【春考特训课】第18讲： 邮件书信类英语作文（下） -【决胜春季高考】2025年春季高考英语冲刺总复习（上海专用）

第18讲： 邮件书信类英语作文（下） 知识梳理 演练 【考情链接】 上海真题作文考点分布 年份 作文题 话题 分类 文体 2023秋考 假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品？写一篇物品介绍，内容须包括： (1) 对该物品的简要描述； (2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。 物品介绍 校园生活 叙议文 2023春考 你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极，委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解，有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣，有些同学害怕犯错，不敢开口。 1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法； 2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。 课堂互动 学习 应用文-信件 2022秋考 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择：（1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 走近历史 社会热点 应用文-信件 2022春考 假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明，入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7：30-7：50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求 1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。 晨跑运动 校园生活 应用文-邮件 2021秋考 假如你是名启中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友bill的邮件，告诉你他也准备学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息如下表所示），但他对课程选择有些迷茫，想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件，在邮件中你必须： 1.推荐其中一门课程 2.通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该课程的原因。 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、周四晚7：00-8：00 共8周 每周五晚7：00-8：00 共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 推荐课程 学习 应用文-邮件 2021春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程，课程包含以下四个板块，“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见，。请你给他写一份电子邮件，要求： 1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块 2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。 课程选择 学习 应用文-邮件 2020秋考 名启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，请你决定写邮件说服他一起去，信的内容包括： 1.提出解决问题的方法 2.阐述音乐会的重要性。 音乐会 人际关系 应用文-邮件 2020春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你在某英语节目中看到一超市对于临近保质期的食物处理办法向公众征求意见，请给超市经理写一封信谈谈你的看法。 临期食品 社会热点 应用文-信件 2019秋考 假如你是李敏，你在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下： 1.介绍一下你在该杂志上看到的内容。 2.自己针对此事的态度及理由。 景点门票 社会热点 应用文-信件 2019春考 假如你是名启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由。 共享衣服 社会热点 应用文-信件 2018秋考 假如你是明启中学的卢平，学校《英语报》向高三学生进行征文，题目为《my teachers》,卢平也想投稿，具体要求是： 1.将你认识的老师进行分类 2.具体描述每一位老师的特征。 我的老师 人际关系 说明文 2018春考 假如你是明启中学的王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书管理员，并在学校贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应该包括： 1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一。 2.通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率、服务范围等方面阐述。 机器人 校园+社会热点 应用文-帖子 【要点梳理】 应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关, 实用性很强的文体, 包括书信(或电子邮件)等, 每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。 （一）书信类应用文写作结构 第一段：表明写作意图。 第二段：就意图展开（如：投诉产品或服务特点／列举建议或解决措施／表明观点的理由…） 第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的想法。 （二）书信类应用文主要分类 1. 申请信： （1）写作结构指导 第一段：表明自己对某个工作或职位感兴趣，并提出申请。 第二段：介绍相关的个人信息，主要包括你具备了什么样的素质来胜任这份工作和你为什么想得到这份工作。 第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的申请。 （2）常用句型 ① In answer to your advertisement. I wish to apply for… 看到你们的招聘广告，我希望申请… ② Your advertisement offers a most tempting job to a young man just out of college. 你们的招聘广告提供了一份十分吸引刚出校门的年轻人的工作。 ③ I'd like to apply for the position advertised in… 我想申请在……上刊登的这一职位。 ④ I’m rather keen on… 我对……很感兴趣。 ⑤ I've been…since… 自从……以来，我一直在…… ⑥ I have the education and the experience that fit well with your advertised position. 我所受的教育和经历适合你们招聘的职位。 ⑦ I have a personality that is cheerful and optimistic.我的个性开朗又乐观。 ⑧ I did well at school and I have got impressive letters of recommendation from my professors. 我在校学习很好并且有教授肯定的推荐信。 ⑨I would be grateful if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply. 如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。我期待您的回信。 ⑩I am available for the interview at your convenience. Please contact me at the above address or call me. 在您方便之时我随时恭候你的面试。请按照上述地址联系或者给我电话。 2. 建议信： 常用句型： ①写信目的 I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that…… I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. I'm sorry (that) you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in making friends.   I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.   I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...   However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.    Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.   I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.  ②提出建议 I’d like to suggest that …… May I suggest that…… In my opinion …… I would like to make a recommendation that … I am writing to advise you of …… If I were you, I would …… First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...      