内容正文:
贵州英语
话题七 志愿服务(贵阳2018)
【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年中考:2018年贵阳卷要求写一封当志愿者的自荐信以及志愿工作的意义。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①自己参加的志愿活动经历;②对志愿活动的看法和建议。
【教材单元链接】
人教版
八下Unit2志愿服务与慈善 八下Unit5难忘的事情
!"# $%&'
短语与搭配
1.careabout关心
2.carefor/lookafter/takecareof照顾
3.volunteertodosth.自愿做某事
4.invitesb.todosth.邀请某人做某事
5.raisemoney筹钱
6.helppeopleinneed帮助处于困境中的人
7.cleanupthecityparks打扫城市公园
8.gototheoldpeopleshome去养老院
9.visitthesickkids看望生病的孩子们
10.handout/giveout分发
11.putupsigns/notices张贴标志/通知
12.communicatewithsb.和某人交流
13.afeelingofsatisfaction满足感
14.calup打电话给(某人);征召
15.foodbank食物救济处
16.giveaway捐赠
17.expressthanksto爥 对……表达感谢
18.bethankfultosb.感激某人
19.bekindto对……友善
20.makeadiference有影响;起作用
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
开头句
1.ThevolunteersinourschoolwenttotheOld
PeoplesHomeonMarch5th.
2.Letmetelyousomethingaboutthelifeasa
volunteerduringthesedays.
3.★Inmodernsociety,itisincreasinglypopular
thatyoungpeoplevolunteeronweekendstohelp
thepeopleinneed.
4.★Im makingsomeplanstoworkinanold
peopleshomeasavolunteerthissummer.Iam
goingtoreadthenewspapertotheoldpeople,
orjusttalktothem.[人教八(下)U2P10改编]
中间句
志愿活动的内容
1.Webroughtsomefruittotheoldpeople.
2.Wechatedwiththemandsangforthem.
3.Afterthat,wecleanedthewindowsandswept
thefloorforthem.
4.Wecanraisemoneyforthoseinneed.Wecan
alsohelptakecareoftheelderlyandchildren.
5.Wewilgotothelibraryeveryweekend.Wecan
helpreadersfindbooksandwecanalsohelpthe
librarianstokeepbooksinorder.
6.Ijoinedagrouptohelpneighborsthrowouttheir
rubbish.Everymorning,Ineededtogetupvery
earlyandcolectrubbishfromdoortodoor.
7.★Inotonlyprovidedwaterfortheseathletes,
butalsocheeredforthem.
8.★Itshardwork,butIwantto
learnmore
52
众相原创 赋能中考
abouthowtocareforanimals.[人教八(下)
U2P11]
9.★Igetsuchastrongfeelingofsatisfaction
whenIseetheanimalsgetbeterandthelookof
joyontheirownersfaces.[人教八(下)U2
P11]
对志愿服务的看法和建议
1.Somestudentsthinktheyhavetoomuchschool
work.Asaresult,theycanhardlyhavetimefor
volunteeractivities.Othersshow nointerest
init.
2.Doingvolunteeractivitiesisverymeaningful.
Throughvolunteeractivities,wecanhelpmore
peopleinneed.
3.★Also,itsgoodforustolearntogetalong
withothers.Moreover,wewilbecomehappier
andmoreconfident.
4.★Ithinkhelpingothersisalwaysgood.Ifmore
andmorepeopletakepartinvolunteering
activities,thesocietywilbefuloflove.
5.★Forusteenagers,Ithinkitsagoodideato
joinsomecharities.Andweshouldkeepabalance
betweenschoolworkandvolunteeractivities.
结尾句
1.Inaword,Ihopeeveryonecantakeanactive
partinhelpingothers.Letstakeactionnow.
2.★Volunteeringishardwork,butitalsoofers
uschancestoexperiencethesociallifeand
developourabilitiesandskils.Letsvolunteer
together!
