【春考特训课】第17讲：活动方案选择类英语作文 （中） -【决胜春季高考】2025年春季高考英语冲刺总复习（上海专用）

第17讲： 活动方案类英语作文（中） 知识梳理 演练 【考情链接】 在上海高考英语中，活动方案选择类作文是对考生决策能力与英语表达综合素养的重要考察形式。这类题目通常会给出多个活动方案的情境或描述，要求考生依据特定的标准、需求或目标，对这些方案进行分析、比较与抉择，并清晰阐述选择的理由。它反映了在现实生活中面对多种选择时如何运用英语进行有效沟通与合理决策的能力要求。随着全球化进程中交流与合作的日益频繁，学生需要具备在不同方案间权衡利弊并准确表达观点的能力，因此此类作文题型在高考英语中占有一席之地，且其对考生思维深度与广度的考察愈发深入。 【要点梳理】 一、充分读题 01.全文结构： 文章开篇需简要介绍所面临的活动方案选择情境，包括有哪些可供选择的活动方案以及选择的背景或目的。例如，可能是学校要组织一次户外拓展活动，给出了爬山、露营、骑行三种方案。接着，主体部分应对各个方案进行详细的分析与比较，这是文章的核心内容。可以分别阐述每个方案的特点、优势与劣势，如爬山能够锻炼体力与意志力，但可能存在一定安全风险且对体能要求较高；露营可以亲近自然、增强团队协作，但需要准备较多的装备且受天气影响较大；骑行有利于欣赏沿途风景、灵活便捷，但可能路途遥远导致疲劳等。最后，明确表明自己的选择，并给出充分且有条理的理由，结尾可适当总结选择该方案可能带来的积极影响或对整体活动的展望。 02. 内容要点： 首先要精准理解每个活动方案的关键信息，包括活动的形式、内容、时间安排、地点、参与人员范围等。以组织国际文化交流活动为例，一个方案可能是举办各国文化展览，重点在文化展示与静态交流；另一个方案是开展国际文化主题的研讨会，侧重于思想碰撞与学术交流；还有一个方案是组织国际学生文艺汇演，突出文化艺术的表演与互动。在分析过程中，要考虑到活动的可行性，如资源需求（人力、物力、财力）是否能够满足，时间是否合适，地点是否便利等。同时，也要关注活动的预期效果，如对学生知识增长、文化理解、社交能力提升等方面的作用。例如，文化展览可能需要大量的展品筹备与场地布置资源，但能直观地展示各国文化特色；研讨会需要邀请专业人士参与且对学生知识储备有一定要求，但能深入探讨文化内涵；文艺汇演则需要学生具备一定的艺术才能与排练时间，但能以生动活泼的形式促进文化交流。 二、深入思考 & 个性写作： 在思考选择时，考生不能仅仅停留在表面的比较，要深入挖掘每个方案背后的教育意义、文化价值或个人成长促进因素。例如，如果选择国际文化主题研讨会，可结合自身对文化研究的兴趣以及希望通过深度交流提升自己跨文化交流能力的目标来阐述理由，使文章更具个性与深度。在描述方案特点与理由时，可以运用具体事例或个人经历进行辅助说明。比如，曾经参加过类似的骑行活动，深刻体会到了骑行过程中团队成员相互帮助克服困难的乐趣，所以在面对户外拓展活动方案选择时，会更倾向于骑行方案，因为它不仅是一种身体锻炼，更是一次团队凝聚的机会。同时，在语言表达上，可使用多样化的句式结构与连接词，增强文章的连贯性与逻辑性，如 “While option A has its merits in terms of...（虽然 A 方案在…… 方面有其优点）, option B stands out for...（B 方案因…… 而突出）. However, considering...（然而，考虑到……）, I would prefer...（我更倾向于……）”。 三、语料积累 平时积累与活动方案相关的词汇与短语至关重要。例如，描述活动特点的词汇有 “exciting（令人兴奋的）, educational（有教育意义的）, challenging（有挑战性的）, relaxing（轻松的）” 等；表示比较与对比的短语有 “in contrast（相比之下）, on the one hand...on the other hand（一方面…… 另一方面）, compared with（与…… 相比）” 等；阐述理由的句型有 “The reason why I choose...is that...（我选择…… 的原因是……）, One of the main factors contributing to my choice is...（促成我选择的主要因素之一是……）” 等。此外，阅读一些关于活动策划、文化交流、校园活动等方面的英语文章或报道，学习其中对不同活动方案分析与评价的表达方式，以便在高考写作中能够准确、流畅地表达自己的观点与想法。 四、备考建议： 备考这类作文时，在内容上要全面深入地分析各个活动方案，做到有理有据、不偏不倚，选择理由要充分且符合逻辑；语言上要熟练掌握相关词汇、短语与句型，避免语法错误与表达生硬，通过灵活运用语言技巧提升文章质量；结构上要遵循清晰的框架，开头明确情境与任务，中间详细比较与论证，结尾坚定表明选择并总结升华，从而在上海高考英语活动方案选择类作文中展现出自己的高水平思维能力与优秀的英语写作功底。 课堂精练 演练 2022年上海秋季高考英语作文 Guided writing: Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择： （1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作解析】 写作思路： 选一个你比较会写的活动+陈述这个活动2-3个好处。 在范文中我选择的是走访老战士，列举了三个理由（好处），全文分为五段来写。 之所以写三个理由是为了给同学们提供更多写作思路，在考场时间紧张的情况下，同学们也可以酌情选择2个。其中一些理由，不管你选择什么活动，都可以通用，比如“有利于学生了解历史”，“有利于鼓舞学生”等。大家要学会举一反三。 【写作提纲】 中文提纲 第一段：寒暄+我是李华+我选老战士 第二段：理由1： 有利于了解历史（通用理由） 第三段：理由2：有利于对老战士表达感激 第四段：理由3：有利于精神鼓舞（通用理由） 第五段：信件结束语 英文提纲 P1：I hope you're doing well.  I'm Li Hua.        I choose to XXX and here's why. P2:  Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of history.  P3:  Secondly, it offers a chance to express respect to XXX. P4:  Lastly, it can be inspiring.  P5：Thank you. Looking forward to XXX. 提纲里列举了三个表达好处的句式，大家注意替换使用。 P234 提纲仅列出开头，作为一个完整的段落，还需补充1-2句话。注意运用 【which引导从句】 和 【非谓语动词】，两个技巧为句式加分。 【学霸范文供参考】 Dear Organizers, I hope you're doing well. I'm Li Hua, a senior student, and I wish to share my preference for the upcoming "Journey into History" event. I choose to visit veterans because it offers a chance to connect with living history witnesses. Here's why. 祝您一切安好。我是李华，一名高三学生，对于即将到来的“走进历史”主题活动，我想分享一下我的个人喜好。我选择的是拜访老战士，因为这个活动能让我们有机会接触到这些还在世的历史见证者。以下是我的理由： Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of our nation's history. These veterans experienced historical events firsthand, and by interacting with them, we can learn about the sacrifices they made, which will make history more than a subject in textbooks. 首先，拜访老战士能让我们更加深刻了解国家历史。这些老战士亲历了历史事件，通过与他们交流，我们可以了解他们曾经的牺牲，这将让历史跃出课本，不再仅仅是一门学科。 Secondly, visiting veterans offers a chance to express respect and gratitude for their contributions to our country. This can strengthen our sense of national pride and unity. 其次，拜访老战士能让我们有机会向他们致以崇高敬意，感谢他们为国家所作出的巨大贡献，这也有利于增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感。 Lastly, meeting veterans can be inspiring. Their resilience and patriotism serve as role models, motivating us to cherish peace and strive for a better future. 最后，与老战士见面可以鼓舞人心。他们的坚韧和爱国精神是我们学习的榜样，激励我们珍惜和平，为更美好的未来而努力。 Thank you for organizing the event. I look forward to the valuable experience it will provide. 感谢您组织这次活动。我期待着它将带来的宝贵经历。 