读后续写细节描写(1) 公开课课件-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

读后续写微技能之情绪描写 Continuation writing Ways to describe emotions 主讲人：罗洁 Improve reading, viewing and writing skills; 1.语言能力 Enjoy the colorful emotions positively; 3.思维品质 Be familiar with common emotions. 4.文化意识 Apply the ways to describe emotions in continuation writing; 2.学习能力 Learning aims Step 1 Lead in I want to travel afar, I want to see the seagull, In spite of much wind and rain , I feel good with you. I love looking at your lips. I love looking at your brow. The white clouds in the blue sky, Seem like your bright smile. When smiling , you are really nice, Like the flower in springtime, Taking all my worry and all my sorrow, Now so far away, When smiling , you are really nice, Just like summer sunshine, All of the time in the entire world is so beautiful. A video clip from The Great Gatsby Step 2 Observation & Analysis What was Gatsby's emotion? He felt ____./He was full of ____. clench his teeth glare at clench and wave his fist grab sb by the collar 咬牙切齿 握紧拳头 eyes cheeks turn red cheeks body Emotional words Action words voice shout/scream angry anger teeth forehead sweat Emotional words Action words Nouns Adjectives Mind-map what? how? Task1: Use adj./n.to describe the emotions in the pictures. Step 3 Exploring 1.Excited and________, the girl opened her mouth widely. surprised/ amazed/ astonished/ shocked Task1: Use adj./n.to describe the emotions in the pictures. Step 3 Exploring Task1: Use adj./n.to describe the emotions in the pictures. 2.The kids were so ___________ that they jumped in the sky. excited/ happy/ delighted/ cheerful/ overjoyed Step 3 Exploring Task1: Use adj./n.to describe the emotions in the pictures. 3. The little boy cried, feeling ____ and ________. sorrowful/ depressed. sad 4.A flood of __________welled up in the little boy. sadness/ sorrow/ depression Step 3 Exploring 在…涌出 6.The kids _______with joy, _________their arms. jumped waving 5.With tears on his face, the little boy _________. 7. The girl was surprised, with her jaw ____________. dropping cried Task 2 : Use action verbs to describe the emotions. Task 3: Read these sentences and underline the sentence patterns. 1.Excited and surprised, the girl opened her mouth widely. 2.The kids were so excited that they jumped in the sky. 3. The little boy cried, feeling sad and depressed. 4.A flood of sadness and depression welled up in the little boy. 5.With tears on his face, the little boy cried. 6.The kids jumped with joy, waving their arms. 7.The girl was surprised, with her jaw dropping. adj and adj, sb did sth... Task 3: Read these sentences and underline the sentence patterns. 1.Excited and surprised, the girl opened her mouth widely. 2.The kids were so excited that they jumped in the sky. 3. The little boy cried, feeling sad and depressed. 4.A flood of sadness and depression welled up in the little boy. adj and adj, sb did sth... sb was/were so+adj +that... sb. did sth, feeling+ adj. 情绪名词+动词+sb Task 3: Read these sentences and underline the sentence patterns. 5.With tears on his face, the little boy cried. 6.The kids jumped with joy, waving their arms. 7.The girl was surprised, with her jaw dropping. with+O+OC, sb ... sb ..., with+O+OC. sb. did sth1, doing+ sth2. 1.Excited and surprised, the girl opened her mouth widely. 2.The kids were so excited that they jumped in the sky. 3. The little boy cried, feeling sad and depressed. 4.A flood of sadness and depression welled up in the little boy. 5.With tears on his face, the little boy cried. 6.The kids jumped with joy, waving their arms. 7.The girl was surprised, with her jaw dropping. adj and adj, sb did sth sb was/were so+adj +that... sb. did sth, feeling+ adj. 情绪名词+动词+sb sb ..., with+O+OC. sb. did sth1, doing sth2. seized; struck; took hold of; filled Step 4 Practice 感到既高兴又兴奋，他在雨中跳舞。 1. he danced in the rain. He was so delighted and excited that 2. , he danced in the rain. Delighted and excited 3. He danced in the rain, . feeling delighted and excited sb was so+adj. +that... adj. and adj., sb did sth sb. did sth, feeling+ adj. __________________________________ when Gatsby heard his words. 4.当Gatsby听到他所说的话，一种强烈的愤怒控制(took hold of)了他。 He glared at the man, ___________________________. 5.他怒视着那个男人，握紧了自己的拳头。 He couldn’t help shouting, ____________________________. 6.他忍不住吼叫，额头(forehead)直冒汗。 A strong anger took hold of him clenching his fist with his forehead sweating 情绪名词+动词+sb sb. did sth1, doing+ sth2. sb ..., with+O+OC. Continue the story with Mother's emotional descriptions . Requirements: Step 5 Writing 3）give a self-review& peer-review 1）write 2/3 sentences beautifully. 2）apply the skills you have learnt. The twins wanted to prepare a surprise for their mother in the morning, only to make the kitchen a mess. As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make the food as they wished. Then he sneaked back to bed quietly. Mother's emotion ? Her face? Her body? Read and write Para 2.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. _________________ With tears of joy running down her cheeks, their mother felt moved. Their mother was so moved that she failed to speak a word. Knowing it was done by her children, she was moved to tears. The surprise was so sudden that their mother didn't realize what happened. Opening her eyes, she couldn't believe what she saw. Surprised and moved /Proud and relieved, their mother other hugged the twins tightly. moved grateful surprised proud relieved... Step 6 Summary adj and adj, sb did sth sb was/were so+adj +that... sb. did sth, feeling+ adj. 情绪名词+动词+sb (when ...) sb. did sth1, doing sth2. sb ..., with+O+OC. Emotional words Action words excited, surpried, angry, sadness ... jump, cry, wave, dance, widen ... Sentence patterns The twins wanted to prepare a surprise for their mother in the morning, only to make the kitchen a mess. As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make the food as they wished. Then he sneaked back to bed quietly. Para 2.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. _________________ Twins'/father's reaction ? ending? Homework: Finish the whole paragraph. Lavf57.62.100 null 172678.42 $$