2025届高考英语一轮复习写作备考之建议信课件&导学案

2023-2024学年度高考英语备考写作之建议信01 主备人：Ms. Huang 2024年7月20日 写作第一讲 （建议信） 写作步骤： 第一步：审题（审时态、审主题、审要点） 第二步：构思篇章结构（开头Para.1 正文Para.2 结尾Para.3） 第三步：开写（注意卷面整洁） 一.建议信框架结构： 第一段: 问候＋写信背景信息（大题目材料）＋目的 第二段：提出建议+理由（建议1+理由；建议2+理由；建议3+理由） 第三段：希望建议有帮助+美好祝愿或期待回复 二．建议信模板 建议信模板（基础版）： Dear __________, How have you been? I am sorry/glad/happy to hear that____题目信息_____________________，Here are some suggestions/ ideas for you.或I would like to share some pieces of advice with you. To begin with, it is useful for you to do sth. (题目所给第1点建议) What’s more, you’d better do sth. (题目所给第2点建议). Last but not least, doing sth is a good idea for you.(题目所给第3点建议) All in all, I hope that my suggestions will be helpful for you. And I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 建议信模板（提升版） Dear __________, You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning…and I’ll try to make some constructive suggestions here. The reason why 【结果】 is that 【原因】.First and foremost, it would be wiser to do sth. （建议1）Additionally, 非谓语动词 （建议2+理由）. Most importantly, 从句 .（建议3+理由） I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。如果你有任何问题，请随时问我。 Yours, Li Hua 建议信常用素材表达： 第一段【问候（介绍）+写作背景+写作目的】 1. 问候 · How have you been? · How is everything with you? · I hope this letter finds you well. 2. 自我介绍（如果和对方认识就不需要自我介绍） · I am Lihua, a student at No. 1 School. · I am Lihua, studying at No. 1 School. · I am Lihua, from No. 1 School. 3. 写信背景 · I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble (in)... · You wanted to know my opinion on how to handle a specific situation. · Knowing that/ Learning that you have trouble (in)...... 4. 表示理解 · I understand exactly how you feel. · Such problems are quite normal. 5. 写信目的 · I would like to share some constructive suggestions with you. · Here are a few recommendations that might help. · I hope the following advice will be useful to you. · I am writing to express my views on/concerning... · I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you. · I’m writing to share my views on this problem, which I think may be helpful to you. 第二段【分析原因+提供建议 或 建议+建议的理由】 1. 分析原因 · The reason why 【结果】 is that 【原因】. 句型举例 The reason why you find writing in English difficult is that you may not be practicing it regularly enough. The reason why improving your English seems challenging could be due to insufficient practice. The reason why you struggle with English writing might be the lack of consistent practice. 2. 提建议 2.1提建议基本句型 1）使用表示建议的动词 · I recommend doing sth. · I advise you to do sth. · I suggest doing sth. 2）使用祈使句 · Be sure to analyze the causes of the mistakes. · Make sure to examine the reasons behind the mistakes. · Don’t forget to look into why these mistakes happen. 3）使用非谓语动词 · Analyzing the causes of the mistakes is crucial. · Understanding the reasons for these mistakes is important. · Investigating why the mistakes occur is essential. 4）使用形式主语句型 · It is important to analyze the causes of the mistakes. · It is essential to understand why these mistakes happen. · It is necessary to investigate the reasons behind the mistakes. 补充： 连接词总结： 首先/第一： First of all, / Firstly,To begin with, 其次/然后/并且：In addition, / Additionally,/ Moreover,/ Moreover, / Meanwhile, / Besides, / Furthermore, 最后Last but not least,(最后但是也是很重要的是) 一般用于中间段最后一句 / Finally, 总而言之：In a word,/All in all,/To sum up,/On the whole 逻辑词：Therefore,因此，However, 然而/但是，On the contrary,相反的是，As a result,结果是，因此是 中间段提建议句型小结: 1. 祈使句 2. I think it would be a good idea if... 3. In my opinion, it would be wise to... 4. I suggest that you should... 5. You’d better... 6. I advise you to... 7. If I were you, I would... 8. Why not.….?/Why don’t you...? 9. If you can..., you will... 例句： 1. Besides, it’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. 除此之外，在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。 2. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons after class. 