15.主题类型-志愿服务(建议信)-2025年中考英语一轮复习书面表达精讲精练(通用版)

15 主题类型-志愿服务(建议信) ( 知识积累 ) 一、写作主题：志愿服务 英语关于志愿服务的写作，通常聚焦于展现志愿服务的意义、个人参与的经历以及从中获得的成长与感悟。这类写作以第一人称或第三人称叙述，旨在通过具体事例弘扬志愿服务精神，鼓励青少年积极参与社会公益活动。 文章开头往往会简要介绍志愿服务的概念及其在社会中的重要角色，强调它对于促进社区和谐、帮助弱势群体、提升个人社会责任感等方面的积极作用。接着，作者会详细叙述自己或他人参与志愿服务的具体经历，如帮助老人、辅导儿童学习、参与环保活动等，通过生动的场景描写和细腻的情感流露，让读者感受到志愿服务带来的温暖与快乐。在描述志愿服务过程的同时，文章也会着重展现个人在其中的成长与变化，如学会了关爱他人、增强了团队合作能力、提升了解决问题的能力等。这些正面的影响不仅丰富了作者的个人经历，也为其未来的成长奠定了坚实的基础。文章会以总结或呼吁的形式收尾，强调志愿服务对于个人和社会的双重价值，鼓励更多的青少年投身到志愿服务中去，用实际行动践行社会责任，共同构建更加美好的社会。 重点词汇 volunteer志愿;cheer up使振奋;help out with sth.帮助解决某事;give away捐赠;hand out分发;run out of用完;come up with想出;care for关心,照顾;because of因为;a clean-up day清洁日;a strong feeling of satisfaction强烈的满足感;make a difference影响,有作用 高级句式 1.I’d like to...我想…… 2.I could ...我能够…… 3.It can help me get my dream job.它能帮我得到我的梦想工作。 4.I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time. 我能做我喜欢做的事情,同时也能帮助别人。 5.What a meaningful day!多么有意义的一天呀! 谚语积累 1.Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠顶个诸葛亮。 2.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 3.The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.赠人玫瑰,手有余香。 二、写作类型：建议信 英语建议信写作是一种实用文体练习，旨在培养学生针对特定问题或情境提出合理、有建设性意见的能力。这类写作通常围绕一个明确的对象（如学校、社区、朋友等）和具体的问题或改进点展开，要求作者以礼貌、客观的态度，结合实际情况，提出切实可行的解决方案或改进建议。 在撰写建议信时，学生首先需要清晰地阐述问题的现状及其带来的不便或影响，为后续的建议提供充分的背景依据。接着，他们会基于问题分析，逐一提出具体的建议措施，这些建议往往伴随着合理的解释和预期效果，以增强说服力。同时，学生还会注意使用恰当的语气和措辞，确保建议的提出既中肯又易于接受，体现了良好的沟通技巧和尊重对方的态度。 此外，建议信的结构通常包括开头（引入话题和目的）、主体（详细阐述问题和建议）及结尾（总结建议、表达期望和感谢）三部分，这种逻辑清晰的结构有助于学生有条理地组织内容，使信件更加易于阅读和理解。 ▲写作框架 1.‌开头（Introduction）‌： ‌引入话题‌：简要介绍背景信息，引出将要讨论的问题或提出的建议对象。 ‌明确目的‌：清晰说明写信的目的，即为何提出这些建议，以及期望达到的效果。 2.‌问题阐述（Problem Statement）‌： ‌详细描述‌：具体阐述当前存在的问题或不足，可以包括问题的性质、影响范围、造成的后果等。 ‌数据支持‌（如果可能）：提供一些数据或事实来支持你的观察，使问题描述更加客观、有说服力。 3.‌建议提出（Suggestions/Recommendations）‌： ‌分点列举‌：针对问题，逐一提出具体的建议或解决方案，每个建议应独立成段，便于阅读。 ‌解释理由‌：为每个建议提供合理的解释和依据，说明其为何有效，以及可能带来的正面影响。 ‌可行性分析‌：简要分析建议的可行性，如实施难度、所需资源等，以显示其实际操作性。 4.‌实施步骤（Implementation Plan）‌（可选） ‌步骤规划‌：如果建议较为复杂，可以简要概述实施的大致步骤或时间表，增加建议的可操作性。 5.‌预期效果（Expected Outcomes）‌（可选） ‌正面影响‌：描述如果建议被采纳，可能带来的积极变化或改善，强调其价值和意义。 6.‌结尾（Conclusion）‌： ‌总结要点‌：简要回顾提出的建议和预期效果，强调其重要性和紧迫性。 ‌表达期望‌：表达希望建议能得到重视和采纳的愿望，同时感谢收件人的时间和考虑。 ‌结束语‌：以礼貌、正式的语气结束信件，如“期待您的积极回应”或“再次感谢您的关注”。 ( 写作示例 ) 你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生 Ben的来信, 他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信, 说明 Ben的问题, 提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少, 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友 2. ? (请你补充) 英语单词难记 1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词 2. ? (请你补充) 　　要求: (1)回信应包括所有要点; (2)词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数; (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 1.读题审题 人称: 表达自己的建议和理由时, 运用第一人称; 陈述 Ben的问题时, 运用第二人称。 时态: 采用一般现在时和一般过去时。 注意事项: 根据两个不同的问题分别补充建议; 需要把握建议与理由之间的逻辑关系。 2.衔接成篇 Dear Ben,   　　I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. ①I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. ②In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. What’s more, you can join some study groups so that you can not only acquire knowledge, but also make more friends. ③Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. ④I think it is a good way to learn words by reading more English stories and news. ⑤In addition, you should try your best to speak English in daily life. Day by day, you will remember a lot of words and make some progress. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. ⑥  Good luck with everything!   Li Hua  ①直接说明 Ben的第一个问题——朋友少, 感觉孤独。②紧随其后给出解决方法。