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10 Unit3书面表达10篇 解析版
1.假如你是Lucy,刚刚收到一封来自英国笔友 Ella的电子邮件。请你阅读电子邮件内容后写一封回信,回答她向你提出的问题。
Dear Lucy,
How are you? I am from the UK. I want to know about your school life. So what’s your school like? What do you learn at school? What is your favourite subject and why do you like it? Please let me know.
Love,
Ella
要求:(1) 语言表达准确,语句通顺,可以适当发挥。
(2) 60~80词,开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
Dear Ella,
How are you? Let me tell you about my school life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What fun things do you do at school? Please write to me soon.
Love,
Lucy
【答案】例文
Dear Ella,
How are you? Let me tell you about my school life. My school is big and beautiful with modern facilities. We learn various subjects like math, science, English, and history. My favourite subject is English because I enjoy reading stories and learning about different cultures. The teachers are friendly and helpful, and I have many friends to study and play with. What fun things do you do at school? Please write to me soon.
Love,
Lucy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据Ella的邮件内容,回答她的问题,介绍自己的学校生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学校的基本情况;
第二步,介绍学习的科目,并说明自己最喜欢的科目和原因;
第三步,描述学校的老师和同学。
[亮点词汇]
①modern facilities现代化设施
②various subjects各种科目
③enjoy reading喜欢阅读
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because I enjoy reading stories and learning about different cultures. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2.请根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作,所给提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的学校名称和姓名。
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友 Jim 发邮件请你介绍你的中学学校。请你回信,内容包括:你的校园里有什么设施,你最喜欢校园的哪个部分,以及你为什么喜欢它。
提示词语:playground, library, fun, feel great
提示问题:
● What are there in your junior high school?
● What is your favourite place in the school?
● Why do you like this place?
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to hear from you. I’d like to introduce my junior high school to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I am so happy to hear from you. I’d like to introduce my junior high school to you. There is a big playground where we can play sports and have fun. There is also a library full of different kinds of books. My favourite place in the school is the playground. Because when I run and play there, and I can feel great and relaxed. It is a place full of energy and laughter.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头表达收到来信的高兴心情,表明要介绍学校。
第二步,具体阐述。介绍学校有大操场可以运动娱乐,还有图书馆;说明最喜欢操场,描述在操场运动的感受。
第三步,书写结语。期待对方回信并送上美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的来信
②introduce…to…把……介绍给……
③have fun玩得开心
④full of充满
[高分句型]
There is a big playground where we can play sports and have fun.(定语从句)
3.假如你是李华,你的英国网友David正在准备一份报告,主题为Schools in China,从未到过中国的他想要向你寻求帮助。进入初中半学期的你对自己的学校也有所了解。现在请你写一封邮件向David介绍你的学校。
注意:
1.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.词数不少于70字(已给出的文章开头和结尾,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear David,
I am happy to share something about my school with you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
I am happy to share something about my school with you.
My school is really beautiful. There are many classroom buildings, a gym and a sports field. My favourite place is the gym. I often play tennis there. We also have different after-school activities. I’m in the Tennis Club. We have a field trip each term as well. It’s interesting. My teachers and classmates are both kind and friendly. They help me a lot. I’m happy to be a student here.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接上文,点题,引出下文对学校的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“学校设施、活动、老师和同学”等方面进行介绍,并表达对学校的感受;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite最喜欢的
②as well也
③friendly友好的
[高分句型]
There are many classroom buildings, a gym and a sports field.(there be句型)
4.请根据以下提示,以“My School”为题,写一篇短文介绍你的学校。
提示:
1. 学校的位置;
2. 学校的设施(教学楼、图书馆、体育馆等);
3. 你对学校的感受。
要求:
4. 语句通顺,语法正确;
5. 不少于 60 词。
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【答案】例文
My School
My school is in a beautiful place. It is not far from my home. There are many facilities in my school. The teaching building is very tall and there are many classrooms in it. We have classes there every day. Next to the teaching building is the library. There are a large number of books in it. I like reading books in the library. Behind the library is the sports hall. We often play sports there.
