Unit 3 作文课件 2024-2025学年人教版八年级英语上册

I’m more outgoing than my sister. Unit3 Writing When you are tired,he does homework for you. He is always there to listen. When you fight with others,he helps you to fight. He cares about you all the time. He talks about and shares everything. When you don't know the answers in the exam, she gives you the answers to copy. a true friend a false friend or Judge Do you have a true friend? 3a Wang Lingling and Liu Lili are best friends. Look at the chart below and compare them. Wang Lingling’s best friend is Liu Lili. They are both tall, but…_____________ __________________________________ __________________________________ __________________________________ Wang Lingling’ best friend is Liu Lili. They are both tall, but _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ Wang Lingling’s straight hair is longer than Liu Lili. Wang Lingling likes reading and LiuLili likes sports. Both of them are popular and outgoing. Wang Lingling is more serious, and Liu Lili is funnier. Wang Lingling is more hard-working, and Liu Lili is smarter than Wang Lingling. 华山中学征文启事(writing competition) 《朋友》中有句歌词唱到，“朋友一生一起走，那些日子不再有，一句话，一辈子，一生情... ”请你用英语写一篇短文介绍你一位最好的朋友，体现你们的异同之处，发表你的交友观，最好在字里行间让我们感受到你们之间深深的情谊。 内容包括： 1）外貌 2）性格 3）爱好 4）其他特点 注意: 1. 词数100词左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。 审(题)列（纲） 审题要点， 列出思路 修（饰）改（正） 语言丰富， 语法正确 誊抄 字迹工整， 提升颜值 The Writing Procedure 起草 句内通顺， 句间相连 审(题)列(纲) Step 1 审题 compare friends比较朋友 third person第三人称 present simple tense一般现在时 narrative 记叙文 主 主题topic 人 人称person 时 时态tense 体 体裁genre Tip：审题主人时，体裁也关键。 Write your answers on your guiding paper. Step 1 审题 compare friends比较朋友 third person第三人称 present simple tense一般现在时 narrative 记叙文 主 主题topic 人 人称person 时 时态tense 体 体裁genre Tip：审题主人时，体裁也关键。 Correct your answers 审列 Add the details 后细节 Step 2 列纲 list the outline 先框架 异同、 要点 appearance 外貌 height build hair,eye... others tall/of medium height/short heavy/of medium build/thin long/short/curly/straight hair big eyes/round face wear a pair of glassas/sports shoes...beautiful/handsome(英俊的) Work in groups.Say out the words and phrases as many as you can. personality 性格 hobby爱好 other features 其他特点 opinions 观点 √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ √ 审列 Add the details 后细节 Step 2 列纲 list the outline 先框架 Finish your structure. （3 mins） 异同、 要点 审列 Show one in class. Share with your partner . 起草 similarities Step 1 句内通畅 学以致用 sentence patterns in Unit 3 differences as 形/副原级 as both/both...and... 形/副比较级 than not as(so) 形/副原级 as How to make sure your sentences are right? as 形/副原级 as both/both...and... 形/副比较级 than not as(so) 形/副原级 as 简单句， Step 2 句间相连 Zhang Hui is my best friend. In some ways,I am similar to her.Firstly,both she and I have long hair. Secondly,She is as friendly as me .What’s more, We have the same hobbies such as reading the books.The most important thing is we talk about and share everything .However,in some ways, we are different.She often wears sports clothes，but I often wear dresses.She is more careful than me.I like singing ,but she likes drawing . In addition, she is more hard-working and farseeing than me. I fully agree with that friends are like books--you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. 妙招1—— 有条有理 14分 Zhang Hui is my best friend. Both she and I have long hair. She is as friendly as me . We have the same hobbies such as reading the books. we talk about and share everything .She often wears sports clothes，but I often wear dresses.She is more careful than me.I like singing ,but she likes drawing . she is more hard-working and farseeing than me. Friends are like books--you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. 12分 How to get more scores? Which one is better? Administrator (A) - 简单句， Step 2 句间相连 表层次的词★列举： 1.两方面： On the one hand,. . . On the other hand. . .，in some ways ,but in sone ways 2.多方面： Firstly（First of all,）. . . Secondly,. . . What's more（In addition）...the last but not least(最后但同样重要的) Most ( important) of all 总结： in a word /all in all 阐述观点： I think/ in my opinion/I fully agree with that. . . 