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Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
单元主题写作(音乐与舞蹈)满分范文18篇
1.(23-24九年级下·安徽亳州·开学考试)音乐能促进人身心健康,多听音乐能缓解压力,也能给予人们振奋的力量。下周英语口语课的主题是“音乐”。请你结合以下内容提示,以“My favorite song”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍歌曲《孤勇者》(Lonely Warrior)。
内容提示:
1.原唱:陈奕迅(Eason Chan);
2.发行:2021年11月8日;
3.2023年6月14日获十四届华语金曲奖(The 14th Chinese Music Awards);
4.歌曲鼓励我们身处困境时要勇于为自己而战、为梦想而战。
要求:
1.习作包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名;
3.条理清楚、语句通顺、书写规范;
4.词数80—100。
My favorite song
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2.(2024·陕西西安·二模)假如你是李华,因为上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对(country music party)而喜欢上了乡村音乐。乡村音乐舒缓(gentle),能够清净人的思想(clean one’s mind),消除忧虑与不快(remove worries and unhappiness),缓解疲劳(reduce the tiredness)。你打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐,尽可能多听乡村音乐。请给你的英国笔友 Peter写一封e-mail,介绍你的这种音乐爱好。提示:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Peter,
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you must be a music lover, too. What’s your favorite music?
Yours,
Li Hua
3.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的爱好。问卷中有关于音乐和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向Tony作详细介绍。
1.What music do you listen to when you feel...?
2.How often do you do sports?
3.Do your friends have the same hobbies as you?
4.Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my hobbies about music and sports to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2024·湖南株洲·一模)你校举办了主题为“Being thankful”的毕业晚会。请你根据以下的信息和提示为校报英语角写一篇报道。
Time
◆ from 7:00 pm to 8:30 pm, June 25th
Place
◆ the school music hall
Hosts
◆ Junjun and Yunyun
Topic
◆ Being thankful
Headmaster speech
◆ You’re the future
Performances
◆ Song
Growing up I’ll do like you
◆ Poem reciting
Teachers, you’re the diamonds in my heart
◆ Dance
Fill in the campus with love
Feelings
◆ …
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th.
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5.(2024·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·一模)假如你是李华,你校对外交流中心正在招募志愿者为你校的国际交换生介绍中国民乐。请你用英文写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1. 个人基本信息;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事。
参考词汇:对外交流中心:The Foreign Exchange Center;中国民乐:Chinese folk music
注意:1. 词数80左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’m very interested in volunteering to introduce Chinese folk music to exchange students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6.(23-24九年级上·山东泰安·期中)音乐来源于生活,又高于生活。每首歌都有一个故事,都承载了一段回忆。
假如你是李华,是某国际学校广播电台音乐栏目的主持人。近期你在做“你的音乐故事”系列节目。请你根据下列表格中的提示,在今天的节目中向大家简要介绍你最喜欢的歌曲《外婆的澎湖湾》, 并分享你和这首歌之间的故事。
歌名
《外婆的澎湖湾》( Grandma’s Penghu Bay)
作者
叶佳修
歌曲鉴赏
☆为他的朋友潘安邦所作;
☆描述了澎湖湾的美;
☆表达了潘对外婆的爱。
感想
☆13岁时第一次听这首歌;
☆有温暖的感觉;
☆想起了过去与外婆的快乐时光。
写作要求:
1、要点齐全,适当发挥,条理清楚,语句连贯,句式规范,书写工整。
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3、不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good afternoon! You’re listening to Music World. This is Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my favorite song with you.
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So much for today. Thanks for listening.
7.(22-23九年级上·湖南湘潭·期末)
学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动,请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。
内容包括:
(1)你喜欢的音乐类型(列举一至两项)。
(2)你喜欢这种音乐的原因:如音乐带给你的感受,对你的帮助和影响。
(3)你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。
参考词汇:乡村音乐:country music;流行音乐:pop music,摇滚音乐:rock-and-roll 古典音乐:classic music 说唱音乐:hip-hop
注意:
(1)词数在 80 词左右。
(2)要点齐全,可做适当拓展。
(3)文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名、师生名字等)。
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8.(23-24九年级上·北京大兴·期末)学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的歌曲,并谈谈理由及感受。
提示词语:lyrics(歌词),rhythm(节奏),perfect,dance,forget worries
提示问题:
·What’s your favorite song/music?
·Why do you like it?
·How do you feel about it?
