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10 主题类型-安全健康(短文类) ( 知识积累 ) 一、写作主题:安全健康 英语有关安全与健康的写作是一种教育性质的文体,旨在通过学生的笔触探讨和传达关于个人安全、身心健康的重要性及其相关知识。这类写作不仅要求学生具备基本的语言表达能力,还需能够准确理解并传达安全常识、健康习惯以及应对突发状况的方法,以此来增强同学们的自我保护意识和能力。通过具体事例、生动描述或实用建议的融入,这类文章旨在激发学生对健康生活的向往,培养他们形成正确的安全观念和良好的生活习惯,为构建和谐、安全的校园环境贡献力量。 重点词汇 pay attention to关注;attractive有吸引力的;junk food垃圾食品;food safety食品安全;be good for对……有好处;be bad for对……有坏处;take more exercise多做运动;keep a healthy life保持健康的生活;under too much pressure在过多压力之下;develop a good habit of养成一个……的好习惯;eat a good breakfast吃一顿丰盛的早餐 高级句式 1.What should we do to keep healthy? Here is some advice. 我们应该做些什么来保持健康呢?这里有一些建议。 2.Don’t be stressed out.It’s not healthy. 不要给自己太大压力,那不健康。 3.We should...我们应该…… 4.Why not...?为什么不……? 5.Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...第一……,第二……,第三…… 6.All in all, ...总之…… 7.Hope things work out.希望事情得到解决。 俗语谚语 1.Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。 2.Wealth is nothing without health. 失去健康,空有财产。 3.A long way to life, the first step to safety. 漫漫人生路,安全第一步。 4.Safety is the bedrock of life and the ladder of joy. 安全是生命的基石,安全是快乐的阶梯。 教材句式 (人教版) 1. We’d like one bowl of beef soup. 我们想要一碗牛肉汤。(7下教材P56) 2.However, she has some bad habits, too. 然而,她也有一些坏习惯。(8上教材P15) 3.As a mountain climber, Aron is used to taking risks. 作为一个登山者,阿伦习惯冒险。(8下教材P6) 4.Sixteen-year-olds should be allowed to get their ears pierced. 16岁的青少年应该被允许打耳洞。(9教材P49) 5.We stared in disbelief at the black smoke rising above the burning building. 我们直愣愣地盯着燃烧的大楼上升起的黑烟,无法相信这一切。(9教材P91 ) 教材句式 (外研版) 1.It is important to remember: eat well, stay healthy, and don’t get fat!重要的是要记住:吃得好,保持健康,不要变胖!(7上教材P22) 2.You spend too much time in front of the computer.It can be very harmful to your health. 你在电脑前的时间太长。它可能对你的健康非常有害。(8下教材P26) 3.I was not feeling very well so the doctor checked my heart and said I needed more exercise. 我感觉不太舒服,所以医生检查了我的心脏,说我需要多锻炼。(8下教材P28) 4.We have played football for a year now and we all feel very fit.我们如今已经踢了一年足球了,我们都觉得很健康。 (8下教材P28) 5.Thanks to better health care, most people are living healthier and longer lives. 由于更好的医疗保健,大多数人活得更健康,寿命更长。(9下教材P42) 6.Here are five rules for a healthy life.这里是关于健康生活的五条规则。 (9下教材P42) 7.To keep fit, you have to walk at least 10,000 steps every day.为了保持健康,你每天至少要走1万步。 (9下教材P42) 课外素材 1.How can we keep healthy/safe/protect ourselves? 我们如何保持健康/安全/保护自己呢? 2.As a student, keep safe/healthy is very important. 作为一名学生,保持安全/健康非常重要。 3.Safety plays an important part in our daily life. 安全在我们日常生活中发挥着很重要的作用。 4.First, we should obey the traffic rules. 首先,我们应该遵守交通规则。 5.Secondly, self-protection is one of the key skills. 第二,自我保护是核心技能之一。 6.But if we are in danger, we should keep calm first.但是如果我们处于危险之中,我们应先保持冷静。 7.In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.总之,我们应尽我们的最大努力来保护自己并珍爱我们的生命。 8.We should also learn something about self-protection. 我们也应该学习一些关于自我保护的技能。 9.After all, life is the most important.毕竟生命最重要。 二、写作类型:英语短文写作 英语短文写作是一种通过精炼的语言和明确的结构,围绕特定主题或观点进行表达的艺术形式。它要求作者在有限的篇幅内,运用恰当的词汇、语法和修辞技巧,清晰地阐述思想、描述事物或讲述故事,旨在传达信息、启发思考或娱乐读者。短文写作不仅考验作者的英语语言能力,还强调内容的逻辑性、连贯性和创意性,是提升英语写作技能、增强沟通能力和培养批判性思维的重要途径。 英语短文写作特点主要体现在以下几个方面:(1)‌人称使用‌:短文通常以第一人称或第三人称叙述,第一人称能增强故事的真实感,第三人称则提高文章的客观性;(2)‌时态变化‌:动词时态丰富多变,尤其是过去时态的使用,为文章增添动态感和层次感;(3)‌结构清晰‌:文章需有明确的开头、主体和结尾,确保内容条理清晰,易于理解;(4)‌要点全面‌:要涵盖题目要求的所有要点,确保信息完整,不遗漏关键内容;(5)‌语言准确‌:尽量使用准确的语法结构和词汇,虽然可能有少许错误,但应是尝试使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;(6)‌连接成分‌:有效运用连接词,使文章结构紧凑,逻辑连。 ▲模板类型 1.‌议论文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:引出话题,提出论点或问题。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:阐述第一个支持论点的理由或证据。 段落二:阐述第二个支持论点的理由或证据。 (可选)段落三:反驳对方观点,并提出自己的反驳理由。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结论点,强调结论,可能提出解决方案或建议。 2.‌说明文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:介绍说明对象,明确说明目的。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描述说明对象的特征、性质或功能。 段落二:提供相关的背景信息、历史或工作原理。 (可选)段落三:比较说明对象与其他类似事物的异同。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结说明内容,可能提出展望或建议。 3.‌叙述文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:设定背景,引入故事或事件。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描述事件的起因或开端。 段落二:详细叙述事件的发展过程。 (可选)段落三:描述事件的高潮或转折点。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结事件结果,可能表达感受或启示。 4.‌描写文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:引入描写对象,设定场景。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描写对象的外观特征或环境氛围。 段落二:深入描写对象的内在特质或情感状态。 (可选)段落三:通过对比或联想,丰富描写内容。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结描写,可能表达个人感受或评价。 ( 写作示例 ) (2023·湖北鄂州·中考真题)我运动,我健康;我运动,我快乐。请你以“Doing Sports”为题,写一篇短文。 写作要点: 1.What sports do you do in your school? 2.What sports do you like? 3.Why do you like the sport(s)? 写作要求: 1.文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。 2.文章必须包括上述写作要点,可适当发挥。 3.词数80左右。 Doing Sports ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 1.框架建构 谋布局 列要点 写句子 开头 引出话题 在学校的 运动有哪些? We do many sports in our school, such as 1.jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on. 主体 喜欢的运动 你喜欢的 运动及原因 Of all the sports, I like 2.playing basketball best. I think 3.I can learn many things from it. 结尾 总结 What a kind of useful and meaningful sport! 2.衔接成篇 Doing Sports We do many sports in our school, such as jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on. We usually play basketball every day. And we can play football in our P.E. class. After class, we always take part in many sports. Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best.I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy. I can know teamwork from it, too. What a kind of useful and meaningful sport! [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②take part in参加 ③as well as也,又,还 [高分句型] I think I can learn many things from it.(省略引导词that的宾语从句) ( 突破练习 ) 1.健康对我们来说非常重要,我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。 1 food a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less, meat… 2 exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games… 3 happiness keep happy, make friends, smile… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.运动有益身心健康。一所英语研究中心(English Research Center)正在对目前中学生最喜欢的运动项目展开调查。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的运动项目。要点如下: 1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么; 2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因; 3. 你从这项运动中学到了什么。 注意: 1. 词数80—100; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.随着网络的发展,学生们使用网络的时间越来越长,很多学生的视力受到影响。本期《英语园地》组织同学们围绕“How to Live a Healthy Life”展开讨论。请你用英文写一篇短文与同学们分享你的观点。 内容提示: 1. What do you think of spending too much time on computers? 2. What do you ususlly do to live a healthy life? 要求: 1. 中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范; 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.平安,健康,快乐是父母最大的心愿,以How to protect our lives为题,从安全和健康的角度入手,写一篇关于如何珍惜生命和保护生命的短文。 要求: 1.词数80—100词; 2.文中不要出现本人真实信息。 写作要点: 1. 健康饮食,远离垃圾食品; 2. 遵守交通规则; 3. 与同学友好相处。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年的我们,应该如何培养良好的习惯呢? 请根据以下内容提示,以“How to develop good habits”为题写一篇短文。 1)上课认真听讲,做笔记(take notes),每天认真完成作业。 2)闲暇时多读课外书。 3)每周至少锻炼3至4次。 4)多吃健康食品,少吃垃圾食品。 5)适当补充一至两点好习惯,并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。 要求:1)要点齐全,条理清楚,语句通顺逻辑连贯,不要逐字翻译 2)不少于80词。 How to develop good habits _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.