Secondly, you should/can ...Then/That way, ...   Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...    Last but not least ...  ③希望采纳建议，并表示谢意 Thank you for your attention. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks. I hope you will find these ideas useful.   I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful ...   I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll get along well with your classmates.       I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.   3. 邀请信： （1）写作结构指导 邀请信包括宴会，舞会，晚餐，婚礼等等各种邀请信件，形式上大体分为两种：一种为正规格式亦称为请柬，一种为非正式格式，即一般的邀请信。虽然一般邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但是要求叙事一定要清楚、明白。 （2）常用句型 ①写作目的：发出邀请 It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to …… It’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to… I’m writing to invite you to… I’d like to invite you to… ②说明事由及活动地点和时间： Will you and Mrs. Smith give the pleasure of dining with us at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o’clock? There will be a dinner party to be held at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o’clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us? I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 p.m. on Feb. 1st. ③表示期待和感谢： I do hope that you will be able to come. We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company. We should be very grateful if you could …. I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation. 4 求助信： （1）写作结构指导 主要涉及学生学习或生活上的各种问题或困惑，写求助信应注意清楚描述所遇到的困难，表达清楚所希望得到的帮助，语言得体，语气诚恳礼貌。 （2）常用句型 ①写作目的：求助 I’m writing to ask for/get some help. I’m writing to ask whether you can give me help. I’m sorry that I have to ask you to do me a favor, with the hope that you will be kind to help me. Sorry to bother you but I really get some problems recently. I’m writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor. ②描述困难 But I have met some difficulties with/in …… But unfortunately, I’m encountering difficulty in… Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. I face the choice between…and… It’s really hard for me to decide/deal with … I need your help because …… ③表达希望得到的帮助 I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice. I am sure with your help I can make great progress. Can you manage to give me some constructive guidance? ④列举困难：first, besides, also, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile, in addition,... ⑤请求系列帮助：so, thus, however, but, in order that, so that … ⑥情感词汇：sorry, bother, beg, would you like…. unfortunately, unluckily, especially, sincerely, badly, hopefully 5. 咨询信： 常用句型： ①写信目的 I am a high school student and planning to study in your university this summer. I am a Chinese student who wishes to study at your university. I’m writing to ask if … ②介绍背景&询问详情 I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly recommended it to me. I will have graduated from high school by the end of this term and wish to continue my study at your university. My plan is to start my course from the next term, and I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. Could you please tell me something about your …? Would you please send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application? Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much. I would be much obliged to you if you let me know the procedures I have to go through. ③表示谢意，期盼回复 Sorry to bother you, your kind help would be greatly appreciated. I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply. 6. 投诉信： （1）写作结构指导： 开头：称呼。 第一段：开门见山地说明意图．倌的开头要交代事由。 第二段：投诉产品或服务，可看重对比反差．即产品或服务应该如何或在广告中被宣传成什么效果．而实际并非如此。 第三段：提出要求及解决办法。 结尾；结束语和署名。 （2）常用句型 ① I am writing to complain about … 我写信投诉… ② I am disappointed to find that things were quite the opposite. 我很失望地发现情况完全相反。 ③ Since I have suffered a lot both physically and psychologically, I demand that you refund the cost and solve the problems as soon as possible. 我的身心皆遭受伤害，因此我坚决要求你们退还所有费用并尽快解决此问题。 ④ If you do not do this, I will complain to the consumer council and resort to law. 如果你们不按我的要求去做，我将会向消费者协会投诉并诉诸法律。 7. 感谢信： （1）写作结构指导 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件主要写明感谢他人的理由，要感情真挚，措辞得体。 （2）常用词汇: v. thank, appreciate; owe  欠债, 感激 n. thanks, gratitude, appreciation; adj. thankful, grateful, appreciative,  appreciate one’s doing … be grateful/thankful to sb. for … convey/express/extend my thanks/gratitude/appreciation for … owe sb. a lot for … thank sb. for … 课堂精练 演练 【课堂典例1】 （求助信） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.以李明的名义给该同学回信。 Dear Editor， I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do ? Your early reply is expected. Regards, Amy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming 【课堂典例2】 （申请信） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学（ Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。 