2025届高三英语一轮复习应用文写作倡议书课件

Proposal Environmental Protection 学情分析： 学生已经掌握基本的环保相关话题词汇，但句子结构和表达较基础。 教学目标： 通过倡议书必备要点训练，帮助学生巩固写倡议书的写作模式。 通过词汇和句子的层层升级，引导学生写出环保主题相关的亮点句。 Look at the pictures below Lead-in: The development of industry has caused serious air pollution. Global warming has led to melting glaciers and drought. Rising sea level and extreme weather are also severe problems of our environment. What can we do to protect our environment? Given all these serious environmental problems? Talk with your partner 3 Topic-based chunk Check your memory 1. 空气污染 ______________ 2. 全球气候变暖 __________ 3. 冰川融化 ______________ 4. 干旱 __________________ 5. 海平面上升 ____________ 6. 极端天气 ______________ 7. 栖息地减少 _____________ 1. make some rules _________________ 2. publicize relevant knowledge ________________________________ 3. call on sb. to do... _________________ 4. keep ecological balance ________________________________ 5. improve people's understanding of... ________________________________ 6. take actions ______________________ 7. live in harmony with... ______________ 8. try one's best to do..._______________ air pollution global warming melting glaciers drought rising sea level extreme weather habitat loss 制定规则 宣传相关知识 呼吁某人做... 维持生态平衡 提高人们对...的认识 采取行动 与...和谐共处 竭尽全力做... 4 假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，在世界环境日（6月5日）到来之际，请你向报社投稿并发出倡议，要点如下： 1. 环境现状；2. 具体措施；3. 发出倡议。 An example of proposal 题型解读：倡议书由个人或集体发出，作用是 倡导某项活动。 Steps of Writing a Composition Thinking (审题） 01 Outlining（列提纲,写要点） 02 Expanding（扩词成句） 03 Linking（连句成篇） 04 Polishing（润色） 05 假如你是某国际学校学生会主席李华，在世界环境日（6月5日）到来之际，请你给报社投稿并发出倡议，要点如下： 环境现状；2. 具体措施；3. 发出倡议。 02 Thinking 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 体裁: 倡议书 （呼吁学生保护环境） Thinking (审题） Step 1 人称: 第一人称 话题: 环境保护 时态：一般现在时， 现在进行时 7 开头 正文 结尾： Para.1 Para.2 Para.3 总结倡议，表达希望。 要点1 环境现状 (what) 要点2 具体措施和作用 (how and why) Outlining （列出提纲） Step 2 交代背景、原因和目的。 写明倡议的具体内容和要求。 要点3 发出倡议 (a call for action) Para1（Beginning） Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 ... is coming serious problems getting worse and worse lead to as well as urge sb. to do sth. 1.World Environment Day is coming, many people have realized the serious problems of the environment. 2. Global warming is getting worse and worse，it also leads to extreme weather. 3. Melting glaciers as well as habitat loss are urging us to protect the environment. 世界环境日即将到来，很多人已经意识到了环境的严重问题。 全球变暖正在日益恶化，这也导致了极端天气。 冰川融化和栖息地减少都在敦促我们去保护环境。 make some laws draw people's attention take on responsibilities to do... do less harm to... improve one's understanding of... live a green lifestyle 1. Government should make some laws to draw people's attention on environmental protection. 2. Companies need to take on their responsibilities so as to do less harm to nature. 3. As individuals，we can improve our understanding of environmental protection and live a green lifestyle. Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 Para2（Body） 政府应该制定相关的法律来吸引人们的关注。 企业应该承担他们的职责以便减少对自然的伤害。 作为个人，我们可以提高环保意识，过绿色生活。 para3（Ending） It is high time that... try one's best to... with our joint efforts pay off Expanding (扩词成句） Step 3 1. It's high time that we should try our best to protect our own planet. 2. I'm firmly convinced that with our joint efforts, our hard work will finally pay off. 是时候竭尽全力来保护我们的地球了。 我坚信在我们的努力下，我们的辛苦付出终会获得回报。 Linking (连句成篇） Step 4 添加合适的过渡词： 1. 表顺序： 首先：Initially,... To begin with,… First and foremost,… In the first place,… What comes first is that... 其次：In addition,... Additionally,... What's more,.. Moreover,... What comes next is that... Aside from that,... 最后：Ultimately,... Last but not least,... 2. 表逻辑： 表原因：since... as... because... due to... owing to... on account of... 表目的：in order to... so as to... in order that... so that... Step 5 make some laws lay down relevant laws improve people's understanding of... enhance people's awareness of... 02 03 get worse and worse get increasingly bad 01 Polishing(锤炼词汇） Step 5 try one's best to... spare no effort to.../ go to one's lengths to... 05 06 keep ecological balance maintain/ sustain ecological banlance 04 remember bear in mind Polishing(锤炼词汇） Step 5 The World Environment Day is coming... The air pollution is getting worse... 01 With World Environment Day coming... with复合结构: with+宾语+宾补 With the air pollution getting worse... approaching... Polishing(锤炼句式1 - 非谓语动词） Step 5 Global warming is getting incrasingly bad. It also leads to extreme weather. People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection. It can help them live a green lifestyle. 02 Global warming is getting incrasingly bad, which also leads to extreme weather. 