使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下
列句子
1.Hetookpartinthevolunteeractivitylastweek.
Helearnedalotfromit.(用asaresult升格句
子)
2.Inmyopinion,beingvolunteersisrealymean
ingful.(用becauseit爥 notonly爥 butalso爥 扩
写句子,说明成为志愿者有意义的原因)
3.Theexperienceasavolunteermademefeel
tired.(用but扩写句子,说明志愿经历带给我
的积极感受)
4.Volunteeringgivesusachance.Volunteering
changessomeoneslife.(用todo不定式升格句
子)
5.Donatingclothestocharityisagoodidea
becauseitcanhelppeopleinneed.(用 Itsa
goodideato爥升格句子)
("# )*+,
“青少年志愿者”意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精神,学校正在举行主题为“帮助别
人,成长自己”的征文活动。请以“DoingVolunteerWorkMakesMe ”为题,结合自身经历,
写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿至校刊专栏。
要求:1.补全标题;
2.短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息;
3.重点谈谈你参加志愿活动的经历和感受;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
62
贵州英语
DoingVolunteerWorkMakesMe
一、细审题
1.补全标题:用“Happy”“Confident”“Independent”等形容词体现志愿活动带给自己的改变;
2.文体:讲述一次志愿活动的经历,是一篇 ;
3.人称:主要使用第 人称;
4.时态:讲述发生过的事情应用 。
二、搭框架、写要点
DoingVolunteerWorkMakesMeHappy
开头:引出话题
毕业 graduatefrom 在过去的三年里 inthe
很多志愿活动 manyvolunteeractivities
这是我最特别的志愿经历之一。Hereis voluntaryexperiences.
中间:详细介绍志愿活动
①时间:inGrade8
②人物:我和同学们一起参加了一个志愿活动。
I avoluntaryprojectwithmyclassmates.
③志愿活动的内容以及你做了什么事情:
为贫困地区的儿童筹集一些必要的东西 raise forchildreninpoorareas
我分发了传单。I leaflets.
呼吁更多的人关心贫穷的孩子 calonmorepeople poorchildren
有一个更光明的未来 havea
结尾:本次活动的感受
我们很累但是很开心。Weweretired .
我们做了一些有意义的事情。Wedid .
特殊的经历specialexperience
一种强烈的成就感 astrong
72
众相原创 赋能中考
三、遣词造句,连句成文
DoingVolunteerWorkMakesMeHappy
① Howtimeflies! SoonIwilgraduatefromthisschool.Inthepastthreeyears,wehavehad
manyvoluntaryactivitiesinschool.Hereisoneofmymostspecialvoluntaryexperiences.
ItookpartinavoluntaryprojectwithmyclassmateswhenwewereinGrade8.Thepurposeofthe
projectwastoraisesomethingnecessaryforchildreninpoorareas,suchaswarmclothesandnotebooks.
② Onthatday,Igaveoutleafletstocalonmorepeopletocareaboutpoorchildrensothatthey
couldhaveabrighterfuture.
Weweretiredbuthappybecausewedidsomethingmeaningful.③ Itwasthespecialexperience
thatgavemeastrongfeelingofachievement.
点评:①处使用谚语,提醒我们平时应积累一些简短实用的谚语给文章增彩;②处用 sothat引导的
目的状语从句;③处用强调句:Itwas+被强调部分+that从句。
-"# ./01
某国际学校正在向学生征集暑期社会实践方案。假设你是该学校的学生李明,请你从以下两个
实践项目VisitChildrensHome(探访儿童福利院)和CareforCityCleaners(关爱城市环卫工人)之中
选择一个,向负责人Mr.Miler介绍你的设计方案,并说明理由。
Project:VisitChildrensHome
◆Place:TheChildrensHome
◆Thingstoprepare:
◆Activities:
Project:CareforCityCleaners
◆Place:CentralPark
◆Thingstoprepare:
◆Activities:
要求:1.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
2.重点介绍方案中的活动事项以及做这些活动的理由;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
82
众相原创 赋能中考
2.Havingfriendsiscoolbecausewecanhavefunandshare
secretswiththem.
