内容正文:
邀请信
活动安排?
音乐节的活动集中在唱歌和舞蹈
歌舞的内容/种类…
表演者
dance show
singing show
instrument show
talented students/ students who have talent for/ students who are talented in ...
our school choir(合唱团)
our school dance club
renowned (有名望的)/local bands
Others:
interactive games互动游戏
lucky draw session 抽奖环节
小词修饰表演:
breathtaking/spectacular (令人惊叹的);marvelous(极好的)/stirring(激动人心的)/spellbinding/fascinating(迷人的)
(2019年全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。
审题
写作目的
写作对象
人称
体裁
时态
邀请信
第一/二/三人称
一般现在/将来时
朋友Allen
→不用自我介绍,注意语气
邀请Allen参加音乐节
结构
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
(问候)+交代背景+写作目的
音乐节时间+活动安排
期待到来+欢迎他表演节目
你校将举办音乐节、热爱音乐
“举办”表达
举办:
发生:
临近:
hold, organize, launch, carry out, conduct
take place
come near, around the coner, with...approaching
相对多
有写作背景就写题目中的写作背景,不用自我创造
背景当然可以是他喜欢音乐,但是喜欢可以参杂在文章中,同位语这种
因为写作的目的是邀请他参加活动而不是邀请他表演
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结构
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
(问候)+交代背景+写作目的
音乐节时间+活动安排
期待到来+欢迎他表演节目
have great enthusiasm/a passion for music
be enthusiastic/passionate about music
be keen on music/ be fond of music
develop a profound love for music
be a keen lover/enthusiast of music
你校将举办音乐节、热爱音乐
相对多
背景当然可以是他喜欢音乐,但是喜欢可以参杂在文章中,同位语这种
因为写作的目的是邀请他参加活动而不是邀请他表演
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Para.1
(问候)+写作背景+写作目的
如何表达「写信目的」?——(邀请信)
Para.2
音乐节时间+活动安排
The festival will be held(is scheduled to be held) on the playground at 3 p.m. on April 25th, lasting 5 hours in total.
时间要具体,体现出邀请的真心实意
时间段from A点 to B点
时间段--last v.持续
As scheduled(按照计划), the festival will be held+地点时间
时间 will witness the festival +地点
As scheduled,
Organized
Around the corner
Approach
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连接词:
Para.2
音乐节时间+活动安排
(at first/to begin with 起初; then 然后; finally 那以后)
(first of all首先;besides此外;Last but not least最后但同样重要的是)
(initially起初;additionally此外;eventually最终)
follow v. 在…后到来; 接着…发生
Following the singing performance, an excellent dance show will take place. 歌唱演出结束后,将开始一场精彩的舞蹈表演.
Para.2
音乐节时间+活动安排
To begin with, we will gather in the lecture hall. Then wait for the show to begin. There are various shows ranging from dancing to singing as well as playing instruments. During the show, we could interact with performers. After the show finishes, students will choose their favorite show and reward the most popular show. Finally, we can go home.
不完全恰当的活动安排+简单的遣词造句
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Para.2
音乐节时间+活动安排
Initially, some traditional Chinese songs will be performed by students who have talent for music, ___________________________
________________________________________________________.
Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform, ________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________.
Eventually, _____________________________________________ there are interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
which enables you to have a clearer understanding of Chinese culture.
making it a great chance for you to appreciate the Chinese music from a professional perspective.
what’s the most stirring part of the festival is that
非限制性定语从句
分词作状语
名词性从句
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Para.3
期待到来+欢迎他表演节目
不胜感激:
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
我相信你会喜欢:
I’m convinced that you will like this music festival.
期待你的到来:
Looking forward to your participation/involvement/ arrival/ coming.
上台表演:
We’d be more than delighted if you could show up on stage.
Dear Allen,
Exceptionally thrilled to know that our school will launch a music festival and you have a passion for Chinese music, I’m writing to extend my sincere invitation to you to participate in the festival, which is not only a feast for the eyes, but also a treat for the minds.
As scheduled, the music festival will be held on the playground at 3 p.m. on April 25th, lasting 5 hours in total. Initially, some traditional Chinese songs will be performed by students who have talent for music, which enables you to have a clearer understanding of Chinese culture. Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform, making it a great chance for you to appreciate the Chinese music from a professional perspective. Eventually, what’s the most stirring part of the festival is that there are interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
Look forward to your coming and we’d be more than delighted if you could show up on stage. I’m convinced that you will like this music festival.