Yours, Li Hua 【表达学习】 分享我的偏好 - share my preference 即将到来的 - upcoming 老战士 - veterans 提供机会 - it offers a chance to 在世的历史见证者 - living history witnesses 使我们能够 - it allows us to 更深入地了解 - gain a deeper understanding of 亲历历史事件 - experienced historical events firsthand 牺牲 - sacrifices 使历史不仅仅是课本中的一门学科 make history more than a subject in textbooks 提供机会 -it offers a chance to 增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感 - strengthen our sense of national pride and unity 坚韧 - resilience 爱国主义 - patriotism 作为榜样 - serve as role models 激励某人去 - motivate sb to do sth 为更美好的未来而努力 - strive for a better future 附：作文批改实例： Dear Headmaster, My name is Li Hua, one of senior students in our school. Having heard our school is going to organize an activity about walking into history and is now considering three ways among6making short Videos ”,“ visiting the old soldiers” and “ historical stage play” I am writing to voice my support for filming short videos. My reasons in favour are listed as follows. First and foremost. electronic devices are almost available to the young generation and social media like Tik Tok have been on the rise, leaving the short Video prone to being accepted by the youth. Apart from it,Short Videos bear a little cost and energy for the school side. Not Only will they help save the school's financial budget. but also they will not involve too much energy of the teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities. Last but not least., short videos can cover more various historical themes in a wider range. which means historical tales and figures from the ancient society to modern one can be exhibited through videos. Conclusively, these are my reasons after careful consideration. I sincerely wish my voice could be considered. Yours, Li Hua 得分说明:23-25分 一、内容10 分: 分析:内容充实，详略得当。 首段点题:主体部分，陈述 3 个观点说明短视频的重要性支撑作者提出的建议: O短视频更容易让年轻人接受:2短视频活动低成本、耗费较低的人力及精力:@更充分的展示历史的丰富内容:末段跟首段呼应进行总结。 二、语言-9-10 分 分析:具有较好的语言表达能力，句子结构多样且词汇丰富，如:多种复合句---状语从句,定语从句,以及特殊句型。并多次使用高级词汇及固定搭配，且无明显的语法错误。 三、结构-5 分 使用总分总结构,全文流畅且结构紧凑，自然地使用语句间的连接成分。 范文赏析: 一、审题立意: 该题是一篇针对社会热点话题，考察学生如何表达自己的观点、看法和建议并给出理由。重点考察学生的思维活跃度和语言表述能要求学生不仅在具体的建议方面详略得当，同时需要学生结合社会热点，提出较为合理的建议，对学生的英语能力进行综合考察。 二、写作思路: 三、语言部分 1.自然地使用了语句间的连接成分: First and foremost，Apart from it，Last but not least.等连接词，使得文章条理清晰，且全文流畅结构紧凑。 2.具有较好的语言表达能力。 （1）高分句式,如:倒装句结合定语从句等复合句构成Not Only will they help save the school' s financial budget, but also they will not involve too much energy ofthe teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities: （2）词汇丰富，如: voice my support for、 on the rise/catch on/take off/be in vogue, be prone to sth/ doing sth, engage in, have a tight schedule, , in a wider range等多种词汇。 课后反馈 演练 （2024年青浦区二模） 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写一封自荐信，内容必须包括： 申请参加本次活动； 阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解； 结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。 （注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024年虹口区二模） Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你的外国朋友William一直对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，他在网上了解到有两个相关的线上节目（节目信息如下表所示），但他对节目选择有些茫然，想听听你的建议。请给William回复一封邮件，邮件内容须包括： （1）推荐其中一个节目； （2）通过比较两个节目的信息，说明你推荐该节目的理由。 节目名称 故宫里的国宝 Treasures of the Forbidden City 寻访中国美食 Exploring Chinese Cuisine 节目内容 介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事 介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式 节目形式 纪录片 短视频 节目语言 英语解说 无字幕 (subtitles) 中文解说 英语字幕 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 01 【上海市吴淞中学2023-2024学年高三上学期10月调研】 Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生王磊，你校下个月将举行中外学生交流活动，现向学生征求活动方案。你主动向校长写信，表达你的想法。你的信包括以下内容： 1. 活动的主题； 2. 你设计的1-2个活动的具体内容； 3. 你设计该活动的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 02 【上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三9月月考英语试卷】 我校学生会开始筹备高三成人仪式（the coming-of-age ceremony）。现向高三学生征集成人仪式活动方案，请你给学生会写一封信，为成人仪式设计一个活动方案，方案需要包括： 1.你为成人仪式制定的主题； 2.你为成人仪式设计的活动； 3.设计这些活动的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 03：【上海市实验学校2024学年度第一学期高三英语10月月考】 假设你是实验中学高三学生王梓，你们学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动。请你选择校园一处可以优化的地方，给校长写一封信。 信中必须包含以下内容： ①推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案； ②说明你推荐该方案的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2022年7月上海高考） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华、你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动，拟从三个活动形式里选择一个：走访老战视、表演历史则和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议，内容必须包含： (1)你的选择： (2)你的理由。 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在上海高考英语中，活动方案选择类作文是对考生决策能力与英语表达综合素养的重要考察形式。这类题目通常会给出多个活动方案的情境或描述，要求考生依据特定的标准、需求或目标，对这些方案进行分析、比较与抉择，并清晰阐述选择的理由。它反映了在现实生活中面对多种选择时如何运用英语进行有效沟通与合理决策的能力要求。随着全球化进程中交流与合作的日益频繁，学生需要具备在不同方案间权衡利弊并准确表达观点的能力，因此此类作文题型在高考英语中占有一席之地，且其对考生思维深度与广度的考察愈发深入。 【要点梳理】 一、充分读题 01.全文结构： 文章开篇需简要介绍所面临的活动方案选择情境，包括有哪些可供选择的活动方案以及选择的背景或目的。