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9.(22-23九年级上·云南楚雄·期末)提示 冼星海说 “音乐,是人生最大的快乐;音乐,是生活中的一股清泉;音乐,是陶冶性情的熔炉。” 你喜欢音乐吗? 你最喜欢什么样的音乐呢? 请以“My Favorite Music”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的音乐。
要求 1. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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10.(23-24九年级上·山西晋中·期末)音乐是一道美丽的风景线,让心灵在旋律的指引下自由起舞;音乐是一片温暖的海洋,它能够包容你的所有情感和思绪!假设你是李明,是雄鹰小组(4人)的一员,老师布置了一个任务:调查小组成员对于音乐的喜好,并根据所获情况(见下表)写一篇英文调查报告。记得小组成员包括你哦!
Name
Favorite music
Favorite musician
Reason
Peter
Pop music
Liu Huan
Good words
Linda
Chinese classical music
Lang Lang
Play the piano best
Tim
Rock music
Wang Feng
Make people excited
要求:
1. 文中至少用到1-2句复合句;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 80词左右。
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11.(23-24九年级上·安徽亳州·期末)假如你是李华,你的好友Linda想了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据要点提示,给她写一封邮件。要点如下:
1. 最喜欢民间音乐;
2. 让你了解文化;
3. 多种不同乐器的音乐;
4. 自十岁开始喜欢。
要求:
1. 短文中要包括以上所有提示信息内容;
2. 内容可适当发挥,以保证短文内容的丰富、完整与流畅;
3. 词数:80~100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
12.(23-24九年级上·山西阳泉·期末)音乐,带来繁忙时的安闲、带来失落时的慰藉、带来孤独时的畅然。音乐,让人们的生活更美好。某校为了了解学生喜欢什么类型的音乐以及影响学生选择音乐的因素,对700名学生进行了问卷调查,下表是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生,请结合图表信息,以“My favorite music”为题,写一篇小短文。
内容包括:
1.简要说明表格内容:
2.从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活和学习产生了什么积极的影响。
要求:
1.词数不少于80词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Recently, our school did a survey among 700 students on the topic of “What’s your favorite music”. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13.(23-24九年级上·云南临沧·期末)提示:音乐有着无穷的魅力。它可以让我们忘记所有的烦恼和不快。请以“Music Makes Me __________”为题,用英语写一篇短文。谈谈你喜欢什么类型的音乐以及它带给你的感受。
要求:
1. 请先将题目补全后再作答;
2. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计
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14.(23-24九年级上·山东菏泽·期末)假如你叫 Li Ming,是一名中学生,经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节日。 请根据以下要点提示,用英语给主持人写一封100词左右的信 (开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数),内容要包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,但不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
要点:
1.你很喜欢这个节目,特别是节目播放的歌词很棒的英文歌曲;
2.你学习很忙或疲劳时,会打开收音机听这个节目;
3.从节目中你学到了很多新单词;
4.告诉他你最喜欢什么类型的音乐,请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming.
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Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Ming
15.(24-25九年级上·山东泰安·期中)作家雨果说过:“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把,一是字母,二是数字,三是音符。”从这句话中,可见音乐对人的影响。请你根据以下提示,以Music为题,写一篇短文,参加学校的英语作文竞赛。
要求:
(1)语句通顺,表达正确,不可出现真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息;
(2)短文须包括提示内容,可适当发挥;
(3)80-100字。
Music
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16.(2024·甘肃武威·三模)Think and write.
Your American friend Annie has just listened to the music Erquan Yingyue with you. She is fascinated with it and asks you to tell her something about the composer. Please give a short introduction with the information in the chart. (80 — 100 words)
Name
Abing
Birth
1893, Wuxi
Parents
die early
Life
get ill, sing and play music on the streets
Music
…
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17.(24-25九年级上·河南周口·期中)假如你是李华,上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对,你立刻喜欢上了乡村音乐。请你根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1)乡村音乐的特点;
2)乡村音乐的好处;
3)你今后的计划。
写作要求:
1)文中须包含要点提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3)词数 100 左右。
参考词汇:fall in love with 爱上;tiredness 疲劳
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18.(22-23九年级下·江西吉安·期中)假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明,今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
赞同意见
音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松,音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩
反对意见
吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋,不利于课间休息
你的看法
. . . . . .
要求:
1)短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3)不少于 80 词。
Should music be played between classes?
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Unit 9 I like music that I can dance to.