启事 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。 有意者请来信告知： 1） 你个人的基本情况； 2） 你对申请项目的基本设想； 3） 项目经费的使用计划。 联系方式: 2011hope@icf.org Dear Sir or Madam, Word came that the International Children Funds Association intended to aid middle school students financially in launching programs designed to help children in poor areas. And I am writing to you to apply for one, hoping that the fund as much as 2000 yuan can realize my wish to help these children. As a normal student of MingQi Middle School, I, Li Ming, have been long cherishing a dream that every single child in poverty can have free access to knowledge, thus devoting themselves to society to make it more harmonious in turn. Consequently, if my application can be luckily agreed to, I will spare no effort to build a library for those children as my program. To be more specific, the fund will be divided into three parts. First of all, 800 yuan of it will be spent on buying books which may be mainly second-hand, in order to ensure the quantity. Also, another 400 yuan will be intended to carry out advertisements that call on the people with a sense of responsibility in society to donate textbooks and so forth. What’s more, the remaining 800 yuan, according to my design, shall be given to those children, entitling them the right to buy their favorite books that are beyond what is mentioned above. As you can see from what is talked about above, my plan may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to help those children is concerned, I genuinely hope you and your association can grant me the opportunity to turn it into reality. Yours sincerely, 【课堂典例3】 （建议信/邮件） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。 参考范文: Dear Editor,     Word comes that our school’s English newspaper is going to have a change on its content. As a hardcore fan of it, I’m writing to voice some of my opinions towards our school’s English newspaper.     In my point of view, among health, entertainment and culture, I would choose “entertainment” to be the one to be eliminated. Not only is this topic far from our study life, but also it may distract our attention from learning. We are already living in a world that is crammed with useless information, and there’s no need to add some more. Instead, I suggest that some interesting stories can be put to the topic of "culture", which are sure to serve quite the equal function of the topic of entertainment.     In terms of the column to be added, what I highly recommend is the readers’ feedback. It’s crucial for the editor to know the reaction of the readers to the newspaper. Only in this way can the newspaper carry something of great value to students and as a result I’m fully convinced that it will gain more popularity among students.     Given the advice mentioned above, I acutely hope that our English paper can achieve greater success and I would appreciate it very much if you can take my advice into serious account. Yours, Chengfei 课后反馈 演练 （2024年宝山区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括： 简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法； 阐述你所提建议的理由。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2024年普陀区二模） 假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友Michael来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括： 1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动； 2）你所提建议的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 01：市西中学2024~2025学年上学期期中考试 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，开学以来，你们学校组织全校高三学生进行晚自习。安排如下：周一至周四晚上，晚自习从6:30开始到8:30，学校规定高三年级学生必须参加晚自习，并且学生需要在学校食堂用晚餐。但是有同学反映，这种安排并不一定有利于提高学习效率，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晚自习的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求如下： 1. 说明你认为目前晚自习时间安排存在的主要问题； 2. 提出具体的改进建议和改进的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 02：2024-2025学年七宝中学高三上英语第一次月考 假如你是明启中学的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。 启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。 信中请包括： 1. 你个人基本情况 2. 你对申请项目具体设想 3. 项目经费使用情况 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 03：华东师大二附中2024学年第一学期10月英语试卷 你是明启中学的李华，进入高三以后，你发现你身边的同学坐在课桌前的时间越来越久了，他们利用一切“空闲”时间，比如下课、出操，甚至是体育课抓紧完成作业。你对这个现象表示担忧，打算写一封信给校长，建言献策，提出一个让高三学生更积极主动参加体育锻炼的方法。你的信需包含以下内容： 1. 这个提议的内容和具体做法；2. 提议的可行性分析。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2021年6月上海高考） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须: 1.推荐其中一门课程; 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、四 晚7:00-8:00；共8周 每周五 晚7:00-8:30；共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第18讲： 邮件书信类英语作文（下） 知识梳理 演练 【考情链接】 上海真题作文考点分布 年份 作文题 话题 分类 文体 2023秋考 假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品？