例如，可能是学校要组织一次户外拓展活动，给出了爬山、露营、骑行三种方案。接着，主体部分应对各个方案进行详细的分析与比较，这是文章的核心内容。可以分别阐述每个方案的特点、优势与劣势，如爬山能够锻炼体力与意志力，但可能存在一定安全风险且对体能要求较高；露营可以亲近自然、增强团队协作，但需要准备较多的装备且受天气影响较大；骑行有利于欣赏沿途风景、灵活便捷，但可能路途遥远导致疲劳等。最后，明确表明自己的选择，并给出充分且有条理的理由，结尾可适当总结选择该方案可能带来的积极影响或对整体活动的展望。 02. 内容要点： 首先要精准理解每个活动方案的关键信息，包括活动的形式、内容、时间安排、地点、参与人员范围等。以组织国际文化交流活动为例，一个方案可能是举办各国文化展览，重点在文化展示与静态交流；另一个方案是开展国际文化主题的研讨会，侧重于思想碰撞与学术交流；还有一个方案是组织国际学生文艺汇演，突出文化艺术的表演与互动。在分析过程中，要考虑到活动的可行性，如资源需求（人力、物力、财力）是否能够满足，时间是否合适，地点是否便利等。同时，也要关注活动的预期效果，如对学生知识增长、文化理解、社交能力提升等方面的作用。例如，文化展览可能需要大量的展品筹备与场地布置资源，但能直观地展示各国文化特色；研讨会需要邀请专业人士参与且对学生知识储备有一定要求，但能深入探讨文化内涵；文艺汇演则需要学生具备一定的艺术才能与排练时间，但能以生动活泼的形式促进文化交流。 二、深入思考 & 个性写作： 在思考选择时，考生不能仅仅停留在表面的比较，要深入挖掘每个方案背后的教育意义、文化价值或个人成长促进因素。例如，如果选择国际文化主题研讨会，可结合自身对文化研究的兴趣以及希望通过深度交流提升自己跨文化交流能力的目标来阐述理由，使文章更具个性与深度。在描述方案特点与理由时，可以运用具体事例或个人经历进行辅助说明。比如，曾经参加过类似的骑行活动，深刻体会到了骑行过程中团队成员相互帮助克服困难的乐趣，所以在面对户外拓展活动方案选择时，会更倾向于骑行方案，因为它不仅是一种身体锻炼，更是一次团队凝聚的机会。同时，在语言表达上，可使用多样化的句式结构与连接词，增强文章的连贯性与逻辑性，如 “While option A has its merits in terms of...（虽然 A 方案在…… 方面有其优点）, option B stands out for...（B 方案因…… 而突出）. However, considering...（然而，考虑到……）, I would prefer...（我更倾向于……）”。 三、语料积累 平时积累与活动方案相关的词汇与短语至关重要。例如，描述活动特点的词汇有 “exciting（令人兴奋的）, educational（有教育意义的）, challenging（有挑战性的）, relaxing（轻松的）” 等；表示比较与对比的短语有 “in contrast（相比之下）, on the one hand...on the other hand（一方面…… 另一方面）, compared with（与…… 相比）” 等；阐述理由的句型有 “The reason why I choose...is that...（我选择…… 的原因是……）, One of the main factors contributing to my choice is...（促成我选择的主要因素之一是……）” 等。此外，阅读一些关于活动策划、文化交流、校园活动等方面的英语文章或报道，学习其中对不同活动方案分析与评价的表达方式，以便在高考写作中能够准确、流畅地表达自己的观点与想法。 四、备考建议： 备考这类作文时，在内容上要全面深入地分析各个活动方案，做到有理有据、不偏不倚，选择理由要充分且符合逻辑；语言上要熟练掌握相关词汇、短语与句型，避免语法错误与表达生硬，通过灵活运用语言技巧提升文章质量；结构上要遵循清晰的框架，开头明确情境与任务，中间详细比较与论证，结尾坚定表明选择并总结升华，从而在上海高考英语活动方案选择类作文中展现出自己的高水平思维能力与优秀的英语写作功底。 课堂精练 演练 2022年上海秋季高考英语作文 Guided writing: Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择： （1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作解析】 写作思路： 选一个你比较会写的活动+陈述这个活动2-3个好处。 在范文中我选择的是走访老战士，列举了三个理由（好处），全文分为五段来写。 之所以写三个理由是为了给同学们提供更多写作思路，在考场时间紧张的情况下，同学们也可以酌情选择2个。其中一些理由，不管你选择什么活动，都可以通用，比如“有利于学生了解历史”，“有利于鼓舞学生”等。大家要学会举一反三。 【写作提纲】 中文提纲 第一段：寒暄+我是李华+我选老战士 第二段：理由1： 有利于了解历史（通用理由） 第三段：理由2：有利于对老战士表达感激 第四段：理由3：有利于精神鼓舞（通用理由） 第五段：信件结束语 英文提纲 P1：I hope you're doing well.  I'm Li Hua.        I choose to XXX and here's why. P2:  Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of history.  P3:  Secondly, it offers a chance to express respect to XXX. P4:  Lastly, it can be inspiring.  P5：Thank you. Looking forward to XXX. 提纲里列举了三个表达好处的句式，大家注意替换使用。 P234 提纲仅列出开头，作为一个完整的段落，还需补充1-2句话。注意运用 【which引导从句】 和 【非谓语动词】，两个技巧为句式加分。 【学霸范文供参考】 Dear Organizers, I hope you're doing well. I'm Li Hua, a senior student, and I wish to share my preference for the upcoming "Journey into History" event. I choose to visit veterans because it offers a chance to connect with living history witnesses. Here's why. 祝您一切安好。我是李华，一名高三学生，对于即将到来的“走进历史”主题活动，我想分享一下我的个人喜好。我选择的是拜访老战士，因为这个活动能让我们有机会接触到这些还在世的历史见证者。以下是我的理由： Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of our nation's history. These veterans experienced historical events firsthand, and by interacting with them, we can learn about the sacrifices they made, which will make history more than a subject in textbooks. 首先，拜访老战士能让我们更加深刻了解国家历史。这些老战士亲历了历史事件，通过与他们交流，我们可以了解他们曾经的牺牲，这将让历史跃出课本，不再仅仅是一门学科。 Secondly, visiting veterans offers a chance to express respect and gratitude for their contributions to our country. This can strengthen our sense of national pride and unity. 其次，拜访老战士能让我们有机会向他们致以崇高敬意，感谢他们为国家所作出的巨大贡献，这也有利于增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感。 Lastly, meeting veterans can be inspiring. Their resilience and patriotism serve as role models, motivating us to cherish peace and strive for a better future. 最后，与老战士见面可以鼓舞人心。他们的坚韧和爱国精神是我们学习的榜样，激励我们珍惜和平，为更美好的未来而努力。 Thank you for organizing the event. I look forward to the valuable experience it will provide. 感谢您组织这次活动。我期待着它将带来的宝贵经历。 