专题01 读后续写之历险脱困-【妙笔生花】2025年高考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题01 读后续写之历险脱困 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2021 2021年浙江1月卷 人与社会 头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 2020 2020浙江7月卷 人与自然 遭遇北极熊并脱险 【题型分析】 遇险脱困类题材在“读后续写”中往往具有紧张刺激的情节，展现了主人公在面对危机时的勇敢与智慧。这类故事通常围绕危险事件展开，例如野外探险中的迷路、海上遇险、或突如其来的自然灾害等，通过主人公的机智应对和坚定信念完成自救或互助脱困。遇险脱困主题，不仅展现了人性的坚韧和勇敢，还引导读者思考生命的珍贵与人与自然的关系。 遇险脱困类故事通常包含几个典型的情感阶段：初期的紧张与不安、陷入危机后的恐惧与绝望、逐步冷静的思考与反应，以及最终成功脱困后的欣喜与成长。这些情感层层递进，为续写提供了丰富的表达空间。 【写作方法】 在续写遇险脱困主题时，情节构建可以分为以下三步： 第一步：描写环境的恶劣＋不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪 · 情感表现：恐慌、焦虑、绝望 · 肢体动作：全身僵硬、快速呼吸、冷汗直流 第二步：转机描写---描写听见或看见了什么＋情绪描写（希望＋努力） · 行动表现：冷静分析、寻找出路、勇敢行动 · 情感变化：从恐慌到冷静，从无助到坚定 第三步：脱险描写＋情绪描写（感恩＋高兴）+主旨升华 · 情感表现：如释重负、欣喜、感激 · 主题升华：体会生命的美好、珍视家人朋友的陪伴 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） ①恶劣环境来铺垫 1.The sky is overcast with clouds. 天空乌云密布。 2.The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.（天空）天空阴沉，乌云密布。 3.The icy wind was howling, stinging my face.（狂风&寒冷）寒风呼啸，我的脸如针刺。 4.A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky, followed by a crash of thunder. 一道闪电照亮天空，接着一声巨雷。（雷电） 5.Minutes later, there came a downpour/It began to rain cats and dogs, and it was violently beating against the window. 几分钟之后，大雨倾盆而下，大雨猛烈地打在窗户上。(暴雨) 6.My teeth were chattering with cold.我的牙齿冷地直打颤。（寒冷） 7.The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me.水不断上涨，仿佛要把我淹没。（洪水） 8.The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face. 风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。（风&海浪） 9.The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks as he was carried along. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose. 水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。（水流） 10.The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅。 11.It swayed violently in a strong wind. Its roadway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blocked by many people.它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。 12.What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies.更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。 ②危险描述 1.The bear seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. 这只熊这次看上去更加凶猛，疯狂地使劲推栅栏。（人熊大战） 2.A thick burning smell filled the air.空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦味。（火灾：危险描述） 3.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging from the smoke, she clung to him, terrified by the leaping flames.他们两个都在咳嗽，烟熏得他们眼睛疼，她紧紧抓住他，被熊熊的火焰吓坏了。（火灾：危险描述） 4.He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them. 他迅速把衣服浸湿，因为这即将到来的烟雾可能会使他们窒息.（火灾：自救） 5.Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn't get out. He struggled hard but he was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain.（落水） 突然，他陷到淤泥里出不来了。他拼命挣扎，但还是被困住了。他大声呼救，但都是徒劳。 6.He was sitting on the ground, blood running down his face.(独立主格） 他坐在地上，血顺着脸流下来。（受伤） 7.It was getting dark/night was approaching,we were stuck in the middle of nowhere. 夜幕降临，我们被困在一个荒无人烟的地方。（迷路） 8.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. 经过一系列寻找出路的徒劳尝试后，我们感到又累又饿。 9.The wall caving in, and deep cracks opening up in the streets, huge buildings collapsed sending clouds of dust into the air. （动作三连）（地震） 墙塌了下来，街道上出现了深深的裂缝，大楼倒塌，空气中扬起一片尘土。 ③心理感受+情感描写+动作描写来烘托 1.An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here.一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。Grief comes in waves.悲伤如潮水一般涌来。 2.Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body. 看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。（恐惧） 3.I was seized/ overcome by a strong sense of horror. I trembled all over and my palms were sweating.我害怕极了，浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。（恐惧） 4.He panicked, covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudly in fright/fear/ terror.他惊慌失措，用手蒙住眼睛，吓得双手颤抖。（恐惧） 5.My brain was blank, I just wanted to leave this horrible place. 我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。（恐惧） 6.A flood of tension overwhelmed/ swallowed/ flooded over/welled up in her, she could feel her heart racing/ pounding/ beating wildly.她紧张极了，觉得心跳加速。（紧张焦虑） 7.I trembled at the thought of having to make a speech.一想到要发表演讲，我就发抖。（紧张焦虑） 8.Exhausted and hungry as we were, we didn't stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming. 尽管我们又累又饿，我们没有停下来，咬紧牙关继续游。（筋疲力尽） 9.Tears blurred her eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。 10.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him.她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。 11.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. 听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。 12.I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face. 我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负） ①呼叫求助 1.They waved the flag and screamed for help.他们挥舞旗帜，大声呼救。 2.He saw a plane flying overhead. But with no flashlights, he was invisible in the vast ocean.他看见一架飞机从头顶飞过。但是没有手电筒，在浩瀚的海洋中是看不到他的。 ②想到办法 1.Suddenly, it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back. 突然想到我们可以沿着这条路回去。 2.At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked. 在这个关键时刻，Elli抓起几片蒜蓉面包，扔过栅栏。这个方法起了作用。 ③出现转机 1.In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. 在极度的绝望中，我终于看到远处有几艘载有救生员的船朝我们驶来。 2.After what seemed a century, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. 过了很长时间，远处出现了一个光点，我们挥着手，大声呼救。 3.When we were at a loss what to do next, there were shouts rising from the distance.当我们不知道下一步该怎么办时，远处传来喊叫声。 