单元主题写作(音乐与舞蹈)满分范文18篇
1.(23-24九年级下·安徽亳州·开学考试)音乐能促进人身心健康,多听音乐能缓解压力,也能给予人们振奋的力量。下周英语口语课的主题是“音乐”。请你结合以下内容提示,以“My favorite song”为题,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍歌曲《孤勇者》(Lonely Warrior)。
内容提示:
1.原唱:陈奕迅(Eason Chan);
2.发行:2021年11月8日;
3.2023年6月14日获十四届华语金曲奖(The 14th Chinese Music Awards);
4.歌曲鼓励我们身处困境时要勇于为自己而战、为梦想而战。
要求:
1.习作包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文章不可出现真实的人名、地名及校名;
3.条理清楚、语句通顺、书写规范;
4.词数80—100。
My favorite song
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【答案】例文
My favorite song
Lonely Warrior is one of my favorite songs. It came out on November 8, 2021 and is sung by Eason Chan. The beautiful song won The 14th Chinese Music Awards on June 14, 2023.
I like the song because it encourages us to have the courage to fight for ourselves and our dreams when facing difficulties. When I am tired and down, it can help cheer me up. It can also give me energy and encourage me to work hard for my future and dream. And the song not only has good lyrics but also has a really beautiful melody. If you haven’t listened to it yet, I strongly suggest you should try it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍歌曲《孤勇者》,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍这首歌曲的基本信息;
第二步,介绍为什么喜欢这首歌曲;
第三步,建议听这首歌曲。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
②cheer up使振奋
③not only...but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
①When I am tired and down, it can help cheer me up. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you haven’t listened to it yet, I strongly suggest you should try it. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(2024·陕西西安·二模)假如你是李华,因为上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对(country music party)而喜欢上了乡村音乐。乡村音乐舒缓(gentle),能够清净人的思想(clean one’s mind),消除忧虑与不快(remove worries and unhappiness),缓解疲劳(reduce the tiredness)。你打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐,尽可能多听乡村音乐。请给你的英国笔友 Peter写一封e-mail,介绍你的这种音乐爱好。提示:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Dear Peter,
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you must be a music lover, too. What’s your favorite music?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. I fell in love with the country music at once. In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily. Sometimes, it can help to remove worries and unhappiness. After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly.
I have decided to study country music in my spare time as much as possible. I’ll listen to more country music, and make it part of my life.
I think you must be a music lover, too. What’s your favorite music?
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍你对乡村音乐的喜好以及打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐,尽可能多听乡村音乐。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍对乡村音乐的看法;
第三步,介绍自己打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐,尽可能多听乡村音乐;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上
②in my spare time在我的空闲时间
③as much as possible尽可能多地
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly. (if引导的条件状语从句)
3.(2024·湖北武汉·一模)你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的爱好。问卷中有关于音乐和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向Tony作详细介绍。
1.What music do you listen to when you feel...?
2.How often do you do sports?
3.Do your friends have the same hobbies as you?
4.Something more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数100词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my hobbies about music and sports to you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my hobbies about music and sports to you.
I enjoy listening to music very much. When I feel nervous or tired, I always listening to country music. It makes me relax. I like playing football and my friends like it too. I think playing football can not only make me fit, but also increase my sense of teamwork. So after class, if I have time, I often go to the playground with my classmates to play football. Every Friday afternoon, we go to the gym to play games and practice. I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏材料中给出的四点提示,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我最喜欢的音乐和运动”来引出下文的详细介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“常听的音乐、运动的频度、朋友是否有相同的爱好和其他”四方面入手,重点介绍自己的音乐和体育爱好;
③第三步,书写结语。希望保持良好的生活习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to music 听音乐
②not only...but also 不但……而且
[高分句型]
①When I feel nervous or tired, I always listening to country music.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②So after class, if I have time, I often go to the playground with my classmates to play football.(if引导的条件状语从句)
③I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic.(which引导的定语从句)
4.(2024·湖南株洲·一模)你校举办了主题为“Being thankful”的毕业晚会。请你根据以下的信息和提示为校报英语角写一篇报道。
Time
◆ from 7:00 pm to 8:30 pm, June 25th
Place
◆ the school music hall
Hosts
◆ Junjun and Yunyun
Topic
◆ Being thankful
Headmaster speech
◆ You’re the future
Performances
◆ Song
Growing up I’ll do like you
◆ Poem reciting
Teachers, you’re the diamonds in my heart
◆ Dance
Fill in the campus with love
Feelings
◆ …
注意:
(1)词数80左右;
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th.