根据相关研究预测,如果缺乏有效干预措施,到2025年中国将有5000万超重儿童。假如你是学校英语协会的一名小记者,请针对这一问题,提出你的建议。根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 1.我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重; 2.导致青少年肥胖的主要原因:吃太多的垃圾食品、不运动…… 3.建议:…… 要求: 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息,并适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息; 3. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done. 7.目前,校园暴力时有发生,已经危害到了中学生的身心健康。中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯,保证自身安全,远离校园暴力。请根据以下要点提示,以 “规范自我行为, 做个合格的中学生” 为题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要点: 1.遵守学校纪律,听从老师和家长的教育, 严格要求自己; 2.远离网吧,按时上学和回家; 3.待人礼貌、友好、不与同学打架; 4.遇到困难多与父母老师沟通。 参考词汇:campus violence 校园暴力 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.为了增强同学们的安全意识,你校英语报正在以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。 要求: 1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 文章必须包括表格中所有要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.请结合下图内容及提示,以“The Importance of Fire Safety”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。2. What should we do in a fire? 参考词汇:fire extinguisher 灭火器;electrical problems 电气问题;escape from...逃离 写作要求:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.重点谈谈如何预防火灾的发生; 3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.在日常生活中,人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请你以“Self Protection”为题,用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1. 结合生活实际,谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2. 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面),并分别提出合理化建议。 3. 发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求: 1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,可以适当发挥。 2.80词左右,书写规范,卷面整洁。 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$ 10 主题类型-安全健康(短文类) ( 知识积累 ) 一、写作主题:安全健康 英语有关安全与健康的写作是一种教育性质的文体,旨在通过学生的笔触探讨和传达关于个人安全、身心健康的重要性及其相关知识。这类写作不仅要求学生具备基本的语言表达能力,还需能够准确理解并传达安全常识、健康习惯以及应对突发状况的方法,以此来增强同学们的自我保护意识和能力。通过具体事例、生动描述或实用建议的融入,这类文章旨在激发学生对健康生活的向往,培养他们形成正确的安全观念和良好的生活习惯,为构建和谐、安全的校园环境贡献力量。 重点词汇 pay attention to关注;attractive有吸引力的;junk food垃圾食品;food safety食品安全;be good for对……有好处;be bad for对……有坏处;take more exercise多做运动;keep a healthy life保持健康的生活;under too much pressure在过多压力之下;develop a good habit of养成一个……的好习惯;eat a good breakfast吃一顿丰盛的早餐 高级句式 1.What should we do to keep healthy? Here is some advice. 我们应该做些什么来保持健康呢?这里有一些建议。 2.Don’t be stressed out.It’s not healthy. 不要给自己太大压力,那不健康。 3.We should...我们应该…… 4.Why not...?为什么不……? 5.Firstly...Secondly...Thirdly...第一……,第二……,第三…… 6.All in all, ...总之…… 7.Hope things work out.希望事情得到解决。 俗语谚语 1.Health is better than wealth. 健康胜于财富。 2.Wealth is nothing without health. 失去健康,空有财产。 3.A long way to life, the first step to safety. 漫漫人生路,安全第一步。 4.Safety is the bedrock of life and the ladder of joy. 安全是生命的基石,安全是快乐的阶梯。 教材句式 (人教版) 1. We’d like one bowl of beef soup. 我们想要一碗牛肉汤。(7下教材P56) 2.However, she has some bad habits, too. 然而,她也有一些坏习惯。(8上教材P15) 3.As a mountain climber, Aron is used to taking risks. 作为一个登山者,阿伦习惯冒险。(8下教材P6) 4.Sixteen-year-olds should be allowed to get their ears pierced. 16岁的青少年应该被允许打耳洞。(9教材P49) 5.We stared in disbelief at the black smoke rising above the burning building. 我们直愣愣地盯着燃烧的大楼上升起的黑烟,无法相信这一切。(9教材P91 ) 教材句式 (外研版) 1.It is important to remember: eat well, stay healthy, and don’t get fat!重要的是要记住:吃得好,保持健康,不要变胖!(7上教材P22) 2.You spend too much time in front of the computer.It can be very harmful to your health. 你在电脑前的时间太长。它可能对你的健康非常有害。(8下教材P26) 3.I was not feeling very well so the doctor checked my heart and said I needed more exercise. 我感觉不太舒服,所以医生检查了我的心脏,说我需要多锻炼。(8下教材P28) 4.We have played football for a year now and we all feel very fit.