3.Thereisnodoubtthatitisimportanttotreatfriendswith
kindnessandrespect.
4.Togetalongwithfriends,Ithinkyoushouldlistentowhat
theysaypatiently.
5.Wheneveryourfriendsareintrouble,youshouldbeready
tohelpthem.
二阶 典例探究
一、2.记叙文 3.一 4.一般过去时
二、learnnewthingsbeter morecolorful Chineseculture
withthreeotherstudents wantto diferentideasand
skils Manyhandsmakelightwork. learnwithfun
communicationskils
三阶 写作实战
AnUnforgetableTalk
Ihavequiteafewunforgetabletalksandthemostunfor
getableonewasbetweenmygrandfatherandme.
Oneevening,mygrandfatherstartedaconversationto
sharehislifelessonsashewasmovingtoanothercity.We
discusseddiferentkindsoftopics,fromtheimportanceof
educationtothevalueoffamily.Herecaledhisyounger
days,thechalengeshefaced,andtheachievementshe
achieved.Hiswordswerefulofwisdom,encouragingmeto
facelifewithcourage.
Forme,thistalkwasmorethanjustanexchangeof
words.Itwasavaluablemomentthattaughtmealotabout
beingsmartandmakinggoodchoices.Itmademerespect
andlovehimevenmore.Hiswordsalwaystaywithmeand
helpmedecidewhattodo.Ikeepthinkingaboutourtalkand
howtobewiselikehim.
话题七 志愿服务
一阶 素材积累
1.Hetookpartinthevolunteeractivitylastweek.Asa
result,helearnedalotfromit.
2.Inmyopinion,beingvolunteersisrealymeaningful
becauseitcannotonlyhelpothersbutalsobringushappi
ness.
3.Theexperienceasavolunteermademefeeltired,butit
alsomademebeproudofmyself.
4.Volunteeringgivesusachancetochangesomeoneslife.
5.Itsagoodideatodonateclothestocharitybecauseitcan
helppeopleinneed.
二阶 典例探究
一、2.记叙文 3.一 4.一般过去时
二、pastthreeyears oneofmymostspecial tookpartin
somethingnecessary gaveout tocareabout brighter
future buthappy somethingmeaningful
feelingofachievement
三阶 写作实战
DearMr.Miler,
ImLiMing.Imhappytohavethechancetointroduce
myplanfortheproject:VisitChildrensHome.
IntheChildrensHome,welseemanychildrenwho
losttheirfamily.SoIthinkitsimportanttoshowourloveto
thosekidsthroughthisproject.Togetreadyforthisvisit,we
canpreparesomepresentsforthem,suchastoys,booksand
clothes.Imsurethesepresentswilsurprisethemalot.
Asforwhatwecandoduringourvisit,Ivegotaplan.
First,welgivesomeperformancestothechildren.Wecan
singsongsanddance,whichwilmakethemhappy.Then,
wecanplaygamestogether.Throughgames,welknoweach
otherbeteranddevelopfriendshipswiththesechildren.At
last,welenjoydeliciousfood,suchasdiferentkindsof
cakesandfruits.
Imsurethesechildrenwilfeelthewarmththroughthis
project.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
话题八 文化习俗、节假日与庆祝活动
一阶 素材积累
1.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival,whichusualy
falsinJanuaryorFebruary.
2.ThereasonwhyIlovedumplingsbestisthattheymean
goodluckandwealth.
3.Thedumplingsaremadeofmeatandvegetables.
4.Itsthetimethatwevisitourrelativesandfriendstogive
thembestwishes.
5.TheexperienceremindsmethatIshouldspendmoretime
withmyparentsandfriends.
二阶 典例探究
一、2.记叙文 3.一 4.
一般现在时
41