首先，你应该认真听老师讲课，上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 3. As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the mornings reciting words and reading texts aloud. 众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。 2.2提建议总结 · Only by following these steps can you effectively overcome the challenges. · These methods are essential for fully addressing the issues. · By using these suggestions, you can solve the problems completely. 第三段【希望采纳+期待回复】 1. 希望采纳 · I hope you find these suggestions helpful. · I trust that these recommendations will be useful to you. · Hopefully, you will find these proposals/suggestions will be of great use to you. · I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. · I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. · I will appreciate you greatly if you can take my advice into consideration/account. · I will be glad if you take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 2. 期待回复 · Looking forward to hearing from you soon. · I await your response eagerly. · If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. · I do hope/I sincerely hope that you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 建议信写作重点句式： ①With the development of……（名词） 随着……（名词）的发展 Eg. With the development of technology, mobile payment (移动支付) is more and more convenient. ②One of the most important things is…… 最重要的之一是…… 可换任何形容词 要用复数 is是因为one（一个），很多中的一个，只是一个 Eg. One of the most important things is that it can improve our writing. ③There is no doubt that …… 毫无疑问的是…… Eg. There is no doubt that there will be many challenges waiting for me. ④More and more people/students have come to realized that……越来越多的人/学生意识到…… 意识 Eg. More and more people have come to realized that writing is important. ⑤What we can do is …… 我们能做的是…… Eg. What we can do is collecting students’ compositions and choosing the best one. ⑥I will do what I can do to help you. 我将会做我能做的去帮助你。 =I will do everything to help you. 我将会做一切事去帮助你。 ⑦How to study is very important. 如何学习非常重要。 可以换成其他动作 可以换成别的形容词 Eg. How to write is very difficult. 如何写作非常难。 ⑧I find it important to do sth. 我发现做某事很重要。 I think it important to do sth. 我认为做某事很重要 同理，important 可以换成任何形容词。 Eg. I think it difficult to learn English. 我认为学英语很难。 ⑨Doing sth is 形容词. 做某事是怎么样的。 Eg. Learning English is difficult. 学英语很难。 Taking notes is important. 做笔记很重要。 Eating is enjoyable. 吃饭是享受。 ⑩It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是…（adj.）…的 Eg. It is difficult for us to learn English. 学英语对我们来说很难。 练习： 专项提能P70作文。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 应 用 文 写 作 建 议 高考英语写作 信 2 目 录 写作步骤 篇章结构 范文实战练习 必备表达（词汇+句型） 3 PART 1 写作步骤 4 写作步骤 第一步——审题（①审文题/主题 ②文体 ③审时态、要点） 第二步——明确篇章结构（开头句 正文 结尾句） 第三步——开写 5 PART 2 篇章结构 6 篇章结构-三段式 开头——写信目的（寒暄+写信背景） 正文——提出建议/改进措施及理由 结尾——希望建议有用并得到考虑 7 PART 3 范文实战练习 8 实战练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下： 1)．表示理解并给予安慰； 2)．提出建议并说明理由。 9 实战练习-审题 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下： 1)．表示理解并给予安慰； 2)．提出建议并说明理由。 要点 主题—— 如何不发脾气 时态 10 实战练习-列提纲 Para 1. Para 2. Para 3. 寒暄安慰 表示理解 回信目的——提建议 建议3+理由 建议2+理由 建议1+理由 建议有帮助 美好祝愿 略写（2-3句） 详写（4-5句） 略写（1-2句） 11 实战练习—开写 Para 1. 对于你现在如此不佳的状态，我感到很难过。事实上，当事情看似出了问题，每个人都会有这样的一个时期，你不要过于担忧。 我对…感到难过 I’m sorry to know that … 不佳的状态 a bad time 事实上 actually/In fact/reality/as a matter of fact/The truth is that … 出问题 go wrong 不要… don’t need to/there is no need to … I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong and there is no need to worry about it so much. 寒暄安慰 表示理解 回信目的——提建议 12 实战练习—开写 Para 1. 最重要的是学会控制脾气，这样就不会发生更糟糕的事。 以下是我给你的几条建议。 最重要的是… What’s the most important is that …/The important thing is … 控制脾气 Control one’s temper 这样 so that /in order that /in order to /so as to 建议 suggestion /advice The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips. 寒暄安慰 表示理解 回信目的——提建议 13 实战练习—开写 Para 1. 最重要的是学会控制脾气… （拓展-模板化） 最重要的是… What’s the most important is that …/The important thing is … 引出主题 （如何控制自己的脾气….