Yours, Li Hua 【表达学习】 分享我的偏好 - share my preference 即将到来的 - upcoming 老战士 - veterans 提供机会 - it offers a chance to 在世的历史见证者 - living history witnesses 使我们能够 - it allows us to 更深入地了解 - gain a deeper understanding of 亲历历史事件 - experienced historical events firsthand 牺牲 - sacrifices 使历史不仅仅是课本中的一门学科 make history more than a subject in textbooks 提供机会 -it offers a chance to 增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感 - strengthen our sense of national pride and unity 坚韧 - resilience 爱国主义 - patriotism 作为榜样 - serve as role models 激励某人去 - motivate sb to do sth 为更美好的未来而努力 - strive for a better future 附：作文批改实例： Dear Headmaster, My name is Li Hua, one of senior students in our school. Having heard our school is going to organize an activity about walking into history and is now considering three ways among6making short Videos ”,“ visiting the old soldiers” and “ historical stage play” I am writing to voice my support for filming short videos. My reasons in favour are listed as follows. First and foremost. electronic devices are almost available to the young generation and social media like Tik Tok have been on the rise, leaving the short Video prone to being accepted by the youth. Apart from it,Short Videos bear a little cost and energy for the school side. Not Only will they help save the school's financial budget. but also they will not involve too much energy of the teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities. Last but not least., short videos can cover more various historical themes in a wider range. which means historical tales and figures from the ancient society to modern one can be exhibited through videos. Conclusively, these are my reasons after careful consideration. I sincerely wish my voice could be considered. Yours, Li Hua 得分说明:23-25分 一、内容10 分: 分析:内容充实，详略得当。 首段点题:主体部分，陈述 3 个观点说明短视频的重要性支撑作者提出的建议: O短视频更容易让年轻人接受:2短视频活动低成本、耗费较低的人力及精力:@更充分的展示历史的丰富内容:末段跟首段呼应进行总结。 二、语言-9-10 分 分析:具有较好的语言表达能力，句子结构多样且词汇丰富，如:多种复合句---状语从句,定语从句,以及特殊句型。并多次使用高级词汇及固定搭配，且无明显的语法错误。 三、结构-5 分 使用总分总结构,全文流畅且结构紧凑，自然地使用语句间的连接成分。 范文赏析: 一、审题立意: 该题是一篇针对社会热点话题，考察学生如何表达自己的观点、看法和建议并给出理由。重点考察学生的思维活跃度和语言表述能要求学生不仅在具体的建议方面详略得当，同时需要学生结合社会热点，提出较为合理的建议，对学生的英语能力进行综合考察。 二、写作思路: 三、语言部分 1.自然地使用了语句间的连接成分: First and foremost，Apart from it，Last but not least.等连接词，使得文章条理清晰，且全文流畅结构紧凑。 2.具有较好的语言表达能力。 （1）高分句式,如:倒装句结合定语从句等复合句构成Not Only will they help save the school' s financial budget, but also they will not involve too much energy ofthe teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities: （2）词汇丰富，如: voice my support for、 on the rise/catch on/take off/be in vogue, be prone to sth/ doing sth, engage in, have a tight schedule, , in a wider range等多种词汇。 课后反馈 演练 （2024年青浦区二模） 假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请写一封自荐信，内容必须包括： 申请参加本次活动； 阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解； 结合个人兴趣和特长，说明一项你想要教授的技能，并陈述理由。 （注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Organizing Committee I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School. I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the upcoming “Chinese Workshop” event. This cultural exchange holds profound significance as it offers a platform for our British counterparts to intimately experience the richness of Chinese culture. Through this workshop, we can bridge cultural divides and foster mutual understanding. Given my passion for Chinese calligraphy, I am eager to share this ancient art with our guests. Calligraphy is not just about writing; it’s a reflection of one’s spirit and character. Teaching this skill will not only impart knowledge but also promote cultural appreciation. I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the success of this workshop. Thank you for considering my application. Sincerely, Li Qing 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将举办“中国工坊”（Chinese Workshop）活动，主题涉及本地美食（cuisine）、中国传统手工艺（handicraft）、中国书法（calligraphy）和中国绘画。届时，英国姐妹学校的师生代表将到校访问。学校拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。要求考生根据提示写一封自荐信。 【详解】1.词汇积累 强烈的：keen→ strong 参加：participate in→ engage in 即将到来的：upcoming→ forthcoming 重要性：significance→ importance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am Li Qing, a Grade 12 student from Purun High School.. 拓展句：I am Li Qing, who is a Grade 12 student from Purun High School. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to express my keen interest in participating in the upcoming “Chinese Workshop” event.（运用了动名词participating作宾语） 【高分句型2】I believe that my enthusiasm and proficiency in calligraphy will contribute to the success of this workshop.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） （2024年虹口区二模） Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生赵磊，你的外国朋友William一直对中国文化很感兴趣。近日，他在网上了解到有两个相关的线上节目（节目信息如下表所示），但他对节目选择有些茫然，想听听你的建议。请给William回复一封邮件，邮件内容须包括： （1）推荐其中一个节目； （2）通过比较两个节目的信息，说明你推荐该节目的理由。 