4.To her great joy, the helicopter didn't miss us this time and it landed near the big rock slowly.令她十分欣喜的是，直升机这次没有错过我们，它缓缓地降落在大石头附近。 5.Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. 我们迅速抬头看，很容易找到这些清晰的标记，正是在这些标记的帮助下，我们很快找到了出口。 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华） ①宽慰&感谢 1.To my delight,we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down the mountain with the help of others.令我欣喜的是，在大家的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，马儿被带到山下。 2.I breathed a sigh of relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.(动作链）我如释重负的松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地保住了他。 3.Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude. 我如释重负的笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩。 4.“If I hadn’t been given the first aid, I would have been dead.” I said to everyone gratefully, “It is you who came to my aid and saved my life.” (if I hadn't done sth., I would...虚拟语气）“如果没有得到大家的帮助，我应该已经死了。”我感激地对大家说。“是你们来帮助我们，救了我们一命。” ②感悟升华 1.Cold as the weather was（as表示尽管，形容词提前倒装）, great warmth filled my heart like never before.天气虽然很冷，但是我的心里却感受到前所未有的温暖。 2.Only then did（倒装） I realize that it was unity that （强调句）can conquer whatever  Difficulty you meet.直到那时，我才意识到团结可以战胜任何困难。 3.It is this unique experience that(it is...that强调句）made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we work together/ stay united, we can conquer it.正是这种独特的经历，让我明白，无论我们面临什么困难，只要团结一致，就能战胜它。 4.I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need. 我永远忘不了那种帮助需要帮助的人的好感觉。 5.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。 6.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 7.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up our hope. 正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。 8.As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sooner or later. 只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。 9.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 ①火灾救援 动作链：察觉异常（闻到焦味/听到巨响）→ 迅速确认灾难源头 → 寻找最近的逃生路径 → 迅速逃离 → 找到安全位置 她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味，立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看，发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起手机，冲向大门 → 一边拨打119，一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后，她终于松了一口气。 She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing → She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief. ②地震救援 动作链：听到求救声音→ 确定求救者位置 → 准备救援工具 → 进入救援现场 → 成功救出伤者 → 将伤者带到安全区域 他隐约听到废墟下传来微弱的呼救声→ 立即确定声源 → 找到一根铁杆作为撬杠 → 小心翼翼地挪开瓦砾 → 成功将受困者拉出 → 他背起受困者，迅速撤离到安全区域。 He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble → Immediately located the source → Found a metal rod to use as a lever → Carefully lifted away the debris → Successfully pulled the trapped person out → He carried the person to a safe area. 动作链：察觉到灾难逼近→ 确定最佳逃生路径 → 准备逃生用品 → 按照计划逃生 → 确保安全后停止行动 他感到地面剧烈震动→ 马上确定通往出口的最短路线 → 拿上背包中的急救包和水 → 沿着走廊迅速朝出口方向跑去 → 到达户外空旷地后，他停下来，检查自己是否受伤。 He felt the ground shake violently → Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit → Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack → Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit → After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured. ③落水救援 动作链：意识到无法独自脱险→ 寻找求救工具（电话/信号设备）→ 发送求救信号（拨打电话/发射信号）→ 等待救援 → 确认救援抵达 她意识到自己被困在水中，无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板，用随身携带的手机拨打求救电话 → 等待救援时，她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音，她的心情逐渐平静下来。 She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore → She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade. ④迷路救援 动作链：发现不在预期位置→ 寻找可能的去向 → 询问周围的人 → 联系家人和朋友 → 报警或求助 → 持续寻找 她发现儿子不在卧室里→ 迅速检查了整个房子 → 问了邻居，没人见过他 → 她拿起电话，急切地拨打家人和朋友的号码 → 最终报警，并请求帮助寻找 → 整晚她都在街上四处寻找。 She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom → Quickly checked the entire house → Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him → She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends → Finally reported to the police and asked for help → She spent the whole night searching the streets. 动作链：初步线索失败→ 重整计划寻找 → 新的线索引导 → 途中遇到挫折或意外 → 最终找到目标 他先去常去的咖啡馆找她，但没找到→ 重新思考她可能去的地方 → 突然想到她提过的公园 → 在公园里找了半天，甚至跟一位陌生人发生了争执 → 终于在一个偏僻的长椅上发现了她，她正静静地坐着。 He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there → Reconsidered where she might have gone → Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park → Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger → Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench. ⑤野生动物 动作链：发现不寻常动静→ 定睛观察 → 确认是野生动物 → 慢慢靠近 → 观察动物的行为 → 保持安全距离 他听到草丛里有动静→ 他停下脚步，仔细观察 → 发现是一只小鹿在觅食 → 他放慢脚步，小心翼翼地靠近 → 观察它的每一个动作，不想惊吓到它 → 但始终保持一定的距离。 He heard rustling in the bushes → Stopped walking and observed closely → Saw it was a deer foraging → Slowed his pace and cautiously approached → Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it → But kept a safe distance at all times. 动作链：发现动物受困→ 判断如何解救 → 获取工具或方法 → 接近动物 → 实施救援 → 检查动物状态 他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗，安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上，慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后，他检查了一下它的四肢，确保没有受伤。 He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river → Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sureit wasn’t injured. (1)火灾救援 1.A few minutes later, the firefighters arrived and the fire was soon brought under control. The mother was relieved. 2.He grabbed the ladder, positioned it near the window and climbed toward the boy. When he reached the window, he pushed the screen into the room and coaxed Cody out. 3.He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. Finally he touched something. A shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara towards him. He hugged her into arms and stood. 