2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写A Mother's Day Surprise课件

2021年6月全国新高考1卷 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE 读后续写 ONE TWO THREE FOUR 01 语篇解读 2021年6月全国新高考1卷 A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. 2021年6月全国新高考1卷 Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ONE TWO THREE FOUR 02 续写段落首句解读 01 Para1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. The father’s reaction when seeing the mess The twins’ explanation The twins succeeded in making the breakfast with their father’s help. Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 03 Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. The mothers’s reaction when seeing the breakfast The twin and father’s action The beautiful sight of the family getting togethor A sentence conveying the theme Para1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. 爸爸询问 孩子回答 爸爸帮忙 做好早餐 Father asked what had happened. The twins told him what they tried to do. Father helped the children cook the brakfast. They made the breakfast successfully. Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 孩子祝妈妈节日快乐 妈妈感动又惊喜 孩子爸爸都开心 一家欢乐又温馨 真是难忘母亲节 “Happy mother’s day, the twins yelled. Mother was very moved and surprised. Twins and father were all very happy. The family was happy and harmonious. It is an unforgettable mother’s day. 动作描写 神态描写 心理描写 环境描写 语言描写 情节+ 细节+ 过渡词！ 过渡词： 时间：after a while, a moment later, then, now... 转换词： at sight of this, hearing that, thinking of this 逻辑关系词：however, therefore, since, as... The twins told him what they had tried to do. At the sight of this mess, father frowned, demanding with a long face, “what are you doing?” They made the breakfast successfully. Father asked what had happened. Father helped the children cook the brakfast. Scared and nervous, the twins stuttered out what they had tried to do. Hearing what they said, father’s face softened, with a smile spreading over it, and he decided to help them to make the special gift for his kids’ mom. With father’s help, after an hour, the delicous breakfast was ready, with tantalising smell floating in the air. “Happy mother’s day”, the twins yelled. “Happy mother’s day!”, the twins yelled, with their faces beaming, placing the breakfast in front of mother and urging her to try. Seeing this, mother was so moved that tears of joy welled up in her eyes. She murmured, “Thank you, my kids.” Then she took a bite. “So delicious!” She said, surprised and delighted. Mother was very moved and surprised. Twins and father were all very happy. Hearing her words, Jeff grinned from ear to ear. Jenna exchanged a look with father, who just sneaked into the room, smiling. The whole family was enveloped in an atmosphere of harmony and happiness. What an unforgettable mother’s day! The family was happy and harmonious. It is an unforgettable mother’s day. ONE TWO THREE FOUR 04 范文赏析 2021年6月全国新高考1卷 Para1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. At the sight of this mess, father frowned, demanding with a long face, “What are you doing?” Scared and nervous, Jeff stuttered out what they had tried to do. Hearing what they said, father’s face softened, with a smile spreading over it, and he decided to help them to make this special gift for his kids’ mom. With his help, after half an hour, the delicious breakfast was ready, with tantalising smell floating in the air. The twins couldn’t wait to let their mother taste it! 2021年6月全国新高考1卷 Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy mother’s day!” the twins yelled with their faces beaming. They placed the breakfast in front of their mother and urged her to have a try. Seeing this, mother was so moved that tears of joy welled up in her eyes. She murmured, “Thank you, my kids.” Then she took a bite. “So delicious!” She said, surprised and delighted. Hearing her words, Jeff grinned from ear to ear. Jenna exchanged a look with father, who just sneaked into the room, smiling. The whole family was enveloped in an atmosphere of harmony and happiness. What an unforgettable mother’s day! 读后续写 THANKS $$