汇] ① helps us learn about 帮助我们了解 ② perseverance and leadership 毅力和领导力 ③ not only...but also...不仅……而且…… [高分句型] ①First, it helps us learn about our past and understand how our society has developed. (宾语从句) ② Let’s make reading history a part of our daily life and learn from the past to build a better future. (祈使句与并列句) 4． The Story of Yu Gong Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. Two high mountains stopped his family from walking to the other side. So Yu Gong decided to move the mountains. Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. Then Yu Gong started digging. At that time, a “clever” man called Zhi Sou laughed at him and told him that it was impossible to move such high mountains. But Yu Gong didn’t listen to him and said that his sons and grandsons would continue to move the mountains after he died. Then a god was moved by Yu Gong, so he sent two gods to help him move the mountains. The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. We should not give up. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时” ； ③提示：本文主要是讲述愚公的故事，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么，适当增加细节 [写作步骤] 第一步，交代故事发生的背景； 第二步，写清故事发展的经过和结果； 第三步，写读故事后感想和启示。 [亮点词汇] ①once upon a time从前 ②decide to do sth.决定做某事 ③ as long as只要 [高分句型] ① Although Yu Gong was old, he decided to move the mountains with his family. (although引导的让步状语从句) ② The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. (that引导的宾语从句，as long as引导的条件状语从句) 5． In my city, there are some good places. Zhongshan Park is the best place to go to on weekends. I think it is the most beautiful park. The air is fresh. You can take a walk or play games with your friends. The City Library is the most quiet place. You can read all kinds of books and enjoy your time there. The History Museum is the best museum because it’s the biggest museum in our city. You can learn more about the history of our city there. I think you will like these places. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接已给的开头，推荐自己的城市的一些有特色的地方以及推荐原因； 第二步、书写结语，认为对方会喜欢自己推荐的地方。 [亮点词汇] ①on weekends在周末 ②take a walk散步 ③all kinds of各种各样的 ④learn about了解 [高分句型] The History Museum is the best museum because it’s the biggest museum in our city.(because引导原因状语从句) 6． Dear Mrs. Smith,    I’m sorry to hear that you can’t sleep well. Don’t worry about that. Here are some pieces of advice. Firstly, try to relax yourself. Don’t care about too much. Secondly, do some exercise before you go to bed. It will help you go to sleep very quickly. Finally, you can listen to some light music when you are in bed.    I hope these can help you. So, have a try please. Yours, Linda [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：文章围绕帮助解决睡眠不好的问题展开，给出了相应建议，要点清晰。应注意语言表达的简洁性和条理性。适当运用连接词，使文章逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表明对对方睡眠不好的情况表示遗憾。 第二步，详细给出了三条改善睡眠的建议，即放松自己、睡前做运动、听轻音乐。 第三步，表达希望建议能有帮助。 [亮点词汇] ①relax放松 ②care about关心，在意 ③light music轻音乐 [高分句型] ①Finally, you can listen to some light music when you are in bed. (时间状语从句) ②I hope these can help you. (宾语从句) 7． Dear Mr Li, I’m Li Hua from Class One, Grade Eight. I want to join the DIY Club. I’m writing to introduce myself. I am good at crafts and take pride in my ability to work with my hands. I am also known for my patience, which I believe is important for any DIY project. I made a sandwich for my mum on her birthday. First, I picked a piece of bread. Then, I put some tomato sauce, ham and vegetables on it. At last, I put another piece of bread on top of it. I hope I can gain a deeper understanding of DIY and make more friends who share the same interests.      I really hope I can be a member of you. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：根据提示内容申请加入DIY俱乐部，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，介绍自己的一次DIY经历； 第三步，介绍自己的希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②be known for因为……而闻名 ③gain a deeper understanding of对……了解更多 [高分句型] ①I am also known for my patience, which I believe is important for any DIY project. (非限制性定语从句) ②I hope I can gain a deeper understanding of DIY and make more friends who share the same interests. (宾语从句，定语从句) 8． Everyone met with the trouble. So did I. Once I forgot to bring my key to the door. I couldn’t get into the room. I was worried because both of my parents were out on business trip. Then I had no choice but to call 110 for help. The police men came and asked for some questions. Later, a policeman noticed I was on the second floor and the window in my room was open. “I have a good idea!” he said. He ran away and borrowed a long ladder from somewhere. It was high enough for him to climb into the room. Finally, he succeeded. I was happy and expressed my thanks to him. ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍在生活中，遇到的意见麻烦事，可适当增加细节。写作时，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯并突出写作要点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，引起话题每个人都会在生活中遇到困难； 第二步，介绍遇到困难的时间、具体事情和处理办法。 第三步，发表看法。 ［亮点词汇］ ①forgot to do sth. 忘记要去做某事 ②run away 走开，逃跑 ③express sth. to sb. 