写一篇物品介绍，内容须包括： (1) 对该物品的简要描述； (2) 你选择该物品参展的原因。 物品介绍 校园生活 叙议文 2023春考 你们班的口语课外教 Tom 发现你们班课上互动不积极，委托你了解同学们的想法。经过你对全班同学看法的了解，有些同学表示对课堂上讨论的话题不感兴趣，有些同学害怕犯错，不敢开口。 1. 向 Tom 反映同学的想法； 2. 向 Tom 提出建议并说明理由。 课堂互动 学习 应用文-信件 2022秋考 假设你是高三学生李华，你校计划组织“走进历史”的主题活动，有三项活动可供选择：（1）走访老战士；（2）表演历史剧；（3）制作短视频。现向全校学生征求意见，给组织者写封信，信的内容包括： 1. 你的选择； 2. 你的理由。 走近历史 社会热点 应用文-信件 2022春考 假如你是名启中学的高三学生李明，入冬以来，你们学校组织全校师生进行晨跑，时间在7：30-7：50，休息5分钟之后准备上第一节课。但是有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适。校方委托学生向同学们征集意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求 1.提出问题 2.提出改进的建议及理由。 晨跑运动 校园生活 应用文-邮件 2021秋考 假如你是名启中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友bill的邮件，告诉你他也准备学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择（课程信息如下表所示），但他对课程选择有些迷茫，想听取你的意见。给bill回邮件，在邮件中你必须： 1.推荐其中一门课程 2.通过比较两门课程的信息，说明你推荐该课程的原因。 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、周四晚7：00-8：00 共8周 每周五晚7：00-8：00 共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 推荐课程 学习 应用文-邮件 2021春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”的课程，课程包含以下四个板块，“网站设计”“大数据处理”“辨别真伪信息”“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求意见，。请你给他写一份电子邮件，要求： 1.选择两个你感兴趣的板块 2.说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。 课程选择 学习 应用文-邮件 2020秋考 名启中学的高三学生李华邀请王磊参加下周五郊外的露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远，交通不便等原因犹豫不决，请你决定写邮件说服他一起去，信的内容包括： 1.提出解决问题的方法 2.阐述音乐会的重要性。 音乐会 人际关系 应用文-邮件 2020春考 假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你在某英语节目中看到一超市对于临近保质期的食物处理办法向公众征求意见，请给超市经理写一封信谈谈你的看法。 临期食品 社会热点 应用文-信件 2019秋考 假如你是李敏，你在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下： 1.介绍一下你在该杂志上看到的内容。 2.自己针对此事的态度及理由。 景点门票 社会热点 应用文-信件 2019春考 假如你是名启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由。 共享衣服 社会热点 应用文-信件 2018秋考 假如你是明启中学的卢平，学校《英语报》向高三学生进行征文，题目为《my teachers》,卢平也想投稿，具体要求是： 1.将你认识的老师进行分类 2.具体描述每一位老师的特征。 我的老师 人际关系 说明文 2018春考 假如你是明启中学的王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅服务员或者图书管理员，并在学校贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应该包括： 1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一。 2.通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率、服务范围等方面阐述。 机器人 校园+社会热点 应用文-帖子 【要点梳理】 应用文是一种与日常生活、学习或工作密切相关, 实用性很强的文体, 包括书信(或电子邮件)等, 每种类别的应用文都有各自的结构和行文特点。 （一）书信类应用文写作结构 第一段：表明写作意图。 第二段：就意图展开（如：投诉产品或服务特点／列举建议或解决措施／表明观点的理由…） 第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的想法。 （二）书信类应用文主要分类 1. 申请信： （1）写作结构指导 第一段：表明自己对某个工作或职位感兴趣，并提出申请。 第二段：介绍相关的个人信息，主要包括你具备了什么样的素质来胜任这份工作和你为什么想得到这份工作。 第三段：提出要求，希望对方考虑你的申请。 （2）常用句型 ① In answer to your advertisement. I wish to apply for… 看到你们的招聘广告，我希望申请… ② Your advertisement offers a most tempting job to a young man just out of college. 你们的招聘广告提供了一份十分吸引刚出校门的年轻人的工作。 ③ I'd like to apply for the position advertised in… 我想申请在……上刊登的这一职位。 ④ I’m rather keen on… 我对……很感兴趣。 ⑤ I've been…since… 自从……以来，我一直在…… ⑥ I have the education and the experience that fit well with your advertised position. 我所受的教育和经历适合你们招聘的职位。 ⑦ I have a personality that is cheerful and optimistic.我的个性开朗又乐观。 ⑧ I did well at school and I have got impressive letters of recommendation from my professors. 我在校学习很好并且有教授肯定的推荐信。 ⑨I would be grateful if you could consider my application. I am looking forward to your reply. 如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。我期待您的回信。 ⑩I am available for the interview at your convenience. Please contact me at the above address or call me. 在您方便之时我随时恭候你的面试。请按照上述地址联系或者给我电话。 2. 建议信： 常用句型： ①写信目的 I have received your letter saying that you plan to have a visit to China for ten days next month. I recommend that…… I am writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to establish a website of our own to attract more clients. I'm sorry (that) you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in making friends.   I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.   I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ...   However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.    Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions.   I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.  ②提出建议 I’d like to suggest that …… May I suggest that…… In my opinion …… I would like to make a recommendation that … I am writing to advise you of …… If I were you, I would …… First(ly), why not ...? If you do this, ...      Secondly, you should/can ...Then/That way, ...   Thirdly, it would be a good idea if ... By doing this, ...    Last but not least ...  ③希望采纳建议，并表示谢意 Thank you for your attention. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks. I hope you will find these ideas useful.   I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful ...   I believe that if you follow my advice, you'll get along well with your classmates.       