节目名称 故宫里的国宝 Treasures of the Forbidden City 寻访中国美食 Exploring Chinese Cuisine 节目内容 介绍故宫里的国宝及其背后的故事 介绍中国传统美食及其烹饪方式 节目形式 纪录片 短视频 节目语言 英语解说 无字幕 (subtitles) 中文解说 英语字幕 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear William, Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Treasures of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that the second option might be more suitable for you. The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects. To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around the whole world. In this programme, you will be introduced the process of making Chinese traditional food, which is also a part of the Chinese culture. In addition, it won't cost you much time since it is presented by short video, so that you can choose your time freely. Last but not least, although the programme is spoken in Chinese, there are English subtitles for you to have a full understanding of the content. To sum up, it is advisable that you choose the second one. Hope the above might be of any help to you. Thank you for your time and wish you a great success in learning about the Chinese culture. Yours, Zhao Lei 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友William写一封邮件，给他提一些关于了解中国文化节目的选择建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 选择：option→choice 总之：to sum up→in short 普遍地：universally→widely 有帮助的：be of help→be helpful 2.句式拓展 改为复合句 原句：The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects.  拓展句：The reasons why I made the choice can be analyzed in three aspects.  【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Treasures of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that the second option might be more suitable for you.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和idea后that引导的同位语从句) 【高分句型2】To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around the whole world.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) 01 【上海市吴淞中学2023-2024学年高三上学期10月调研】 Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学学生王磊，你校下个月将举行中外学生交流活动，现向学生征求活动方案。你主动向校长写信，表达你的想法。你的信包括以下内容： 1. 活动的主题； 2. 你设计的1-2个活动的具体内容； 3. 你设计该活动的理由。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear principal, I’ m a student in our school. I have learned that there will be an exchange between Chinese and foreign students in our school next month. I have also learned that our school is recruiting organizers from students. I am now writing to make an application for being recruited. I have much erperience in organizing such an activity. If I have been recruited. I will make the following arrangements: Hold a reading on the school playground and all teachers and students are invited to attend. Firstly, choose some representatives of foreign students to talk about their culture and their feelings about Chinese culture. Secondly, each student brought his favorite book to the activity and discussed the two cultures with foreign friends around him. Through this activity, on the one hand, students can have a deeper understanding of the cultural differences between China and foreign countries; on the other hand, students can strengthen communication and enhance friendship. Looking forward to your early reply yours sincerely Wang Lei 解析： 根据提示信息，你是明启中学学生王磊，学校下个月将举行中外学生交流活动，现向学生征求活动方案。你主动向校长写信，表达你的想法。1.首先注意时态以现在时为主，其次人称使用第一人称。2.根据文章的写作要求，可以分为两部分;第一部分指出活动的主题；你设计的1-2个活动的具体内容并说出你设计该活动的理由。3. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。 本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型1. I have learned that there will be an exchange between Chinese and foreign students in our school next month.   that引导的宾语从句；2. If I have been recruited， I will make the following arrangements.if条件从句，句。这些句式的恰当运用，不仅为文章增色，还展示了作者具有较高的语言运用能力和较高的写作水平。 02 【上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三9月月考英语试卷】 我校学生会开始筹备高三成人仪式（the coming-of-age ceremony）。现向高三学生征集成人仪式活动方案，请你给学生会写一封信，为成人仪式设计一个活动方案，方案需要包括： 1.你为成人仪式制定的主题； 2.你为成人仪式设计的活动； 3.设计这些活动的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案01】 Dear High School Seniors, I hope this letter finds you well as you embark on your final year at our beloved school. As the Student Council, we are excited to announce that we have commenced preparations for the upcoming 2023 Coming-of-Age Ceremony. We believe this occasion marks an important transition in your lives and deserves to be celebrated in a meaningful way. For the Coming-of-Age Ceremony, we have chosen the theme "Unleashing Potential: Embracing the Future." This theme aims to highlight the growth, development, and limitless possibilities that lie ahead for each of you as you step into adulthood. We propose setting up an exhibition where each senior showcases their personal journey throughout high school.This can include photos, artwork, and mementos that symbolize their accomplishments, challenges, and aspirations.We will invite successful alumni and respected community members to participate in a mentorship panel. This