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沪教牛津版九年级上学期书面表达范文背诵
Passage 1
假如你是李华,你收到了网友韩梅梅的来信。就读九年级的她在信中陈述了她的困惑。请
根据以下思维导图,进行回信。
写作要求: 1. 紧扣主题和提示写作,可适当拓展。
2. 词数 80左右(信件的开头已给出,不计入词数) 。
3. 不得透露学校名称以及个人姓名等信息,否则不予评分。
【满分范文必背】
Dear Meimei,
I truly understand the troubles you are currently facing. You said you were worried about your
studies and couldn’t fall asleep. You have trouble making friends and feel lonely. Firstly, I suggest that
you don’t have to worry about studying. As long as you work hard, no matter what your grades are,
you must willingly accept them. If your grades are not very ideal, you can continue to study hard in
the future. Secondly, for making friends, I suggest you join some clubs. You can make some friends
who share common interests with you. Finally, I believe that as long as you believe in yourself, you
will definitely succeed.
Yours,
Li Hua
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心……
②have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①As long as you work hard, no matter what your grades are, you must willingly accept them. (as long
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as引导的条件状语从句)
②You can make some friends who share common interests with you. (含有限定性定语从句的复合
句)
Passage 2
假设你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到交换生 Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。
请根据以下提示写一封回信,说明 Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
要求:
1. 回信应包括所有要点;
2. 词数在 80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息,否则不予评分。
Ben’s problems You advice and reasons
朋友少,跟同学相处不好, 感觉孤单
1. 参加学校社团——认识更多朋友
2. ?(补充)
中文难学,不了解中国文化
1. 多阅读中文故事、新闻——在运用中学习中文
2. ?(补充)
【满分范文必背】
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to the exchange life in the middle
school.
You mentioned feeling lonely due to having few friends and difficulties with classmates. Joining
school clubs can be a great way to meet more people. Moreover, try to actively participate in class
discussions and group activities. This will help you bond with your classmates. You also find Chinese
challenging and are unfamiliar with Chinese culture. Besides reading Chinese stories and news,
watching Chinese movies and TV shows can help you improve your language skills and understand
the culture better.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth做某事有困难
②due to由于
③participate in参与
[高分句型]
①Joining school clubs can be a great way to meet more people.(动名词作主语)
②I hope these suggestions can help you.(宾语从句)
Passage 3
假如你是学校的心理咨询老师 Miss Yang,你收到一封来自学生张华的来信,请根据信
件的内容和下面的提示给他回信。
Dear Miss Yang,
I’m a student of Grade Nine. Next term, I will have an important exam. My parents really hope I
can enter a good senior high school and they often make me study all day long. I feel tired every day.
What’s worse, I had a quarrel with my best friend last week because I told him not to spend too much
time playing computer games. At the same time, I am so worried about my grade that I eat a lot of
junk food and can’t sleep well at night. So I put on a lot of weight and become very fat. What can I
do? Please help me.
Best wishes.
Love from
Zhang Hua
提示:
要求:
1.表达清楚,上下文连贯:
2.要点齐全并适当发挥:
3.词数:100词左右:
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4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
【满分范文必背】
Dear Zhang Hua,
I got your letter this week. And l know your trouble now. According to your letter, I learnt that
you are concerned too much about your exams and that results in your worries. To deal with this
problem, I suggest you following my ideas below.
First of all, communication is the key to reducing the pressure from your parents. You should tell
them your worries and get more support from them. You had better ask them not to put too much
pressure on you. Besides, hard work is always necessary and essential since you expect good
achievements in exams. On the other hand, health is the same important for a good score. Therefore,
you had better do some sports after school to keep you healthy as well as make you relaxed. More
importantly, good health and achievements can never go without good sleeping. To sleep well, why
not drink a cup of milk before going to bed?
That’s all for my advice.
Best wishes.