I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.   3. 邀请信： （1）写作结构指导 邀请信包括宴会，舞会，晚餐，婚礼等等各种邀请信件，形式上大体分为两种：一种为正规格式亦称为请柬，一种为非正式格式，即一般的邀请信。虽然一般邀请信在形式上不如请柬那样正规，但是要求叙事一定要清楚、明白。 （2）常用句型 ①写作目的：发出邀请 It gives me the greatest pleasure to invite you to …… It’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to… I’m writing to invite you to… I’d like to invite you to… ②说明事由及活动地点和时间： Will you and Mrs. Smith give the pleasure of dining with us at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o’clock? There will be a dinner party to be held at the Beijing Hotel on Sunday, October 10th, at eight o’clock. Will you and Mrs. Smith come and join us? I hope that you have no previous engagement and can join us for the English Evening at 7:00 p.m. on Feb. 1st. ③表示期待和感谢： I do hope that you will be able to come. We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your company. We should be very grateful if you could …. I would be grateful if you could accept my invitation. 4 求助信： （1）写作结构指导 主要涉及学生学习或生活上的各种问题或困惑，写求助信应注意清楚描述所遇到的困难，表达清楚所希望得到的帮助，语言得体，语气诚恳礼貌。 （2）常用句型 ①写作目的：求助 I’m writing to ask for/get some help. I’m writing to ask whether you can give me help. I’m sorry that I have to ask you to do me a favor, with the hope that you will be kind to help me. Sorry to bother you but I really get some problems recently. I’m writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor. ②描述困难 But I have met some difficulties with/in …… But unfortunately, I’m encountering difficulty in… Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. I face the choice between…and… It’s really hard for me to decide/deal with … I need your help because …… ③表达希望得到的帮助 I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice. I am sure with your help I can make great progress. Can you manage to give me some constructive guidance? ④列举困难：first, besides, also, what’s more, at the same time, in the meanwhile, in addition,... ⑤请求系列帮助：so, thus, however, but, in order that, so that … ⑥情感词汇：sorry, bother, beg, would you like…. unfortunately, unluckily, especially, sincerely, badly, hopefully 5. 咨询信： 常用句型： ①写信目的 I am a high school student and planning to study in your university this summer. I am a Chinese student who wishes to study at your university. I’m writing to ask if … ②介绍背景&询问详情 I am writing at the suggestion of a friend who graduated from your university last year and has warmly recommended it to me. I will have graduated from high school by the end of this term and wish to continue my study at your university. My plan is to start my course from the next term, and I would be grateful if it’s so kind of you to give me some essential information. Could you please tell me something about your …? Would you please send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application? Would you please send me all the information and the forms as soon as possible? Thank you very much. I would be much obliged to you if you let me know the procedures I have to go through. ③表示谢意，期盼回复 Sorry to bother you, your kind help would be greatly appreciated. I will appreciate it very much if you can give me a reply. 6. 投诉信： （1）写作结构指导： 开头：称呼。 第一段：开门见山地说明意图．倌的开头要交代事由。 第二段：投诉产品或服务，可看重对比反差．即产品或服务应该如何或在广告中被宣传成什么效果．而实际并非如此。 第三段：提出要求及解决办法。 结尾；结束语和署名。 （2）常用句型 ① I am writing to complain about … 我写信投诉… ② I am disappointed to find that things were quite the opposite. 我很失望地发现情况完全相反。 ③ Since I have suffered a lot both physically and psychologically, I demand that you refund the cost and solve the problems as soon as possible. 我的身心皆遭受伤害，因此我坚决要求你们退还所有费用并尽快解决此问题。 ④ If you do not do this, I will complain to the consumer council and resort to law. 如果你们不按我的要求去做，我将会向消费者协会投诉并诉诸法律。 7. 感谢信： （1）写作结构指导 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件主要写明感谢他人的理由，要感情真挚，措辞得体。 （2）常用词汇: v. thank, appreciate; owe  欠债, 感激 n. thanks, gratitude, appreciation; adj. thankful, grateful, appreciative,  appreciate one’s doing … be grateful/thankful to sb. for … convey/express/extend my thanks/gratitude/appreciation for … owe sb. a lot for … thank sb. for … 课堂精练 演练 【课堂典例1】 （求助信） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 阅读下面这封中学生来信（摘自 China Daily 21 Century）.以李明的名义给该同学回信。 Dear Editor， I am a new student at Haining Hongda Senior High School. My home is far from Haining, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I left home, I couldn’t help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do ? Your early reply is expected. Regards, Amy ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming Dear Amy， Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help your academic development and your improvement of personal ability. You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring you happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you should enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it. Wish you happy every day. Faithfully yours， Li Ming 【课堂典例2】 （申请信） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学（ Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。 