interactive session will provide invaluable advice and guidance as you navigate the next phase of your lives. To commemorate this milestone, we will create a time capsule. Each senior will contribute an item or a letter that represents their hopes and dreams for the future. The time capsule will be opened at your 10-year reunion, allowing you to reflect on your growth and achievements. We have designed these activities to ensure that the Coming-of-Age Ceremony is both memorable and meaningful. The personal journey exhibition allows you to reflect on your achievements and growth over the past few years, inspiring a sense of pride and accomplishment. The mentorship panel aims to provide valuable insights and guidance from experienced individuals who can inspire and motivate you as you embark on your future endeavors. Finally, the time capsule serves as a symbolic representation of your aspirations and dreams, allowing you to revisit them in the future and appreciate the progress you have made. We truly believe that this comprehensive program will create an unforgettable Coming-of-Age Ceremony that celebrates your achievements and empowers you to embrace the future with confidence and enthusiasm. Best regards, [Your Name] 写作思路： · 仔细阅读题目，理解要求和写作目标； · 确定自己选择的成人仪式主题； · 描述所选择的主题，并解释其代表性和意义； · 设计活动方案，包括个人旅程展览、导师座谈会和时间胶囊等； · 解释每个活动的目的和理由，强调其对高三学生的重要性。 写作框架： 引言：介绍学生会筹备的2023届高三成人仪式活动方案； 主题：描述你为成人仪式制定的主题，并解释其代表性和意义； 活动设计： a) 个人旅程展览：展示每位学生在高中阶段的成长历程； b) 导师座谈会：邀请成功的校友和社区成员参与，为学生提供指导和建议； c) 时间胶囊：创建一个时间胶囊，让学生放入代表未来希望和梦想的物品或信件； 活动理由：解释每个活动的目的和理由，强调对学生的重要性； 总结：总结活动方案的重要性和意义。 【参考答案02】 Students’ Union, I was informed that the Student Union will collect plans for the coming of age ceremony of senior Three in 2023. Now I am writing to offer a plan. The theme of the activity I suggest is “Growth&Gratitude”, because I think it is very important for senior three students to appreciate their parents’ hard work. The content of the activity includes student representative giving speech, teacher representative giving speech and parents representative giving speech to express their expectations of students. The last activity is for all students to sign autographs. It gives students the opportunity to make a wish and express their future plans. Through these activities, students will realize the significance of growing up and what their parents and teachers expect of them. I hope you can adopt the plan I suggested. 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封信，为成人仪式设计一个活动方案，方案需要包括：1.你为成人仪式制定的主题；2.你为成人仪式设计的活动；3.设计这些活动的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 告知：inform→notify 提供：offer→provide 建议：suggest→advise 机会：opportunity→chance 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The last activity is for all students to sign autographs. It gives students the opportunity to make a wish and express their future plans. 拓展句：The last activity is for all students to sign autographs, which gives students the opportunity to make a wish and express their future plans. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I was informed that the Student Union will collect plans for the coming of age ceremony of senior Three in 2022. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】The theme of the activity I suggest is “Growth&Gratitude”, because I think it is very important for senior three students to appreciate their parents’ hard work. (运用了that引导的定语从句，省略了that和because引导的原因状语从句) 03：【上海市实验学校2024学年度第一学期高三英语10月月考】 假设你是实验中学高三学生王梓，你们学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动。请你选择校园一处可以优化的地方，给校长写一封信。 信中必须包含以下内容： ①推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案； ②说明你推荐该方案的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Principal, I am Wang Zi, a senior student at our school. As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s garden area. I suggest transforming it into a “Reading Garden.” This space could include comfortable seating, shade-giving plants, and small water features to create a serene environment for students to read and relax. The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life. This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment. I hope you consider this suggestion. Sincerely, Wang Zi 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“美丽校园计划”征集活动，要求考生给校长写一封信，推荐一个你认为既有创意又易于操作的优化方案并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：propose→recommend 宁静的：serene→peaceful 希望：hope→wish 建议：suggestion→tip 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan to optimize our school’s garden area. 