10 Unit6书面表达10篇-2024-2025学年英语八年级上册单元冲刺满分题型训练(人教版)

10 Unit6书面表达10篇 解析版 1．假如你们学校校报正在就“同学们的未来职业”进行主题征文，你对自己的未来是如何打算的呢？请根据表格中的要点提示，以“My Dream Job”为题，写一篇英语短文去投稿。可适当发挥，词数80—120。 Dream job I want to be a / an... Abilities I’m good at... / I do well in... Reasons makes me feel... / I enjoy... Ways I plan / want / expect to / I’m going to... My Dream Job ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Dream Job I want to be a doctor in the future. I’m good at biology and I have a strong interest in medical knowledge. I enjoy helping others and making them healthy. To achieve this goal, I plan to study hard in school and get good grades. I will also read a lot of medical books and attend some medical lectures. I believe that with my efforts, I can become a good doctor and contribute to the health of society. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的。点出未来的工作； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“能力、原因、方式”等角度具体描述； 第三步，书写结语。表明自己的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①have a strong interest in对……有浓厚的兴趣 ②with my efforts在我的努力下 [高分句型] To achieve this goal, I plan to study hard in school and get good grades. (动词不定式作目的状语) 2．最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇80词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。 组员 理想职业 原因 Mary 时装设计师 （fashion designer） 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画 Kate 园艺工 （gardener） 喜爱植物，想让城市更美 Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物 你 ……… Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ dream jobs.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future. 【答案】例文 Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ dream jobs. Here are the results of our group. Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate’s dream job is to be a gardener. She loves plants and wants to make the city more beautiful. Tom would like to be a cook so that he can cook healthy and delicious food for others. As for me, I want to be a teacher. I think teaching is a great job because I can help students learn and grow. I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，引出下文调查结果； 第二步，根据表格提示具体叙述大家的理想职业； 第三步，最后表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ① want to be想成为 ② as for至于 ③ help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing.（原因状语从句） ②Tom would like to be a cook so that he can cook healthy and delicious food for others.（目的状语从句） 3．你觉得你将来的工作以及工作环境会是什么样的，请以“My Dream Job”为题发挥想象写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 My Dream Job ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Job Everyone has a dream job, and so do I. I have always dreamed of becoming a doctor in the future. I think a doctor is a very noble profession. They can save people’s lives and help them get rid of pain and illness. I want to be a doctor who can make a difference in people’s lives and bring hope to those in need. In my imagination, I will work in a big hospital with advanced equipment and a team of excellent doctors. I will wear a white coat and work diligently to diagnose and treat patients. I will listen to their concerns and try my best to provide the best medical care. To achieve my dream, I know I need to study hard and acquire a lot of knowledge. I will focus on my studies in science and medicine, and I will also develop good communication and problem-solving skills. I believe that with perseverance and hard work, I can realize my dream. In addition, I hope to create a warm and friendly working environment. I will treat my patients with kindness and respect, and I will also work well with my colleagues to provide the best service. I am looking forward to the day when I can become a doctor and fulfill my dream. I will do my best to make it come true. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的梦想； 第二步，介绍自己理想的工作地方及如何实现梦想； 第三步，总结全文，尽全力实现自己的梦想 [亮点词汇] ①get rid of摆脱 ②make a difference有影响 ③try sb’s best to do sth尽某人最大的努力做某事 [高分句型] ①To achieve my dream, I know I need to study hard and acquire a lot of knowledge. (to do 表目的) ②I believe that with perseverance and hard work, I can realize my dream. (宾语从句) 4．青春，是心里有火，眼里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你对未来职业的憧憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an…”为题写一篇短文。词数: 80—100 (已给出的部分不计入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 What is your dream job? Where are you going to work? Which motto (座右铭) encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/an… I have a dream. I want to be_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to be a teacher I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the middle school where I studied. The motto encourages me most is “Teachers’ biggest happiness is to see the children grow up!” I think teachers are very important people in our life. They teach us knowledge. They help us with our study. They give us confidence. If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting. To be a teacher, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. I won’t give up my dream. I think it will come true soon. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：要求以“I want to be a/an..”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍理想的工作是什么，以及在哪里工作； 第二步，介绍喜欢的座右铭以及喜欢工作的原因； 第三步，介绍怎样才能得到理想的工作。 [亮点词汇] ①help...with...在某方面帮助 ②give sb sth给某人某物 ③work hard努力工作 [高分句型] ①I think teachers are very important people in our life.（宾语从句） ②If I’m a teacher, I’ll be very kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons interesting.（条件状语从句） 5．根据下列表格内容写一篇作文，开头已经给出。 Who What How Tina a computer programmer study computer science Larry a professional basketball player practice basketball every day / an engineer study math really hard / an actor take acting lessons Some students are talking about their dream jobs. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Some students are talking about their dream jobs. Tina wants to be a computer programmer when she grows up. And she is going to study computer science. Larry likes sports and he wants to be a professional basketball player. He is going to practice basketball every day. Another student wants to be an engineer and he is going to study math really hard. And the last student wants to be an actor. He is going to take acting lessons. I think we should study hard. Only in this way can we realise our dreams. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏表格中信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引入话题，要介绍的是同学们理想的工作；   第二步，具体介绍不同同学理想的工作； 第三步，表达只有通过努力，才能实现梦想。 [亮点词汇]   ①want to be想成为 ②another另，又 ③realise实现 [高分句型]   ①Tina wants to be a computer programmer when she grows up.（状语从句）   ②Only in this way can we realise our dreams.（部分倒装） 6．根据以下表格内容，用第三人称写一篇小作文，介绍Mary。 Past Now Future live in a house in the country live in an apartment across the street from here live on a space station take the train to school work near here fly rockets to the moon be a computer programmer be an astronaut ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In the past, Mary lived in a house in the country. She took the train to school. Now, Mary lives in an apartment across the street from here and she works near here. She is a computer programmer. In the future, Mary will live on a space station. She will fly rockets to the moon. She will be an astronaut. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇小作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Mary过去的生活； 第二步，介绍Mary现在的生活和工作情况； 第三步，介绍Mary未来的生活和工作情况。 [亮点词汇] ①live in住在 ②across穿过，在……对面 ③In the future在未来 [高分句型] ①Now, Mary lives in an apartment across the street from here and she works near here.（and连接并列句） 7．假如你叫王平，你的好朋友李明写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。 要求：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。 参考词汇：subject, science, question, keep on Dear Li Ming, I’m glad to know that you are going to be a scientist when you grow up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope your dream will come true. Yours, Wang Ping 【答案】例文： Dear Li Ming, I’m glad to know that you are going to be a scientist when you grow up. Though there are different ways to success, almost all the winners have something in common. Here is some advice about how to make your dream come true. First, you should listen to your teachers carefully in class. It may help you be good at your lessons. Second, try to do well in all your subjects, especially science. In your free time, you need to keep on reading some science books. Finally, don’t feel shy to ask for help from others. Remember: Just make sure you try your best. Then you can get anything you want! I hope your dream will come true. Yours, Wang Ping 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍怎样实现梦想，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出介绍实现梦想的建议； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“认真听讲、擅长科目学习、用于寻求帮助”等几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语，希望梦想实现。 [亮点词汇] ①grow up 长大 ②have something in common 有一些共同之处 ③in your free time 在你空闲的时候 ④come true 实现 [高分句型] Here is some advice about how to make your dream come true.(宾语从句的省略) 8．用英语调查朋友的人生理想和人生规划，并做一个简单的报道。 A: What do you want to be when you grow up? B: I want to be an/ a ... A: How are you going to do that? B: I’m going to ... Name What Where How Li Hua wants to be a singer is going to work in Shanghai is going to take singing lessons Hello, everyone! These are my friends’ plans for the future. Li Hua wants to be a singer and he is going to work in Shanghai. And he is going to take singing lessons to do that. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hello, everyone! These are my friends’ plans for the future. Li Hua wants to be a singer and he is going to work in Shanghai. And he is going to take singing lessons to do that. Xiao Ming wants to be a writer and he is going to work in Shenzhen. And he is going to read more books to do that. Kitty wants to be a dancer and she is going to work in Beijing. And she is going to take dancing lessons to do that. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，开头引出本文主题；   第二步，分别介绍朋友的计划。   [亮点词汇]   ①want to be想要成为 ②take singing lessons上唱歌课     [高分句型]   ①Kitty wants to be a dancer and she is going to work in Beijing.（动词不定式作宾语）   9．假设你是何奇，你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。 提示： 1.Get excellent grades； 2.Focus on (专注于) science classes； 3.Improve the physical health. 要求： 1.要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Li Hua, I’ve decided to be a doctor when I grow up. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ What are you going to do in the future? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, He Qi 【答案】例文 Dear Li Hua, I’ve decided to be a doctor when I grow up. It’s not easy to become a doctor, so I made a plan for it. Firstly, to get into the best college or medical school, I need to get excellent grades. So I’m going to work harder to get better grades. Secondly, I’m going to focus on science classes because science is important for doctors. Thirdly, I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health. Most doctors work long hours, and it’s bad for their health. All in all, I’m going to do my best to make my dream come true. What are you going to do in the future? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, He Qi 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主；注意段落布局和恰当使用复合句和连接词，以增加得分点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍自己的梦想是什么； 第二步，具体阐述自己会如何实现梦想； 第三步，最后表明自己的决心，并询问对方的梦想。 [亮点词汇] ①focus on专注 ②be bad for对……有害处 ③do one’s best to do努力做某事 [高分句型] ①Firstly, to get into the best college or medical school, I need to get excellent grades.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Secondly, I’m going to focus on science classes because science is important for doctors.（原因状语从句） 10．同学们，八年级的学习生涯已过半，你想过自己的未来吗？打算过未来自己的职业吗？假如你是李华，你的好朋友Ken为未来选择当科学家还是当钢琴家而烦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，告诉他如何选择。 要点如下：1.科学家没有假期；…… 2.当钢琴家会让生活更精彩；…… 注意: 1.词数不少于 70； 2. 适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Ken, I’m very happy to tell my ideas about how to choose your future job. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Ken, I’m very happy to tell my ideas about how to choose your future job. For me, a scientist is usually very busy and has few holidays. If you become a scientist in the future, you’ll have little time with your family. But if you are a scientist when you grow up, you can make more money and help more people. If you can be a pianist in the future, your life will be wonderful. And your life will be full of beautiful and relaxing things. At the same time, you can spend your holidays with your family happily. You can also bring beautiful music everywhere you go. I think you can choose one for yourself. I hope my advice is useful to you and that it can help you a lot. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，给出建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①in the future将来 ②grow up长大 ③be full of充满 ④at the same time同时 [高分句型] ①If you become a scientist in the future, you’ll have little time with your family. (if引导条件状语从句) ②I think you can choose one for yourself. (省略引导词that的宾语从句) ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$学科网 学种网票创，让学日更容易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 10Unit6书面表达10篇原卷版 1.假如你们学校校报正在就“同学们的未来职业”进行主题征文，你对自己的未来是如何打算的呢？ 请根据表格中的要点提示，以MyDr心am Job”为题，写一篇英语短文去投稿。可适当发挥，词数80120。 Dream job I want to be a /an... Abilities I'm good at../I do well in... Reasons makes me feel.../I enjoy... Ways I plan /want expect to /I'm going to... My Dream Job 2.最近，你班就“你的理想职业”展开了一次调查。下表是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容写一篇 80词左右的英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。 组员 理想职业 原因 Mary 时装设计师 (fashion designer 喜欢漂亮衣服，擅长绘画 Kate 园艺工 (gardener) 喜爱植物，想让城市更美 Tom 厨师 为别人煮健康美味的食物 你 …… Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students'dream jobs. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究 1 学科网 学种闪票创，让学司更容易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 I hope everyone can realize their dreams in the future. 3.你觉得你将来的工作以及工作环境会是什么样的，请以“My Dream Job"为题发挥想象写一篇不少 于80词的英语短文。 My Dream Job 4.青春，是心里有火，跟里有光，我们这一代人的想象力，不足以想象你们的未来！青春路上，你 对未来职业的幢憬是什么？请你以“I want to be a/an.”为题写一篇短文。词数：80-100（已给出的部分不计 入总词数)，可适当发挥。 提纲 What is your dream job? ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 2 学科网 学种网票创，让学司更容易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 Where are you going to work? Which motto(座右铭)encourages you most? Why do you like this job? How will you get your future dream job? I want to be a/an... have a dream. want to be 5.根据下列表格内容写一篇作文，开头己经给出。 Who What How Tina a computer programmer study computer science Larry a professional basketball player practice basketball every day an engineer study math really hard an actor take acting lessons Some students are talking about their dream jobs. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 3 学科网 学种网需创，让学贝更容易！ .cO JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 6.根据以下表格内容，用第三人称写一篇小作文，介绍ay。 Past Now Future live in a house in the country live in an apartment across the street from here live on a space station take the train to school work near here fly rockets to the moon be a computer programmer be an astronaut 7.假如你叫王平，你的好朋友李明写信告诉你说他热爱科学，梦想成为一名科学家，但他不知道该 怎么做才能实现自己的梦想。请你给他回一封信，提出你的一些建议。 要求：1词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信总。 参考词汇：subject,.science,question,keep on Dear Li Ming, I'm glad to know that you are going to be a scientist when you grow up. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 学科网 学种网票创，让学司更容易！ .cO JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 I hope your dream will come true. Yours, Wang Ping 8.用英语调查朋友的人生理想和人生规划，并做一个简单的报道。 A:What do you want to be when you grow up? B:I want to be an/a... A:How are you going to do that? B:I'm going to Name What Where How LiHua wants to be a singer is going to work in Shanghai is going to take singing lessons Hello,everyone!These are my friends'plans for the future.Li Hua wants to be a singer and he is going to work in Shanghai.And he is going to take singing lessons to do that. 9.假设你是何奇，你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如 何实现自己的梦想。 ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 学科网 学种闪票创，让学司更容易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 提示： 1.Get excellent grades; 2.Focus on(专注于)science classes: 3.Improve the physical health. 要求： 1要点齐全，可适当发挥： 280词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Li Hua, I've decided to be a doctor when I grow up. What are you going to do in the future?I'm looking forward to your reply Yours, He Qi 10.同学们，八年级的学习生涯已过半，你想过自己的未米吗？打算过未来自己的职业吗？假如你是 李华，你的好朋友Kn为未来选择当科学家还是当钢琴家而烦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，告诉他如何选择。 要点如下：1.科学家没有假期：. 2.当钢琴家会让生活更精彩； 注意：1.词数不少于70： 2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Ken. I'm very happy to tell my ideas about how to choose your future job. ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 6 6学科网 学种网需创，让字司更容易！ JP.ZXXK.COM 学科网精品频道全力推荐 Yours, LiHua ⊙⊙原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究： 7