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【答案】Possible versions:
A
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. The event themed Being Thankful was hosted by Junjun and Yunyun in the school music hall.
From 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m., we enjoyed several wonderful performances. I will never forget the heartfelt song, Growing up I’ll Do like You. The poem reciting called Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart, and the dance named Fill in the Campus with Love made us cry. The headmaster’s inspiring speech, You’re the Future, filled us with hope and encouragement.
As I watched the performances, I felt a deep sense of appreciation for all the people who have supported and guided me during my school years. I will always remember where I came from.
B
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. Its topic was Being Thankful, which was from 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m. and was hosted by Junjun and Yunyun in the school music hall.
At the beginning of the party, the speech, You’re the Future, was delivered by our dear headmaster. Also, there were colorful shows. It was the song Growing up I’ll Do like You that encouraged us to meet a better self. What’s more, you could never imagine how great the poem is, Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart. Fill in the Campus with Love reminded us that the best things in life are free.
Behind these performances lies the true meaning of the party: we should never fail to be thankful to the people around us.
C
To celebrate our graduation and express our thanks for the past years, our school successfully organized a graduation party on June 25th. Junjun and Yunyun hosted the party themed Being Thankful in our school music hall from 7:00 p.m. to 8:30 p.m..
At first, our headmaster gave a moving speech called You’re the Future, which touched us all deeply. After that, there were some amazing performances. The song, Growing up I’ll Do like You, and the poem reciting, Teachers, You’re the Diamonds in My Heart, reminded us of the important lessons we had learned from our teachers. Finally, an energetic dance named Fill in the Campus with Love ended the evening with a great cheer.
The party made us realize the value of our school memories and encouraged us to carry the spirit of being thankful into our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先介绍晚会的主题、时间、地点和主持人;
第二步,具体介绍晚会的内容,例如校长的演讲、歌曲表演、诗朗诵和舞蹈表演等;
第三步,书写结束语,表达晚会给自己的触动,比如要懂得感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①inspiring speech 鼓舞人心的演讲
②fill...with... 用……填满……
③encouragement 鼓励
④a deep sense of appreciation 深深的感激之情
[高分句型]
①As I watched the performances, I felt a deep sense of appreciation for all the people who have supported and guided me during my school years.(who引导的定语从句)
②I will always remember where I came from.(where引导的宾语从句)
5.(2024·内蒙古鄂尔多斯·一模)假如你是李华,你校对外交流中心正在招募志愿者为你校的国际交换生介绍中国民乐。请你用英文写一封自荐信,内容包括:
1. 个人基本信息;
2. 个人优势;
3. 能做的事。
参考词汇:对外交流中心:The Foreign Exchange Center;中国民乐:Chinese folk music
注意:1. 词数80左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’m very interested in volunteering to introduce Chinese folk music to exchange students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for reading my letter. I’m very interested in volunteering to introduce Chinese folk music to exchange students. As a student in the 9th grade, my love for Chinese culture, particularly our traditional music, is strong. I have learned the Guzheng, a Chinese string instrument with a more than 2,500-year history. Moreover, I have won a few awards in Guzheng performance. In terms of language, I am good at both English and Mandarin. I am confident in my ability to share the charm of Chinese folk music with foreign students clearly. Furthermore, I am always patient, and friendly, which are important when working with foreigners learning about new culture. If you can give me this chance, I will organize regular musical performances for international students. In doing so, I can introduce and explain Chinese folk music.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to the chance to contribute to The Foreign Exchange Center.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇自荐信,属于书信作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括个人基本信息、个人优势和能做的事。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍个人基本信息;
第二步,具体阐述个人优势,对于中国民乐的了解情况;
第三步,最后是叙述自己能做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①In terms of就……而言
②look forward to期待
③contribute to有助于
[高分句型]
①Furthermore, I am always patient, and friendly, which are important when working with foreigners learning about new culture.(which引导非限制定语从句)
②If you can give me this chance, I will organize regular musical performances for international students.(If引导的条件状语从句)
6.(23-24九年级上·山东泰安·期中)音乐来源于生活,又高于生活。每首歌都有一个故事,都承载了一段回忆。
假如你是李华,是某国际学校广播电台音乐栏目的主持人。近期你在做“你的音乐故事”系列节目。请你根据下列表格中的提示,在今天的节目中向大家简要介绍你最喜欢的歌曲《外婆的澎湖湾》, 并分享你和这首歌之间的故事。
歌名
《外婆的澎湖湾》( Grandma’s Penghu Bay)
作者
叶佳修
歌曲鉴赏
☆为他的朋友潘安邦所作;
☆描述了澎湖湾的美;
☆表达了潘对外婆的爱。
感想
☆13岁时第一次听这首歌;
☆有温暖的感觉;
☆想起了过去与外婆的快乐时光。
写作要求:
1、要点齐全,适当发挥,条理清楚,语句连贯,句式规范,书写工整。
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
3、不少于80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good afternoon! You’re listening to Music World. This is Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my favorite song with you.