拓展句：As part of the “Beautiful Campus Project,” I would like to propose a creative and practical plan, which is designed to optimize our school’s garden area. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason for this recommendation is that a tranquil outdoor reading space can promote mental well-being, encourage more reading habits, and offer a peaceful retreat from the busy school life.（运用了that引导的表语从句） 【高分句型2】This idea, which won’t require extensive resources, can be implemented and will serve as an excellent addition to our educational environment.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句） （2022年7月上海高考） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假使你是明启中学的高三学生李华、你的学校正在组织“走进历史”主题活动，拟从三个活动形式里选择一个：走访老战视、表演历史则和制作短视频。学校正在向全体师生征求建议，内容必须包含： (1)你的选择： (2)你的理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 As a student of Mingqi High School, I would like to share my choice for the "Journey into History" event. Among the three options provided, I would choose to visit war veterans as my preferred activity. The reason for my choice is twofold. Firstly, by visiting war veterans, we can directly connect with those who have experienced historical events firsthand. This will provide us with a unique opportunity to hear their stories, gain insights into the past, and develop a deep appreciation for their sacrifices. Secondly, meeting war veterans will enable us to express our gratitude for their service. It is crucial that we acknowledge and honor their contributions, ensuring that their stories are not forgotten. Through this interaction, we can also learn valuable life lessons about resilience, courage, and the importance of preserving peace. In conclusion, I believe that visiting war veterans is a meaningful and respectful way to engage with history. It allows us to learn from those who have shaped our nation's past and deepen our understanding of the sacrifices made for our freedom. 写作思路： 阅读题目，理解要求； 分析三个活动形式，筛选自己的选择； 思考选择的理由，并从多个角度展开说明。 写作框架： I. Introduction Introduce the topic: the "Journey into History" event. State your preferred activity among the three options provided. II. Body Present the reasons for your choice: Reason 1: Explain how visiting war veterans can provide a unique opportunity to connect with those who have experienced historical events firsthand and gain insights into the past. Reason 2: Discuss the importance of acknowledging and honoring war veterans' contributions and preserving their stories. Provide supporting details and examples for each reason. III. Conclusion Summarize your main points. Reiterate the significance of engaging with history through meaningful activities. End with a strong concluding statement. 学霸作文（仅供参考） Dear Sir or Madam, As a history enthusiast, I am excited to learn that our school is organizing a theme activity entitled “A walk into History."” The three recommended activities are all closely related to this theme, yet after comparing them, I would suggest choosing the first option, which is paying visits to war veterans, for the following reasons. Firstly, a face-to-face interaction with these war heroes enables students to literally"walk into history, because they can hear first-hand stories and insightful comments from people who have personally experienced the horror and the impact of war. Moreover, this activity serves as an important opportunity to bridge the disconnect nowadays between young people s perception of heroism and reality. Many youngsters romanticize the idea of heroism due to the influences of media, especially Hollywood movies. Meeting real-life heroes can open their eyes to the tragedies of war, making them realize the determination and sacrifice needed to become true heroes --guardians of their motherland. Finally, such visits allow our veterans to pass on what they have learned from war, particularly their thoughts on peace, justice and patriotism, to the next generation, who, in turn, will reassure these old soldiers that their dedication and sacrifice will never be forgotten,whether in peaceful or turbulent times. Although historical drama and short videos are also nice options,they both require a significant amount of time and expertise to prepare, which may discourage senior three students from active participation. I hope you consider the merits of my recommendation, and I look forward to a memorable and exciting “walk into history. Sincerely yours. 【写作解析】 写作思路： 选一个你比较会写的活动+陈述这个活动2-3个好处。 在范文中我选择的是走访老战士，列举了三个理由（好处），全文分为五段来写。 之所以写三个理由是为了给同学们提供更多写作思路，在考场时间紧张的情况下，同学们也可以酌情选择2个。其中一些理由，不管你选择什么活动，都可以通用，比如“有利于学生了解历史”，“有利于鼓舞学生”等。