读后续写--特殊的生日礼物：从失望到感恩的心灵成长 讲义-浙江省丽水市五校高中发展共同体2024-2025学年高二上学期11月期中考试英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Ted pressed his nose against the store window that stood between him and a metallic-blue 21-speed racer. “Look at that bike, Sam! I want that bike!” “Get away from there before Mr. Huan makes you clean the drool (口水) from his store window!” His friend Sam laughed and pulled Ted away. “Well, my birthday’s tomorrow, and I’ve been dropping a lot of hints at home, like the ads and pictures of the bike. I’ve just got to have it so I can go anywhere I want!” “Your dad’s out of work,” Sam said quietly, “and I bet that bike’s awfully expensive. But don’ t be sad, you can ride my bike around the lake if you want.” Ted didn’t answer. “Yeah,” he thought, “but you only turn 13 once. Mom and Dad always promised me something special when I became a teenager.” He jumped on a hydrant (消防栓) and balanced a moment before jumping down again.“He’ll find a job soon.” When he got home, his parents were in the kitchen talking. Ted hugged them and went to the living room. Flopping down on the couch, he dug between the cushions for the remote. As he flipped through TV stations, he caught snatches (片段) of his parents’conversation. There were words like “overqualified” and “mortgage” and something about unemployment checks. Ted felt upset and turned the volume higher. The next morning, Ted’s father woke him. “Hey, Son, Mom had to go to work early, so I’ll be making your birthday breakfast. Do you want anything special? Maybe something with wheels?” Ted was suddenly wide awake. He threw back the covers and bounded (蹦着跑) into the kitchen. There, wrapped in newspaper and tied with a crooked bow, was a bicycle-shaped package. “Dad!” Ted tore through the newspaper, and then suddenly stopped and stared. There stood not the shiny racing bike but a secondhand 10-speed. The chrome had been shined up, and the frame was freshly painted, but it was not new. 注意: 1.续写词数应为150个左右; 2.请按如下格式作答。 第一段：It was not what he had hoped for.______________________________________ 第二段：Suddenly, he was ashamed of himself.____________________________ 文章大意：泰德渴望拥有商店里那辆蓝色 21 速赛车作为 13 岁生日礼物，他不断向家人暗示。然而他的父亲失业了，尽管如此，生日当天父亲还是给他准备了一个自行车形状的包裹，可里面是一辆二手 10 速自行车，并非他心心念念的赛车。 五处伏笔及续写回应： · 伏笔：父亲失业。续写回应：因经济状况只能送二手自行车。 · 伏笔：泰德听到父母关于失业、房贷等的谈话。续写回应：他开始理解父亲的不易，改变对礼物的态度。 · 伏笔：朋友说父亲失业且车很贵。续写回应：泰德最终意识到不能只考虑自己的愿望。 · 伏笔：父亲问他想要有轮子的特别东西。续写回应：父亲努力用二手自行车给他惊喜。 · 伏笔：泰德渴望赛车且认为 13 岁生日应得特别礼物。续写回应：他从失望到愧疚，学会珍惜和感恩。 续写要点： · 第一段：泰德看到不是想要的赛车很失落，他抱怨父亲，父亲则无奈地解释家庭经济状况，说这是他努力修复准备的，希望泰德能理解。 · 第二段：泰德想到父亲失业还努力满足自己，回忆起父亲平时的关爱，意识到自己的自私，他向父亲道歉，然后骑着二手自行车出去，感受到风的吹拂，明白礼物的意义不在于新旧贵贱。 情感线：泰德最初看到二手自行车时极度失望和不满，对父亲有所抱怨，随着思考父亲的处境和过往的爱，他的内心转为愧疚，最后接受并感恩这份礼物，情感从消极转为积极。 故事线：泰德生日得到二手自行车而非赛车后，与父亲有一番交流，而后他自我反思，接受自行车并理解父亲的爱。 主旨升华句： 1. “True value lies not in the price tag of a gift, but in the love and sacrifice that accompany it.”（真正的价值不在于礼物的价格标签，而在于伴随它的爱与牺牲。） 2. “Gratitude blossoms when we look beyond our desires and see the efforts of those who love us.”（当我们超越自己的欲望，看到爱我们的人的努力时，感恩之花就会绽放。） 3. “A simple gift can teach us profound lessons about life, love and contentment.”（一份简单的礼物能教会我们关于生活、爱和满足的深刻道理。） 4. “In the face of disappointment, understanding and acceptance can transform a moment of sadness into a lifetime of gratitude.”（在失望面前，理解和接受能将悲伤的时刻转变为一生的感恩。） 5. “The best gifts are not those we covet, but those that open our eyes to the richness of love around us.”（最好的礼物不是我们觊觎的那些，而是那些让我们看到周围丰富的爱的礼物。） 写作示范一： It was not what he had hoped for. Ted’s face fell. “Dad, this isn’t the bike I wanted! It’s old and ugly!” His father sighed. “Son, I know you had your heart set on that racer. But with me out of work, this is the best I could do. I spent days fixing this up for you, hoping you’d like it.” Ted felt a pang of guilt but still couldn’t hide his disappointment. Suddenly, he was ashamed of himself. He remembered all the times his father had taken him to the park, helped him with his homework, and been there for him. This bike was a symbol of his father’s love, not just a means of transportation. He walked over to his father and hugged him. “Dad, I’m sorry. I was being selfish. This bike is great, and I love it.” He then took the bike outside and rode around the block, feeling the wind in his hair and a newfound appreciation in his heart. 写作示范二： It was not what he had hoped for. Ted stared at the bike, his lips trembling. “Dad, why isn’t it the racing bike? I thought you knew how much I wanted it.” His father’s eyes were sad. “Ted, we don’t have the money right now. I searched everywhere for a good deal and worked hard to make this one nice for you.” Ted was silent, his disappointment weighing heavily. Suddenly, he was ashamed of himself. He thought about his father’s unemployment and how hard it must have been for him. He realized that a new bike wasn’t as important as his father’s love. He smiled at his father. “Dad, thank you. I was wrong to be so ungrateful. This bike is a special gift, and I’ll take good care of it.” He hopped on the bike and pedaled away, leaving his self-centeredness behind and embracing the love within the simple gift. 参考答案 It was not what he had hoped for. Ted's heart sank as he eyed the old 10-speed. "Dad, this isn't the cool bike I saw in the store. It's not even close!" His father's face showed a mix of disappointment and understanding. "Ted, times are tough. I lost my job, and we have to make do. I thought you'd appreciate the effort I put into making this bike look nice for you." Ted kicked at the floor, his frustration evident. Suddenly, he was ashamed of himself. He remembered how his father used to play catch with him in the yard, even after a long day at work. He thought about the family dinners his father always tried to make special. This bike was his father's way of showing love, despite their difficult circumstances. He looked up at his father with teary eyes. "Dad, I'm so sorry. I was only thinking about myself. This bike is perfect because it comes from you." He then got on the bike and rode off, realizing that the true gift was his father's unwavering love and the lesson in gratitude he had just learned. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$