Love from
Miss Yang
[亮点词汇]
①according to根据
②deal with处理
③on the other hand另一方面
④had better do最好做……
[高分句型]
①I learnt that you are concerned too much about your exams and that results in your worries.(宾语从
句)
②Therefore, you had better do some sports after school to keep you healthy as well as make you
relaxed.(动词不定式作目的状语)
Passage 4
现在越来越多的中学生喜欢在论坛上发帖,谈论自己的观点。假设你是一名叫李华的中学
生,你在学校贴吧上看到一些有关谈论如何和父母沟通的帖子。现请你也发一个帖子,分享自
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己的经验。内容包括:
与父母沟通
改变前:
1.经常因为学习、使用手机、生活习惯等问题吵架
2.感觉很郁闷
3.没有站在家长的角度考虑问题
改变后:
1.寻求双方可以接纳的方法
2.(请你补充)
3.(请你补充)
注意:
(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。
(2)语言连贯,词数 100左右;
【满分范文必背】
I am a student of Grade 9. I used to have a lot of problems communicating with my parents. We
often quarreled about study, using mobile phones and living habits. I felt really depressed and I never
thought from their perspective.
However, things have changed. Now we seek solutions that both sides can accept. I started to
listen to their opinions patiently and express my feelings and needs clearly. I also show my respect and
gratitude to them more often. Through these efforts, our relationship has improved a lot and we can
understand each other better. Let’s all try to communicate better with our parents.
[亮点词汇]
①have problems doing sth.做某事有问题
②quarrel about因……争吵
③feel depressed感到郁闷
④from one’s perspective从某人的角度
⑤seek solutions寻求解决方案
⑥listen to倾听
[高分句型]
Now we seek solutions that both sides can accept.(定语从句)
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Passage 5
开学以来,七年级新生在校园生活中遇到了一些困惑。为了帮助他们解决这些困惑,你校
英语报向全校九年级同学开展以“How to solve problems”为题的征稿活动。假如你是李华,作为
初三的学长,请你从个人经历出发,根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
要点:
1.你曾经遇到的一个问题(如学习压力过大、人际关系困扰……)以及你是如何解决这个问
题的?(请至少写出一个解决办法)
2.对于初中的学习生活,你对七年级新生有什么建议?(请至少列出三个建议)
3. 你对七年级新生的美好祝福。
注意:
1.词数 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实校名和姓名;
4.条理清晰,语义通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
【满分范文必背】
How to solve problems
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 7. Actually, starting middle school life is a big
challenge for you. As your schoolmate, a student of Grade 9, I’d like to tell you something to make
your school life more meaningful.
I once worried much about my study, because my parents just focused on marks. Therefore, it
caused bitter arguments between us. Finally, I opened my heart to them and we had a talk with each
other. Luckily, it worked.
In order to help you live a happy life, I’d love to give you some suggestions. First, it’s important
for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to do exercise every day and have a balanced diet. Second, you
had better develop your study skills. For example, you can have a study plan. Third, you should be
thankful for your parents because they are the persons who are always behind you.
I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.
[亮点词汇]
①worried about担心
②focus on关注
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③in order to为了
④have a balanced diet均衡饮食
[高分句型]
Third, you should be thankful for your parents because they are the persons who are always behind
you.(because引导原因状语从句;who引导定语从句)
Passage 6
近期,关于家庭父母与孩子间冲突的新闻频现媒体。针对这一现象,某英文报社就“How to
deal with conflicts (矛盾) between parents and children”发起了一个专题征文活动。假设你是李华,
请根据下表中的内容提示,结合你自己的观点,用英语写一篇小短文,发表在学校“英语角”上。
原因 解决办法
1)父母与孩子之间缺少交流与沟通;
2)父母对孩子期待过高,过分严格;
3)……
1)加强交流与沟通, 消除误解;
2)……;
3)……
写作要求:
1)包含所有提示内容,并可做适当发挥。
2)条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,意思连贯,书写规范。
3)字数:80字左右,短文的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:misunderstanding n. 误解 ; badly influence 严重影响;
expect too much期待过高
【满分范文必背】
How to deal with conflicts between parents and children
Recently, news about the conflicts between parents and children frequently appear on the media.