大家要学会举一反三。 【写作提纲】 中文提纲 第一段：寒暄+我是李华+我选老战士 第二段：理由1： 有利于了解历史（通用理由） 第三段：理由2：有利于对老战士表达感激 第四段：理由3：有利于精神鼓舞（通用理由） 第五段：信件结束语 英文提纲 P1：I hope you're doing well.  I'm Li Hua.        I choose to XXX and here's why. P2:  Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of history.  P3:  Secondly, it offers a chance to express respect to XXX. P4:  Lastly, it can be inspiring.  P5：Thank you. Looking forward to XXX. 提纲里列举了三个表达好处的句式，大家注意替换使用。 P234 提纲仅列出开头，作为一个完整的段落，还需补充1-2句话。注意运用 【which引导从句】 和 【非谓语动词】，两个技巧为句式加分。 【学霸范文供参考】 Dear Organizers, I hope you're doing well. I'm Li Hua, a senior student, and I wish to share my preference for the upcoming "Journey into History" event. I choose to visit veterans because it offers a chance to connect with living history witnesses. Here's why. 祝您一切安好。我是李华，一名高三学生，对于即将到来的“走进历史”主题活动，我想分享一下我的个人喜好。我选择的是拜访老战士，因为这个活动能让我们有机会接触到这些还在世的历史见证者。以下是我的理由： Firstly, it allows us to gain a deeper understanding of our nation's history. These veterans experienced historical events firsthand, and by interacting with them, we can learn about the sacrifices they made, which will make history more than a subject in textbooks. 首先，拜访老战士能让我们更加深刻了解国家历史。这些老战士亲历了历史事件，通过与他们交流，我们可以了解他们曾经的牺牲，这将让历史跃出课本，不再仅仅是一门学科。 Secondly, visiting veterans offers a chance to express respect and gratitude for their contributions to our country. This can strengthen our sense of national pride and unity. 其次，拜访老战士能让我们有机会向他们致以崇高敬意，感谢他们为国家所作出的巨大贡献，这也有利于增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感。 Lastly, meeting veterans can be inspiring. Their resilience and patriotism serve as role models, motivating us to cherish peace and strive for a better future. 最后，与老战士见面可以鼓舞人心。他们的坚韧和爱国精神是我们学习的榜样，激励我们珍惜和平，为更美好的未来而努力。 Thank you for organizing the event. I look forward to the valuable experience it will provide. 感谢您组织这次活动。我期待着它将带来的宝贵经历。 Yours, Li Hua 【表达学习】 分享我的偏好 - share my preference 即将到来的 - upcoming 老战士 - veterans 提供机会 - it offers a chance to 在世的历史见证者 - living history witnesses 使我们能够 - it allows us to 更深入地了解 - gain a deeper understanding of 亲历历史事件 - experienced historical events firsthand 牺牲 - sacrifices 使历史不仅仅是课本中的一门学科 make history more than a subject in textbooks 提供机会 -it offers a chance to 增强我们的民族自豪感和团结感 - strengthen our sense of national pride and unity 坚韧 - resilience 爱国主义 - patriotism 作为榜样 - serve as role models 激励某人去 - motivate sb to do sth 为更美好的未来而努力 - strive for a better future 附：作文批改实例： Dear Headmaster, My name is Li Hua, one of senior students in our school. Having heard our school is going to organize an activity about walking into history and is now considering three ways among6making short Videos ”,“ visiting the old soldiers” and “ historical stage play” I am writing to voice my support for filming short videos. My reasons in favour are listed as follows. First and foremost. electronic devices are almost available to the young generation and social media like Tik Tok have been on the rise, leaving the short Video prone to being accepted by the youth. Apart from it,Short Videos bear a little cost and energy for the school side. Not Only will they help save the school's financial budget. but also they will not involve too much energy of the teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities. Last but not least., short videos can cover more various historical themes in a wider range. which means historical tales and figures from the ancient society to modern one can be exhibited through videos. Conclusively, these are my reasons after careful consideration. I sincerely wish my voice could be considered. Yours, Li Hua 得分说明:23-25分 一、内容10 分: 分析:内容充实，详略得当。 首段点题:主体部分，陈述 3 个观点说明短视频的重要性支撑作者提出的建议: O短视频更容易让年轻人接受:2短视频活动低成本、耗费较低的人力及精力:@更充分的展示历史的丰富内容:末段跟首段呼应进行总结。 二、语言-9-10 分 分析:具有较好的语言表达能力，句子结构多样且词汇丰富，如:多种复合句---状语从句,定语从句,以及特殊句型。并多次使用高级词汇及固定搭配，且无明显的语法错误。 三、结构-5 分 使用总分总结构,全文流畅且结构紧凑，自然地使用语句间的连接成分。 范文赏析: 一、审题立意: 该题是一篇针对社会热点话题，考察学生如何表达自己的观点、看法和建议并给出理由。重点考察学生的思维活跃度和语言表述能要求学生不仅在具体的建议方面详略得当，同时需要学生结合社会热点，提出较为合理的建议，对学生的英语能力进行综合考察。 二、写作思路: 三、语言部分 1.自然地使用了语句间的连接成分: First and foremost，Apart from it，Last but not least.等连接词，使得文章条理清晰，且全文流畅结构紧凑。 2.具有较好的语言表达能力。 （1）高分句式,如:倒装句结合定语从句等复合句构成Not Only will they help save the school' s financial budget, but also they will not involve too much energy ofthe teachers and students, who already have a tight schedule in engaging in educational activities: （2）词汇丰富，如: voice my support for、 on the rise/catch on/take off/be in vogue, be prone to sth/ doing sth, engage in, have a tight schedule, , in a wider range等多种词汇。 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$