Unit2 Onwards and upwards Writing 写作课件-2024-2025学年高中英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第一册

Unit 2 Onwards and upwards Writing about an experience Read the passage and answer the questions. Dining in the Dark 1. Why did the author go to the “dark restaurant”? Because the author wanted _______________the experience of being blind, thinking eating would be the ____________ activity. to understand most difficult 2. What difficulties did the author have during the meal? The author _____________glasses and ___________ food. The author ate much______________, trying to guess what was being eaten. ___________water was very difficult. After __________________any food with a fork for five minutes, the author decided to use hands, but ___________________a bowl of warm, thick soup. Even using a spoon, most of the soup _____________ on the author’s shirt. knocked over dropped more slowly Pouring failing to pick up stuck one hand into ended up 3 The author left the restaurant feeling ________, though much more aware of the challenges that blind people face. 3. How did the author feel after finishing the meal? hungry 描写一次经历属于记叙文的范畴，应当按照记叙文的写作方法进行写作。一般来说，记叙文要把握六大要素： 时间(when)、 地点(where)、 人物(who)、 事件(what)、 原因(why)、 结果(how)。 叙述事件时还应注意以下几点： 1. 描写角度：第一人称—可增加文章的真实感； 第三人称—灵活多变，客观全面，穿插个人感受。 2. 时态：描写经历时一定要保持时态的一致性。 3. 写作顺序：常按时间顺序，也可采用倒叙。 4. 篇章结构： 首先，简单叙述写作的目的 — 介绍一次经历，并引出事情的内容概要，作为全文的主题句或主题段； 其次，详细叙述事情的发生、发展和结局； 最后，谈谈自己的感受或评论。 Description of Act 上车？ get into the car? Example 1 strategy : create an action chain He stopped a car , got into it and told the driver his destination. (1) and 并列连词连接动词 很关键 拦车-- 上车-- 告诉司机目的地-- stop a car get into it tell the driver his destination practice1 ： 她拥抱了Betty. (失散多年的老朋友） She dashed forward， gathered Betty into her arms and burst into tears. 冲上去-- 抱住她-- 流下眼泪-- dash forward hug/ gather her into her arms burst into tears practice 2：他向狗扔了一块肉。 He picked up a piece of meat , aimed at the dog and threw it to him. 捡起肉 瞄准狗 扔过去 pick up a piece of meat aim at the dog throw to 贝贝坐在路边，双臂低垂，眺望远方，思考自己是黑熊猫还是白熊猫。 肢体动作 肢体动作 面部 心理 整体--------局部（肢体，面部，心理） strategy 2 : create a scene of action Example 2 整体---肢体动作， 面部， 心理 她站在山顶，仰望天空，感受着这份珍贵的宁静。 She stood on the top of the mountain ,looked into the sky and felt the precious peace . 如何句式升级？ practice 3 1. doing, 主语+谓语, doing Standing on the empty road, she looked into the sky ，feeling the precious peace. She stood on the top of the mountain ,looked into the sky and felt the precious peace . 2. 主语+谓语，doing and doing She stood on the top of the mountain, looking into the sky and feeling the precious peace. She stood on the top of the mountain , looked into the sky and felt the precious peace . 被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy 举起了手，说：我来。 Lucy ______________ her teacher’s words, so she ______________________:“I volunteer”. Example 3 was inspired by raised her hand and said Lucy was inspired by her teacher’s words, so she raised her hand and said :“I volunteer”. 3. done (by +n), 主语+谓语，doing Inspired by her teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, saying:“I volunteer”. 4. 善用with 复合结构 Lucy was inspired by her teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand and said :“I volunteer”. With teacher’s words inspiring her, Lucy raised her hand, saying:“I volunteer”. Emotion description sentences : Sb felt a great sense of +情绪+ welling up in sb's heart and surging through sb . 1. 某人感到一股强烈的.........在内心升腾或奔涌。 2. 某人感觉某种心情填满心间。 sb was filled with a sense of + 情绪。 写作典例 假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教。请根据以下要点用英文写一篇作文,讲一讲你的助教经历。 1.一位失去生活信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾信心; 2.在你帮助她时，遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍; 3.你是如何克服困难的并学到了什么。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 返回至目录 21 分步推进 Step 1 审题谋篇 返回至目录 22 Step 2 要点翻译 1.翻译词汇 （1） _____________ adj.难堪的；尴尬的 embarrassed （2） ___________ adj.令人愉快的；讨人喜欢的 delightful （3） _______________ n.友谊;友情 companionship （4） _______ adj.心烦意乱的；烦恼的 upset （5） ____________________ adv.然而；不过 nevertheless/however 返回至目录 23 2.翻译句子 （1） 总之,帮助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的经历。 On the whole, ______ Jean restore her confidence in life is __________. helping a delightful experience （2） 我面对的最大的困难是沟通障碍。 The biggest difficulty _________ was the communication barriers. I faced （3） 此外,我尽一切努力与她建立友谊及信任。 Furthermore, I made every effort to ________________________ with her. establish companionship and trust It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced. On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life . 返回至目录 24 On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life. In my memory, the first time we met, she was always upset, making me embarrassed. Meanwhile, it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty I faced. Nevertheless, I made it. First, I advised her to gather courage to face the difficulties instead of escaping from them. Furthermore, I made every effort to establish companionship and trust with her. Fortunately, what I got from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life. Step 4 连句成篇 返回至目录 25 $$