③运用目的状语从句给出建议, 思路清晰、上下文过渡自然。not only. . . but also 体现了对中考考纲词汇的灵活运用。④介绍了Ben的第二个问题, 英语单词难记。⑤运用固定句型It is+n. +to do 的句型给出合理建议, 语气诚恳。⑥表达自己的希望。 ( 突破练习 ) 1．第五届消博会 (the 5th China International Consumer Products Expo) 将于2025年4月在海口举办，现需要召集一些中学生志愿者(volunteer)。假设你是Tony，你的好友李磊想申请成为一名志愿者，但他担心自己无法通过面试，写信向你寻求帮助。请你给他写一封建议信。 内容包括： 1. 如何提高英语水平； 2. 如何增强体能应对志愿工作； 3. …… 要求： 1. 内容需涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Lei, I am glad to know that you want to be a volunteer for the 5th China International Consumer Products Expo in 2025!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Tony 2．假如你是李华，前几天收到来自美国的交换生Gary发给你的一封关于“Volunteer Jobs”的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容及实际情况回复。要求： (1)请回复邮件中的问题，并适当发挥，100词左右； (2)至少要给出两条建议； (3)文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息。 To: Lihua2022@163.com From: Gary@sina.com Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? As you know, I will go to Hangzhou to study next term. I know that you have done many kinds of volunteer jobs in your free time. I’d like to help out as a volunteer in Hangzhou, too. Could you please tell me what you did as a volunteer? Where can I do such volunteer work? If I want to be a good volunteer, what advice will you give to me? I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Gary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是林航，得知好友 Oliver 即将参加学校举办的“Help for Old People”。请根据以下信息给他写一封邮件，告诉他如何做一个合格的志愿者。 写作要点： 1. 表达你对于 Oliver 即将成为志愿者的心情（高兴）； 2. 介绍自己以往的志愿者经历 （1） 去年暑假，到孤儿院（Children’s Home）看望儿童； （2） 给孩子们讲传统故事，跟他们一起做游戏； 3. 对他如何成为一个合格的（qualified）志愿者提出具体建议 写作要求： （1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 （2）适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 （3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 （4）至少 80 词。 Dear Oliver, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Hang 4．假如你是李华，你们班的外籍学生Peter想和你一起参加周末的志愿活动。请你给他回复邮件，告诉他周末志愿活动的具体时间和地点，你们打算做哪些事情以及你对他的建议。 提示词语：old people’s home, clean, sing, prepare 提示问题： ● When and where are you going to volunteer? ● What will you do there? ● What advice do you want to give him? Dear Peter, How is it going? Knowing that you are interested in taking part in the voluntary activity this weekend, I would like to tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自交换生Amy的邮件并回复，内容包括回复相应问题并给出一至两条建议。词数80词左右。 From: Amy Hi, Li Hua, How’s it going? These days, I’m thinking of keeping a pet dog. What is your idea about keeping pets? Is it a good idea to keep a pet at home? I know you are a member of Animal Helpers. Can you tell me in what ways animals are able to help people? By the way, I’ll volunteer in an old people’s home next Saturday. What can help out with? Can you give me some advice? Look forward to your reply! Amy To: Amy Hi, Amy, 6．假如你是李华，你校学生会正在招募下周去敬老院看望老人的志愿者。请根据下列要点提示，给学生会主席写一封电子邮件申请成为志愿者，并为该活动开展提几点建议。 要点提示: （1）个人情况：来自九年级一班，对泸州很了解等； （2）能力方面：和人相处好，健谈等； （3）经验方面：当过儿童医院志愿者，家里有老人等； （4）对老人的看法：亲情缺乏，需要关爱等； （5）活动建议：…… 要求: （1）词数110词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； （3）不用真实姓名、校名、地名。 参考词语：know, get on well with, Children’s Hospital, volunteer Dear chairperson, I’m writing to apply to join the volunteer activity. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，你的英语外教Tina在你们学校组建了一个环保俱乐部。下周末在俱乐部要开展哪些活动呢？Tina希望大家提出一些建议，作为俱乐部的一员，请你根据提示内容给Tina写一封邮件，提出你的建议。 提示：1.Which activity do you prefer? 2. Why do you like the idea? 3. What can members do? 要求：1. 语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tina, I’m glad that you have set up the club to help protect the environment. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can think about my advice.                                           Yours,                                           Li Hua 8．假设你是学生李华。你的同学，英国交换生Andy，在楼梯上摔倒，受伤住院。请你给Andy写一封电子邮件，要点如下： 1. 你给Andy的帮助； 2. 你给Andy的建议； 3. 表达你的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Andy, I’m so sorry to hear that____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cheers, Li Hua 9．假如你叫刘明， 你英国同学David想参加你们当地医院做志愿者的活动， 请你结合下表内容写一封邮件，向他介绍一下此次活动的计划。同时，给予一些合理建议。 Plans Suggestions ●give direction to... ●help to register... ●tell stories... ●… ●be patient ●… 注意： 1)文中必须包括表格中全部内容，可适当发挥； 2)你的建议至少两条； 3)词数：80-100： 4)邮件格式已提供，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：挂号register v.   registration  n. Dear David, Glad to hear that you’ll join the volunteer activity at the local hospital. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Ming 10．假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike看到社区“阅读之家”正在招募志愿者，传授小朋友们阅读技巧和经验。Mike想报名参加。但是他的父母认为做志愿者很浪费学习时间。他对此很苦恼，写信向你求助。你是否支持Mike参加志愿者活动？请你说出理由并给予合理的建议。词数80左右，已给部分不计入总词数。 Mike’s opinion Mother’s opinion love reading can get a sense of satisfaction … should spend more time on study not necessary to do such a job … Dear Mike, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 15 主题类型-志愿服务(建议信) ( 知识积累 ) 一、写作主题：志愿服务 英语关于志愿服务的写作，通常聚焦于展现志愿服务的意义、个人参与的经历以及从中获得的成长与感悟。这类写作以第一人称或第三人称叙述，旨在通过具体事例弘扬志愿服务精神，鼓励青少年积极参与社会公益活动。 文章开头往往会简要介绍志愿服务的概念及其在社会中的重要角色，强调它对于促进社区和谐、帮助弱势群体、提升个人社会责任感等方面的积极作用。接着，作者会详细叙述自己或他人参与志愿服务的具体经历，如帮助老人、辅导儿童学习、参与环保活动等，通过生动的场景描写和细腻的情感流露，让读者感受到志愿服务带来的温暖与快乐。在描述志愿服务过程的同时，文章也会着重展现个人在其中的成长与变化，如学会了关爱他人、增强了团队合作能力、提升了解决问题的能力等。这些正面的影响不仅丰富了作者的个人经历，也为其未来的成长奠定了坚实的基础。文章会以总结或呼吁的形式收尾，强调志愿服务对于个人和社会的双重价值，鼓励更多的青少年投身到志愿服务中去，用实际行动践行社会责任，共同构建更加美好的社会。 重点词汇 volunteer志愿;cheer up使振奋;help out with sth.帮助解决某事;give away捐赠;hand out分发;run out of用完;come up with想出;care for关心,照顾;because of因为;a clean-up day清洁日;a strong feeling of satisfaction强烈的满足感;make a difference影响,有作用 高级句式 1.I’d like to...我想…… 2.I could ...我能够…… 3.It can help me get my dream job.它能帮我得到我的梦想工作。 4.I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time. 我能做我喜欢做的事情,同时也能帮助别人。 5.What a meaningful day!多么有意义的一天呀! 谚语积累 1.Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠顶个诸葛亮。 2.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。 3.The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.赠人玫瑰,手有余香。 二、写作类型：建议信 英语建议信写作是一种实用文体练习，旨在培养学生针对特定问题或情境提出合理、有建设性意见的能力。这类写作通常围绕一个明确的对象（如学校、社区、朋友等）和具体的问题或改进点展开，要求作者以礼貌、客观的态度，结合实际情况，提出切实可行的解决方案或改进建议。 在撰写建议信时，学生首先需要清晰地阐述问题的现状及其带来的不便或影响，为后续的建议提供充分的背景依据。接着，他们会基于问题分析，逐一提出具体的建议措施，这些建议往往伴随着合理的解释和预期效果，以增强说服力。同时，学生还会注意使用恰当的语气和措辞，确保建议的提出既中肯又易于接受，体现了良好的沟通技巧和尊重对方的态度。 此外，建议信的结构通常包括开头（引入话题和目的）、主体（详细阐述问题和建议）及结尾（总结建议、表达期望和感谢）三部分，这种逻辑清晰的结构有助于学生有条理地组织内容，使信件更加易于阅读和理解。 ▲写作框架 1.‌开头（Introduction）‌： ‌引入话题‌：简要介绍背景信息，引出将要讨论的问题或提出的建议对象。 ‌明确目的‌：清晰说明写信的目的，即为何提出这些建议，以及期望达到的效果。 2.‌问题阐述（Problem Statement）‌： ‌详细描述‌：具体阐述当前存在的问题或不足，可以包括问题的性质、影响范围、造成的后果等。 ‌数据支持‌（如果可能）：提供一些数据或事实来支持你的观察，使问题描述更加客观、有说服力。 3.‌建议提出（Suggestions/Recommendations）‌： ‌分点列举‌：针对问题，逐一提出具体的建议或解决方案，每个建议应独立成段，便于阅读。 ‌解释理由‌：为每个建议提供合理的解释和依据，说明其为何有效，以及可能带来的正面影响。 ‌可行性分析‌：简要分析建议的可行性，如实施难度、所需资源等，以显示其实际操作性。 4.‌实施步骤（Implementation Plan）‌（可选） ‌步骤规划‌：如果建议较为复杂，可以简要概述实施的大致步骤或时间表，增加建议的可操作性。 5.‌预期效果（Expected Outcomes）‌（可选） ‌正面影响‌：描述如果建议被采纳，可能带来的积极变化或改善，强调其价值和意义。 6.‌结尾（Conclusion）‌： ‌总结要点‌：简要回顾提出的建议和预期效果，强调其重要性和紧迫性。 ‌表达期望‌：表达希望建议能得到重视和采纳的愿望，同时感谢收件人的时间和考虑。 ‌结束语‌：以礼貌、正式的语气结束信件，如“期待您的积极回应”或“再次感谢您的关注”。 ( 写作示例 ) 你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生 Ben的来信, 他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信, 说明 Ben的问题, 提出你的建议并陈述理由。 Ben’s problems Your advice and reasons 朋友少, 感觉孤单 1. 参加学校社团(club)——结识更多朋友 2. ? (请你补充) 英语单词难记 1. 多阅读英语故事、新闻——在运用中学单词 2. ? (请你补充) 　　要求: (1)回信应包括所有要点; (2)词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数; (3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 1.读题审题 人称: 表达自己的建议和理由时, 运用第一人称; 陈述 Ben的问题时, 运用第二人称。 时态: 采用一般现在时和一般过去时。 注意事项: 根据两个不同的问题分别补充建议; 需要把握建议与理由之间的逻辑关系。 2.衔接成篇 Dear Ben,   　　I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. ①I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. ②In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. What’s more, you can join some study groups so that you can not only acquire knowledge, but also make more friends. ③Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. ④I think it is a good way to learn words by reading more English stories and news. ⑤In addition, you should try your best to speak English in daily life. Day by day, you will remember a lot of words and make some progress. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. ⑥  Good luck with everything!   Li Hua  ①直接说明 Ben的第一个问题——朋友少, 感觉孤独。②紧随其后给出解决方法。③运用目的状语从句给出建议, 思路清晰、上下文过渡自然。not only. . . but also 体现了对中考考纲词汇的灵活运用。④介绍了Ben的第二个问题, 英语单词难记。⑤运用固定句型It is+n. +to do 的句型给出合理建议, 语气诚恳。⑥表达自己的希望。 ( 突破练习 ) 1．第五届消博会 (the 5th China International Consumer Products Expo) 将于2025年4月在海口举办，现需要召集一些中学生志愿者(volunteer)。假设你是Tony，你的好友李磊想申请成为一名志愿者，但他担心自己无法通过面试，写信向你寻求帮助。请你给他写一封建议信。 内容包括： 1. 如何提高英语水平； 2. 如何增强体能应对志愿工作； 3. …… 要求： 1. 内容需涵盖所有要点； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Lei, I am glad to know that you want to be a volunteer for the 5th China International Consumer Products Expo in 2025!_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Tony 2．假如你是李华，前几天收到来自美国的交换生Gary发给你的一封关于“Volunteer Jobs”的电子邮件。请你根据邮件内容及实际情况回复。要求： (1)请回复邮件中的问题，并适当发挥，100词左右； (2)至少要给出两条建议； (3)文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息。 To: Lihua2022@163.com From: Gary@sina.com Dear Li Hua, How’s everything going? As you know, I will go to Hangzhou to study next term. I know that you have done many kinds of volunteer jobs in your free time. I’d like to help out as a volunteer in Hangzhou, too. Could you please tell me what you did as a volunteer? Where can I do such volunteer work? If I want to be a good volunteer, what advice will you give to me? I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Gary ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你是林航，得知好友 Oliver 即将参加学校举办的“Help for Old People”。请根据以下信息给他写一封邮件，告诉他如何做一个合格的志愿者。 写作要点： 1. 表达你对于 Oliver 即将成为志愿者的心情（高兴）； 2. 介绍自己以往的志愿者经历 （1） 去年暑假，到孤儿院（Children’s Home）看望儿童； （2） 给孩子们讲传统故事，跟他们一起做游戏； 3. 对他如何成为一个合格的（qualified）志愿者提出具体建议 写作要求： （1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 （2）适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 （3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。 （4）至少 80 词。 Dear Oliver, How is everything going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Hang 4．假如你是李华，你们班的外籍学生Peter想和你一起参加周末的志愿活动。请你给他回复邮件，告诉他周末志愿活动的具体时间和地点，你们打算做哪些事情以及你对他的建议。 提示词语：old people’s home, clean, sing, prepare 提示问题： ● When and where are you going to volunteer? ● What will you do there? ● What advice do you want to give him? Dear Peter, How is it going? Knowing that you are interested in taking part in the voluntary activity this weekend, I would like to tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 5．假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自交换生Amy的邮件并回复，内容包括回复相应问题并给出一至两条建议。