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So much for today. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Good afternoon! You’ re listening to Music World. This is Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my favorite song with you.
Its name is Grandma’s Penghu Bay. It was written by Ye Jiaxiu. The song is so successful that almost all Chinese people can sing it. Ye wrote the song for his friend Pan Anbang. Although I’ve never been to Penghu, I can feel the beauty of nature through the lyrics. The song also expresses Pan’s love for his grandmother.
I first heard this song when I was 13. It made me feel warm and brought me back to the happy old days with my grandmother. Have you listened to this song? How do you feel about it?
So much for today. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,包括:注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍所分享的歌曲的名字和创作者;
第二步:对歌曲进行鉴赏:描述的内容、表达的感情等;
第三步:阐述你的感想,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty of nature自然之美
②bring sb back to把某人带回
[高分句型]
①The song is so successful that almost all Chinese people can sing it.(so…that引导结果状语从句)
②Although I’ve never been to Penghu, I can feel the beauty of nature through the lyrics.(Although引导让步状语从句)
7.(22-23九年级上·湖南湘潭·期末)
学校英文杂志社正在举办征文活动,请你介绍你最喜欢的音乐类型。
内容包括:
(1)你喜欢的音乐类型(列举一至两项)。
(2)你喜欢这种音乐的原因:如音乐带给你的感受,对你的帮助和影响。
(3)你想要和谁分享这种音乐以及原因。
参考词汇:乡村音乐:country music;流行音乐:pop music,摇滚音乐:rock-and-roll 古典音乐:classic music 说唱音乐:hip-hop
注意:
(1)词数在 80 词左右。
(2)要点齐全,可做适当拓展。
(3)文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息(如校名、师生名字等)。
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【答案】例文
I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. Personally, I like many kinds of music, such as country music, pop music, rock-and-roll, classic music and so on. But my favorite music is classic music. For some people, they find classic music boring. However, I think classic music is beautiful and it can make me inspired. Every time I feel upset or anxious, classic music helps me calm down. Besides, it makes my life more colourful and gives me a lot of entertainment. Most importantly, it makes me relaxed. I’d like to share this kind of music with my mother. The reason is that she is a music lover. She is busy with her work all day. I think if she listens to some classic music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed.
In a word, music plays an important role in my life. I love music.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中喜欢的音乐类型的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“喜欢的音乐类型”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“喜欢原因、听音乐感受、分享音乐”几个方面重点介绍音乐对自己的具体影响;
第三步,书写结语。表达“音乐在我生活中重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①as much as 和……一样多
②many kinds of 很多种类的
③make me inspired使我受鼓舞
④be busy with 忙于
⑤In a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①However, I think classic music is beautiful and it can make me inspired.(宾语从句)
②I think if she listens to some classic music after she gets back home, she will feel more relaxed.(宾语从句)
8.(23-24九年级上·北京大兴·期末)学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你最喜欢的歌曲,并谈谈理由及感受。
提示词语:lyrics(歌词),rhythm(节奏),perfect,dance,forget worries
提示问题:
·What’s your favorite song/music?
·Why do you like it?
·How do you feel about it?
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【答案】范文:
My favorite song is Let It Go by Idina Menzel. I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy. And it is also easy for me to sing along with. The rhythm is perfect for dancing. Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet. It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have. In a word, it is not just a song to me, but a source of joy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示词语”和“提示问题”中“我最喜欢的歌曲,喜欢的原因以及我的评价”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,介绍喜欢的歌曲的名称;
第二步,具体阐述喜欢这首歌曲的原因。
第三步,对这首歌曲作出评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t help doing忍不住做某事
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I love this song because it has meaningful lyrics that always make me feel happy.(because引导原因状语从句,that引导限制性定语从句)
②Whenever I listen to it, I can’t help moving my body and tapping my feet.(whenever引导时间状语从句)
③It’s the kind of song that puts me in a good mood and makes me forget worries I may have.(that引导限制性定语从句,省略引导词that的定语从句)
9.(22-23九年级上·云南楚雄·期末)提示 冼星海说 “音乐,是人生最大的快乐;音乐,是生活中的一股清泉;音乐,是陶冶性情的熔炉。” 你喜欢音乐吗? 你最喜欢什么样的音乐呢? 请以“My Favorite Music”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你最喜欢的音乐。
要求 1. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Music
There are different types of music, such as traditional Western music, rock music, pop music and so on. But my favourite music is country music.
