Write More and Write Better 句子扩展，读后续写基础课课件-2024-2025学年高一上学期英语写作专项

-Sentence Expansion 读后续写基础课 Write More and Write Better Learning Targets 1. master the skills for expanding sentences. 2. try to complete a story by adding more details. 3. be able to improve your writing using the skills learnt after this class. Let’s Play– Story Chain Every one add one or two words on the basis of the former one. For example: The first one say: a baby The second say: a lovely baby The third one say:a lovely baby is crying The fourth one say: a lovely baby is crying under the desk. … Try to Make a Simple Sentence What’s in this picture? A girl; box; desk; Make them into a sentence: A girl opened a box on the desk. Can you see more details? Red T-shirt Blue box Purple and pink lid Light pink desk Brown hair widely open eyes Open mouth Outstretched hands Bowknot and ribbon A girl opened a box on the desk. young beautiful blue gift light pink Add Adjectives/ Nouns to Modify NOUNS (Subject/ Object) innocent delicate a girl opened a box on the desk. Curious and excited, Full of joy, Add Prep. Phrases (adverbial) a girl opened a box on the desk. Without any hesitation, In surprise, in red/ red T-shirt with long/ brown hair Absolute Construction Screaming with excitement, Her hands outstretching surprisingly, the girl opened the box on the desk. With Structure With her mouth widely opened, a girl opened a box on the desk. With her heart beating wildly, Attributive Clause The girl opened the box which was tied with red ribbon. The girl opened the gift box which she had been looking forward to for a long time. A Possible Version With her heart beating wildly, the innocent girl, screaming with excitement, opened the delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any hesitation. A girl opened a box on the desk. More Details from Imagination Why did she receive/open the box? Who sent her this gift? Birthday?? A gift from her best friends/ mother… When did she receive this gift? In the morning/ when she came from her school… Where did this event happen? At home/ school… Pair Work we have learnt the skills of expanding a sentence, can you work with your partner to expand the sentence to make it a complete story? (at least include: when, where, who, what happened) A Possible Version It was a Sunday morning when Jenny came home after the morning exercise. A soft voice said, "Happy Birthday, my baby!” as she walked into the room, She was shocked, and a blue box with red ribbons caught her eyes. She stepped closer to the desk. With her heart beating wildly, the innocent girl, Jenny, screaming with excitement, unwrapped the delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any hesitation. 试题要求:假如你是一名中学生,请以My colorful school life为题,写一篇短文。开头和结尾已经给出。 要点提示: 1:上课认真听讲 2:课后完成作业 3:经常参加体育锻炼 4:去图书馆阅读 I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard. _ May there always be colorful life around my school. I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard. I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library. May there always be colorful life around my school. A version of a student's writing Work in Groups Group 1: I listen to the teacher carefully. Group 2: I finish my homework after class. Group 3: I often take exercise. Group 4: I often read in the school library. Evaluation 1.Are there any spelling/ expression errors? 2.Do you expand on the basis of the given sentence ? 3.Do you use the skills learnt in this class? 4.Do you use commas and stops correctly? 5.Is the handwriting easy to read? I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.(原文已给) First of all(过渡词), it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. What’s more(过渡词), I take homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me. In addition(过渡词), in order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc. Finally(过渡词), interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favorite books. May there always be colorful life around my school.(原文已给) Summary Expand a sentence Add adjectives/nouns to modify the subject/object Add prep. Phrases (adverbial) Absolute construction With structure Attributive clause Background (when, where, who, why, how) Thanks for being with me $$