4.He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch. 5.He started CPR-- the first time he’d ever done so. Soon she opened her eyes and took a breath on her own.     (2)落水救援 1.The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! 2.I struggled clumsily in the water. After a few ups and downs, I reached the edge of the pond. 3.The water was up to his lap, but Alastair was very strong and struggled though waves with me on his back. Finally, we managed to return to the land safely. 4.Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation. 5.Without thinking twice, he sprang in and caught him and quickly carried him to the bank. On the bank, Willie was given first aid and he came to life after a while. (3)受伤救援 1.Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong. 2.She applied a clean towel to the wound and pressed firmly on it to stop the bleeding. 3.Rescuers took Paula to a car on a stretcher and took her to a hospital for emergency treatment. (4)雪中救援 1.The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. 2.Using his skies, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. 3.Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could. 4.However, they knew the clock was ticking and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. (5)迷路救援 1.Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. 2.Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry. (6)冰上救援 1.He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry! What a narrow escape! 2.Amy had a good idea. She took off her scarf and coat to make a rope. She threw it to the boy. Everyone pulled the rope. They pulled the boy out of the pond. 3.After that, Mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. (7)事故救援 1.He balanced himself on the truck, leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally, the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass. 2.In that split second, I lunged forward, extending my arms, ready to catch him and prevent any harm from coming his way. The weight of his little body landing safely in my arms was a feeling I will never forget. The emergency services arrived promptly and took over, ensuring that the baby received the necessary medical attention. 3.Without thinking twice, I grabbed the burger and tossed it in the opposite direction with all my might, hoping to distract the dog. (8)洞穴救援 No sooner had we arrived where the kid was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out without reserve. (9)历险者升华 1.Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before. 2.From then on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety. 3.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory. 4.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 5.From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown world without a fully detailed plan. 6.Grant felt that what the climb had taught him was how fragile and precious life is. 7.This frightening experience left a deep impression on them, which made them realize that they should cherish every moment. 8.It is unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we stay united, we can conquer it. (10)救援者升华 1.I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need. 2.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard. 3.The story shows that having a good command of first aid can make a real difference. 4.Reflecting on the event, I couldn’t help but feel a deep sense satisfaction and fulfillment. It showed me that sometimes, the abilities we possess can have a profound impact on the lives of others. The incident serves as a reminder to always be prepared to lend a helping hand, as you never know when your unique skills might make difference in someone’s life. 【2021浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【2020浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【浙江强基联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期】 好朋友山中偶遇暴风雨，化险为夷返回营地 A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee deep in flowers that covered the meadow（草地）like a quilt. "Cassie! You scared me to death!" Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. "I am sorry," Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn't notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. "Not again!" Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. "We gotta go!" Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, "Let's go back to the campsite." The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down. "It's dangerous! We need shelter now!" Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain. "Cassie, over here!" Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind. Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing. "Smart thinking, Laura," Cassie said, her teeth chattering（打颤）with cold as she pressed her backpack close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof（防水的）model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 P1: "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ P2: As night fell, the storm finally began to die down. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【202402浙江高三名校协作体】 熊孩子保险箱脱险 I worked at a local station of the Berlin fire department. We got an alert(警报) around 8:25 pm that Friday and rushed to the fire engine, where the printout from the dispatcher(调度员) said there was a nine-year-old boy locked in a safe. I asked myself: if it were a safe, would it be airtight? I was aware that it might already be too late by the time we arrived. I had to plan for a bad outcome. On the other hand, if we were in time, how long would it take us to open the safe? I knew it would be an incredibly difficult task. It’s what safes are designed for―not to be opened. It took less than five minutes to reach the property. When I saw a woman crying on the street, I knew the situation was serious. She was the boy’s mother and she led us into the basement. She told us the boy was alive and we started talking to him; he was very calm. We asked how it had happened: during a game of hide and seek with his five-year-old brother, he had thought the safe would be a good place to hide. The boy’s parents had got the house from his mother’s father. The unlocked safe had been there when they moved in and was in an area they didn’t use much. The boy’s little brother had shut the safe, then, when he couldn’t open it again. The only person who knew the combination was the boy’s late grandfather. From the outset, the biggest priority was getting oxygen to the boy. We got oxygen from the hospital. The boy said that he could feel a thin stream of air. I asked his parents if anyone had opened the safe before and they said no. So we had to guess a six-digit code(密码). We started typing them in―but we had to wait 10 minutes between each attempt before we could try again. So quickly we tried them all. No luck. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 We were fully prepared at this point to open the safe by force, starting with a drill. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, just as we started to make the first cut, my workmate typed in the correct code. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题01 读后续写之历险脱困 *** 考情分析 *** 年份 卷别 类别 话题 2021 2021年浙江1月卷 人与社会 头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 2020 2020浙江7月卷 人与自然 遭遇北极熊并脱险 *** 写作指导 *** 【题型分析】 遇险脱困类题材在“读后续写”中往往具有紧张刺激的情节，展现了主人公在面对危机时的勇敢与智慧。这类故事通常围绕危险事件展开，例如野外探险中的迷路、海上遇险、或突如其来的自然灾害等，通过主人公的机智应对和坚定信念完成自救或互助脱困。遇险脱困主题，不仅展现了人性的坚韧和勇敢，还引导读者思考生命的珍贵与人与自然的关系。 遇险脱困类故事通常包含几个典型的情感阶段：初期的紧张与不安、陷入危机后的恐惧与绝望、逐步冷静的思考与反应，以及最终成功脱困后的欣喜与成长。这些情感层层递进，为续写提供了丰富的表达空间。 【写作方法】 在续写遇险脱困主题时，情节构建可以分为以下三步： 第一步：描写环境的恶劣＋不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪 · 情感表现：恐慌、焦虑、绝望 · 肢体动作：全身僵硬、快速呼吸、冷汗直流 第二步：转机描写---描写听见或看见了什么＋情绪描写（希望＋努力） · 行动表现：冷静分析、寻找出路、勇敢行动 · 情感变化：从恐慌到冷静，从无助到坚定 第三步：脱险描写＋情绪描写（感恩＋高兴）+主旨升华 · 情感表现：如释重负、欣喜、感激 · 主题升华：体会生命的美好、珍视家人朋友的陪伴 *** 素材宝库 *** 第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪） ①恶劣环境来铺垫 1.The sky is overcast with clouds. 天空乌云密布。 2.The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.（天空）天空阴沉，乌云密布。 3.The icy wind was howling, stinging my face.（狂风&寒冷）寒风呼啸，我的脸如针刺。 4.A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky, followed by a crash of thunder. 一道闪电照亮天空，接着一声巨雷。（雷电） 5.Minutes later, there came a downpour/It began to rain cats and dogs, and it was violently beating against the window. 几分钟之后，大雨倾盆而下，大雨猛烈地打在窗户上。(暴雨) 6.My teeth were chattering with cold.我的牙齿冷地直打颤。（寒冷） 7.The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me.水不断上涨，仿佛要把我淹没。（洪水） 8.The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face. 风在呼啸着，海浪不停地拍打着她的脸。（风&海浪） 9.The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks as he was carried along. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose. 水流不停地扭动着他，旋转着他，把他蹭在岩石上。水灌进他的嘴里，没过了他的鼻子。（水流） 10.The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.愤怒的海浪拍打向船的一侧，水到处飞溅。 11.It swayed violently in a strong wind. Its roadway was damaged by vehicles. Its access was blocked by many people.它在强风中剧烈摇晃。车辆损坏了道路。许多人堵住了通道。 12.What's worse, he didn't have any food or water with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies.更糟糕的是，他没有任何食物和水，更不要说他的手机和其他日用品。 ②危险描述 1.The bear seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. 这只熊这次看上去更加凶猛，疯狂地使劲推栅栏。（人熊大战） 2.A thick burning smell filled the air.空气中弥漫着浓浓的烧焦味。（火灾：危险描述） 3.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging from the smoke, she clung to him, terrified by the leaping flames.他们两个都在咳嗽，烟熏得他们眼睛疼，她紧紧抓住他，被熊熊的火焰吓坏了。（火灾：危险描述） 4.He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them. 他迅速把衣服浸湿，因为这即将到来的烟雾可能会使他们窒息.（火灾：自救） 5.Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn't get out. He struggled hard but he was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain.（落水） 突然，他陷到淤泥里出不来了。他拼命挣扎，但还是被困住了。他大声呼救，但都是徒劳。 6.He was sitting on the ground, blood running down his face.(独立主格） 他坐在地上，血顺着脸流下来。（受伤） 7.It was getting dark/night was approaching,we were stuck in the middle of nowhere. 夜幕降临，我们被困在一个荒无人烟的地方。（迷路） 8.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired. 经过一系列寻找出路的徒劳尝试后，我们感到又累又饿。 9.The wall caving in, and deep cracks opening up in the streets, huge buildings collapsed sending clouds of dust into the air. （动作三连）（地震） 墙塌了下来，街道上出现了深深的裂缝，大楼倒塌，空气中扬起一片尘土。 ③心理感受+情感描写+动作描写来烘托 1.An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here.一个不祥的念头掠过他的脑海：我要死在这了。Grief comes in waves.悲伤如潮水一般涌来。 2.Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body. 看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。（恐惧） 3.I was seized/ overcome by a strong sense of horror. I trembled all over and my palms were sweating.我害怕极了，浑身发抖，手心都出汗了。（恐惧） 4.He panicked, covered his eyes with his hands and screamed loudly in fright/fear/ terror.他惊慌失措，用手蒙住眼睛，吓得双手颤抖。（恐惧） 5.My brain was blank, I just wanted to leave this horrible place. 