UNIT 4 Section Ⅴ Writing（课件PPT）-【优化指导】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册（译林版2020）

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For many months he had admired a beautiful sports car in a dealer's showroom, and knowing his father could well afford it, he told him that was all he wanted. As Graduation Day approached, the young man awaited signs that his father had purchased the car. Finally, on the morning of his graduation, his father called him into his private study. His father told him how proud he was to have such a fine son, and told him how much he loved him. He handed his son a beautiful wrapped gift box. Curious, but somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and found a lovely, leather­bound dictionary, with the young man's name embossed in gold. Angrily, he raised his voice to his father and said, “With all your money you give me a dictionary？” He then stormed out of the house, leaving the dictionary. Many years passed and the young man was very successful in business. He had a beautiful home and a wonderful family, but realizing his father was very old, he thought perhaps he should go to see him. He had not seen him since that graduation day. Before he could make the arrangements, he received a telegram telling him his father had passed away, and willed all of his possessions to his son. He needed to come home immediately and take care of things. When he arrived at his father's house, sudden sadness and regret filled his heart. He began to search through his father's important papers and saw the still new dictionary, just as he had left it years ago. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Paragraph 1： With tears, he opened the dictionary and began to turn the pages.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2： How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected？　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ________________________________________________________ [写作步骤] 第一步：仔细审题 1．本文的写作任务是读后续写。 2．本文是关于发生在作者和父亲之间的故事。 3．本文要求续写故事的结局和故事所引发的道理。 第二步：细读全文 1．Time: Before the author's Graduation Day. 2．Place: Father's private study. 3．People：Father and the author. 4．Event：The author wanted his father to buy him a sports car, but his father sent him a dictionary. The author left home angrily and didn't visit his father until he got the news that his father had passed away. 第三步：精心谋篇 1．续写第一段：作者在父亲给自己的一本词典里发现了父亲给作者买的汽车的钥匙及此时作者的感受。 (1)备用关键词：the dictionary，dealer's，sports car，his graduation，his father。 (2)构思要点句：翻读词典时，车钥匙滑落；发现钥匙附带的标签上的汽车经销商的名字、他的毕业日期和附言“已全额付款”；后悔当初没意识到包装起来的父爱。 2．续写第二段：作者经历的故事所引发的道理。 (1)备用关键词：regret，realize。 (2)构思要点句：不要等到意识到自己做错了才后悔；不要因期望得到你没有的而毁了你所拥有的；要记住你现在所拥有的就在你曾经渴望得到的东西当中；有时候，我们意识不到我们拥有的好运或者是本可能拥有的，这是因为我们所期待的“包装”不同；也许表面上的霉运实际上会是等着你去打开的一扇门。 第四步：初写成文 Paragraph 1： 1．翻读词典时，钥匙从词典的后面滑落。 As he was reading, a car key ____________ the back of the dictionary. 2．钥匙上有一个附带汽车经销商的名字的标签，就是销售他曾渴望得到的跑车的同一个经销商。 It had a tag with _________________,the same dealer who __________________________________． 3．标签上有他的毕业日期和附言“已全额付款”。 There was __________________________ on the tag, and the words “PAID IN FULL”． 4．一位父亲给了他儿子伟大的爱，但是当他感受到那种被包装起来的父爱时为时已晚。 A father gave great love to his son, but ________________________ that packaged love from his father. Paragraph 2： 5．不要等到意识到自己做错了才后悔。 _______________________________ what you did is wrong. 6．不要因期望得到你没有的而毁了你所拥有的。 Do not spoil _____________ by hoping for what you don't have. 7．要记住你现在所拥有的就在你曾经渴望得到的东西当中。 Remember that _________________ was once among the things you only hoped for. 8．有时候，我们意识不到我们拥有的好运或者是本可能拥有的，这是因为我们所期待的“包装”不同。 Sometimes we ______________________________ we have or we could have because we expect “the packaging” to be different. 9．也许表面上的霉运实际上会是等着你去打开的一扇门。 Maybe the bad fortune in fact is the door _______________________ _______________． 第五步：润色升级 1．把要点3中的前半句改为倒装句。 _________________________________________, and the words “PAID IN FULL”． 2．把要点4中的前半句改为感叹句。 ___________________________________________! But it was too late for him to feel that packaged love from his father. 3．把要点6中的hoping改为高级词汇。 hoping→________ 4．把要点9中的主语部分改成名词性从句。 ___________________________________ may in fact be the door that is just waiting to be opened. 第六步：复查定稿 With tears, he opened the dictionary and began to turn the pages. As he was reading, a car key dropped from the back of the dictionary. It had a tag with the dealer's name, the same dealer who sold the sports car he had desired. On the tag was the date of his graduation, and the words “PAID IN FULL”. How great the love a father gave to his son! But it was too late for him to feel that packaged love from his father. How many times do we miss blessings because they are not packaged as we expected? Do not regret until you realize what you did is wrong. Do not spoil what you have by desiring what you don't have, but remember that what you now have was once among the things you only hoped for. Sometimes we don't realize the good fortune we have or we could have because we expect “the packaging” to be different. What may appear as bad fortune may in fact be the door that is just waiting to be opened. $$