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告知信
假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请你写封邮件告知你的外国朋友Allen关于音乐节的具体计划,内容包括:1.时间地点; 2.活动安排。
审题
写作目的
写作对象
人称
体裁
时态
告知信
第一/二/三人称
一般现在/将来时
朋友Allen
→不用自我介绍,注意语气
告诉Allen音乐节相关信息
结构
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
(问候)+交代背景+写作目的
音乐节时间地点+活动安排
表达期待
相对多
背景当然可以是他喜欢音乐,但是喜欢可以参杂在文章中,同位语这种
因为写作的目的是邀请他参加活动而不是邀请他表演
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如何表达「写信目的」?——(告知信)
如何表达「期待」?——(告知信)
Dear Allen,
Exceptionally thrilled to know that you have a passion for Chinese music, I’m writing to inform you that our school will launch a music festival, which is not only a feast for the eyes, but also a treat for the minds.
As scheduled, the music festival will be held on the playground at 3 p.m. on April 25th, lasting 5 hours in total. Initially, some traditional Chinese songs will be performed by students who have talent for music, which enables you to have a clearer understanding of Chinese culture. Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians will show up to perform, making it a great chance for you to appreciate the Chinese music from a professional perspective. Eventually, what’s the most stirring part of the festival is that there are interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
Hopefully, you won’t miss the activity, and your attendance is highly expected. If there is anything I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.
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活动报道
假定你是李华,你校上周五举办了音乐节”Music Makes a Better Life”。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.活动主题;2.活动内容;3.活动反响
审题
写作对象
人称
体裁
时态
活动报道
第三人称
一般过去时
全校师生
→保持客观
结构
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
活动的反响或意义
活动内容
活动的基本信息
(目的,主题,时间,地点等)
相对多
背景当然可以是他喜欢音乐,但是喜欢可以参杂在文章中,同位语这种
因为写作的目的是邀请他参加活动而不是邀请他表演
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Para.1
活动的基本信息(目的,主题,时间,地点等)
活动举办的目的
Para.1
活动的基本信息(目的,主题,时间,地点等)
如何表达「活动目的」?
Para.2
活动的内容
Initially, some traditional Chinese songs were performed by students who have talent for music, ___________________________
________________________________________________________.
Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians also showed up to perform, ________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________.
Eventually, _____________________________________________ there were interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
what’s the most stirring part of the festival was that
which was not only a feast for the eyes, but also a treat for the minds
making it a great chance for students to appreciate music from a professional perspective.
Para.3
活动的反响和意义
反响:
It turned out that the activity got a great success.
意义:
The activity was very meaningful and memorable, from which we can...
Not only did this activity ..., but it also .... (倒装结构)
So meaningful and memorable was the activity that ....(倒装结构)
Para.3
活动的反响和意义
As expected, it turned out that the music festival got a great success. Not only can this festival provide a platform for our students to showcase themselves, but it can also relieve students’ stress by creating a spellbinding and relaxing musical atmosphere.
Dear Allen,
In a praiseworthy attempt to enrich students’ campus life and develop their passion for music, our school launched a spectacular music festival on the playground last Sunday.
Initially, some traditional Chinese songs were performed by students who have talent for music, which was not only a feast for the eyes, but also a treat for the minds. Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians also showed up to perform, making it a great chance for students to appreciate music from a professional perspective. Eventually, what’s the most stirring part of the festival was that there were interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
As expected, it turned out that the music festival got a great success. Not only did this festival provide a platform for our students to showcase themselves, but it also relieved students’ stress by creating a spellbinding and relaxing musical atmosphere.
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通知
为了丰富学习生活,你校将组织音乐节,请你写一则通知,刊登在学校英文网站上,内容包括:1.举办时间地点;2.活动的内容:3. 发起号召
审题
写作对象
人称
体裁
时态
通知
第三人称
一般现在时/一般将来时
全校师生
→保持客观
结构
Para.1
Para.2
Para.3
注意事项或发起号召
活动内容
活动的基本信息
(目的,主题,时间,地点等)
相对多
背景当然可以是他喜欢音乐,但是喜欢可以参杂在文章中,同位语这种
因为写作的目的是邀请他参加活动而不是邀请他表演
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Dear Allen,
In a praiseworthy attempt to enrich students’ campus life and develop their passion for music, our school will launch a spectacular music festival on the playground at 3 p.m. on April 25th.
Initially, some traditional Chinese songs will be performed by students who have talent for music, which is not only a feast for the eyes, but also a treat for the minds. Additionally, some famous Chinese musicians will also show up to perform, making it a great chance for students to appreciate music from a professional perspective. Eventually, what’s the most stirring part of the festival is that there are interactive games and a lucky draw session to add fun and excitement.
We encourage all students to actively participate in this memorable evening. Mark your calendars and join us for an unforgettable experience!
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