我们如今已经踢了一年足球了,我们都觉得很健康。 (8下教材P28) 5.Thanks to better health care, most people are living healthier and longer lives. 由于更好的医疗保健,大多数人活得更健康,寿命更长。(9下教材P42) 6.Here are five rules for a healthy life.这里是关于健康生活的五条规则。 (9下教材P42) 7.To keep fit, you have to walk at least 10,000 steps every day.为了保持健康,你每天至少要走1万步。 (9下教材P42) 课外素材 1.How can we keep healthy/safe/protect ourselves? 我们如何保持健康/安全/保护自己呢? 2.As a student, keep safe/healthy is very important. 作为一名学生,保持安全/健康非常重要。 3.Safety plays an important part in our daily life. 安全在我们日常生活中发挥着很重要的作用。 4.First, we should obey the traffic rules. 首先,我们应该遵守交通规则。 5.Secondly, self-protection is one of the key skills. 第二,自我保护是核心技能之一。 6.But if we are in danger, we should keep calm first.但是如果我们处于危险之中,我们应先保持冷静。 7.In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.总之,我们应尽我们的最大努力来保护自己并珍爱我们的生命。 8.We should also learn something about self-protection. 我们也应该学习一些关于自我保护的技能。 9.After all, life is the most important.毕竟生命最重要。 二、写作类型:英语短文写作 英语短文写作是一种通过精炼的语言和明确的结构,围绕特定主题或观点进行表达的艺术形式。它要求作者在有限的篇幅内,运用恰当的词汇、语法和修辞技巧,清晰地阐述思想、描述事物或讲述故事,旨在传达信息、启发思考或娱乐读者。短文写作不仅考验作者的英语语言能力,还强调内容的逻辑性、连贯性和创意性,是提升英语写作技能、增强沟通能力和培养批判性思维的重要途径。 英语短文写作特点主要体现在以下几个方面:(1)‌人称使用‌:短文通常以第一人称或第三人称叙述,第一人称能增强故事的真实感,第三人称则提高文章的客观性;(2)‌时态变化‌:动词时态丰富多变,尤其是过去时态的使用,为文章增添动态感和层次感;(3)‌结构清晰‌:文章需有明确的开头、主体和结尾,确保内容条理清晰,易于理解;(4)‌要点全面‌:要涵盖题目要求的所有要点,确保信息完整,不遗漏关键内容;(5)‌语言准确‌:尽量使用准确的语法结构和词汇,虽然可能有少许错误,但应是尝试使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;(6)‌连接成分‌:有效运用连接词,使文章结构紧凑,逻辑连。 ▲模板类型 1.‌议论文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:引出话题,提出论点或问题。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:阐述第一个支持论点的理由或证据。 段落二:阐述第二个支持论点的理由或证据。 (可选)段落三:反驳对方观点,并提出自己的反驳理由。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结论点,强调结论,可能提出解决方案或建议。 2.‌说明文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:介绍说明对象,明确说明目的。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描述说明对象的特征、性质或功能。 段落二:提供相关的背景信息、历史或工作原理。 (可选)段落三:比较说明对象与其他类似事物的异同。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结说明内容,可能提出展望或建议。 3.‌叙述文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:设定背景,引入故事或事件。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描述事件的起因或开端。 段落二:详细叙述事件的发展过程。 (可选)段落三:描述事件的高潮或转折点。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结事件结果,可能表达感受或启示。 4.‌描写文模板‌: (1)‌开头‌:引入描写对象,设定场景。 (2)‌正文‌: 段落一:描写对象的外观特征或环境氛围。 段落二:深入描写对象的内在特质或情感状态。 (可选)段落三:通过对比或联想,丰富描写内容。 (3)‌结尾‌:总结描写,可能表达个人感受或评价。 ( 写作示例 ) (2023·湖北鄂州·中考真题)我运动,我健康;我运动,我快乐。请你以“Doing Sports”为题,写一篇短文。 写作要点: 1.What sports do you do in your school? 2.What sports do you like? 3.Why do you like the sport(s)? 写作要求: 1.文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。 2.文章必须包括上述写作要点,可适当发挥。 3.词数80左右。 Doing Sports ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作示例】 1.框架建构 谋布局 列要点 写句子 开头 引出话题 在学校的 运动有哪些? We do many sports in our school, such as 1.jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on. 主体 喜欢的运动 你喜欢的 运动及原因 Of all the sports, I like 2.playing basketball best. I think 3.I can learn many things from it. 结尾 总结 What a kind of useful and meaningful sport! 2.衔接成篇 Doing Sports We do many sports in our school, such as jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on. We usually play basketball every day. And we can play football in our P.E. class. After class, we always take part in many sports. Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best.I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy. I can know teamwork from it, too. What a kind of useful and meaningful sport! [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②take part in参加 ③as well as也,又,还 [高分句型] I think I can learn many things from it.