读后续写社会交往之善意传递课件-2025届高三英语二轮复习

社会交往之善意传递 主题续写 Free talk What acts do you think are considered to be “kindness”? 2 Brainstorm Can you think of as many words related to kindness as possible? kind-hearted merciful humane（善良的） accommodating（乐于助人的） warm-hearted affable（和蔼可亲的） pitiful ...... 3 常见情节 偶然事件 相识结缘 心心相传 遭遇困境 遗失物品 贵人相助 失而复得 心有所感 礼物回馈 建立关系 4 情景回顾 偶然事件：遭遇困境 1. 我的车在公路上抛锚了。 2. 如果她不及时接受治疗，就将失去她年轻的生命。 3. 当我们把所有杂货搬到车里后，无论我怎么努力，车都无法启动。 My car broke down on the highway. If she didn’t get timely treatment, she would lose her young life. Once we had loaded all the groceries into the car, it wouldn’t start no matter how hard I tried. 5 情景回顾 偶然事件：遭遇困境 4. 他需要给他妈妈打电话，告诉她发生了什么事，但他的手机没电了。 He needed to call and tell his mother what had happened, but his cellphone battery was dead. 6 情景回顾 偶然事件：遗失物品 5. 那正是我一年前被偷的雨伞。 6. 不幸的是，由于自己的粗心，她把身份证弄丢了。 7. 我打了大约一个小时的电话，试图找到我的戒指。 It was my umbrella that was stolen a year ago. Unfortunately, she had lost her ID card due to her carelessness. I spent an hour or so making telephone calls, trying to locate my ring. 7 情景回顾 偶然事件：遗失物品 8. 我说：“我的钱包在一元店丢了, 我一定是把它落在购物车里了。” 9. 现在他确信，钥匙一定是掉在了店内的某个地方。 “I lost my purse in Dollar Store. I must have left it in the cart,” I said. Now he was sure the key must have been dropped somewhere inside the store. 8 情景回顾 相识结缘：贵人相助 10. 听到我说的话，他伸向他的口袋，快速地掏出一卷钱，如释重负地说：“你就是我要找的人。 11. 我正打算给他们一些钱作为回报，结果他们深呼吸，一句话都没说转身就走了。 12. 我抬起头，想弄清到底是谁在帮我。 Hearing what I said, he reached into his pocket, swiftly pulled out the roll of the bills and said with relief, "It's you that are the person we are seeking." I was about to give them some bills in return when they took a deep breath, turned around and made their way quickly without uttering a word. I looked up, trying to figure out who it was that was helping me. 9 情景回顾 相识结缘：贵人相助 13. 如果没有她的帮助，我不可能穿着高跟鞋走回家。 14. 当一切都显得无望时，一位老人走过来，给了我一盘鸡肉、饼干和一些水。 Without her help, I would never have made it home in my high heels. When everything seemed hopeless, an elderly man came over and gave me a plate of chicken, biscuits and some water. 10 情景回顾 相识结缘：失而复得 15. 小女孩把玩偶抱得更紧，更贴近她的心。 16. 她不仅找到了我丢失的钱包，还把它还给了我。 17. 他的手套被一个顾客捡到了，现在正在收银台后面等着他呢。 The little girl held the doll tighter and closer to her heart. Not only did she find my lost wallet, but she returned it to me. His gloves, found by a customer, were now waiting for him behind the cashier’s desk. 11 情景回顾 相识结缘：失而复得 18. 令我后悔的是，一看到丢失的钱，我太激动了，一直表达我的感激之情以至于忘记了及时问他们的名字。 To my regret, on seeing the lost money I was too thrilled and kept expressing my gratitude to them without asking their names in a timely manner. 12 情景回顾 心心相传：心有所感 19. 一股暖流涌入心中。 20.善良是联结社会的金链。 21.所以我们应该感激这个世界，在这里我们需要互相帮助，才能得以生存。 A wave of warmth welled up in my heart. kindness is the golden chain linking society. So we should be grateful to the world, where we need each other to get by. 13 情景回顾 心心相传：心有所感 22. 我对生活又恢复了信心，我工作比以前更加努力，我的生活也变得更轻松了。 With the regained confidence in life, I worked harder than before and my life became much easier. 14 情景回顾 心心相传：礼物回馈 23. 我紧紧握着这20美元的钞票，忍不住流下了眼泪。 24. 真替你的女儿感到难过，希望这个新风筝能让她开心起来。 25. 为了对他的善意表示诚挚的感谢，我给了他一些钱作为礼物，但他拒绝了。 Holding the $20 bill tightly, I couldn’t control my tears. Feeling bad for your daughter, I hope this new kite will make her smile. To express my sincere gratitude for his kindness, I offered him some money as a gift, but he turned it down. 15 情景回顾 心心相传：建立关系 26. 后来，他们约好一起出去玩。 27. 从那时起，我和经常来饭店吃晚饭的双胞胎建立起了亲密的友谊。 Later, they made an appointment to hang out together. From then on, I developed a close friendship with the twins who often came to the restaurant for dinner. 16 Read the passage and get to know the details One morning in December 2023, my co-worker Al's email caught my attention: “Found: $20 bill on the floor in the lab at the end of the hall from the main building. See Alan W.to claim." Al's email reminded me of an incident that occurred on Christmas 40 years ago. Before heading out for Christmas shopping that evening, I had withdrawn $400 from the bank, foolishly stuffing eight fifty dollar bills in my front trousers pocket. On my way to Oakbrook Shopping Center, I stopped at SportMart to look at skiing equipment for my son. 17 Read the passage and get to know the details Returning to the car, I discovered the bills were gone. This was $400 in 1983-a huge sum of money! Feeling terrible, I turned my pockets inside out, thinking how I could have been so careless! I turned on my car headlights and desperately looked for the bills in the snow covering the parking area, but found nothing. This was the Chicago area. It was said that people in neighborhoods were not in the habit of turning in cash they found. At the thought of this, I was so sad. With low expectations, I returned to SportMart and started telling my awful tale to the store manager. 