词数80词左右。 From: Amy Hi, Li Hua, How’s it going? These days, I’m thinking of keeping a pet dog. What is your idea about keeping pets? Is it a good idea to keep a pet at home? I know you are a member of Animal Helpers. Can you tell me in what ways animals are able to help people? By the way, I’ll volunteer in an old people’s home next Saturday. What can help out with? Can you give me some advice? Look forward to your reply! Amy To: Amy Hi, Amy, 6．假如你是李华，你校学生会正在招募下周去敬老院看望老人的志愿者。请根据下列要点提示，给学生会主席写一封电子邮件申请成为志愿者，并为该活动开展提几点建议。 要点提示: （1）个人情况：来自九年级一班，对泸州很了解等； （2）能力方面：和人相处好，健谈等； （3）经验方面：当过儿童医院志愿者，家里有老人等； （4）对老人的看法：亲情缺乏，需要关爱等； （5）活动建议：…… 要求: （1）词数110词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容； （3）不用真实姓名、校名、地名。 参考词语：know, get on well with, Children’s Hospital, volunteer Dear chairperson, I’m writing to apply to join the volunteer activity. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Look forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 7．假如你是李华，你的英语外教Tina在你们学校组建了一个环保俱乐部。下周末在俱乐部要开展哪些活动呢？Tina希望大家提出一些建议，作为俱乐部的一员，请你根据提示内容给Tina写一封邮件，提出你的建议。 提示：1.Which activity do you prefer? 2. Why do you like the idea? 3. What can members do? 要求：1. 语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tina, I’m glad that you have set up the club to help protect the environment. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can think about my advice.                                           Yours,                                           Li Hua 8．假设你是学生李华。你的同学，英国交换生Andy，在楼梯上摔倒，受伤住院。请你给Andy写一封电子邮件，要点如下： 1. 你给Andy的帮助； 2. 你给Andy的建议； 3. 表达你的祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80-100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hi Andy, I’m so sorry to hear that____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cheers, Li Hua 9．假如你叫刘明， 你英国同学David想参加你们当地医院做志愿者的活动， 请你结合下表内容写一封邮件，向他介绍一下此次活动的计划。同时，给予一些合理建议。 Plans Suggestions ●give direction to... ●help to register... ●tell stories... ●… ●be patient ●… 注意： 1)文中必须包括表格中全部内容，可适当发挥； 2)你的建议至少两条； 3)词数：80-100： 4)邮件格式已提供，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：挂号register v.   registration  n. Dear David, Glad to hear that you’ll join the volunteer activity at the local hospital. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Ming 10．假如你是李华，你的朋友Mike看到社区“阅读之家”正在招募志愿者，传授小朋友们阅读技巧和经验。Mike想报名参加。但是他的父母认为做志愿者很浪费学习时间。他对此很苦恼，写信向你求助。你是否支持Mike参加志愿者活动？请你说出理由并给予合理的建议。词数80左右，已给部分不计入总词数。 Mike’s opinion Mother’s opinion love reading can get a sense of satisfaction … should spend more time on study not necessary to do such a job … Dear Mike, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 参考答案 1． Dear Li Lei, I am glad to know that you want to be a volunteer for the 5th China International Consumer Products Expo in 2025! How to improve your English? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, you should be brave to talk with teachers, classmates and foreigners in English. This will not only improve your English level, but also enhance your self-confidence. In fact, in daily life, you should actively help others. Finally, if you have any difficulties, you should actively seek help. In order to improve your physical fitness, I suggest you take an active part in physical exercise.You can run for 30 minutes every day. In order to become a qualified volunteer, you should also practice smiling every day. I hope these suggestions will help you. Look forward to your good news. Best wishes! Yours, Tony [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“如何成为合格志愿者”的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何提高英语水平、如何增强体能应对志愿工作”等方面进行介绍； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do很乐意做 ②first of all首先 ③in order to为了 [高分句型] ①Finally, if you have any difficulties, you should actively seek help.