启事 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。 有意者请来信告知： 1） 你个人的基本情况； 2） 你对申请项目的基本设想； 3） 项目经费的使用计划。 联系方式: 2011hope@icf.org Dear Sir or Madam, Word came that the International Children Funds Association intended to aid middle school students financially in launching programs designed to help children in poor areas. And I am writing to you to apply for one, hoping that the fund as much as 2000 yuan can realize my wish to help these children. As a normal student of MingQi Middle School, I, Li Ming, have been long cherishing a dream that every single child in poverty can have free access to knowledge, thus devoting themselves to society to make it more harmonious in turn. Consequently, if my application can be luckily agreed to, I will spare no effort to build a library for those children as my program. To be more specific, the fund will be divided into three parts. First of all, 800 yuan of it will be spent on buying books which may be mainly second-hand, in order to ensure the quantity. Also, another 400 yuan will be intended to carry out advertisements that call on the people with a sense of responsibility in society to donate textbooks and so forth. What’s more, the remaining 800 yuan, according to my design, shall be given to those children, entitling them the right to buy their favorite books that are beyond what is mentioned above. As you can see from what is talked about above, my plan may still leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to help those children is concerned, I genuinely hope you and your association can grant me the opportunity to turn it into reality. Yours sincerely, 【课堂典例3】 （建议信/邮件） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康、娱乐、文化）中去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚、职业规划、读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容： 1. 你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由； 2. 你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。 参考范文: Dear Editor,     Word comes that our school’s English newspaper is going to have a change on its content. As a hardcore fan of it, I’m writing to voice some of my opinions towards our school’s English newspaper.     In my point of view, among health, entertainment and culture, I would choose “entertainment” to be the one to be eliminated. Not only is this topic far from our study life, but also it may distract our attention from learning. We are already living in a world that is crammed with useless information, and there’s no need to add some more. Instead, I suggest that some interesting stories can be put to the topic of "culture", which are sure to serve quite the equal function of the topic of entertainment.     In terms of the column to be added, what I highly recommend is the readers’ feedback. It’s crucial for the editor to know the reaction of the readers to the newspaper. Only in this way can the newspaper carry something of great value to students and as a result I’m fully convinced that it will gain more popularity among students.     Given the advice mentioned above, I acutely hope that our English paper can achieve greater success and I would appreciate it very much if you can take my advice into serious account. Yours, Chengfei 课后反馈 演练 （2024年宝山区二模） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。你的文章必须包括： 简单描述你觉得能改变这种现象方法； 阐述你所提建议的理由。 （文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称） ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Teacher, I am Li Hua, a student from our esteemed school. Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. However, there is a small aspect that I believe could be further improved upon. Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. Firstly, we could be encouraged to discuss in small groups before sharing our thoughts with the class. Secondly, you could provide prompts or guiding questions to help us bridge the gap in our thinking. The reason for these suggestions is twofold. Firstly, it would foster a more student-centered learning environment, encouraging active participation and critical thinking. Secondly, it would help build our confidence in speaking English, knowing that we have the support and space to explore our ideas. Thank you for your dedication to our learning. Best regards, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，是希望中学的一名学生。