向某人表达什么 ［高分句型］ ①It was high enough for him to climb into the room.(it的固定句型) ②I was worried because both of my parents were out on business trip. (because引导时间状语从句) 9． Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua. My hometown is a small town called Huangcheng, and it lies in the southern part of China. It is a wonderful place with many places of interest. For example, Shuangta Temple is the oldest building in the town with a long history of more than 2, 000 years. Renmin Park is the best park. Here you can get close to nature and enjoy the freshest air. As for food, there are all kinds of local snacks at Renmin Square. No. 1 Middle School is the best middle school. It is the most beautiful and has the largest playground. I love my hometown not only because of the interesting places but also because of the people. They are kind and hard-working, making the town more and more beautiful. That’s all. Thanks for listening! [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求叙述家乡的位置，最古老的建筑和受欢迎的地方等。 第二步，根据提示内容描述对家乡的看法和热爱。 [亮点词汇] ①lie in 位于 ②more than 超过 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] ①For example, Shuangta Temple is the oldest building in the town with a long history of more than 2, 000 years.(介词短语作后置定语) ②I love my hometown not only because of the interesting places but also because of the people. (not only…but also…连接两个短语) 10． Dear mom, How is it going? Now I have a good friend in China. His name is Li Hua. Li Hua is more outgoing and friendlier than me.  He always cares about me and makes me laugh. He is good at sports. And he is the tallest in our class, so he can run very fast. He likes watching the news because he can find out what’s going on around the world. He likes watching films in Wanda Cinema because he thinks it has the most comfortable seats and the biggest screens. Last Sunday, we went to Central Park to have a picnic. We took a lot of food and drinks with us. After we arrived there, we took photos, flew kites and rode bikes. We all had a good time that day. I miss you. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Frank 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中对李华和事件的介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“介绍朋友和上周去公园野餐的情况”两个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语，期待收到母亲的回信。 【亮点词汇】①care about关心 ②make sb laugh使某人笑 ③be good at擅长于 ④around the world全世界 【高分句型】①He likes watching films in Wanda Cinema because he thinks it has the most comfortable seats and the biggest screens.(because引导的原因状语从句) ②After we arrived there, we took photos, flew kites and rode bikes. (after引导的时间状语从句) 11． The Best Way to Relax Our school did a survey about the most popular after-class activity. Here are the results. Among them, 55% of students do outdoor sports, 25% use the Internet, 9% do some reading, and 11% do other things. There are a lot of after-class activities in our lives. You can choose a healthy after-class activity that you want. Outdoor sports can keep us healthy, and using the Internet can let us get the latest news. My favorite way to relax is reading because it can open my mind. I think it’s important for us to choose a healthy after-class activity. [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇“材料作文”； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“调查结果的介绍，我最喜欢的放松方式以及理由”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我们学校对最受欢迎的课外活动进行了调查。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“放松方式的种类和我最喜欢的放松方式及原因”重点介绍最好的放松方式； 第三步，书写结语。表达“我认为选择一个健康的课外活动对我们来说很重要。” [亮点词汇] ① outdoor sports户外运动 ② keep sb healthy保持某人健康 [高分句型] ① There are a lot of after-class activities in our lives. (there be句型) ② I think it’s important for us to choose a healthy after-class activity. (省略that的宾语从句，it的特殊句式“It’s+adj+for sb to do sth.”表示“做某事对某人来说是……的”) 12． Dear Sarah, I miss you very much. I have been studying in this new school for one year. Let me tell you something about my life. I was shy in the past, but now I am more outgoing. I make more friends at school. I don’t care friends are the same or different. I become one of the most popular students in our school. On the weekends I often play basketball with my friends. I play it at least twice a week. Sometimes I go to the library on Saturday. The main reason is that there are lots of good books there. I can learn a lot there. For TV shows, I can’t stand soap operas. I like Beijing Opera because it is more meaningful. I plan to watch it once a week. My dream is to be a music teacher. I am trying to make my dream come true. How about your life? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jane [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，向朋友介绍在新学校的生活； 第二步，从“个人特征、周末活动、文娱爱好及最大梦想”等几个方面重点介绍在新学校的生活； 第三步，书写结语，期待对方回信。 [亮点词汇] ①at least至少 ②plan to do计划做某事 ③come true实现 [高分句型] ①The main reason is that there are lots of good books there. (that引导的表语从句) ②I like Beijing Opera because it is more meaningful. (because引导的原因状语从句) 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！4 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$