18 Read the passage and get to know the details Hearing P'd lost cash, he interrupted, slating he needed to page(呼叫)the store quickly. Someone had earlier reported finding money. The customer wouldn't say how much or leave the money with the manager, but left his name. The manager was concered he may have left. I stopped breathing as the page broadeast. Minutes passed, and I was about to give up wan and a boy approached the manager. The manager pointed them in my12. ren. He was in his mid-thirties, with dark hair, a winter jacket , and a son about 10 o12.He smiled, “The manager tells me you lost some money.Can you describe the amount and denominations(面额)?” 19 Continuation Writing Para 1：I told him I’d lost $400, eight fifties.                                                                        ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para 2：They left before. I could ask them their names.                                                                        ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Plot When: on Christmas 40 years ago Where: in the bank, in the store SportMart Who: I, a man and a boy What: I lost money withdrawn from the bank Why: because of my carelessness How: how did the plots and emotions developed How did the plots and emotions developed？ The plot： 1. I withdrew some money from the bank and put the bills in my front trousers pocket. 2. I lost my money . I desperately looked for the bills,but can not find the bills. 3. A man and a boy picked up my bills and was ready to return my bills. Emotion：anxious，upset，desperate，hopeless.... Plot I told him I‘d lost $400，eight fifties. 1. What did the man do after hearing what I said? 2. How did I feel？ 3.What did I do？ They left before I could ask them their name. 1. How did I feel? 2. What did I learn about from the thing? Example: Para 1：I told him I’d lost $400, eight fifties. Hearing my words, he reached into his pocket, swiftly pulled out the roll of the bills and said, "You are the very person we are seeking." Hardly had I touched the bills carrying the father's body temperature when I felt moved. I felt heartwarming. I was about to give them two bills in return when they left. Para 2：They left before. I could ask them their names.They left before I could ask them their names .When seeing the lost money I was too excited and kept expressing my gratitude to them without asking their names in a timely manner. Despite not knowing their names, I'll never forget the Christmas gift from two total strangers. Compared with the prejudice about the people in Chicago area, my experience proved the existing people's honesty and kindness. Moreover,Al's email has also proved this point. 24 Improvements: Para 1：I told him I’d lost $400, eight fifties._________________(what引导宾语从句）, he reached into his pocket, swiftly pulled out the roll of the bills and said __________(如释重负）,you are the very person we are seeking." Hardly had I touched the bills carrying the father's body temperature when I felt ______________(非常地） moved.__________________________________.(一股暖流涌入心中.) I was about to give them two bills in return when they ________________________________________________________________________(动作三联动）. Hearing what I said with relief exceedingly/extremely A wave of warmth welled up in my mind  took a deep breath, turned around and made their way quickly without uttering a word 25 Improvements: Para 2：They left before I could ask them their names._________（令我后悔的是）, _______(一看见)the lost money I was too thrilled and kept expressing my gratitude to them ____________________________________(没有及时问他们名字）. Despite not knowing their names, I'll never forget the Christmas gift from two total strangers. Compared with the prejudice about the people in Chicago area, my experience proved the existing people's honesty and kindness. Moreover, Al's email has also proved this point . After all ,__________ __________________________(善良是连接社会的金链）. To my regret  kindness is the golden chain linking society on seeing without asking their names in a timely manner 26 Let’s enjoy the continuation writing and make it an enjoyable journey! THANKS! $$