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Unit 6
My clothes, my style
Integration D(Writing)
A “Fashion Wall”
D
The Class 1, Grade 7 students want to make a “Fashion Wall” in their classroom. Each student is going to design an outfit for daily wear and write an article about it.
What should we think about if we want to design an outfit for daily wear?
Brainstorming
Features
Colours
Materials
...
Sandy’s plan
What type of clothes does Sandy include in her design?
What does Sandy think about when she designs the outfit?
D1
Read Sandy’s plan and answer the questions.
Sandy’s plan
Do you think Sandy chooses the right colours?
Do you think the outfit is comfortable to wear?
D1
Read Sandy’s plan and answer the questions.
Comfortable to wear
Colour matching
Feelings
Introduction
My design
Sandy’s article
D2
Read Sandy’s article about her fashion design and figure out the structure.
Writing order
Para.7:
Come in different sizes
Para.5: M_________
Para.1:
My d______
Para.6: S____________
Para.4: J_______
Para.2: S_______
Para.3: J_______
esign
hirt
acket
eans
ports shoes
from top to bottom
from inside to outside
aterial
The structure
Make a similar plan for your designs using Sandy’s plan as a model.
Feature
Colour
Material
My plan
My fashion design
Write an article about your fashion design.
My article
问题 是 否 如果为“否”,如何改进?
你在短文中是否介绍了自己对日常服装的设计?
你在短文的首段是否说明了你设计的所有服装?
你在短文的主干是否按照从上至下或从里到外的顺序来分段描述你的服装设计?
你在短文的尾段是否介绍了你设计的服装的其他特征?
你在短文中是否提供了重要和充足的细节来描述你所设计的服装的特征、颜色、材料等信息?
你的短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语来描述你所设计的服装和阐述设计理念?
你的短文在大小写、拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?
评价指标 得分 评分标准
短文中是否介绍了对日常服装的设计? 5=Excellent
4=Good
3=Acceptable
2=Needs Improvement
短文是否有清晰的开头和结尾?
短文是否分段描述了作者所设计的服装的不同方面?
短文中各段的细节是否充足?
短文是否使用了恰当的句型和丰富的词语?
短文在大小写、拼写、语法和标点方面是否都正确?
Self-assessment
Peer assessment
Assessment
Sample
Introduction
My design
Feelings
Language points
Homework
My fashion design
Polish your article and try to draw your outfit.
Introduce your fashion design to your family.
Thank you!
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