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6学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 专题06书面表达 经典基础题 北京市海淀区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末练习英语试题 五、书面表达 37.假设你是李华。你校将举办“校园科技节(School Science Day)"活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加 这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动时间、地点及活动内容。 提示词语：watch,ty,speech,invention,amazing 提示间题：When and where will the event be held? What activities will you have? Dear Peter, I'm glad to invite you to take part in the School Science Day. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours. Li Hua 38.功成不必在我，功成必定有我。 假设你是李华。你校英文报刊正在开展以“人人参与，共创美好(Be an Active Participant)”为主题的征文 活动。请你用英文写一篇文章投稿，分享一次你积极参与家庭、学校或社会生活的经历，并谈谈你从中学 到了什么。 提示词语：ofer,take part in,organize,.skill,.meaningful ○⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 1 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 提示问题：●What did you do as an active participant? What have you learnt from the experience? Be an Active Participant Being an active participant is important in our life. 北京市东城区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末统一检测英语试题 五、书面表达 38.假设你是李华。你校英语社团将开展“用英语讲中国故事(Stories of China Retold in English)"的展 示活动。你打算邀请交换生Petr参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，简要介绍该活动，并说 明邀请他参加该活动的理由。 提示词语：hal,make speeches,.act out,.learn,history 提示问题： When and where will the activity be held? What will students do in this activity? Why do you invite Peter to take part in it? Dear Peter,I hope this email finds you well. ©⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ò学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 39.适应并融入新环境是每个人成长的必经之路。在初中生活中，无论是加入新班级还是学校社团，都需 要我们学会融入新的集体。某英文网站正在开展以“融入“为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一 篇短文投稿，谈谈你融入集体的一次经历，包括你最初的感受，你是如何融入这个集体的，以及你的感悟。 提示词语：lonely,help,improve,effort,growth 提示问题： How did you feel when you first joined the new group? What did you do to fit in? What have you learned from the experience? ©⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 北京市西城区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期未考试英语试题 五、书面表达 38.假设你是李华。你校英语广播站正在招收新成员，包含以下职位：主持人(radio host)、记者和音 乐总监。请你用英文写一封自荐信，说明你申请(apply)什么职位(position),你的优势以及为什么申请。 提示词语：reporter,music director,.out-going,.experience,.improve 提示问题： What position do you want to apply for? What advantages do you have? Why do you want to work at the school radio station? Dear Sir/Madam,I'm very interested in working at the school radio station. Li Hua 39.旅行中拍摄的一张照片、常常翻阅的一本书、比赛中赢得的一个奖品，都可能对我们具有特殊意 义。 假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“The Most Meaningful Object to Me'”为主题的征文活动，请你写 一篇短文进行投稿，描写一件对你最有意义的物品(objc),讲述它的来历，并谈谈它对你的意义或影响。 提示词语：prize,encourage,importance,valuable ©⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 6学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 提示问题： What is the most meaningful object to you? OWhat is the story behind it? Why is it meaningful to you? The Most Meaningful Object to Me 北京市朝阳区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38.假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在收集“时代呼唤英雄”的主题材料，计划做一期“英雄人物 的系列推送。请你用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友Petr你推荐的心目中的英雄，他/她是谁，做了什么以 及你的推荐理由。 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词 语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：love,train,study,never give up,.take pride in 提示问题：Who is your hero? What did he/she do? 5 ○⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 Why do you want to recommend him/her? Dear Peter. How is it going?I'm writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 39.绿水青山就是金山银山，形成绿色发展方式和生活方式，建设美丽中国。 某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活，从我做起“为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文 投稿，谈谈你对绿色生活的看法，简单措述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法以及你对如何践行绿 色生活的建议。 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词 语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语 important,protect the environment,divide the waste.save,recycle 提示问题 What do you think of green life? How do you do to have a green life? What's your advice about having a green life? 6 ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 北京市昌平区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期木质量抽测英语试题 五、书面表达 38.假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Petr给你发米邮件，想询问你身边的感人故事。请你用英文回复他 的邮件，分享发生在你生活中的感人故事以及你的收获。 提示词语：nervous,.encourage,help,confidence,light up 提示问愿：●What moving story would you like to share? What have you learned from the story? Dear Peter, How is everything going?I'd like to share you a moving story that happened in my life ©⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ ò学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 39.假设你是李华。你校英语俱乐部正在开展读书分享活动，其公众号计划做关于“好书推荐”系列推送。 请你用英文给公众号留言，推荐一本你喜欢的书籍，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词i语：novel,knowledge,attractive..achieve,make a difference 提示问题： What is your favourite book?Please describe it. ●Why do you recommend(推荐)this book? 