是很重要的。） How to control your temper is very important. Learning to control your temper is very important. To learn to control your temper is very important. It’s very important for you to control your temper. There is no doubt that it is very important for you to control your temper. 14 实战练习—开写 Para 1. …以下是我给你的几条建议。(拓展-模板化) 我想谈一些建议。(过渡句) I want to tell/talk about some suggestions/advice. want to do--------would like to do talk about-----share sth. with you advice----a piece of advice some pieces of advice I would like to talk about some advice. I would like to share some advice with you. I would like to share some pieces of advice with you. 15 实战练习—开写 Para 1. 首段模板化 There is no doubt that it is very important for you to control your temper. I would like to share some pieces of advice with you. 建议类首段 There is no doubt that it is very important for sb. to do sth. I would like to share some pieces of advice with you. 毫无疑问的是…很重要的。我想和你分享…。 16 实战练习—开写 Para 2. 首先，和你信任的人谈谈你所面临的困难，这是一个很好的发泄愤怒的方法，而不会伤害别人或你自己。 首先 first/firstly/first of all /at first/In the beginning 面临 be faced with 发泄 give vent to sth. /let out 而不 instead of /rather than /without First of all, talk to someone (you trust) about the trouble (you’re faced with), which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. 建议1+理由 17 实战练习—开写 Para 2. 其次，你可以和朋友一起去室外走走，或者参加一些团队活动。因为体力活动也是一个很有效的排除愤怒的方法。 其次 second/then/besides/what’s more/in addition 和…一起玩 paly sth. with sb. 团队活动 physical exercise 有效的 effective 排除愤怒 get rid of anger Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. 建议2+理由 18 实战练习—开写 Para 2. 最后，要对未来保持乐观。因为对生活有一个积极的态度可以帮助你振作起来。 最后 Finally /at last/in the end/last but not least 保持乐观 remain optimistic 积极的 positive 振作 lift /cheer up Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. 建议3+理由 19 实战练习—开写 Para 3. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助，然后你能变的更加平静，也越来越好。 有帮助 be helpful to sb./be beneficial/be of benefit to sb. I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you and you'll soon become calmer and better. 建议有帮助 美好祝愿 20 范文赏析 Dear Jamie I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong and there is no need to worry about it so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips. First of all, talk to someone you trust about the trouble you’re faced with, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. Last but not least, remain optimistic about your future. Having a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope my suggestions will be of great benefit to you and you'll soon become calmer and better. 21 PART 4 4.1必备表达（词汇） 22 必备表达-词汇 1. 征求某人的建议 2. 在…方面给某人建议 3. 提出一些建议 4. 接受我的建议 5. 在我看来，就我而言 6. 表达某人的观点 ask sb for advice/suggestions give sb. advice/ suggestions on…. make/offer some suggestions/advice adopt/accept/follow/ take up my advice/ suggestions in my opinion/as far as I’m concerned/personally express one’s views/opinions 23 必备表达-词汇 7. 实用的建议 8. 关于 9. 建议某人做某事 10.对某人有益 11.考虑我的建议 12.觉得我的建议有益/实用 practical/helpful/useful advice/suggestions concerning/as to/regarding/with regard to suggest sb. doing sth/advise/recommend sb. to do sth be beneficial/be of benefit to sb. take my advice/suggestions into consideration/ account find my suggestions/advice helpful/practical 24 必备表达-词汇 13.如下 14.有了某人的共同努力 15.开阔我们的视野 16.掌握英语 17.意识到 18.一个有效的方式 19.保持乐观 as follows broaden our horizon master English/ have a good command /knowledge of English be aware of an effective way remain optimistic about with the joint efforts of sb. 25 必备表达-词汇 20.记住 21.振奋某人的精神 22.习惯于这个现象 23.对…有坏影响 24.制定具体的制度 25.培养好的习惯 26.涵括各种各样的… keep… in mind lift one’s spirits get used/ accustomed to the phenomenon have a bad effect/ influence on set up specific rules develop good habits cover a wide variety of 26 PART 4 4.2必备表达（句型） 27 必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 28 必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. I‘m writing to you to present what I think on… 29 必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图 关于…你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些建议性的建议。 