现在你们班级英语课上的互动形式和内容都越来越丰富了，但有一个现象需要注意，就是当老师提出的问题学生不能及时回答时，有时候老师会代替学生回答，有时候也会出现较长时间的冷场。针对这种情况，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你的意见和建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 培养：foster→develop 建议：suggestion→advice 提出：pose→put forward 提供：provide→offer 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. 拓展句：If we want to address this, I suggest implementing a few strategies. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Recently, I have noticed that our English classes have become increasingly interactive and engaging. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] Occasionally, when a question is posed and students hesitate to respond promptly, there are instances where you might answer on our behalf or a momentary lull ensues. (运用了when引导时间状语从句和where引导的限制性定语从句) （2024年普陀区二模） 假设你是明启中学高三学生张磊，你的英国朋友Michael来信说他打算今年暑期来中国度假，你想邀请他去你的家乡游览。请你给他回信，内容需包括： 1）你最想带他去的几个地方，以及参与的活动； 2）你所提建议的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Michael, I’m very glad to hear that you plan to come to China for a vacation this summer. I’d like to invite you to visit my hometown. There are several places I’d like to take you to. First, we can go to the local history museum to learn about the culture and history of my hometown. Then, we can visit the beautiful natural scenery, such as the mountains and rivers. We can also participate in some local activities, like tasting the local food and experiencing the traditional customs. I suggest these places and activities because they can give you a comprehensive understanding of my hometown. You can not only appreciate the beauty of nature but also feel the charm of the local culture. I believe you will have a great time. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Yours, Zhang Lei 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给英国朋友Michael写信，邀请其去你的家乡游览。 【详解】1.词汇积累 高兴的：glad→ happy/delighted 打算做某事：plan to→ intend to 参观：visit → pay a visit to 参与：participate in → take part in 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First, we can go to the local history museum to learn about the culture and history of my hometown. 拓展句：First, we can go to the local history museum, where we can learn about the culture and history of my hometown. 【点睛】【高分句型1】There are several places I’d like to take you to.（运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词places） 【高分句型2】I suggest these places and activities because they can give you a comprehensive understanding of my hometown.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句） 01：市西中学2024~2025学年上学期期中考试 假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，开学以来，你们学校组织全校高三学生进行晚自习。安排如下：周一至周四晚上，晚自习从6:30开始到8:30，学校规定高三年级学生必须参加晚自习，并且学生需要在学校食堂用晚餐。但是有同学反映，这种安排并不一定有利于提高学习效率，因此校方委托学生会向同学们征集对晚自习的意见，请你向学生会写封邮件。要求如下： 1. 说明你认为目前晚自习时间安排存在的主要问题； 2. 提出具体的改进建议和改进的理由。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Student Union, I’m Li Ming, a senior three student. I think there are some problems with the current evening self-study arrangement. Firstly, starting at 6:30 and ending at 8:30 is a bit too long. It makes us feel very tired and less focused in the later part. I suggest shortening the self-study time to two hours, from 7:00 to 9:00. This way, we can have a short break after dinner to relax and then start studying with full energy. Also, it would be better if students have the option to choose whether to have dinner at the school canteen or not. Some students may have already eaten at home or prefer to bring their own food. I believe these changes will help improve our learning efficiency during the evening self-study. Yours, Li Ming 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给学生会写信，就学校组织全校高三学生进行晚自习一事给出自己的建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：firstly → first of all 建议：suggest → advise 此外：also → what’s more 提高：improve → enhance 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：Firstly, starting at 6:30 and ending at 8:30 is a bit too long. It makes us feel very tired and less focused in the later part. 拓展句：Firstly, starting at 6:30 and ending at 8:30 is a bit too long, which makes us feel very tired and less focused in the later part. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Also, it would be better if students have the option to choose whether to have dinner at the school canteen or not. (运用了if引导的状语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe these changes will help improve our learning efficiency during the evening self-study. (运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句) 02：2024-2025学年七宝中学高三上英语第一次月考 假如你是明启中学的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。 启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。 