妙招1—— 有条有理 14分 Zhang Hui is my best friend. In some ways,I am similar to her.Firstly,both she and I have long hair. Secondly,She is as friendly as me .What’s more, We have the same hobbies such as reading the books.The most important thing is we talk about and share everything .However,in some ways, we are different.She often wears sports clothes，but I often wear dresses.She is more careful than me.I like singing ,but she likes drawing . In addition, she is more hard-working and farseeing than me. I fully agree with that friends are like books--you don’t need a lot of them as long as they’re good. Administrator (A) - 简单句， Step 2 句间相连 妙招2—— —“连”蝶变 16分 1.I have many friends.Zhang Hui is the best one . I have many friends and zhang Hui is the best one . 2.I am tall .She is short . I am tall but she is short . 3.We are different.We love each other. Though we are different,we love each other. We are different,but we love each other. Connect the two sentences . Administrator (A) - 简单句， Step 2 句间相连 妙招2—— —“连”蝶变 16分 1. I have many friends and zhang Hui is the best one . 2. I am tall but she is short . 3.Though we are different,we love each other. We are different,but we love each other. 合二为一 and so however when if(whether) as long as because though but... complex sentence(复合句) 高级句式 Connect the two sentences . Administrator (A) - 简单句， Step 2 句间相连 1.We talk about and share everything ... 2.She is much more hard-working than me... 一“连”蝶变 16分 借“连”拓展 so I want to learn from her. so she stays at home more time than me. that’s why she gets more grades . and so however when that’s why if(whether) as long as because though but... How to make the sentences become longer and richer because 添加原则：进一步阐述说明，为表达我们的观点和情感服务。 as long as we like and trust each other. we have free time. Discuss in group. Administrator (A) - 简单句， Now it’s your time to finish your composition. How to get more than 16 scores? 修（饰）改（正） 简单句， 修改 Step 1 语言丰富 Tip： 单词短语换，高级词汇现，不会感到厌。 I like singing ,but she likes drawing . I am interested in singing ,but she is fond of drawing . be good at be talented in = be interested in be excited about be fond of = = Beautify(美化) your words. 简单句， 修改 Step 1 语言丰富 good Specific(具体的) active(活跃的) outgoing intelligent有才智的，聪明的 brave(勇敢的) honest（诚实的） patient（有耐心的） warm-hearted excellent understanding（善解人意的） humorous 幽默的 independent 独立的；自主的 Tip： 单词短语换， 高级词汇现， 不会感到厌。 Advanced （高级的） Which word do you need?Put it in your composition. 简单句， 修改 Step 1 语言丰富 倒装句：(描述相同之处) As the saying goes,谚语 1、A life without a friend is a life without a sun.人生在世无朋友,犹如生活无太阳。 2、Be slow in choosing a friend; slower in changing.选择朋友要审慎,摒弃更要审又慎。 3、A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真交。 4、A father is a treasure,a brother is a comfort,but a friend is both.父亲是财富,兄弟是安慰,朋友兼而有之。 She is tall,I am tall. I like reading ,she likes reading. She is tall,so am I . I like reading ,so does she. so +操作词+ 主语 Get your sentence. Tip： 单词短语换，高级词汇现，不会感到厌。 简单句， 修改 Step 2 语法正确 常 见 病 症 我 先 知 Find out the mistakes and correct them. 1.She very friendly. 2.we are both have long hair. 3.I have long hair,she have long hair ,too. 4.She likes draw. 5.I am interested in sing. 简单句， 修改 Step 2 语法正确 各句出错原因 1.She is very friendly. 无动于衷症:谓语动词缺失 2.we are both have long hair. 多动症：一个句子存在多个谓语 3.I have long hair,she has long hair ,too. 主谓不一致 4.She likes drawing. 多动症 like doing固定搭配 like后跟动名词 5.I am interested in singing. 介词后跟动名词 常 见 病 症 我 先 知 Correct your answers. 简单句， 修改 Step 2 语法正确 下面每句子中有1-2处错误， 请找出并在原句中改正。 各句出错原因 1.She is very friendly. 无动于衷症:谓语动词缺失 2.we are both have long hair. 多动症：一个句子存在多个谓语 3.I have long hair,she has long hair ,too. 主谓不一致 4.She likes drawing. 多动症 like doing固定搭配 like后跟动名词 5.I am interested in singing. 介词后跟动名词 常 见 病 症 我 先 知 Correct the composition in pairs,and give the score. 审列 Whose composition is the best ? Each group chooses the best one . 审列 Whose composition is the best ? Show one in class. 誊抄 誊抄 名、动时语态，重改两方面。 SK字体 Stage 2：誊抄 Tip：抄写三三一，得分必在前。 名、动时语态，重改两方面。 第一个“三”：一把尺子，一支铅笔，一块橡皮； 第二个“三”：作文纸横线为第三线 第三个“三”：线上3mm 熟记一口诀：先连线，再誊抄，笔迹干后再擦掉 实力有限，形象补填！ After class,let’s see whose handwriting is the most beautiful. 写 作 四 步 审列 起草 修改 誊抄 审题 列纲 句内通畅 句间相连 修饰——语言丰富 改正——语言正确 框架+细节 一“连”蝶变 多动症 无动于衷症 主谓不一致... 抄写三三一，得分必在前 单词短语换，感被定倒谚，高级词汇现，丰富又美观。 有条有理 单元句型 句子链 审题主人时，体裁也关键。 Review with your partner. for listening With the most beautiful words, 用最美的字， calm your heart, 沉静自己的内心， express the most sincere feelings to your bset friend! 表达对好朋友最真挚的情感！ $$