内容正文:
应用文写作
假如你是李华,在今年五月十四日的母亲节,你为妈妈亲手制作了一份礼物。请你用英语写一篇短文记录此事,内容包括:
1. 你亲手制作了什么物品?
2. 你亲手制作时的过程如何?
3. 你制作完成后有什么样的感受?
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mother’s Day fell on May 14th this year.
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写作提纲:
· 第一段:点明今年母亲节的日期,引出为妈妈制作礼物这件事。
· 第二段:详细描述制作礼物的过程,包括准备材料、制作步骤等。
· 第三段:表达制作完成后的感受,如成就感、对妈妈的爱与感激等。
语言积累:
1. “I decided to make a handmade card for my mother.” 我决定为我妈妈制作一张手工卡片。
2. “I gathered all the necessary materials like colored paper, scissors, glue and markers.” 我收集了所有必要的材料,如彩纸、剪刀、胶水和马克笔。
3. “I carefully cut the colored paper into different shapes.” 我仔细地把彩纸剪成不同的形状。
4. “I glued the shapes onto the card to form a beautiful pattern.” 我把这些形状粘在卡片上形成一个漂亮的图案。
5. “Then I used the markers to write some warm words to express my love.” 然后我用马克笔写了一些温暖的话语来表达我的爱。
6. “The process of making the gift was full of joy and concentration.” 制作礼物的过程充满了喜悦和专注。
7. “I put a lot of effort and heart into making this gift.” 我在制作这个礼物上投入了很多努力和真心。
8. “When I finally finished the gift, I felt a great sense of accomplishment.” 当我最终完成礼物时,我感到一种强烈的成就感。
9. “I knew this handmade gift would carry my deep love and gratitude to my mother.” 我知道这个手工礼物将承载我对妈妈深深的爱和感激。
10. “I couldn't wait to give it to my mother and see her happy face.” 我迫不及待地想把它送给妈妈,看到她开心的脸。
写作示范一:
Mother’s Day fell on May 14th this year. I decided to make a handmade photo album for my mother. I collected a pile of photos of our family from different times. I bought a plain album and some decorative stickers. I carefully arranged the photos in the album in chronological order. Then I decorated the pages with the stickers, adding some small notes beside the photos to record the precious memories. The process was a bit time-consuming but extremely enjoyable. When I completed the photo album, I was filled with a sense of pride. I knew this album would be a unique gift that could bring back many beautiful memories for my mother. I was eager to present it to her and hoped it would make her feel my love.
写作示范二:
Mother’s Day fell on May 14th this year. I made a hand-knitted scarf for my mother. I prepared knitting needles and a ball of soft wool. I started knitting stitch by stitch, concentrating on every loop. Although it was a little difficult at first and I made some mistakes, I didn't give up. I kept practicing and gradually got better. It took me several days to finish the scarf. When it was done, I felt a great achievement. I imagined my mother wearing it and feeling warm, not only physically but also in her heart. I was really excited to give it to her and show my love in this special way.
写作示范三:
Mother’s Day fell on May 14th this year. I chose to make a handmade candle for my mother. I got wax, a wick, and some essential oils for fragrance. I melted the wax carefully in a pot over low heat. Then I added a few drops of the essential oil to give it a nice smell. I placed the wick in the center of the candle mold and poured the melted wax into it. After it cooled and solidified, I decorated the candle with some ribbons. The whole process was like a magical creation. When I finished, I was very satisfied. I thought this candle could bring a warm and relaxing atmosphere to my mother's life. I couldn't wait to see her reaction when she received it.
【答案】参考范文:
Mother’s Day fell on May 14th this year. I made a gift for my mother. As my mother likes reading, I made a bookshelf for her.
Several days before the day I bought the wood on the Internet. Then I made the bookshelf all by myself. At first, I read the instructions. Then, following the instructions, I pieced together different pieces of wood and nailed the wood. Eventually, the bookshelf was assembled. Afterwards I painted the bookshelf purple, which is my mother’s favorite color. Looking at the bookshelf, I was filled with happiness.
When my mother received the gift, she hugged me, tears rolling down her face.
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