Country music is often about our life, and it is easy to understand. It also makes my life colourful. It makes me happy or moved, and sometimes makes me sad. It is also a good way to learn English.
In a word, country music plays an important role in my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并注意适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最爱的音乐是哪种;
第二步,具体介绍这种音乐的特点及自己喜爱它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②In a word总之
[高分句型]
①There are different types of music, such as traditional Western music, rock music, pop music and so on.(there be句型)
②It makes me happy or moved, and sometimes makes me sad.(形容词作宾补)
10.(23-24九年级上·山西晋中·期末)音乐是一道美丽的风景线,让心灵在旋律的指引下自由起舞;音乐是一片温暖的海洋,它能够包容你的所有情感和思绪!假设你是李明,是雄鹰小组(4人)的一员,老师布置了一个任务:调查小组成员对于音乐的喜好,并根据所获情况(见下表)写一篇英文调查报告。记得小组成员包括你哦!
Name
Favorite music
Favorite musician
Reason
Peter
Pop music
Liu Huan
Good words
Linda
Chinese classical music
Lang Lang
Play the piano best
Tim
Rock music
Wang Feng
Make people excited
要求:
1. 文中至少用到1-2句复合句;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 80词左右。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I have three friends. They like different music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Liu Huan because the words are good. They can touch people’s heart. Linda likes Chinese classical music. Her favorite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano best. His music sounds beautiful and lively. Tim likes rock music best. His favorite musician is Wang Feng, a famous Chinese rock singer. He thinks his music can make people excited and happy. As for me, I like pop music, too. My favorite musician is Zhou Shen because his voice is beautiful and full of feelings.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文为一篇说明文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:内容要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“自己对音乐的喜好”,适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,进行自我介绍;
第二步,介绍朋友们喜欢的音乐类型、音乐家及原因;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、音乐家及原因。
[亮点词汇]
① play the piano弹钢琴
② as for sb就某人而言
[高分句型]
① He likes Liu Huan because the words are good.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② He thinks his music can make people excited and happy.(省略that的宾语从句)
11.(23-24九年级上·安徽亳州·期末)假如你是李华,你的好友Linda想了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据要点提示,给她写一封邮件。要点如下:
1. 最喜欢民间音乐;
2. 让你了解文化;
3. 多种不同乐器的音乐;
4. 自十岁开始喜欢。
要求:
1. 短文中要包括以上所有提示信息内容;
2. 内容可适当发挥,以保证短文内容的丰富、完整与流畅;
3. 词数:80~100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
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That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you all about my favorite music.
I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.
Importantly, it can help me learn more about our rich culture. In the folk music, I can hear the sound of different cultures. What’s more, I like the folk music by different musical instruments better than any other music. I especially like Erhu music. I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it. And I fell in love with it when I was only ten. At that time, my uncle played “Er Quan Ying Yue” with his Erhu. It’s really beautiful.
That’s all. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意表明自己最喜爱的音乐类型,介绍该音乐的相关常识,不要遗漏。适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。表明自己喜欢民间音乐。
第二步,具体介绍民间音乐。包括其文化背景、乐器类型等常识,必要时可适当展开描述,让对方了解民间音乐。
第三步,介绍自己与民间音乐的渊源。从十岁就开始喜欢民间音乐,具体喜欢哪种乐器,对民间音乐的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①folk music 民间音乐
②instrument 乐器
[高分句型]
①I like folk music best, because it can always remind me of my happy time when I was young.(原因状语从句句型)
②I can deeply get into different feelings when I listen to it.(时间状语从句句型)
12.(23-24九年级上·山西阳泉·期末)音乐,带来繁忙时的安闲、带来失落时的慰藉、带来孤独时的畅然。音乐,让人们的生活更美好。某校为了了解学生喜欢什么类型的音乐以及影响学生选择音乐的因素,对700名学生进行了问卷调查,下表是相关的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生,请结合图表信息,以“My favorite music”为题,写一篇小短文。
内容包括:
1.简要说明表格内容:
2.从图表中任选一项,结合自己的经历,谈谈它对你的生活和学习产生了什么积极的影响。
要求:
1.词数不少于80词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Recently, our school did a survey among 700 students on the topic of “What’s your favorite music”. Here are the results. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Recently, our school did a survey among 700 students on the topic of “What’s your favorite music”. Here are the results. 52% (More than half) of the students love pop music, while 18% enjoy smooth music. 14% enjoy electronic music and 10% are interested in country music. Only 6% of the students love other music.