You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning…and I’ll try to make some constructive suggestions. You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning… 30 必备表达-照应材料,表明写作意图 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 In my opinion/ As far as I’m concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action. it would be wise to take the following action. 31 必备表达-给出建议及陈述理由,井然有序 我认为如果你…,将会受益 I think it would be beneficial/of benefit if you… it would be beneficial/of benefit if… 32 必备表达-希望接受建议 如果你能认真考虑我的建议我将会非常高兴。 I will be glad if you take my advice into account/consideration. I will be glad if… 33 必备表达-希望接受建议 如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。 I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. I will be more than happy to… 34 必备表达-希望接受建议 我希望我的建议对你有益。 I do hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you. 35 应 用 文 谢 谢 建 议 高考英语写作 信 36 $$学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1 2023-2024 学年度高考英语备考写作之建议信 01 主备人：Ms. Huang 2024 年 7 月 20 日 写作第一讲 （建议信） 写作步骤： 第一步：审题（审时态、审主题、审要点） 第二步：构思篇章结构（开头 Para.1 正文 Para.2 结尾 Para.3） 第三步：开写（注意卷面整洁） 一.建议信框架结构： 第一段: 问候＋写信背景信息（大题目材料）＋目的 第二段：提出建议+理由（建议 1+理由；建议 2+理由；建议 3+理由） 第三段：希望建议有帮助+美好祝愿或期待回复 二．建议信模板 建议信模板（基础版）： Dear __________, How have you been? I am sorry/glad/happy to hear that____题目信息_____________________，Here are some suggestions/ ideas for you.或 I would like to share some pieces of advice with you. To begin with, it is useful for you to do sth. (题目所给第 1 点建议)What’s more, you’d better do sth. (题目所给第 2点建议). Last but not least, doing sth is a good idea for you.(题目所给第 3点建议) All in all, I hope that my suggestions will be helpful for you. And I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua 建议信模板（提升版） Dear __________, You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding/concerning…and I’ll try to make some constructive suggestions here. The reason why 【结果】 is that 【原因】.First and foremost, it would be wiser to do sth. （建议 1） Additionally, 非谓语动词 （建议 2+理由）.Most importantly, 从句 .（建议 3+理由） I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。如果你有任何问题，请随时问我。 Yours, Li Hua 建议信常用素材表达： 第一段【问候（介绍）+写作背景+写作目的】 1. 问候 o How have you been? o How is everything with you? o I hope this letter finds you well. 2. 自我介绍（如果和对方认识就不需要自我介绍） o I am Lihua, a student at No. 1 School. o I am Lihua, studying at No. 1 School. o I am Lihua, from No. 1 School. 3. 写信背景 o I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble (in)... o You wanted to know my opinion on how to handle a specific situation. o Knowing that/ Learning that you have trouble (in)...... 4. 表示理解 o I understand exactly how you feel. o Such problems are quite normal. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 2 2023-2024 学年度高考英语备考写作之建议信 01 主备人：Ms. Huang 2024 年 7 月 20 日 5. 写信目的 o I would like to share some constructive suggestions with you. o Here are a few recommendations that might help. o I hope the following advice will be useful to you. o I am writing to express my views on/concerning... o I would like to make some constructive suggestions/offer you the following suggestions, hoping to help you. o I’m writing to share my views on this problem, which I think may be helpful to you. 第二段【分析原因+提供建议 或 建议+建议的理由】 1. 分析原因 o The reason why 【结果】 is that 【原因】. 句型举例 The reason why you find writing in English difficult is that you may not be practicing it regularly enough. The reason why improving your English seems challenging could be due to insufficient practice. The reason why you struggle with English writing might be the lack of consistent practice. 2. 提建议 2.1提建议基本句型 1）使用表示建议的动词 o I recommend doing sth. o I advise you to do sth. o I suggest doing sth. 2）使用祈使句 o Be sure to analyze the causes of the mistakes. o Make sure to examine the reasons behind the mistakes. o Don’t forget to look into why these mistakes happen. 