内容正文:
倡议信
Lead-in:
Giant panda
South China tiger
Blue whale
Polar bear
African elephant
Golden monkey
What do they have in common?
They are endangered animals.
They are killed or hunted without mercy.
Their habitats are destroyed.
They can't adjust themselves to the changed environment.
They don't have enough food.
People didn't take the useful measures to protect them.
Why are they in danger of
disappearing?
What can we do to protect them ?
promote the wildlife (保护) and (栖息地).
the (法律) and (法规) should be (发行).
put up some posters that write the importance of
(野生动物).
(拒绝) to buy the
(产品)made by wild animals.
(惩罚) strictly the person who (杀害)the wild animals.
be (友好的) to the
(环境)that we are living now.
protection
habitats
laws
published
regulations
wild animals
products
refuse
punish
killed
friendly
environment
Help!
再次强调,引出呼吁
开篇点题,交代清楚背景和原因,引出倡议的目的
开篇
正文
列举倡议的具体内容或要求
结尾
倡议书
why
a call to action
how
开篇Para. 1 交代背景和原因,引出倡议的目的
我是李华,一名新华中学的学生。
I am Li Hua, a student
of Xinhua Middle School.
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我写信呼吁所有学生保护野生动物。
I’m writing to call on/appeal to all the students to protect the wild animals.
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开篇Para. 1 交代背景和原因,引出倡议的目的
如今,随着社会的发展,野生动物的数量正在迅速减少
Nowadays, with the development of society,the number of wild animals is decreasing quickly.
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我们有必要保护野生动物。(It is...to do造句)
It is necessary for us to protect the wild animals.
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正文Para. 2 列举倡议的具体内容或要求
为了保护野生动物,我们应该采取一系列措施。(仿写)
_________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
With the aim of protecting living environment, we are supposed to hold a series of activities.
为了保护生活环境,我们应该举办一系列活动。
With the aim of protecting wild animals,we are supposed to carry out a series of measures.
正文Para. 2 列举倡议的具体内容或要求
Firstly,people should stop hunting wild animals.
用以下句式改写句子
It is suggested that... We advocate that... It is vital for sb. to do...
据建议 我们主张 对某人来说做某事至关重要
Firstly,It is suggested that/We advocate that people should stop hunting wild animals.
Firstly,It is vital for people to stop hunting wild animals.
正文Para. 2 列举倡议的具体内容或要求
Secondly, people should stop destroying the habitats of wild animals.
用以下句式改写句子
It is suggested that... We advocate that... It is vital for sb. to do...
据建议 我们主张 对某人来说做某事至关重要
Secondly,It is suggested that/We advocate that people should stop destroying the habitats of wild animals.
Secondly,It is vital for people to stop destroying the habitats of wild animals.
正文Para. 2 列举倡议的具体内容或要求
1.Lastly, a nature reserve is the shelter of animals.
2. A nature reserve should be set up to place animals under national protection.
Lastly, a nature reserve is the shelter of animals,which should be set up to place them under national protection.
用which定语从句改写
结尾Para. 3 再次强调,引出呼吁
结尾Para. 3 再次强调,引出呼吁
All in all, it is high time that___________________________ ___________________________ (devote oneself to)
总而言之,现在是我们致力于保护野生动物的时候了。
protecting wild animals.
we devoted ourselves to
____________________________________________(to开头)
保护野生动物就是保护我们自己。
To protect wild animals is to protect ourselves
结尾Para. 3 再次强调,引出呼吁
Let’s take action now!
假如你是学生会主席李华,因为现在很多野生动物生存面临越来越多的问题,请你给China Daily投稿一封倡议信,内容包括:
1、现状说明
2、具体措施
3、发出倡议
注意:1.词数80词左右。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am ______,__________________(身份). I am writing this letter to call on ____________(写信目的). Nowadays, ____________________ (描述现状分析). It is necessary for us to ____________________________(做某事).
With the aim of _________(目的),________________________(措施). First of all,_______________________. In addition,___________________. Last but not least,_______________________________.(具体采取的行动).
All in all, it is high time that _____________________________(做某事). ________________________________(意义). Let’s take action now!
Yours,
XXX
作文评分
四档
16-20分
“分不在高,16就行”
五档
21-25分
“太难了,差一点就满分了”
二档
6-10分
“ 楼上也只能低调了”
三档
11-15分
“我稍微一出手就是他们的极限”
1-5分
“低调低调”
一档
第一档:(1~5分) 未完成任务,遗漏主要内容,写了无关内容,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
第二档:(6~10分) 未恰当完成任务,语法结构单调、词汇项目有限,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解,较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
第三档(11~15分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务,虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容,有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解,简单的语句间的连接成分基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(16~20分) 完全完成了任务,虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
第五档:(21~25分) 完全完成了任务,覆盖所有内容要点,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,具备较强的语言运用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua,chairman of the Student Union. I'm writing to call on/appeal to all the students to protect the wild animals. Nowadays, with the development of society,the number of wild animals is decreasing quickly and some of them are in danger of dying out. It is necessary for us to protect the wild animals.
With the aim of protecting wild animals,we are supposed to carry out a series of measures. First of all,the government should make laws to stop hunting them and destroying their habitats. In addition,measures should be taken to stop pollution. What's more, we can educate people around us to raise their awareness of wildlife protection.Last but not least,a nature reserve is the shelter of animals,which should be set up to place them under national protection.
All in all, it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting wild animals. To protect wild animals is to protect ourselves. Let’s take action now!
Yours,
Li Hua
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