我大脑一片空白，只想离开这个恐怖的地方。（恐惧） 6.A flood of tension overwhelmed/ swallowed/ flooded over/welled up in her, she could feel her heart racing/ pounding/ beating wildly.她紧张极了，觉得心跳加速。（紧张焦虑） 7.I trembled at the thought of having to make a speech.一想到要发表演讲，我就发抖。（紧张焦虑） 8.Exhausted and hungry as we were, we didn't stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming. 尽管我们又累又饿，我们没有停下来，咬紧牙关继续游。（筋疲力尽） 9.Tears blurred her eyes.泪水模糊了她的双眼。 10.Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him.她害怕而绝望，向他冲去。 11.Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground. 听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓得愣住了，好像长在了地上。 12.I sobbed bitterly, tasting the salt from the tears that streamed down my face. 我痛苦地抽泣着，尝到脸上流下泪水咸咸的味道。 第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负） ①呼叫求助 1.They waved the flag and screamed for help.他们挥舞旗帜，大声呼救。 2.He saw a plane flying overhead. But with no flashlights, he was invisible in the vast ocean.他看见一架飞机从头顶飞过。但是没有手电筒，在浩瀚的海洋中是看不到他的。 ②想到办法 1.Suddenly, it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back. 突然想到我们可以沿着这条路回去。 2.At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked. 在这个关键时刻，Elli抓起几片蒜蓉面包，扔过栅栏。这个方法起了作用。 ③出现转机 1.In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. 在极度的绝望中，我终于看到远处有几艘载有救生员的船朝我们驶来。 2.After what seemed a century, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. 过了很长时间，远处出现了一个光点，我们挥着手，大声呼救。 3.When we were at a loss what to do next, there were shouts rising from the distance.当我们不知道下一步该怎么办时，远处传来喊叫声。 4.To her great joy, the helicopter didn't miss us this time and it landed near the big rock slowly.令她十分欣喜的是，直升机这次没有错过我们，它缓缓地降落在大石头附近。 5.Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. 我们迅速抬头看，很容易找到这些清晰的标记，正是在这些标记的帮助下，我们很快找到了出口。 第三步：救人之后（感激+升华） ①宽慰&感谢 1.To my delight,we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down the mountain with the help of others.令我欣喜的是，在大家的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，马儿被带到山下。 2.I breathed a sigh of relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.(动作链）我如释重负的松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地保住了他。 3.Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude. 我如释重负的笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩。 4.“If I hadn’t been given the first aid, I would have been dead.” I said to everyone gratefully, “It is you who came to my aid and saved my life.” (if I hadn't done sth., I would...虚拟语气）“如果没有得到大家的帮助，我应该已经死了。”我感激地对大家说。“是你们来帮助我们，救了我们一命。” ②感悟升华 1.Cold as the weather was（as表示尽管，形容词提前倒装）, great warmth filled my heart like never before.天气虽然很冷，但是我的心里却感受到前所未有的温暖。 2.Only then did（倒装） I realize that it was unity that （强调句）can conquer whatever  Difficulty you meet.直到那时，我才意识到团结可以战胜任何困难。 3.It is this unique experience that(it is...that强调句）made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we work together/ stay united, we can conquer it.正是这种独特的经历，让我明白，无论我们面临什么困难，只要团结一致，就能战胜它。 4.I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need. 我永远忘不了那种帮助需要帮助的人的好感觉。 5.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。 6.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 7.It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we mustn’t give up our hope. 正是这种独特的经历让我明白了我们所面临的任何困难，我们都不能放弃希望。 8.As long as we don’t give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely make a success sooner or later. 只要我们不放弃希望，不尽一切努力克服一切困难，我们迟早一定会取得成功的。 9.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。 *** 片段写作 *** ①火灾救援 动作链：察觉异常（闻到焦味/听到巨响）→ 迅速确认灾难源头 → 寻找最近的逃生路径 → 迅速逃离 → 找到安全位置 她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味，立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看，发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起手机，冲向大门 → 一边拨打119，一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后，她终于松了一口气。 She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing → She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief. ②地震救援 动作链：听到求救声音→ 确定求救者位置 → 准备救援工具 → 进入救援现场 → 成功救出伤者 → 将伤者带到安全区域 他隐约听到废墟下传来微弱的呼救声→ 立即确定声源 → 找到一根铁杆作为撬杠 → 小心翼翼地挪开瓦砾 → 成功将受困者拉出 → 他背起受困者，迅速撤离到安全区域。 He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble → Immediately located the source → Found a metal rod to use as a lever → Carefully lifted away the debris → Successfully pulled the trapped person out → He carried the person to a safe area. 动作链：察觉到灾难逼近→ 确定最佳逃生路径 → 准备逃生用品 → 按照计划逃生 → 确保安全后停止行动 他感到地面剧烈震动→ 马上确定通往出口的最短路线 → 拿上背包中的急救包和水 → 沿着走廊迅速朝出口方向跑去 → 到达户外空旷地后，他停下来，检查自己是否受伤。 He felt the ground shake violently → Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit → Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack → Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit → After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured. ③落水救援 动作链：意识到无法独自脱险→ 寻找求救工具（电话/信号设备）→ 发送求救信号（拨打电话/发射信号）→ 等待救援 → 确认救援抵达 她意识到自己被困在水中，无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板，用随身携带的手机拨打求救电话 → 等待救援时，她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音，她的心情逐渐平静下来。 She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore → She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade. ④迷路救援 动作链：发现不在预期位置→ 寻找可能的去向 → 询问周围的人 → 联系家人和朋友 → 报警或求助 → 持续寻找 她发现儿子不在卧室里→ 迅速检查了整个房子 → 问了邻居，没人见过他 → 她拿起电话，急切地拨打家人和朋友的号码 → 最终报警，并请求帮助寻找 → 整晚她都在街上四处寻找。 She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom → Quickly checked the entire house → Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him → She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends → Finally reported to the police and asked for help → She spent the whole night searching the streets. 