3）使用非谓语动词 o Analyzing the causes of the mistakes is crucial. o Understanding the reasons for these mistakes is important. o Investigating why the mistakes occur is essential. 4）使用形式主语句型 o It is important to analyze the causes of the mistakes. o It is essential to understand why these mistakes happen. o It is necessary to investigate the reasons behind the mistakes. 补充： 连接词总结： 首先/第一： First of all, / Firstly,To begin with, 其次/然后/并且：In addition, / Additionally,/ Moreover,/ Moreover, / Meanwhile, / Besides, / Furthermore, 最后 Last but not least,(最后但是也是很重要的是) 一般用于中间段最后一句 / Finally, 总而言之：In a word,/All in all,/To sum up,/On the whole 逻辑词：Therefore,因此，However, 然而/但是，On the contrary,相反的是，As a result,结果是，因此是 中间段提建议句型小结: 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 3 2023-2024 学年度高考英语备考写作之建议信 01 主备人：Ms. Huang 2024 年 7 月 20 日 1. 祈使句 2. I think it would be a good idea if... 3. In my opinion, it would be wise to... 4. I suggest that you should... 5. You’d better... 6. I advise you to... 7. If I were you, I would... 8. Why not.….?/Why don’t you...? 9. If you can..., you will... 例句： 1. Besides, it’s necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. 除此之外，在你来亲眼看到这些地方之前，你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的 知识，你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。 2. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons after class. 首先，你应该认真听老师讲课，上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。 3. As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the mornings reciting words and reading texts aloud. 众所周知，词汇是非常重要的。你应该早上花半个小时的时间背单词和朗读课文。 2.2提建议总结 o Only by following these steps can you effectively overcome the challenges. o These methods are essential for fully addressing the issues. o By using these suggestions, you can solve the problems completely. 第三段【希望采纳+期待回复】 1. 希望采纳 o I hope you find these suggestions helpful. o I trust that these recommendations will be useful to you. o Hopefully, you will find these proposals/suggestions will be of great use to you. o I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. o I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. o I will appreciate you greatly if you can take my advice into consideration/account. o I will be glad if you take my advice into account/consideration seriously. 2. 期待回复 o Looking forward to hearing from you soon. o I await your response eagerly. o If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. o I do hope/I sincerely hope that you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 建议信写作重点句式： ①With the development of……（名词） 随着……（名词）的发展 Eg. With the development of technology, mobile payment (移动支付) is more and more convenient. ②One of the most important things is…… 最重要的之一是…… 可换任何形容词 要用复数 is是因为 one（一个），很多中的一个，只是一个 Eg. One of the most important things is that it can improve our writing. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 4 2023-2024 学年度高考英语备考写作之建议信 01 主备人：Ms. Huang 2024 年 7 月 20 日 ③There is no doubt that …… 毫无疑问的是…… Eg. There is no doubt that there will be many challenges waiting for me. ④More and more people/students have come to realized that……越来越多的人/学生意识到…… 意识 Eg. More and more people have come to realized that writing is important. ⑤What we can do is …… 我们能做的是…… Eg. What we can do is collecting students’ compositions and choosing the best one. ⑥I will do what I can do to help you. 我将会做我能做的去帮助你。 =I will do everything to help you. 我将会做一切事去帮助你。 ⑦How to study is very important. 如何学习非常重要。 可以换成其他动作 可以换成别的形容词 Eg. How to write is very difficult. 如何写作非常难。 ⑧I find it important to do sth. 我发现做某事很重要。 I think it important to do sth. 我认为做某事很重要 同理，important 可以换成任何形容词。 Eg. I think it difficult to learn English. 我认为学英语很难。 ⑨Doing sth is 形容词. 做某事是怎么样的。 Eg. Learning English is difficult. 学英语很难。 Taking notes is important. 做笔记很重要。 Eating is enjoyable. 吃饭是享受。 ⑩It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是…（adj.）…的 Eg. It is difficult for us to learn English. 学英语对我们来说很难。 练习： 专项提能 P70 作文。