北京市大兴区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末检测英语试题 五、书面表达 38.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友T©m向你发来电子邮件，想了解中国人常见的社交礼仪。请你给他 8 ○⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 回复一封电子邮件，介绍一些常见的中国社交礼仪，其适用场合以及你对社交礼仪的看法。 提示i词i语：meet,shake hands,serve tea,show politeness,necessary 提示问题： .What social manners do you want to introduce? .When do you use the social manners? .What do you think of the social manners? Dear Tom, I'm glad to introduce some social manners in China If you have any other question,write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 39.学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲“为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一 篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的歌曲，并谈谈理由及感受。 提示词语：yrics(歌词)，rhythm(节奏)，perfect,dance,forget worries 提示问题： What's your favorite song/music? Why do you like it? How do you feel about it? ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 9 6 学科网 好题汇编 WWW.ZXXK.COM 精选好题·分类汇编 北京市石京山区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末英语试趣 五、书面表达 38.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件。 提示词语：enjoy,sports,relax 提示问题： How do you spend your spare time? Explain your reasons. Dear Tom, I'm writing to tell you something about my spare time. I'm looking forward to your early reply. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 10 专题06 书面表达 北京市海淀区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末练习英语试题 五、书面表达 37．假设你是李华。你校将举办“校园科技节(School Science Day)”活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。 请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动时间、 地点及活动内容。 提示词语：watch, try, speech, invention, amazing 提示问题： When and where will the event be held? What activities will you have? Dear Peter, I’m glad to invite you to take part in the School Science Day. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I’m glad to invite you to take part in our School Science Day. The event will be held on January 19th in the school hall. There will be a variety of activities for you to enjoy. You will have the chance to attend interesting lectures on different scientific topics. Also, you’ll see amazing inventions showing the latest developments in science and technology. If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. It’s going to be a great opportunity to learn and have fun at the same time! I sincerely hope you can join us for this special event. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的是邀请对方参加学校科技节； 第二步，具体介绍活动的时间、地点及内容； 第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够参加该活动，并期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①try out尝试 ②feel free to do sth随意做某事 ③at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①If you want to get hands-on experience, there are interactive stands where you can try out experiments. (if引导条件状语从句；where引导定语从句) ②I sincerely hope you can join us for this special event. (宾语从句) 38．功成不必在我，功成必定有我。 假设你是李华。你校英文报刊正在开展以“人人参与，共创美好(Be an Active Participant)”为主题的征文活动。请你用英文写一篇文章投稿，分享一次你积极参与家庭、学校或社会生活的经历，并谈谈你从中学到了什么。 提示词语：offer, take part in, organize, skill, meaningful 提示问题：● What did you do as an active participant? ● What have you learnt from the experience? Be an Active Participant Being an active participant is important in our life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be an Active Participant Being an active participant is important in our life. Now let me share my experience with you. Last year, I offered to design our class bulletin board. After gathering some ideas from my classmates, I came up with a design that would be both eye-catching and informative. Then, I asked my classmates for help to find the necessary materials and worked hard to bring the design to life. At last, I actively collected feedback from my classmates to make sure the bulletin board met everyone’s expectation. I have gained a great sense of achievement from this experience. By taking an active part, not only did I make our classroom more beautiful, but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. This achievement has inspired me to help the class, the family, and the community in a meaningful way. 【详解】[总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所列问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，介绍做一个积极的参与者的重要性，引出话题：分享你的经历； 第二步，陈述作为做一个积极的参与者你所做的事情； 第三步，表达收获与感想。 ［亮点词汇］ ① meet one’s expectation  达到某人的期望 ② gain a sense of achievement 获得成就感 ［高分句型］ ① After gathering some ideas from my classmates, I came up with a design that would be both eye-catching and informative. (that引导的定语从句) ② By taking an active part, not only did I make our classroom more beautiful, but also strengthened the bond with my classmates. (not only…but also…引导的并列句、倒装句) 北京市东城区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末统一检测英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假设你是李华。你校英语社团将开展“用英语讲中国故事 (Stories of China Retold in English) ”的展示活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，简要介绍该活动，并说明邀请他参加该活动的理由。 