动作链：初步线索失败→ 重整计划寻找 → 新的线索引导 → 途中遇到挫折或意外 → 最终找到目标 他先去常去的咖啡馆找她，但没找到→ 重新思考她可能去的地方 → 突然想到她提过的公园 → 在公园里找了半天，甚至跟一位陌生人发生了争执 → 终于在一个偏僻的长椅上发现了她，她正静静地坐着。 He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there → Reconsidered where she might have gone → Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park → Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger → Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench. ⑤野生动物 动作链：发现不寻常动静→ 定睛观察 → 确认是野生动物 → 慢慢靠近 → 观察动物的行为 → 保持安全距离 他听到草丛里有动静→ 他停下脚步，仔细观察 → 发现是一只小鹿在觅食 → 他放慢脚步，小心翼翼地靠近 → 观察它的每一个动作，不想惊吓到它 → 但始终保持一定的距离。 He heard rustling in the bushes → Stopped walking and observed closely → Saw it was a deer foraging → Slowed his pace and cautiously approached → Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it → But kept a safe distance at all times. 动作链：发现动物受困→ 判断如何解救 → 获取工具或方法 → 接近动物 → 实施救援 → 检查动物状态 他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗，安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上，慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后，他检查了一下它的四肢，确保没有受伤。 He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river → Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sureit wasn’t injured. *** 必背佳句 *** (1)火灾救援 1.A few minutes later, the firefighters arrived and the fire was soon brought under control. The mother was relieved. 2.He grabbed the ladder, positioned it near the window and climbed toward the boy. When he reached the window, he pushed the screen into the room and coaxed Cody out. 3.He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. Finally he touched something. A shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara towards him. He hugged her into arms and stood. 4.He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch. 5.He started CPR-- the first time he’d ever done so. Soon she opened her eyes and took a breath on her own.     (2)落水救援 1.The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape! 2.I struggled clumsily in the water. After a few ups and downs, I reached the edge of the pond. 3.The water was up to his lap, but Alastair was very strong and struggled though waves with me on his back. Finally, we managed to return to the land safely. 4.Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation. 5.Without thinking twice, he sprang in and caught him and quickly carried him to the bank. On the bank, Willie was given first aid and he came to life after a while. (3)受伤救援 1.Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong. 2.She applied a clean towel to the wound and pressed firmly on it to stop the bleeding. 3.Rescuers took Paula to a car on a stretcher and took her to a hospital for emergency treatment. (4)雪中救援 1.The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow. 2.Using his skies, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle. 3.Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could. 4.However, they knew the clock was ticking and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him. (5)迷路救援 1.Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. 2.Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry. (6)冰上救援 1.He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry! What a narrow escape! 2.Amy had a good idea. She took off her scarf and coat to make a rope. She threw it to the boy. Everyone pulled the rope. They pulled the boy out of the pond. 3.After that, Mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk. (7)事故救援 1.He balanced himself on the truck, leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally, the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass. 2.In that split second, I lunged forward, extending my arms, ready to catch him and prevent any harm from coming his way. The weight of his little body landing safely in my arms was a feeling I will never forget. The emergency services arrived promptly and took over, ensuring that the baby received the necessary medical attention. 3.Without thinking twice, I grabbed the burger and tossed it in the opposite direction with all my might, hoping to distract the dog. (8)洞穴救援 No sooner had we arrived where the kid was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out without reserve. (9)历险者升华 1.Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before. 2.From then on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety. 3.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory. 4.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 5.From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown world without a fully detailed plan. 6.Grant felt that what the climb had taught him was how fragile and precious life is. 7.This frightening experience left a deep impression on them, which made them realize that they should cherish every moment. 8.It is unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we stay united, we can conquer it. (10)救援者升华 1.I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need. 2.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard. 3.The story shows that having a good command of first aid can make a real difference. 