(省略引导词that的宾语从句) ( 突破练习 ) 1.健康对我们来说非常重要,我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。 1 food a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less, meat… 2 exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games… 3 happiness keep happy, make friends, smile… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.运动有益身心健康。一所英语研究中心(English Research Center)正在对目前中学生最喜欢的运动项目展开调查。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你最喜欢的运动项目。要点如下: 1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么; 2. 你喜欢这项运动的原因; 3. 你从这项运动中学到了什么。 注意: 1. 词数80—100; 2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称; 4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。 Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.随着网络的发展,学生们使用网络的时间越来越长,很多学生的视力受到影响。本期《英语园地》组织同学们围绕“How to Live a Healthy Life”展开讨论。请你用英文写一篇短文与同学们分享你的观点。 内容提示: 1. What do you think of spending too much time on computers? 2. What do you ususlly do to live a healthy life? 要求: 1. 中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范; 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名; 3. 词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.平安,健康,快乐是父母最大的心愿,以How to protect our lives为题,从安全和健康的角度入手,写一篇关于如何珍惜生命和保护生命的短文。 要求: 1.词数80—100词; 2.文中不要出现本人真实信息。 写作要点: 1. 健康饮食,远离垃圾食品; 2. 遵守交通规则; 3. 与同学友好相处。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年的我们,应该如何培养良好的习惯呢? 请根据以下内容提示,以“How to develop good habits”为题写一篇短文。 1)上课认真听讲,做笔记(take notes),每天认真完成作业。 2)闲暇时多读课外书。 3)每周至少锻炼3至4次。 4)多吃健康食品,少吃垃圾食品。 5)适当补充一至两点好习惯,并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。 要求:1)要点齐全,条理清楚,语句通顺逻辑连贯,不要逐字翻译 2)不少于80词。 How to develop good habits _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.根据相关研究预测,如果缺乏有效干预措施,到2025年中国将有5000万超重儿童。假如你是学校英语协会的一名小记者,请针对这一问题,提出你的建议。根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。 提示: 1.我国青少年肥胖问题日益严重; 2.导致青少年肥胖的主要原因:吃太多的垃圾食品、不运动…… 3.建议:…… 要求: 1. 须包括以上所有提示信息,并适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息; 3. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。 A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done. 7.目前,校园暴力时有发生,已经危害到了中学生的身心健康。中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯,保证自身安全,远离校园暴力。请根据以下要点提示,以 “规范自我行为, 做个合格的中学生” 为题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 要点: 1.遵守学校纪律,听从老师和家长的教育, 严格要求自己; 2.远离网吧,按时上学和回家; 3.待人礼貌、友好、不与同学打架; 4.遇到困难多与父母老师沟通。 参考词汇:campus violence 校园暴力 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.为了增强同学们的安全意识,你校英语报正在以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示,写一篇短文投稿。 要求: 1. 词数80左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数); 2. 文章必须包括表格中所有要点,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.请结合下图内容及提示,以“The Importance of Fire Safety”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。2. What should we do in a fire? 参考词汇:fire extinguisher 灭火器;electrical problems 电气问题;escape from...逃离 写作要求:1.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展; 2.重点谈谈如何预防火灾的发生; 3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.在日常生活中,人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请你以“Self Protection”为题,用英语写一篇短文。 内容包括: 1. 结合生活实际,谈谈自我保护的重要性。 2. 列举生活中的安全问题 (至少两个方面),并分别提出合理化建议。 3. 发出自我保护的号召。 写作要求: 1. 语言流畅,层次清晰,可以适当发挥。 2.80词左右,书写规范,卷面整洁。 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1.     Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? First, we need to have healthy eating habits. We can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, and it’s also important to keep a balanced diet. Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, and we can walk to school instead of taking a bus. After school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day. Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, which is a good way to keep us happy. If you want to be healthy, follow the suggestions above. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为一般现在时; ③提示:根据提示内容介绍如何保持健康,适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步,引出话题; 第二步,根据表格内容详细介绍如何保持健康; 第三步,书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①eating habits饮食习惯 ②different kinds of各种各样的 ③instead of而不是 [高分句型] ①When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, which is a good way to keep us happy. (when引导的时间状语从句,which引导的定语从句) ②If you want to be healthy, follow the suggestions above. (if引导的条件状语从句) 2. Doing sports makes people happy and healthy. Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier. Whenever I was free, I danced to popular songs with my roommate. Both of us enjoyed it a lot. At first, we just danced to the music and we even didn’t know how to dance correctly. However, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. The more we practise, the better we dance. The reason why I like dancing is that it can bring me happiness and help me keep healthy. Besides, dancing is also my dream in my childhood. Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life. By dancing, I become more outgoing and confident in talking with others. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己最喜欢的运动; 第二步,具体阐述自己喜欢这项运动的原因; 第三步,阐述自己从这项运动中学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①keep healthy保持健康 ②be good at擅长 ③talk with sb.与某人交谈 [高分句型] ①Dancing is my favorite sport, which can make me look much prettier and healthier.(which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Though I am still not good at dancing, I love it, because what it brought to me has greatly changed my life.(though引导的让步状语从句) 3. How to Live a Healthy Life As we all know, the Internet has become an important part in our life. However, some students spend too much time in front of the computers. It’s harmful to their eyes and may influence their study. To live a healthy life, I manage my time well. I don’t sit in front of the computer for long. I use it for my study and surf the Internet for relaxing, but only an hour a day. I know it’s necessary to protect my eyes. What’s more, I usually go out for a walk instead of staying at home. Doing more exercise makes me fit and I enjoy myself in the fresh air. I hope that everyone can spend less time on the computer and try to take some exercise outside. These actions can make a big difference to our life. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:本文应该主要用第一人称来写;描述对过度用电脑的看法时,要选择重点写。 [写作步骤] 第一步,开头要表明写作内容和观点,说明过度用电脑的害处; 第二步,写出自己保持健康的做法,并表明其原因; 第三步,总结并表明期待。倡议大家少把时间花在电脑上,而要多做运动。 [亮点词汇] ①As we all know众所周知 ②in front of在……前面 ③It’s harmful to对……有害 [高分句型] ①I know it’s necessary to protect my eyes.(省略了that的宾语从句) ②I hope that everyone can spend less time on the computer and try to take some exercise outside.(that引导的宾语从句) 4. How to protect our lives   It is very important for us to know how to protect our lives. Here are my suggestions.   First of all, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables and fruits. They are able to help us fight against diseases. We must stay away from junk food. Secondly, we are supposed to follow the traffic rules and pay attention to traffic safety. Thirdly, we should get along well with our classmates. We must not chase or fight with them. If we can learn to protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthier body and a better life.   I hope that my suggestions will be helpful. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:以 “一般现在时” 为主; ③提示:结合写作要点,给出如何保护生命安全的建议,注意不要遗漏要点,语句通顺,避免语法及单词拼写错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步:关于饮食安全——多吃水果蔬菜,远离垃圾食品; 第二步:关于交通安全——遵守交通规则; 第三步:与同学友好相处,不要打架。 [亮点词汇] ①pay attention to 注意,关注 ②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事 ③be able to do sth. 能够做某事 [高分句型] ①It is very important for us to know how to protect our lives.  (it作形式主语) ②If we can learn to protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthier body and a better life.  (if引导条件状语从句,宾语从句) 5. How to develop good habits It’s very important for us to have a good habit. As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the school work on time every day. In our spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily. [总体分析]       ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;       ②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;       ③提示:围绕如何养成好习惯,并根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。       [写作步骤]       第一步,介绍好习惯的重要性,引出主题;       第二步,具体介绍如何养成好习惯; 第三步,总结全文 [亮点词汇] ①In my opinion 在我看来 ②take notes 做笔记 ③on time 及时    ④What’s more 此外 ⑤stay up 熬夜 [高分句型]       It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. (it固定句型)    6. A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done. In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise. How should we solve the problem? Firstly, children must have healthy eating habits. They should eat more fruit and vegetables. Meanwhile, they shouldn’t eat too much meat or junk food. Secondly, they should often exercise. It’ll make them healthy and feel good. Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early. In a word, healthy eating, proper exercise and good living habits can keep children from getting fatter. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中建议部分需要补充的内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点明主题。介绍青少年肥胖问题日益严重(开头已给出); 第二步,具体阐述内容。从“导致青少年肥胖的原因”和“解决肥胖问题的建议”两个方面进行叙述; 第三步,书写结语。健康的饮食、适当的运动和良好的生活习惯可以防止青少年变胖。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②make sb. adj.使某人…… ③such as例如 ④in a word总之 [高分句型] ①A study has predicted that over 50 million children will be overweight in China by 2025 if anything isn’t done.(if引导的条件状语从句) ②In China, the problem is becoming more and more serious because most overweight children like eating fatty food and they hardly exercise.(because引导的原因状语从句) ③Finally, keep some good living habits such as getting up early and going to bed early.(祈使句肯定形式,用于提建议) 7.: Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful to students. It hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenager. First, we should follow school rules to behave well at school. It’s good for us to listen to the teachers and parents. We must be strict with ourselves. Second, in order to be safe, we should stay away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. Third, as teenagers, we should be polite and friendly to one another, and don’t fight with classmates. Fourth, if we have any difficulties in life, it’s best to talk about them with our teachers and our parents. In a word, we should try our best to behave well. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时态”; ③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当发挥,无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步,点明主题,引出校园暴力的主题; 第二步,从遵守校规校纪、诚恳待人接物、正确自我防范等方面阐述如何避免校园暴力,遇到校园暴力应该采取的措施(包括向老师父母寻求帮助等); 第三步,书写结语,表达做好自己,远离校园暴力的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①from time to time有时候 ②be strict with对……要求严格 ③be good for对……有益处 ④try one’s best尽某人最大的努力 [高分句型] ①As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenager.(it作形式主语) ②Fourth, if we have any difficulties in life, it’s best to talk about them with our teachers and our parents.(if引导的条件状语从句) 8. Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. We should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some suggestions. First, we should go along the right side when we walk or ride a bike on the street. Second, we should be careful when making friends and don’t meet net-friends alone. Third, never eat the food that has gone bad. The bad food is bad for our bodies. Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports. In a word, we should always keep safety in mind and keep us safe. I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:文章应该包括四个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步,整体说明安全意识的重要性; 第二步,具体从四个方面介绍如何保持安全,交通安全,交友安全,食品安全以及补充一条安全事项; 第三步,最后再次呼吁同学们要保持安全。 [亮点词汇] ①keep sth in mind把某事记在心里 ②be bad for对……有坏处 ③pay attention to关注 [高分句型] ①Finally, make sure you are safe when you are doing sports.(时间状语从句) ②I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep safety in mind.(宾语从句) 9.高分范文 The Importance of Fire Safety Fire safety is important for everyone to understand. There are several things that can cause fires. These include human activities, such as electrical problems, cooking accidents, and natural causes. As a result, it’s important to know how to respond to and prevent a fire. In case of a small fire, we should stay calm and call 119. Try to put out the fire with a fire extinguisher or water if possible. Escape from the fire area immediately and call 119 if the fire is too large to control. To prevent fires, first, we should be careful when using electronics and make sure they’re in good condition. Second, when cooking, we can’t leave the kitchen. What’s more, we should get basic fire safety knowledge and practice escape plans regularly in school or at home. [总体分析] ①题材:本文是一篇材料作文; ②时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点;注意适当发挥,突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍什么可能会导致火灾; 第二步,介绍火灾发生时应该怎么做; 第三步,介绍我们该如何预防火灾的发生。 [亮点词汇] ①such as 例如 ②as a result 结果 ③put out 扑灭 ④too ... to 太……而不能…… [高分句型] ①There are several things that can cause fires. (that引导的定语从句) ②Escape from the fire area immediately and call 119 if the fire is too large to control.(if引导的条件状语从句) 10. These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. As students, we have to go to school every weekday. On the way to school, we need go across the road sometimes. If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car. So we have to learn to protect ourselves. But how can we protect ourselves? First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, don’t cross the street when the lights are red. Also, we should eat healthily and safely. These three suggestions are good for us to protect ourselves. We should accept these suggestions to protect ourselves. In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life! [总体分析] ① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文; ② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”; ③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步,介绍当今人们关注的话题是什么; 第二步,介绍学生应该保护好自己; 第三步,介绍具体如何保护自己的建议; 第四步,总结自我保护很重要,希望大家都能有安全的生活。 [亮点词汇] ① pay attention to注意 ② go across穿过 ③ in short总之 [高分句型] ① If we are not careful enough, we may be hit by a car.(if引导的条件状语从句) ② we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line.(when引导的时间状语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权,侵权必究! 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $$

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