提示词语：hall, make speeches, act out, learn, history 提示问题： • When and where will the activity be held? • What will students do in this activity? • Why do you invite Peter to take part in it? Dear Peter, I hope this email finds you well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】范文： Dear Peter, I hope this email finds you well. Our club will hold a special activity—an English speech contest with the theme of “Stories of China Retold in English” in the school hall. The activity will consist of three parts. Firstly, every contestant will make speechs. Then they will act out the topics given by the judges. The last part is evaluating and presenting the trophies to the winners. This contest will give us a good opportunity to learn our history and enhance our ability to speak English as well as having a deeper understanding of the differences and connections between China and other countries. More importantly, we get to know it is our responsibility to spread the splendid Chinese culure to the world. Do you want to take part in this activity? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的三个问题，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“社团活动”来引出下文中对“用英语讲中国故事”的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间地点、活动内容和邀请”三方面入手，重点介绍该社团活动； ③第三步，书写结语。表达对回信的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①consist of 由……组成 ②make speeches 演讲 ③enhance our ability 提高我们的能力 ④as well as 也 ⑤more importantly 更重要的是 ⑥take part in 参加 [高分句型] ①More importantly, we get to know it is our responsibility to spread the splendid Chinese culure to the world.（宾语从句） 39．适应并融入新环境是每个人成长的必经之路。在初中生活中，无论是加入新班级还是学校社团，都需要我们学会融入新的集体。某英文网站正在开展以“融入”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你融入集体的一次经历，包括你最初的感受，你是如何融入这个集体的， 以及你的感悟。 提示词语：lonely, help, improve, effort, growth 提示问题： • How did you feel when you first joined the new group? • What did you do to fit in? • What have you learned from the experience? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I am glad to share my sorrow and success of my life in the new school this term. When I first came to this new school, I found everything was new to me and I was at a loss. Besides, the study was getting more difficult than before. What’s worse, sometimes I was so homesick that I felt lonely and even began to lose heart. Fortunately, with the help of my teachers, I got through all the problems. In addition, thanks to my new helpful classmates, I managed to become a confident member of the new class. Now, I am proud to tell that I am making progress every day! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你融入集体的一次经历、最初的感受； 第二步，介绍你是如何融入这个集体的， 以及你的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①at a loss茫无所知 ②what’s worse更糟糕的是 ③make progress取得进步 [高分句型] ①When I first came to this new school, I found everything was new to me and I was at a loss.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Besides, the study was getting more difficult than before.（比较级） 北京市西城区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末考试英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假设你是李华。你校英语广播站正在招收新成员，包含以下职位：主持人（radio host）、记者和音乐总监。请你用英文写一封自荐信，说明你申请（apply）什么职位（position），你的优势以及为什么申请。 提示词语： reporter, music director, out-going, experience, improve 提示问题： ●What position do you want to apply for? ●What advantages do you have? ●Why do you want to work at the school radio station? Dear Sir/Madam, I’m very interested in working at the school radio station. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Sir/Madam, I am interested in working at the school radio station. I’d like to apply to be the radio station host. I am confident that I’m qualified for the position. First, I’m an outgoing and friendly person, which can attract more listeners. What’s more, I can speak English fluently and have a beautiful voice. In addition, I have been a host for several shows at our school before. I want to work at the school radio station because I’d like to record more of the meaningful school life and share it with all my schoolmates. Meanwhile, I hope to improve my skills in hosting and gain more experiences. I hope you can offer me the opportunity, and I am looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为申请信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，点明自己想申请的职位并介绍自己的优势； 第二步，谈谈自己为什么想在英语广播站工作； 第三步，书写结语，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①be qualified for 可胜任…… ②in addition 此外 ③share sth. with sb. 与某人分享…… [高分句型] ①First, I’m an outgoing and friendly person, which can attract more listeners.（which引导的定语从句） ②I want to work at the school radio station because I’d like to record more of the meaningful school life and share it with all my schoolmates.（because引导的原因状语从句） 39．旅行中拍摄的一张照片、常常翻阅的一本书、比赛中赢得的一个奖品，都可能对我们具有特殊意义。 假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“The Most Meaningful Object to Me”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文进行投稿，描写一件对你最有意义的物品 (object)，讲述它的来历，并谈谈它对你的意义或影响。 