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②I hope these suggestions will help you.（省略that的宾语从句） 2． Dear Gary,   I’m glad to hear from you and learn that you are interested in volunteer work. Doing volunteer work plays an important role in my life. I did different kinds of volunteer jobs last term. For example, I swept the floor and cleaned the windows in an old people’s home last weekend. To cheer them up, I told some interesting stories to the old people. Since you love animals, maybe you can volunteer at an animal hospital. Besides, you can also go to the libraries and museums to have a try. To be a good volunteer, a kind heart is a must. Of course, you had better improve your communication skills. I am looking forward to meeting you next term. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；   ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；   ③提示：回答完整Gary在邮件中提到的问题并提出几条关于做志愿者工作的建议，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。以第一人称为主。   [写作步骤]   第一步，表达很高兴收到邮件并引出主题；   第二步，具体阐述自己做志愿者的经历以及建议对方去哪里做志愿者工作和怎样成为一名好的志愿者的建议；   第三步，最后书写结尾，表达希望尽快见到对方。   [亮点词汇]   ①hear from sb.收到某人的来信 ②different kinds of各种各样的 ③For example例如 ④cheer sb. up使某人高兴起来 ⑤had better最好 ⑥look forward to期待 [高分句型]   ①Doing volunteer work plays an important role in my life.（动名词短语作主语）   ②Since you love animals, maybe you can volunteer at an animal hospital.（since引导的原因状语从句） 3． Dear Oliver, How is everything going? I’m writing this to congratulate you on being a volunteer soon. I want to share some of my experiences with you and provide a few advice on how to be a qualified volunteer. Last summer vacation, I visited children in Children’s Home, an orphanage, and decided to volunteer there. My main responsibilities were to tell traditional stories and play games with them. I was really happy for helping those kids. If you want to be a qualified volunteer, you need to have great respect for old people first and give them joy as if they are your grandparents. Some of the old are not able to take care of themselves, so it is important to have enough patience. Helping the old may not be easy, but trust me, this experience will be rewarding. Yours, Lin Hang [总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作，形式为电子邮件； 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息或偏题；写作时注意条理清晰，时刻记得内容为电子邮件格式。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头。简单问候，并直接表明写作目的，引出正文； 第二步，分享去年暑假拜访孤儿院孩子们的事情和感受； 第三步，谈谈如何成河一名合格的志愿者。 [亮点词汇] ①congratulate sb on sth祝贺某人某事 ②share sth with sb与某人分享某事 ③qualified合格的 ④decide to do sth决定做某事 ⑤responsibilities责任 ⑥be happy for sth为某事感到高兴 ⑦have respect for尊敬 ⑧take care of sb照顾某人 ⑨rewarding值得的、有意义的 [高分句型] ①If you want to be a qualified volunteer, you need to have great respect for old people first and give them joy as if they are your grandparents.（状语从句：由if引导条件状语从句；由as if引导方式状语从句） ②Some of the old are not able to take care of themselves, so it is important to have enough patience.（状语从句：由so引导结果状语从句） 4．