As for me, I love smooth music best. Last year my parents sent me to a boarding school, my life there was so difficult because I was shy and not able to make friends quickly in school. I felt unhappy and lonely. It really influenced my grades. One night, I couldn’t work out a math problem and began to be nervous. I tried to calm down myself by enjoying smooth music. The music was so quiet and beautiful that it made me relaxed. A few minutes later I solved the question successfully. Since then, I have listen to smooth music when I’m down or unhappy. I feel the smooth music can help me relax and make me get good grades.
In fact, different people love different music. But music can give us a great fun. It helps us become healthier.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍调查的结果;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢什么音乐以及自己的经历;
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②make friends交朋友
③calm down冷静下来
④since then自从那时起
[高分句型]
①Last year my parents sent me to a boarding school, my life there was so difficult because I was shy and not able to make friends quickly in school(because引导原因状语从句)
②Since then, I have listen to smooth music when I’m down or unhappy.(when引导时间状语从句)
13.(23-24九年级上·云南临沧·期末)提示:音乐有着无穷的魅力。它可以让我们忘记所有的烦恼和不快。请以“Music Makes Me __________”为题,用英语写一篇短文。谈谈你喜欢什么类型的音乐以及它带给你的感受。
要求:
1. 请先将题目补全后再作答;
2. 语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁,词数不少于60;
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名,否则以零分计
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【答案】例文
Music Makes Me Happy
I like music very much. It changes my life.
It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting. Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music that is loud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cold War Kids is my favorite band. I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy.
Music is the most beautiful language. Enjoy the music you like, and enjoy yourself!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍喜欢音乐,音乐改变了自己的生活;
第二步,具体介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型以及原因及乐队等;
第三步,最后再次总结音乐的好处,并提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① different kinds of不同种类的
② dance to伴随着音乐跳舞
③ favorite最喜欢的
[高分句型]
① I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow.(that引导的定语从句)
② It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad.(when引导的时间状语从句)
14.(23-24九年级上·山东菏泽·期末)假如你叫 Li Ming,是一名中学生,经常收听由英国主持人Philip主持的音乐节日。 请根据以下要点提示,用英语给主持人写一封100词左右的信 (开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数),内容要包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,但不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
要点:
1.你很喜欢这个节目,特别是节目播放的歌词很棒的英文歌曲;
2.你学习很忙或疲劳时,会打开收音机听这个节目;
3.从节目中你学到了很多新单词;
4.告诉他你最喜欢什么类型的音乐,请他帮你介绍一些相关的歌手和CD。
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming.
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Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Philip,
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I often listen to your program at night. I like it very much, especially the English songs. I like English songs that have great lyrics.
Every night, when I’m too busy with my schoolwork or when I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. It helps me relax myself. By the way, I have learnt many English words from these songs.
At last, I like singers who can sing clearly and write their own songs. Can you introduce some singers and their CDs to me? You can e-mail me at 970845877@qq.com. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己喜欢对方的节目,并希望对方介绍一些好听的音乐”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表示自己很喜欢对方的节目;
第二步,根据提示要点,介绍自己从对方节目中学到的东西,以及感受等;
第三步,希望对方介绍一些好听的音乐并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①turn on打开
②by the way顺便一提
[高分句型]
①I like English songs that have great lyrics.(定语从句)
②Every night, when I’m too busy with my schoolwork or when I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program.(when引导时间状语从句)
15.(24-25九年级上·山东泰安·期中)作家雨果说过:“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把,一是字母,二是数字,三是音符。”从这句话中,可见音乐对人的影响。请你根据以下提示,以Music为题,写一篇短文,参加学校的英语作文竞赛。
要求:
(1)语句通顺,表达正确,不可出现真实姓名、校名及其他相关信息;
(2)短文须包括提示内容,可适当发挥;
(3)80-100字。
Music
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【答案】例文
Music I like music very much. It gives me energy when I’m tired and it makes me happy when I’m sad. Music is very important in our life. If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting.