提示词语：prize, encourage, importance, valuable 提示问题： ●What is the most meaningful object to you? ●What is the story behind it? ●Why is it meaningful to you? The Most Meaningful Object to Me ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: The Most Meaningful Object to Me The most meaningful object to me is a gold medal that I won last year. I used to be very weak and I wanted to make a change when I entered middle school. Luckily, my classmate Tony agreed to help me. He invited me to run with him after school every day. Whenever I wanted to give up, he would encourage me to keep going. Besides company and encouragement, Tony also taught me how to improve my speed and avoid getting hurt. Last year, I took part in the one-kilometer run at the school sports meeting and won the gold medal! How excited I was! The gold medal really means a lot to me. It not only symbolizes honor and pride, but also proves that persistence is so valuable. More importantly, the medal represents the precious friendship between Tony and I. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给要点描写一件对你最有意义的物品，注意不要遗漏“提示问题”介绍它的来历及意义或影响。适当增添细节，突出写作重点，使得行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。指出对我最有意义的物品是去年赢得的金牌； 第二步，具体介绍金牌的来历。在Tony的帮助和鼓励下我参加了学校运动会的一千米长跑，最后赢得了金牌； 第三步，书写结语。介绍金牌对我的意义。它不仅是荣誉和自豪的象征，也证明了坚持是如此的宝贵。更代表了Tony和我之间的友谊。 [亮点词汇] ①used to be过去是 ②make a change做改变 ③give up放弃 ④take part in参加 [高分句型] ①How excited I was!（感叹句“how+形容词/副词+主语+谓语！”） ②It not only symbolizes honor and pride, but also proves that persistence is so valuable.（“not only…but also…”不仅……而且……） 北京市朝阳区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在收集“时代呼唤英雄”的主题材料，计划做一期“英雄人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一封信，告诉你的笔友 Peter 你推荐的心目中的英雄，他/她是谁，做了什么以及你的推荐理由。 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语： love, train, study, never give up, take pride in 提示问题：Who is your hero? What did he/she do? Why do you want to recommend him/her? Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How is it going? I’m writing to tell you something about a hero in my heart. Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. She started playing table tennis when she was five. She trained hard, so she became a great player later. She has won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. She began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and then attended university abroad. Seven years later, she completed her doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. I recommend her because I think she is a good player as well as a good student. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best and she is a true hero. I take great pride in her. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己心目中的英雄，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍自己心目中的英雄； 第三步，介绍推荐她的原因。 [亮点词汇] ①stop doing sth.停止做某事 ②as well as和 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①Deng Yaping is my hero because she’s one of the best table tennis players in the world and I love playing table tennis. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②She stopped playing when she was twenty-four. (when引导的时间状语从句) 39．绿水青山就是金山银山，形成绿色发展方式和生活方式，建设美丽中国。 某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对绿色生活的看法，简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法以及你对如何践行绿色生活的建议。 要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语: important, protect the environment, divide the waste, save, recycle 提示问题: What do you think of green life? How do you do to have a green life? What’s your advice about having a green life? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment. I think everyone should do something for the environment. We should turn off lights before leaving to save electricity. And we can use both sides of paper to save paper. What’s more, we can recycle old books and give them to the children in need. Everyone should take actions to live a green life, You can also start an Environmental Club at your school. It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对绿色生活的看法”；“在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法”；以及“对如何践行绿色生活的建议”等要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题说明绿色生活是很重要的。 第二步，介绍日常生活中如何具体践行绿色生活的。 第三步，给出绿色生活的建议并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①turn off关掉 ②take action采取行动 ③community社区 [高分句型] ①Green life style is very important because it can help us to protect our environment.（because引导原因状语从句） ②It is a great way to help students take care of the earth and help your community.（it is+名词+to do句型） 北京市昌平区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末质量抽测英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件，想询问你身边的感人故事。请你用英文回复他的邮件，分享发生在你生活中的感人故事以及你的收获。 提示词语：nervous, encourage, help, confidence, light up 提示问题：●What moving story would you like to share? ●What have you learned from the story? Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to share you a moving story that happened in my life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文： Dear Peter, How is everything going? I’d like to share you a moving story that happened in my life. Last week, Xiaohong took part in a singing competition. I was deeply touched by something that happened then. During the performance, Xiaohong was too nervous to sing. Seeing this, her teachers and her classmates came forward to cheer her on and encouraged her not to give up. With their encouragement, Xiaohong was able to rebuild her confidence and finally finished her competition successfully. Although she didn’t win a prize, she felt proud of herself for her perseverance. From the story, I’ve learned that everyone has the power to brighten others’ lives. Therefore, let’s work together to spread kindness wherever we go, using our actions and words to light up the world around us. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：文章主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：结合生活实际，选一个发生在自己生活中的感人的故事，并谈谈自己的收获和感悟。 [写作步骤] 第一步，明确主题，确定自己要分享的一个发生在自己生活中的感人故事； 第二步，详细说明这个故事的内容； 第三步，就这个故事说说自己的感悟和收获。 [亮点词汇] ①too...to... 太……而不能 ②cheer sb. on 给某人加油 ③be able to 能够 [高分句型] ①I was deeply touched by something that happened then.（that引导的定语从句） ②Although she didn’t win a prize, she felt proud of herself for her perseverance.（although引导的让步状语从句） 39．假设你是李华。你校英语俱乐部正在开展读书分享活动，其公众号计划做关于“好书推荐”系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言，推荐一本你喜欢的书籍，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：novel, knowledge, attractive, achieve, make a difference 提示问题： ●What is your favourite book? Please describe it. ●Why do you recommend (推荐) this book? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My favourite book is The Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which is one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. It is an epic retelling of historical events in China. The novel describes the warriors and leaders who helped found the Three Kingdoms. The reason why I recommend this book is that it not only gives you hours of entertainment, but also teaches you valuable lessons about history, culture, and human nature. The book is very attractive and it can also inspire you to learn more about Chinese literature. Hope you can read this book and get pleasure from it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应推荐一本你喜欢的书籍，根据“提示问题”对其作简要介绍。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的书是哪一本，并简述书的内容； 第二步，谈谈自己为什么推荐这本书； 第三步，表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ①one of+名词复数 ……之一 ②not only ... but also 不仅……而且…… ③inspire sb. to do sth. 激励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①The novel describes the warriors and leaders who helped found the Three Kingdoms.（who引导的定语从句） ②The reason why I recommend this book is that it not only gives you hours of entertainment, but also teaches you valuable lessons about history, culture, and human nature.（that引导的表语从句） 北京市大兴区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末检测英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom向你发来电子邮件，想了解中国人常见的社交礼仪。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，介绍一些常见的中国社交礼仪，其适用场合以及你对社交礼仪的看法。 提示词语：meet, shake hands, serve tea, show politeness, necessary 提示问题： ·What social manners do you want to introduce? ·When do you use the social manners? ·What do you think of the social manners? Dear Tom, I’m glad to introduce some social manners in China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you have any other question, write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m glad to introduce some social manners in China. When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands with them. We always serve some fruit and tea to show our politeness when visitors come to our home. If we are invited to a party, we are supposed to arrive on time. I think these social manners are very necessary and important. They can help us improve our social skills. So we should learn to use them in different situations. If you have any other question, write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材: 本文是一封电子邮件； ② 时态: 时态为 “一般现在时”； ③ 提示: 写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给的提示问题，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，很高兴介绍中国的社交礼仪； 第二步，具体介绍你在什么时候会使用社交礼仪以及你对这些礼仪的看法； 第三步，总结，如有任何问题可以给我写信。 [亮点词汇] ① for the first time 第一次 ② be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 ③ in different situations 在不同的场合 [高分句型] ① When we meet people for the first time, we usually shake hands with them. (when引导的时间状语从句) ② If we are invited to a party, we are supposed to arrive on time. (if引导的条件状语从句) ③ I think these social manners are very necessary and important. (宾语从句) 39．学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的歌曲，并谈谈理由及感受。 提示词语：lyrics（歌词），rhythm（节奏），perfect，dance，forget worries 提示问题： ·What’s your favorite song/music? ·Why do you like it? ·How do you feel about it? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My favorite song is Let It Go by Idina Menzel. I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy. And it is also easy for me to sing along with. The rhythm is perfect for dancing. Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet. It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have. In a word, it is not just a song to me, but a source of joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示词语”和“提示问题”中“我最喜欢的歌曲，喜欢的原因以及我的评价”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍喜欢的歌曲的名称； 第二步，具体阐述喜欢这首歌曲的原因。 第三步，对这首歌曲作出评价并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①can’t help doing忍不住做某事 ②in a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy.（because引导原因状语从句，that引导限制性定语从句） ②Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet.（whenever引导时间状语从句） ③It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have.（that引导限制性定语从句，省略引导词that的定语从句） 北京市石景山区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件。 提示词语：enjoy, sports, relax 提示问题： How do you spend your spare time？ Explain your reasons. Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tom, I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time. I usually enjoy playing sports during my spare time. Playing sports with my friends allows us to bond and build stronger relationships. I spend some of my free time reading English books and magazines, too. I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时、现在进行时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意标点符号及大小写等问题，避免语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。说明写信的目的； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己课余生活的安排以及这么安排的原因； 第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到来信。 [亮点词汇] ①spare time 业余时间 ②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 ③widen my field of vision 扩大我的眼界 ④communicate with ... 与……沟通 [高分句型] ①I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.（that引导的定语从句） 39．热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。劳动可以强健体魄，培养品格。 假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一次你的劳动经历 （labour experience），并谈谈你的收获。 提示词语：plant, soil, water 提示问题： •Describe one of your labour experiences. •What have you learned from that experience? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文     Labour is the most glorious. I’d like to share my labour experience with you.     Last year on Arbor Day, our school organized a tree planting activity. That was my first time to plant trees, and I was very excited. My teacher gave me a young tree. First, I chose a right place where the tree could get much sunlight. Second, I dug a deep hole. Third, I put the tree in the hole and filled the hole with some soil. Finally, I watered the tree. Although I was very tired, I was happy. After the tree planting activity, I often went to water the small tree I planted. Now it is taller than my father. I feel a great sense of achievement.     The labour experience will be an unforgettable activity in my school life. No pains, no gains. Labour makes me happy! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：根据提示词和提示问题进行写作，分享你的一次劳动经历及你从中学到了什么。注意正确使用时态，避免语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，分享自己的劳动经历； 第二步，具体阐述自己的劳动过程； 第三步，分享劳动后的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①Arbor Day植树节 ②fill...with...用……填满…… [高分句型] ①Now it is taller than my father.（形容词比较级） ②Although I was very tired, I was happy.（Although引导让步状语从句） 北京市燕山地区2023-2024学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris听说你上个月完成了北京市第一次英语听说考试，想了解一下你平时是如何进行听说提升练习的。 要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。 提示词语： practice, conversation, join, fluently (流畅地) 提示问题： ●How do you usually improve your listening and speaking English? ●What have you achieved? Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking learning. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Chris, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in my English listening and speaking I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. At the same time, I like listening to English songs and watching English movies. Now I can communicate with foreigners in English fluently. I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是应用文，一封书信。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：学习方法不唯一，言之有理即可，注意前后逻辑清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的学习方法。 第二步，介绍自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①insist on doing坚持做某事 ②At the same time同时 ③communicate with foreigners和外国人交流 [高分句型] ①I insist on listening to English news every day to practice my listening. (动词不定式表目的) ②I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. (宾语从句) 39．在人生旅途中，总会有这样一些人，他们或令你感动、或让你崇敬、或使你难忘……某英文报社正在开展以 “难忘的人” 为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，谈谈谁是你难忘的人，他 (她) 曾经做过什么以及你从他 (她)。 要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。 提示词语： helpful, fail, encourage, make progress 提示问题： •Who is the person you will never forget? •What did he/she do? •What can you learn from him/her? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Person Mr. Wu is my math teacher. He is tall and outgoing. He likes sports very much, especially basketball. Because he thinks taking exercise can make him healthier. He also likes to eat healthy food. My math was once so poor that I could not work out the problems. He helped me and told me good ways to learn math. He was patient to me and he regarded me as his own child. Now my math is better and I often get good grades. I really thank him for his kind help. No matter where I go, I will never forget him forever and help others like him. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己难忘的人； 第二步，具体介绍这个让自己难忘的人的职业以及难忘的原因； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①very much非常 ②work out成功解决 ③be patient to sb.对某人有耐心 ④regard...as...把……看作…… [高分句型] ①Because he thinks taking exercise can make him healthier. (动名词作主语) ②My math was once so poor that I could not work out the problems. (that引导结果状语从句) 北京市海淀区2022-2023学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 36．假设你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展”好家规伴我成长”主题演讲比赛。请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你家有哪些家规，以及它们对你的影响。 要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：be allowed to, honest, responsible, deal with 提示问题：What family rules do you have?             How do they influence you? Dear teachers and fellows, I am glad to be here, telling you about my family rules. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening. 【答案】例文 Dear teachers and fellows, I am glad to be here, telling you about my family rules. There are various kinds of rules in my family. First, in my family, I am supposed to be honest and polite, and show respect to others. Second, I’m required to share housework at home to relieve my parents’ burden. Third, doing exercise for half an hour every day is on my schedule. Also, we should have dinner together, which provides a bonding opportunity for us. These rules have shaped me. I have learnt how to behave well both in and out home. What’s more, by doing chores, my sense of responsibility and living skills have been improved. Besides, doing sports regularly helps me keep fit. To sum up, I believe family rules are there to make sure our life stays on track. Thanks for listening. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，介绍了家庭中的家规以及对作者的影响。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：需注意时态的一致性，不要遗漏表格中的中文和英文提示，所给提示词语可供选用；准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，进行清楚连贯地书面表达，并保证语句通顺，意思连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，在写作时应承接短文开头，引出演讲的主题。 第二步，详细描述家庭中的各种家规，包括诚实与礼貌、分担家务、每日锻炼和共进晚餐等。 第三步，强调这些家规对作者产生的影响，例如，提高了责任感和生活技能，保持了身体健康。 第四步，总结，强调家规的重要性。 第五步，在写作时应承接短文结尾，感谢大家聆听。 [亮点词汇] ①various kinds of各种各样的 ②be supposed to被要求 ③provide 提供 ④relieve解除 ⑤bonding opportunity团聚机会 ⑥sense of responsibility责任感 ⑦regularly定期地，有规律地 ⑧To sum up总之，概括来说 ⑨stays on track保持在轨道上 [高分句型] ①doing exercise for half an hour every day is on my schedule.（动名词短语作主语） ②Also, we should have dinner together, which provides a bonding opportunity for us.（Which引导的非限制性定语从句） 37．吾日三省吾身——《论语》 反思帮我们取得学业进步，解决生活冲突；反思助我们收获美好人生。某英文网站正在开展以“反思成就自我”为题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈促使你反思的一次经历，以及你反思后的收获。 要求： （1）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作； （2）文中已给出内容不计入总词数； （3）所给提示词语仅供选用； （4）请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语：problem, think over, realize, a better self 提示问题：What experience made you reflect? What have you learned? Please describe it. Reflection is very important in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Reflection is very important in our life. It provides us a chance to know and better ourselves. It was my failure in a contest that forced me to reflect and become more hard-working. I used to put things off till the last minute, because I thought I could always finish tasks perfectly on time. However, things changed after an English competition. At first, I was so confident about myself that I only practiced my speech the night before. Undoubtedly, I didn’t win any prize. This pushed me to think over my problem. I realized that I should work harder and take things seriously. My experience shows me the benefit of reflection. It’s important to find out why we think, say, and do certain things, and then make improvements. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时及一般过去时； ③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表述反思的重要性； 第二步，表述自己的经历及通过反思学到了什么； 第三步，书写结语，对文章做出总结。 [亮点词汇] ①provides sth to sb为某人提供某物 ②used to过去常常 ③be confident about对……感到自信 [高分句型] ①I used to put things off till the last minute, because I thought I could always finish tasks perfectly on time.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②I realized that I should work harder and take things seriously.（that引导的宾语从句） 北京市东城区2022-2023学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris 给你发来邮件，询问你最钦佩的人是谁，以及钦佩他/她的原因。请你用英语回复一封邮件，向他进行介绍。 提示词语：hard-working, take care of, kind, help, proud 提示问题： 1. Who do you admire most? 2. Why do you admire him/her? Dear Chris I’m glad to tell you about the person I admire most. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Could you please tell me about the person you admire most? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Chris. I’m glad to tell you about the person I admire most. I admire my mother most. She is selfless and hard-working. As a teacher, she spends most of her time and energy on her work and her students all enjoy her lessons. After a busy day at work, she makes every effort to take care of our family. She is also kind and understanding. When I have problems, she’s always ready to help me and sees things from my point of view. I’m proud to have such a wonderful mother. Could you please tell me about the person you admire most? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：根据提示问题介绍自己最钦佩的人，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最钦佩的人是妈妈； 第二步，介绍你为什么最钦佩她； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①make every effort to do sth.想方设法做某事 ②from my point of view在我看来 [高分句型] ①As a teacher, she spends most of her time and energy on her work and her students all enjoy her lessons.(and连接的并列句) ②When I have problems, she’s always ready to help me and sees things from my point of view.(when引导的时间状语从句) 39．某英文网站正在开展以“独立自主”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在生活中能够独立做哪些事情以及你从中获得的益处。词数80个左右。 提示词语：tidy up, exercise, homework, grow, confident 提示问题： (1)What can you do independently? (2)What benefits have you got? It’s important for teenagers to learn to be independent. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文      It’s important for teenagers to learn to be in dependent. I think everyone should be responsible for ourselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility when we grow up. Let me tell you something about myself.      Firstly, I can do chores to help my parents such as tiding up our rooms, washing clothes, doing the dishes and so on. I think it also can strengthen our relationship with our parents. Secondly, I can manage my time well in my daily life. Meanwhile, I should improve myself from some aspects. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你能独立做什么； 第二步，介绍你从做的事情中可以获得什么。 [亮点词汇] ①be responsible for对……负责 ②grow up长大 ③such as比如 ④meanwhile同时 [高分句型] I think everyone should be responsible for ourselves so that we can develop a good sense of responsibility when we grow up.（so that引导的目的状语从句以及when引导的时间状语从句） 北京市西城区2022-2023学年九年级上学期期末英语试题 五、书面表达 38．假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动。其公众号计划做关于“发明改变生活”的系列推送。请你用英文给公众号投稿，推荐一个你认为重要的发明，并说明推荐理由。 提示词语：important, change, easy, necessary, develop 提示问题： ● What is the invention？ ● Why is it great？ Many great inventions have changed our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Many great inventions have changed our life. In my opinion, the mobile phone is the most important invention. The mobile phone makes it possible for us to communicate conveniently with others. We can get comfort whenever we are upset or we run into trouble. What’s more, with the rapid development of electronic equipment, the mobile phone is getting smaller but more powerful. Nowadays, we can also use a mobile phone to search for information or even shop online. How cool it is! In a word, I do think that the mobile phone is the most important invention. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍一个发明； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要写出这个发明是什么，为什么这个发明好。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍你要写的发明是什么，开头已给出； 第二步，介绍这个发明给我们带来了哪些好处。 第三步，书写结语，点名主题。 [亮点词汇] ① run into trouble遇到麻烦 ②the rapid development快速发展 ③search for information搜寻资料 [高分句型] ① The mobile phone makes it possible for us to communicate conveniently with others.（本句中it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正的宾语。） ②We can get comfort whenever we are upset or we run into trouble.（whenever在此处引导的是让步状语从句。） 39．自我管理是青少年成长路上必要的一课。 你校英语俱乐部正在举办一场关于“自我管理”的讨论。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述一次你独自在家的经历，你是如何进行自我管理的，并谈谈你从中领悟到了什么。 提示词语：time, plan, cook, manage, realize, life skills 提示问题： ● What was your home alone experience？ ● What did you learn？ I once had a home alone experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I once had a home alone experience. My parents needed to travel for a week. So I had to be at home by myself. Although there was no parental restraint, I made a plan every day. I went to bed on time. I got up early in the morning. I made my own breakfast, and then I went to school by bus. After school, I made supper first. After supper, I began to do my homework. Then I had to clean up. Through this experience, I realized the importance of self-management and learned some life skills. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己一次独自在家的经历，可适当发挥，注意语义连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接开头，通过介绍自己独自在家的原因引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍自己独自在家是如何自我管理的； 第三步，表达自己从中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①parental restraint父母的约束 ②clean up清理 ③the importance of……的重要性 [高分句型] ①Although there was no parental restraint, I made a plan every day.（although引导让步状语从句） ②Through this experience, I realized the importance of self-management and learned some life skills.（and表并列） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！22 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$