4.Reflecting on the event, I couldn’t help but feel a deep sense satisfaction and fulfillment. It showed me that sometimes, the abilities we possess can have a profound impact on the lives of others. The incident serves as a reminder to always be prepared to lend a helping hand, as you never know when your unique skills might make difference in someone’s life. *** 高考真题精讲 *** 【2021浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意： 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Paragraph 1 It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Dad was summoned less, it seemed, in expectation of practical help than to make sure he didn't miss out on the spectacle. I heard him propose calling the fire department." Stay tuned," said she'd mentioned she was going to upload the video to Facebook but it was only then I realized she d been filming the whole time. The video cuts before my rescue-Dad got me to push my head farther into the pumpkin so Mom could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail. I emerged with squash-conditioned hair, a sore chin and my nose plugged with pulp. Paragraph 2 The video was posted on the Monday before Halloween. By the end of that day, it had over 1.000 views. People asked my mom to put it on YouTube, and by Wednesday morning we were getting 5:00 a.m. calls from TV breakfast shows and then the international media-the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went on a youth camp, I was recognized by children I'd never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passersby and trick-or-treaters would and ask, "Which is Rachel's pumpkin?" before taking selfies with it. [分析] 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者家有在万圣节雕刻南瓜的传统，今年也不例外，家里所有人都在厨房的餐桌上辛勤地工作着，而作者的妈妈则在拍摄一年一度的活动。结果作者将头伸进了南瓜里，被卡住了,无论如何也无法挣脱出来，妈妈却趁机拍下了这一幕，后来作者得救，视频也被上传到网上走红，这段视频开始获得数十万的点击量。 [详解] 1.段落续写: ①由第一段首句内容°虽然时间只过去了五、六分钟，但还是感觉要长得多。"可知，第一段可描写作者是如何在爸爸的帮助下得救的。②由第二段首句内容”这段视频是在万圣节前的周一发布的。"可知，第一段可描写作者头被卡在南瓜里这段视频在网上的走红情况，以及视频走红对作者家和作者的影响。 2续写线索: 爸爸被喊来帮忙妈妈拍下了全过程:作者得救-视频被上传一视频走红一视频对作者家和作者的影响。 3.词汇激活 行为类:确保:make sure / guarantee 打算做某事:be going to do sth./ intend to do sth.出来:emerge / come out 情绪类:实际:practical / useful 出名:become a minor celebrity / be famous[点睛] [高分句型1] When I went on a youth camp, I was recognized by children I'd never met.(运用了when引导时间状语从句) [高分句型2] Passersby and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask. "Which is Rachel's pumpkin?R before taking selfies with it.(运用了动名词作宾语) 【2020浙江1月卷】 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada. Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When I'm face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes，that is easier said than done. This was one of those times. As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread. The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts. Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard，and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子). I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter(相遇), I took some pictures of the bear. Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear's punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn't hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and，through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar(吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes. 注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph1: A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. ________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph2: At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again. At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear. 【解析】 【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归”。无奈之下，作者求助营地管理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的眼睛，不料这使熊变得更加暴躁，在千钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。 【详解】1.段落续写： 由第一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。”可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。 由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。 2.续写线索：熊返回营地——紧张害怕——用面包攻击——直升机赶到——快速登上飞机——熊把篱笆推到——拍下熊“打劫”的画面 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①激怒：anger/provoke / enrage ②抓起：grab/snatch up ③拿出：take out/fetch out 情绪类 ①疯狂的：mad/crazy ②兴奋的：excited/thrilled 【点睛】 [高分句型1] then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly.（for引导的原因状语从句） [高分句型2] My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. （现在分词作状语） [高分句型3] Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. (once引导时间状语从句和形容词作状语) *** 名校模拟题提升练 *** 【浙江强基联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期】 好朋友山中偶遇暴风雨，化险为夷返回营地 A high-pitched scream stopped Laura Douglas in her tracks. Spinning around on the narrow dirt path, she thought that her cousin Cassie was in danger. Instead, Cassie was knee deep in flowers that covered the meadow（草地）like a quilt. "Cassie! You scared me to death!" Laura scolded, her voice echoing through the meadow. "I am sorry," Cassie, absorbed in her photography, didn't notice the thick fog rolling in, consuming the nearby mountains. "Not again!" Laura complained, her eyes shifting to the approaching clouds. "We gotta go!" Cassie's focus remained on her camera, capturing the short-lived beauty of the moment. Laura tied a red scarf around her hair, "Let's go back to the campsite." The girls quickly ran down the winding path, the meadow now covered by a thick fog and a steady, cold rain. The road turned slippery, and they had to move slowly to avoid sliding down. "It's dangerous! We need shelter now!" Cassie screamed after a loud crack of thunder, the storm's strength increasing rapidly. Laura's keen eyes found a small cave in the rock face, partly hidden by overhanging branches. It wasn't much, but it offered a chance to escape the rain. "Cassie, over here!" Laura called out, her voice barely carrying over the wind. Cassie, wet and shaking, stumbled towards the place of Laura's voice. As she approached, she could see the shelter. It wasn't perfect, but it was better than nothing. "Smart thinking, Laura," Cassie said, her teeth chattering（打颤）with cold as she pressed her backpack close to her chest. The backpack, a tough and waterproof（防水的）model, had been a gift from her father, an experienced hiker who had insisted on its numerous pockets and sections for emergency supplies. Little did they know, his advice would prove invaluable on this day. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 P1: "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ P2: As night fell, the storm finally began to die down. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 "Check your backpack," Laura instructed, her voice being hopeful. "We might have something that can help us start a fire." Cassie nodded, her fingers trembling(独立主格) as she unzipped the side pocket of her backpack状语从句. She was relieved to find a flashlight, a compact emergency blanket and a small, waterproof pouch containing waterproof matches非谓语动词作后置定语. "Bingo!" she exclaimed, her voice filled with a mix of surprise and relief(独立主格). They quickly set to work, using the waterproof matches to ignite a small fire with the dry leaves and twigs(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) Laura had collected(定语从句). The survival blanket was spread out, providing a thin layer of insulation against the cold, damp ground(非谓语动词做后置定语). As night fell(状语从句), the storm finally began to die down. The girls, exhausted but determined, decided to make a move. They knew the trail would be risky in the dark(宾语从句), but staying in the shelter wasn't an option either. Using the flashlight(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作), they carefully navigated the slippery path, following the markers(非谓语动词短语做伴随动作) they had set earlier(定语从句). The fog had lifted, and the moon provided just enough light to see by. Hours later, they finally reached the edge of the forest. The lights of the campsite were a welcome sight. Cassie grinned, her teeth no longer chattering(独立主格), "We made it back." Laura nodded, her eyes meeting Cassie's(独立主格). Their adventure had been terrifying, but it had also been a testament to their bond and their survival skills. And as they sat by the fire(状语从句), sipping hot chocolate(非谓语做伴随动作), they knew they would never forget the day they had faced the storm together(定语从句).  【202402浙江高三名校协作体】 熊孩子保险箱脱险 I worked at a local station of the Berlin fire department. We got an alert(警报) around 8:25 pm that Friday and rushed to the fire engine, where the printout from the dispatcher(调度员) said there was a nine-year-old boy locked in a safe. I asked myself: if it were a safe, would it be airtight? I was aware that it might already be too late by the time we arrived. I had to plan for a bad outcome. On the other hand, if we were in time, how long would it take us to open the safe? I knew it would be an incredibly difficult task. It’s what safes are designed for―not to be opened. It took less than five minutes to reach the property. When I saw a woman crying on the street, I knew the situation was serious. She was the boy’s mother and she led us into the basement. She told us the boy was alive and we started talking to him; he was very calm. We asked how it had happened: during a game of hide and seek with his five-year-old brother, he had thought the safe would be a good place to hide. The boy’s parents had got the house from his mother’s father. The unlocked safe had been there when they moved in and was in an area they didn’t use much. The boy’s little brother had shut the safe, then, when he couldn’t open it again. The only person who knew the combination was the boy’s late grandfather. From the outset, the biggest priority was getting oxygen to the boy. We got oxygen from the hospital. The boy said that he could feel a thin stream of air. I asked his parents if anyone had opened the safe before and they said no. So we had to guess a six-digit code(密码). We started typing them in―but we had to wait 10 minutes between each attempt before we could try again. So quickly we tried them all. No luck. 注意： 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 We were fully prepared at this point to open the safe by force, starting with a drill. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Then, just as we started to make the first cut, my workmate typed in the correct code. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 We were fully prepared at this point to open the safe by force, starting with a drill. We taught the boy to put his hands over his ears while we were drilling and to take them off only when we shook the safe. He was sweaty and his clothes were wet from breathing in that tiny space for so long. But he was so calm the whole time, following our commands and talking to us. We made a hole in the back. It was dangerous, but I was confident that we could get him out safely. Then, just as we started to make the first cut, my workmate typed in the correct code. We’d asked the mother again to write down any significant date and it turned out to be her brother’s birthday. We were amazed. We had been trying for three hours and now all of a sudden this little boy was standing in front of me, rubbing his eyes. His parents were so happy that he was out. He had a hug with his tearful mother, a checkup from the doctor, and then went for a shower happily. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$