Why are the relationship between parents and children becoming so serious? It’s my pleasure to share
my opinions with you.
For one thing, they are lack of communication, so it’s of great importance for parents to create
more chances to talk with their children so that they can understand each other better. For another,
because parents are always strict with their children and expect too much from them, it will cause
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misunderstanding between them. Therefore, it’s necessary for parents to build up friendly and close
relationship with their kids before expressing their expectations. Last but not least, many parents are
so busy at work that they don’t have time to spend with their children. So it’s necessary for parents to
spare more time for their children to build up close relationship.
In short, to solve the problems, love and communication are very important.
[亮点词汇]
①share…with…与……分享……
②lack of缺乏
③be strict with…对……要求严格
④build up建立
⑤last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, many parents are so busy at work that they don’t have time to spend with their
children.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
Passage 7
假设你是心理咨询老师 Anna,最近你收到了一封来自初三学生李华的邮件,内容如下:
Dear Anna,
My name is Li Hua. I am a Grade 9 student in Xinhua High School. Recently, I feel really upset.
School work is too much and I have no time to relax myself. But every day when I go back home
feeling tired, my parents keep nagging (唠叨 ) about everything, such as cellphones, homework,
exams… It seems that they don’t understand me at all. I feel so breathless that I just avoid talking to
them. But this makes our relationship even worse. I don’t know what to do. Can you give me some
advice?
请你针对李华提出的问题,给他回信(不少于 100词)。对其处境表示理解并给出至少三
条建议(可从学会放松、与父母沟通等方面给出建议)。
【满分范文必背】
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn about your problems. It’s normal to feel overwhelmed with school work, so
don’t worry too much. Here are a few suggestions that might help you.
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First, find time to relax, even if it’s just for a short walk or listening to your favorite music, as
these can reduce stress. Second, try talking to your parents calmly about how you feel. Sometimes,
they might not realize how their words affect you. Third, manage your time effectively. Prioritize your
tasks and break them into smaller steps. Lastly, balance your study with leisure activities to keep your
mind fresh. Remember, communication and self-care are important.
I hope these tips will help you feel better and improve your situation. Look forward to your
reply.
Yours,
Anna
[亮点词汇]
① feel overwhelmed感到压力沉重
② communication and self-care沟通与自我关怀
③ look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①First, find time to relax, even if it’s just for a short walk or listening to your favorite music, as these
can reduce stress.(让步状语从句,原因状语从句)
②Second, try talking to your parents calmly about how you feel.(宾语从句)
Passage 8
你是英语校报编辑李华。“校报收到同学 Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你
根据以下提示写一封回信,针对 Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben’s problems Your advice Reasons
与父母沟通有困难
列出分歧 寻求共识
…… ……
英语学习跟不上
做好计划 提高效率
…… ……
注意:
(1)回信应包括所有要点;
(2)词数 80左右(回信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
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(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何信息,否则不予评分。
【满分范文必背】
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having some trouble these days. In your letter you said that you
have difficulties in communicating with your parents and can’t keep up with your English study.
For the first problem, you can list the differences between you and your parents, and then
actively seek common ground through open discussions. This can help you understand each other
better and make compromises. As for keeping up with English, creating a detailed study plan can
really help. Prioritize your tasks and focus on areas where you need the most improvement, this will
allow you to study more efficiently. And don’t forget to review regularly.
I hope these suggestions are helpful.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
[亮点词汇]
① seek common ground寻求共识
② make compromise达成妥协
③ as for至于
[高分句型]
Prioritize your tasks and focus on areas where you need the most improvement, this will allow you to
study more efficiently.(定语从句)