定语从句合并简单句 Polishing(锤炼句式2 - 定语从句） People should enhance their awareness of environmental protection, which can help them live a green lifestyle. Step 5 Government should lay down relevant laws and companies need to take on their responsibilities. Maintaining ecological balance is so crucial for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature. 03 Not only should government lay down relevant laws, companies also need to take on their responsibilities. 1. not only..., (but) also... 2. so + adj.位于句首 3. 否定词位于句首 4. only + 状语位于句首 Polishing(锤炼句式3 - 部分倒装） So crucial is maintaning ecological balance for human beings that we need to live in harmony with nature Step 5 Many marine animals are dying out during the past decades. Our environment has been greatly damaged in the past few centuries. 04 The past decades has witnessed that many marine animals are dying out. 时间 + has witnessed that... Polishing(锤炼句式4 - 巧用witness） The past few centuries has witnessed that our environment has been greatly damaged. Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 In the last few decades, our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has caused both rising sea level and extreme weather. These are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming more and more urgent. To protect our environment, we should work together. Firstly, as students, we can design some posters to raise people's understanding of environmental protection. Secondly, companies should never pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is important for keeping the the ecological balance. Thirdly, our government should also make some rules to ban any illegal behaviors. It's high time that we tried our best to protect our planet from being further polluted. Remember that we can live a happier and healthier life by protecting our environment! 19 In the last few decades, our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has caused both rising sea level and extreme weather. These are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming more and more urgent. Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 要点一：环境现状 The last few decades has witnessed that... led to/ brought about/ accounted for which ， increasingly 20 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 To protect our environment, we should work together. Firstly, as students, we can design some posters to raise people's understanding of environmental protection. Secondly, companies should never pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is important for keeping the the ecological balance. Thirdly, our government should also make some rules to ban any illegal behaviors. We should make joint efforts so as to protect our environment. 要点二：具体措施 never should companies pour if of great significance enhance people's awareness maintaining lay down by no means should companies pour 21 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 It's high time that we tried our best to protect our planet from being further polluted. Remember that we can live a happier and healthier life by protecting our environment! went to our lengths Bear in mind only by protecting our environment, can we live a happier and healthier life! 要点三：发出倡议 22 Polishing(润色定稿） Step 5 The last few decades has witnessed that our earth has been severely polluted. Global warming has brought about both rising sea level and extreme weather, which are warning us that protecting the environment is becoming increasingly urgent. We should make joint efforts so as to protect our environment. In the first place, as students, we can design some posters to enhance people's awareness of environmental protection. Additionally, by no means should companies pour polluted water into the ocean because ocean is of great significance for maintaining the the ecological balance. Aside from that, our government should also lay down relevant laws to ban any illegal behaviors. It's high time that we went to our lengths to protect our planet from being further polluted. Bear in mind that only by protecting our environment, can we live a happier and healthier life! 23 Summary 1. 词汇： get worse and worse make some laws improve people's understanding of... remember keep ecological balance try one's best to...2. 句式：（1）with复合结构: （2）定语从句 （3）部分倒装: （4）时间 + has witnessed that... get increasingly bad lay down relevant laws enhance people's awareness of... bear in mind maintain ecological balance spare no effort to... go to one's lengths to... 形式美：字体清晰工整、卷面整洁美观、段落层 次分明。 内容美：避免低级错误，语言词汇、句型结构的 准确性、合理性、丰富性和多样性。 逻辑美：使用恰当的连接词，能使文章上下衔接 自然、条理清晰。 Summary 高考作文高分卷的特点 Homework (2022高考真题) 你校将以六月八日海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1. 海洋的重要性； 2. 保护海洋的倡议；注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Thank you! $$