内容正文:
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Every year, our swim team runs the Snack Bar at the pool ground to raise funds for covering the costs of swim competitions and equipment. However, during our first summer meeting last month, Coach Abby informed us that the Snack Bar would be closed for repairs until August.
Upon hearing the news, all the team members were worried that without a Snack Bar, we wouldn't have funds, which meant, our swim team might have to be dismissed.
Supposing the worst, everyone was out of spirit. “Take it easy! I’ll figure it out. For now, boys, jump into the pool and get swimming!” said Coach Abby, gently comforting us. But none of us were swimming our best, and even though Coach Abby was smiling as usual, it was evident that she was concerned about the situation.
During the break, I proposed exploring alteative approaches for holding a fundraising event. My teammates erupted into a lively conversation. DJ. suggested a karaoke sing-along. while Tamara offered to bring starfish cookies for sale. Manny brought up the idea of games and prizes, while I thought we could run a drink stand.
After a heated discussion, it was decided that each of us would take turns to host the event throughout the week. Coach Abby heartily approved of our plan. My drink stand was scheduled for the last day of the event.
I was so thrilled about the upcoming event that I began my preparations a day ahead. When I was making the drinks, I noticed a very dark cloud outside the kitchen window. “Uh-oh! That’s not a rain cloud, is it?” I asked my mom, feeling a bit anxious. “Rain would be a disaster! It could ruin everything.
“You know what they say,” she answered. “Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.” Then came the big day. Coach Abby helped me set up the drink stand and the teammates called out loudly to get everyone together at the pool ground. I hid a big box under the table and nobody knew what was inside. Everything was going smoothly as we wished.
注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement.
文章大意
游泳队的小吃吧因维修要关闭到八月,这可能导致队里没资金,面临解散。教练安慰大家,队员们在休息时讨论了替代的筹款活动方案,包括卡拉 OK、卖饼干、游戏抽奖、饮料摊等,大家轮流负责活动。“我” 负责饮料摊,准备过程中发现乌云,活动当天教练帮忙布置,“我” 还藏了个大箱子,活动开始时很顺利。
几处伏笔及在续写中的回应
· 伏笔:发现乌云,担心下雨毁掉活动;“我” 藏了个大箱子,用途未知。
· 回应:续写中乌云聚集可能导致下雨威胁活动;箱子里的东西可能在关键时刻发挥作用。
续写要点
第一段(Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather.)
· 情感线:紧张、担忧,担心活动因雨受阻。
· 故事线:描述天气变化对活动的影响,人们的反应。
· 续写示例:Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. Darker and darker they became, and soon the first drops of rain began to fall. People started to scatter, looking for shelter. My heart sank as I watched our hard - work - prepared event being disrupted. The drinks on the stand might get wet and the whole fundraising plan seemed to be falling apart. I was really worried that all our efforts would be in vain.
第二段(Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement.)
· 情感线:惊喜、期待,情况有转机的兴奋。
· 故事线:教练宣布新计划或发现新转机,可能和 “我” 的箱子有关。
· 续写示例:After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Don't worry, kids! We can move the event indoors. And look what we have here!” She pulled out the big box I had hidden under the table, which was filled with colorful umbrellas. With these umbrellas, we could continue the event outside. Everyone's face lit up again and we resumed our fundraising with new enthusiasm.
主旨升华句
1. When faced with difficulties, teamwork and preparation can turn the situation around.(当面临困难时,团队合作和准备能扭转局势。)
2. Even in the face of unexpected challenges, hope and creativity can keep our dreams afloat.(即使面对意想不到的挑战,希望和创造力能让我们的梦想继续前行。)
3. Adversity reveals the strength within a team, just like the rain tested our fundraising event.(逆境能展现团队的力量,就像这场雨考验我们的筹款活动。)
4. In tough times, our combined efforts are the umbrella that shelters our hopes.(在艰难时刻,我们的共同努力是庇护希望的雨伞。)
5. Challenges are but stepping stones, and with unity, we can overcome any storm.(挑战只是垫脚石,只要团结,我们能战胜任何风暴。)
写作示范
第一篇
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. The wind picked up, making the banners around the pool ground flutter wildly. People started to murmur with concern. The raindrops fell more frequently, and some of the drinks on my stand got wet. I felt a sense of despair. It seemed that our fundraising event was doomed. But my teammates and I didn't want to give up easily. We started to cover the stand with plastic sheets, hoping to save what we could.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “We have an indoor pool area! We can move the event there!” Everyone cheered. We quickly moved all the things inside. The event continued with great enthusiasm. In the end, we managed to raise a good amount of money. It taught us that as long as we don't give up, there's always a way out.
第二篇
Para 1: Unluckily, the clouds started to gather. The sky turned gloomy in an instant. Thunder rumbled in the distance, and the people around the pool ground started to panic. Some of them started to leave. I was on the verge of crying. The rain was getting heavier, and the drinks stand was in a mess. My teammates were also looking gloomy, but we still tried to protect the things as much as possible.
Para 2: After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Hey, kids! We can turn this into a water party! We'll provide free raincoats and continue the event!” With that, she took out a bunch of raincoats from the storage room. People started to come back. We adjusted our plan and had a unique and fun - filled fundraising event. It showed that with a positive attitude, we can make the best of a bad situation.
读后续写参考范文
Unluckily, clouds started to gather. Before we knew it, the rain was pouring down, making it difficult for everyone to seek shelter near the pool. Upon seeing this, my eyes lit up and I pulled out the box hidden under the table, taking out the stuff prepared earlier. With two booth umbrellas opened and attached to the table. a cosy, dry area cane into view. My teammates gathered around me, enthusiastically assisting me to sell the hot chocolate I made with precision, which brought warmth to all those attending the fundraiser. Laughter filled the air once more.
After a while, Coach Abby made a cheerful announcement. “Thanks, everyone! We made such an achievement with joint efforts for the fundraiser that we’ll be able to participate in the swim competition this summer!” The crowd erupted into thunderous applause and cheers. In that moment, I realized the importance of preparing for the worst and working together, especially when the unexpected happened, Today, with mother’s words echoing in my mind, I turned a rainy day into an unforgettable success. Soon, the clouds parted, and rays of sunlight broke through casting a golden glow over the pool.
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