信中请包括： 1. 你个人基本情况 2. 你对申请项目具体设想 3. 项目经费使用情况 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Sirs, I’m Li Ming, a student from Ming Qi Middle School of Shanghai. As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2, 000 yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas. My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly, we will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program. As to how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1, 000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers. I am looking forward to your reply, thanks! Yours, Li Ming 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封申请信，申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。 【详解】1.词汇积累 开始的，最初的：initial → original 昂贵的：expensive → costly 渴望，意愿：desire → willingness 动身去某地：set out for sp.→ leave for sp. 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. 拓展句：Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge so that they can be qualified teachers. 【点睛】【高分句型1】The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Lastly, we will set out for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 03：华东师大二附中2024学年第一学期10月英语试卷 你是明启中学的李华，进入高三以后，你发现你身边的同学坐在课桌前的时间越来越久了，他们利用一切“空闲”时间，比如下课、出操，甚至是体育课抓紧完成作业。你对这个现象表示担忧，打算写一封信给校长，建言献策，提出一个让高三学生更积极主动参加体育锻炼的方法。你的信需包含以下内容： 1. 这个提议的内容和具体做法；2. 提议的可行性分析。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Principal, I am Li Hua, from Mingqi High School. I am concerned about the growing tendency among Senior Three students to prioritize completing homework over taking part in physical activities. They use every available moment, including breaks and PE classes, to work on their studies. To solve this, I suggest a mandatory “Movement Break” program during the school day. This program would add brief exercise periods to the daily schedule, encouraging students to engage in light physical activities such as stretching, walking, or simple sports games. These activities would be supervised by PE teachers to ensure they are effective and safe. The feasibility of this idea rests on its simplicity and the potential benefits it offers. It requires minimal adjustment to the current timetable and has been shown to improve mental alertness and reduce stress, which will lead to a healthier, more balanced school environment for all Senior Three students. Thank you for considering my proposal. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校长写封信，就高三同学不重视体育锻炼，只重视学习的现象提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 担心的：concerned → worried 解决：solve → settle 建议：suggest → recommend 参加：engage in → take part in 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：These activities would be supervised by PE teachers to ensure they are effective and safe. 拓展句：These activities would be supervised by PE teachers, which can ensure the activities are effective and safe. 【点睛】【高分句型1】This program would add brief exercise periods to the daily schedule, encouraging students to engage in light physical activities such as stretching, walking, or simple sports games. (运用了分词作状语) 【高分句型2】It requires minimal adjustment to the current timetable and has been shown to improve mental alertness and reduce stress, which will lead to a healthier, more balanced school environment for all Senior Three students. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) （2021年6月上海高考） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese 假设你是启明中学高三学生李华，收到外国朋友 Bil 的邮件，告诉你他准备开始学习汉语，现有两门汉语课程供他选择(课程信息如下表所示)，但他对课程选择有些茫然，想听取你的建议。给 Bill 回复一封邮件，在邮件中你必须: 1.推荐其中一门课程; 课程名称 汉语听说 汉语读写 课程内容 日常会话 故事读写 授课安排 每周一、四 晚7:00-8:00；共8周 每周五 晚7:00-8:30；共16周 授课语言 全中文 中英双语 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 I can't be more thrilled to hear that you are going to learn Chinese, and I'm really glad to offer you a helping hand. After comparing the two courses carefully, I suggest you choose Chinese reading and writing. Here are my reasons. First of all, this course offers bio-language learning. Given that you have never made contact with Chinese,having the class with completely Chinese might be an obstacle for you With the help of your mother language, I'm sure that you will accept Chinese more smoothly. Second,'Chinese reading and writing’ provides a less intense learning period. As a student, you are likely to be busier at Monday and Thursday, and you may have more free time at Friday. What's more, longer learning period can also make you better adapt to the Chines environment. In conclusion I strongly recommend ‘Chinese reading and writing’ as your first touch of Chinese. Should you have another problems, I would always be glad to help. 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$