Dear Peter, How is it going? Knowing that you are interested in taking part in the voluntary activity this weekend, I would like to tell you something about it. We are going to the Old People’s Home this Saturday. We’ll meet at the school gate at 1:30. It’ll take us about 15 minutes to get there. After we arrive, we’ll help the old people tidy their rooms, such as making the beds, sweeping the floors, cleaning the windows and so on. We’ll also chat with them and sing for them. Here are some tips for you. On one hand, you can take your phone which can help you record the meaningful moment. On the other hand, you can prepare an English song for them if it is convenient for you. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中给Peter的建议；注意要点包含全面、逻辑清晰、行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，将介绍一些与志愿活动相关的事情； 第二步，介绍志愿活动的地方、时间以及活动等； 第三步，阐述给Peter的建议； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ① be interested in 对……感兴趣 ② take part in 参加 ③ make the bed 整理床铺 ④ look forward to 期盼 [高分句型] ① It’ll take us about 15 minutes to get there.（it+takes+sb.+时间+to do sth. 某人花多少时间做某事） ② On one hand, you can take your phone which can help you record the meaningful moment. On the other hand, you can prepare an English song for them if it is convenient for you.（on one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……，另一方面……） 5． Hi, Amy, I’m glad to hear from you. I think it’s a good idea to keep pets at home, because they will bring you a lot of happiness. Dogs are very clever animals. They can help us do many things. Some dogs are trained as animal helpers. For example, a guide dog can help a blind person cross the road. A pet dog can also help you guard your home. If you are going to volunteer at an old people’s home next Saturday, you should bring them some flowers. In a nursing home, you can help them clean up. You can also tell old people jokes to make them happy. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于电子邮件写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表示问候； 第二步，先直接表达自己关于养宠物一事的看法，可举例说明； 第三步，再就去养老院帮忙一事提出自己的建议，并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be trained as被训练成为 ②clean up打扫卫生 [高分句型] ①I think it’s a good idea to keep pets at home, because they will bring you a lot of happiness.（think后接省略引导词that的宾语从句，it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语，because引导原因状语从句） ②If you are going to volunteer at an old people’s home next Saturday, you should bring them some flowers.（if引导条件状语从句） 6．参考范文： Dear chairperson, I’m writing to apply to join the volunteer activity. My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. I come from Class One, Grade Nine. I know Luzhou very well. I am outgoing and helpful. I get along well with people. I am good at talking and so on. I have experience as a volunteer. Last summer, I worked as a volunteer in children’s hospital. My family has grandparents. I often take care of them. I think the old people lack family affection and need love. If I get the chance, I promise I will offer the best service. I suggest to visit the elderly in the nursing home next week and prepare some flowers and other gifts for the elderly. I think they will be happy. Look forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。给学生会主席写一封电子邮件申请成为志愿者。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己的个人情况以及自己的做志愿者经历；第二段为该活动开展提几点建议；最后一段期待回复。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 7． Dear Tina, I’m glad that you have set up the club to help protect the environment. I think next weekend we can help clean our city. When I walk in the streets or play in the park, I can always see litter on the ground or advertisements on the walls. It makes me feel bad. If we give the city a good clean, we can change the situation. There are many things we can do, like picking up litter, taking care of the grassland and plants in public places, cleaning the small advertisements on the walls, and so on. I’m sure the members of the club will be happy to see a cleaner city and feel proud of themselves. I hope you can think about my advice. Yours, Li Hua 1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的身份，根据提示的内容要点向英语外教Tina写一封信，内容包括：你建议开展的活动，你喜欢这个活动的原因以及俱乐部成员可以为这个活动做的事情。 