Different people like different kinds of music. I like electronic music because it is loud. It makes me excited. I also like music that I can dance to. The Cool Kids is my favorite band. I can’t stand music that is quiet and slow. It makes me sleepy. I always listen to music when I feel tired, it can make me feel relaxed.
In a word, music is the universal language that speaks to the soul of humanity. I hope everyone can enjoy music.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:描述自己对于音乐的看法,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述自己对于音乐的看法,音乐对生活的影响,总起全文;
第二步,描述自己喜欢的音乐类型以及自己喜欢在何时听音乐,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,说明音乐的重要性,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类
②stand 忍受
③make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事
[高分句型]
①If there is no music, our life won’t be so interesting.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I hope everyone can enjoy music(宾语从句)
16.(2024·甘肃武威·三模)Think and write.
Your American friend Annie has just listened to the music Erquan Yingyue with you. She is fascinated with it and asks you to tell her something about the composer. Please give a short introduction with the information in the chart. (80 — 100 words)
Name
Abing
Birth
1893, Wuxi
Parents
die early
Life
get ill, sing and play music on the streets
Music
…
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【答案】例文:
Erquan Yingyue is a very famous piece of music. Its author is Abing. Let me introduce some information about Abing.
Abing was born in Wuxi, Jiangsu province in 1893. His whole life was tragic. His parents passed away when he was very young. Later, Abing could only live by himself. He became blind because he was seriously ill. He couldn’t live like an ordinary person, so he had to sing and play music on the streets to make a living. Due to his tragic experience, he created such sad music as Erquan Yingyue.
After he died, his music was passed down. That’s the music we’re hearing now.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指出要介绍音乐家阿炳;
第二步,具体介绍阿炳的个人信息以及家庭情况以及他的一生;
第三步,最后总结并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① a piece of music一首音乐
② be born出生于
③ make a living谋生
[高分句型]
① He became blind because he was seriously ill.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② After he died, his music was passed down.(after引导的时间状语从句)
17.(24-25九年级上·河南周口·期中)假如你是李华,上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对,你立刻喜欢上了乡村音乐。请你根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1)乡村音乐的特点;
2)乡村音乐的好处;
3)你今后的计划。
写作要求:
1)文中须包含要点提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3)词数 100 左右。
参考词汇:fall in love with 爱上;tiredness 疲劳
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【答案】例文
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. I fell in love with the country music at once.
In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily. Sometimes, it can help to remove worries and unhappiness. After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly.
I have decided to study country music in my spare time as much as possible. I’ll listen to more country music, and make it part of my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍乡村音乐的特点;
第二步,介绍乡村音乐的好处;
第三步,介绍你今后的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①took part in参加
②fall in love with爱上
③at once立刻
④as much as possible尽可能多的
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily.(so…that…如此……以至于……)
②After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly.(if引导的条件状语从句)
18.(22-23九年级下·江西吉安·期中)假如你是九年级三班的学生盛明,今天英语课上你们班同学就“课间是否该放音乐”这一话题进行了讨论。请你根据下表中的提示内容, 以“Should music be played between classes?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
赞同意见
音乐使他们觉得快乐、放松,音乐使他们的课间生活丰富多彩
反对意见
吵闹的音乐使他们更兴奋,不利于课间休息
你的看法
. . . . . .
要求:
1)短文应包括提示中列有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3)不少于 80 词。
Should music be played between classes?
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【答案】例文
Should music be played between classes?
We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class.
Some think listening to music between classes is a good idea. Music can make them feel happy and relaxed. Music can make their lives colorful. However, others are against the idea. They think music may have a bad influence because some music is too noisy and they may get too excited to take a break. In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. In this way, students can enjoy music as well as having a good rest. Besides, I suggest playing music that is suitable for middle school students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇议论文;
②时态: 时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示: 写作要点已给出,考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”,根据表格的提示,分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。表明班级开展了一次讨论,引出下文;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。根据表格的提示,分别写出赞同意见、反对意见以及自己的看法;
第三步,书写结语。表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①discussion讨论
②relaxed放松的
③take break休息
④suitable合适的
[高分句型]
①We had a discussion about whether music should be played between classes in English class. (whether引导的宾语从句)
②In my opinion, it’s good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud noisy music during the class break. (it句式结构)
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