2025届高考英语读后续写专题之遇险类--车在雪中 “罢工”：被忽视的警告和温暖的救援 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In 1996, I had just finished my first year of community college. After borrowing my dad’s car for school for a few months, we decided it was time for me to get my own car. Since my family was economical, we headed to the used car section. I found a cute little car that seemed like a great deal, but my dad had doubts from the start. He wanted to have it thoroughly checked before purchasing, but I was in a hurry. “Dad, we can’t inspect every car. Let’s just pick one. I want this one...” So, he gave in. The cute little car was mine! But as soon as we drove off the lot, problems started. First, constant overheating. Then, a knocking sound from the engine. But oh no---I was not going to be stopped. Not Miss Fancy Pants College Girl. I had my own car! What if the needle went to the “H” every now and then? Big deal! I just wouldn’t look at that. And that annoying little sound from the engine? I could just turn up the radio. Problem solved! Ignoring these warnings. I headed out to a Friday night party in my college town, looking forward to it for weeks and shocked that my dad allowed me to go. However, with an unexpected winter snowstorm, my dad started having second thoughts. The snowy roads combined with my car’s issues were enough for him to voice his concerns. But I wasn’t listening. Off I went, driving in the snow for thirty minutes. Just as I hit a long stretch of somewhat deserted highway, the unavoidable happened. My precious little car let out its final breath...and died. Luckily, I managed to coast to the side of the highway, barely over the line onto the shoulder, before it came to a complete stop. Now, remember, this was 1996, and cell phones were rare. There was no way to call for help. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 I was really stuck on a snowy dark night on the highway. _______________________________________________________________________________ About an hour later, a familiar car came out of nowhere. _______________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 1996 年，“我” 上完社区大学一年级后准备买辆车，在二手车区看中一辆，不顾父亲的疑虑买下。车刚开离车场就出现问题，如过热和发动机异响，但 “我” 没当回事。周五要去参加期待已久的派对，父亲因雪天和车的问题担心，但 “我” 不听。结果车在行驶途中抛锚在荒凉的高速公路边，当时手机还不普及，无法求助。 几处伏笔及在续写中的回应 · 伏笔：父亲对车质量的怀疑和对雪天出行的担忧。 回应：续写中父亲来救 “我”，体现父亲担忧的合理性。 · 伏笔：当时没有手机无法求助。 回应：暗示只能等待他人救援或出现熟悉的人，引出父亲的到来。 续写要点 第一段 · 情感线：恐惧、无助、后悔，在黑暗寒冷的雪夜被困，意识到自己不听父亲劝告的错误。 · 故事线：描述周围的寒冷和黑暗，车无法启动，自己试图寻求帮助却无果，担心可能要在这待很久。 · 伏笔呼应：对自己鲁莽行为感到后悔，与之前不听父亲劝告相呼应。 第二段 · 情感线：惊喜、感动。 · 故事线：看到熟悉的车是父亲的，父亲来救 “我”，可能有和父亲的对话，体现父亲的关爱。 · 主旨升华线：体现亲情的温暖，父母的经验和关心值得重视，不要盲目自信。 情感线 · 恐惧无助后悔（第一段） · 惊喜感动（第二段） 故事线 · 被困等待救援（第一段） · 父亲前来救援（第二段） 主旨升华句 1. Parents' advice is like a lighthouse in the storm, guiding us safely even when we resist.（父母的建议就像暴风雨中的灯塔，即使我们抗拒，也能安全地引导我们。） 2. Sometimes, our stubbornness blinds us to the wisdom of our elders, but love always finds a way to reach us.（有时候，我们的固执使我们看不到长辈的智慧，但爱总会找到途径抵达我们。） 3. In the cold of a bad decision, the warmth of a parent's care can melt away our fears.（在错误决定带来的寒冷中，父母关怀的温暖能驱散我们的恐惧。） 4. We often learn the value of listening when we find ourselves in the consequences of not doing so.（当我们尝到不听劝告的后果时，才会明白倾听的价值。） 5. A father's love shines brightest in the darkest moments of our folly.（在我们最愚蠢的黑暗时刻，父爱闪耀得最明亮。） 两篇写作示范 第一篇 Paragraph 1: I was really stuck on a snowy dark night on the highway. The wind howled, sending chills through my body. I sat in the cold car, feeling terrified. I regretted not listening to my dad. I looked around, but there was only darkness and the falling snow. I wondered how long I would have to wait and if anyone would find me. Paragraph 2: About an hour later, a familiar car came out of nowhere. It was my dad's. Relief washed over me. He got out of the car quickly and rushed towards me. "I knew something would go wrong," he said. I hugged him tightly, feeling so grateful. His love and concern had overcome my stubbornness. 第二篇 Paragraph 1: I was really stuck on a snowy dark night on the highway. The snow was piling up around the car, and the cold was seeping in. I felt so alone and vulnerable. Every sound of the wind made me jump. I thought about how stupid I had been to ignore the car's problems and my dad's warnings. I prayed for someone to come. Paragraph 2: About an hour later, a familiar car came out of nowhere. When I saw it was my dad, tears filled my eyes. He had braved the snowstorm to find me. He opened the door and pulled me into a warm embrace. "Let's get you home," he said. I realized then that his love was always there, even when I was being foolish. 参考答案     I was really stuck on a snowy dark night on the highway. What if I hadn’t rushed Dad into buying this unreliable car? What if I hadn’t ignored the car’s warning signs? And what if I hadn’t turned a deaf ear to Dad’s concerns? However, it was no use crying over spilt milk. I must search for help! I stepped into the freezing snow, only to discover an empty road stretching ahead. The biting coldness drove me back into the car, but the dead car felt like a freezer. Would I die with my car and hit the headlines the next day? Abandoned by the whole world, I could do nothing but pray for a miracle.     About an hour later, a familiar car came out of nowhere. Dad appeared like magic! I threw myself into his warm and safe arms, regretful and guilty tears soaking his shoulder. Dancing snowflakes in the dim glow of the headlights witnessed our reunion. “Thank goodness! The price of ignoring my advice!” he exclaimed. I could sense care and concern in his reproachful tone. I was then rescued by my superman. That night’s experience has stayed with me ever since. Now, as a middle-aged mother with a daughter in university, I see my younger self in her impatience with my advice. To help her understand, I shared with her the story of the snowy night. She seemed to be lost in thought. I hope she doesn't need to learn life’s truths the hard way as I did. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$