2. 写作指导：本文主要是陈述观点和建议，时态主要采用一般现在时；本文可根据提示要点的顺序进行写作，先从图片中三选一表明你希望俱乐部开展的活动，然后再用一到两句话简述选这个活动的原因，最后重点可放在活动的具体形式上，此处可多列举几种形式作为此次活动的参考；最后写作完成时应保证要点齐全，行文流畅以及语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。 8．[] Hi Andy, I’m so sorry to hear that you fell down some stairs and hurt yourself yesterday. That sounds terrible. I hope you’re feeling better now. I understand that you will have to stay in hospital for more than two weeks, but don’t worry about your studies. I will take notes for you and help you with your studies when you come back to school. While you are in hospital, it’s good to read some books or listen to some music. This will help you relax and stay positive. I wish you all the best for rapid recovery. Cheers, Li Hua 1. 题干解读：本题是书信作文，要注意标准书信格式及常用语。时态可用现在时或将来时，人称用第一、二人称。 2. 点评：分三段，第一段点出了Andy的受伤原因，并给予了祝福；第二段根据题目所给要点对Andy的学习和休养提出了自己的帮助计划以及建议；第三段作为书信结尾，再次表达了希望Andy早日康复的祝愿。主题明确，思路清晰，严格按照题目要求进行写作，并正确使用了一些高分短语及句型，是一篇优秀的范文。 3. 高分亮点： 短语：fall down，hurt oneself，more than，worry about，take notes，help sb. with，in hospital，listen to。 句型： （1）I hope you’re feeling better now.（宾语从句） （2）While you are in hospital, it’s good to read some books or listen to some music.（while引导的时间状语从句） 9． Dear David, Glad to hear that you will join the volunteer activity at the local hospital. It will be a meaningful voluntary activity. In the morning, we will work in the hall of the hospital. Some of us will give direction to the patients who can’t find the way. And others can help to register if necessary. In the afternoon, we plan to visit some sick kids to cheer them up. We are going to tell them stories and send them some toys, which may help them feel less lonely. To be a good volunteer, we need to be patient and warm-hearted. More importantly, we are expected to do the work with love and care. It will surely be an excellent experience. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lui Ming [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出。学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍David想参加当地医院做志愿者的活动来引出话题； 第二步，介绍此次志愿者活动的计划； 第三步，给出一些建议。 [亮点词汇] ①help to do sth帮忙做某事 ②plan to do sth计划做某事 ③need to do sth需要做某事 ④be expected to do sth被期望做某事 [高分句型] ①We are going to tell them stories and send them some toys, which may help them feel less lonely.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 10． Dear Mike, I'm glad to hear that you are willing to volunteer. It's great that you can teach children reading skills and experience. Because you think reading can bring you satisfaction, and it can make you feel relaxed. Your mother has a point, too. Because spending too much time doing volunteer activities will affect your study. But I don't think volunteering is an unnecessary thing. I suggest you set aside some time every week to volunteer. This will not affect your study, and it can also help others. Sincerely, Li Hua 1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据表格中内容告诉Mike你是否支持他参加志愿活动，并给出合理建议，可进行适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称和第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文中要表示对Mike和他母亲的理解，表明自己是否支持的态度，给出合理的建议，要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$