I love my school very much. It is a place where I can learn and grow happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中学校信息的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总的介绍学校;
第二步,具体介绍学校的位置,学校设施的情况;
第三步,总结全文,表达自己对学校的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be far from离……远
②next to靠近
③a large number of大量的
④play sports做运动
[高分句型]
①There are many facilities in my school. (There be句型)
②It is a place where I can learn and grow happily. (定语从句)
5.学校近期将举行一次最美班级的评比活动,假如你是 Tina,下图是你们班教室的照片,请你写一篇短文参加此次活动,描述自己的教室,并谈论感受。
参考词汇: clock, blackboard, computer, teacher’s desk, bookcase, basketball, ruler, books, pencil box, key, water bottle
要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Hi, I’m Tina! This is my classroom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文:
Hi, I’m Tina! This is my classroom. There is a big blackboard at the front where our teacher writes important notes. Above it is a clock that helps us keep track of time. On the teacher’s desk, there is a computer which is used for presentations. We also have a bookcase full of interesting books, and a basketball on top for sports. My desk has a pencil box, a ruler, and my water bottle. I feel happy and inspired studying here because everything is organized and it helps us learn effectively.
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于看图作文;
②时态:采用“一般现在时”
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,句子衔接自然,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,详细阐述自己的教室,
第二步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①keep track of跟踪
②be used for被用于
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①I feel happy and inspired studying here because everything is organized and it helps us learn effectively. (原因状语从句)
②On the teacher’s desk, there is a computer which is used for presentations.(定语从句)
6.假如你是Sandy,是一名七年级新同学,请根据下面的思维导图写一篇题为“My new school”的短文。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,表达完整,意思连贯;
2. 时态,语法正确;
3. 书写工整,不少于100字 (已给句子不计入词数)。
My new school
Hello, I am Sandy—a new Grade 7 student.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let me introduce my new school to you.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My new school
Hello, I am Sandy—a new Grade 7 student. I am 12 years old now. I look tall and slim and I wear a pair of glasses. I have many hobbies, but I like playing the piano best. In my free time, I spend one or two hours practicing playing it at the weekend. And I am interested in science as well.
Let me introduce my new school to you. In my new school, Millie is my new friend. She is also 12 years old. She is kind and helpful. When someone has problems, she is always ready to help others.
My school is big and modern. There is an art building, a gym, the sports field, a dining hall and a library. My favourite place is the gym because I like swimming there with Millie after school. It helps me stay healthy and have fun. Our school is great!
My school life is great. There are many subjects, but I like Chinese best. I can read the works of many famous writers. We have field trips every year. It is interesting to visit fun places. We can learn about teamwork through different kinds of chores.
I’m sure you will like my school. I can’t wait to learn about your new school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的新学校;
第二步,介绍自己的个人信息、自己的新朋友、学校设施以及学校生活;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③stay healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①When someone has problems, she is always ready to help others.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②My favourite place is the gym because I like swimming there with Millie after school.(because引导的原因状语从句)
7.假设你是李华,进入初中已经3个月了,请写一封邮件向你的笔友Jack介绍一下你的学校和你新交的一个好朋友。
内容提示:学校的建筑、方位等; 好朋友的外貌、性格、爱好等。
要求:1. 包含提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数70左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
My school is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
My school is very big and beautiful and is located in the city center. There are many buildings, such as a classroom building, a library, a dining hall and a playground. The library is next to the classroom building.
My good friend is very nice. He has short black hair and big eyes. He is very friendly and helpful. He likes reading and playing basketball. I am really glad to have him as my friend.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“我的学校又大又漂亮”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点:学校的建筑、方位等; 好朋友的外貌、性格、爱好——等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②next to挨着
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①There are many buildings, such as a classroom building, a library, a dining hall and a playground. (there be句型)
②He has short black hair and big eyes. (and表并列)
8.假设你是李明,你的朋友杰克想了解你的学校生活。请根据以下提示,写一封电子邮件给他,介绍你的学校生活。
提示:
1. 介绍你的学校、老师和同学;
2. 讲述你在学校的日常活动,如上课、做作业、参加课外活动等;
3. 谈谈你对学校生活的感受。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,逻辑连贯;
2. 不少于50词。
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【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I want to tell you something about my school and my school life. At school, my teachers and classmates are very kind to me. There are many buildings and a big playground in the school. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. My favorite subject is math. I think it’s difficult but funny. After school, I often listen to music or read some books in the library. My school life is very colorful. I like it very much.
What about yours? Can you tell me something about your school and your school life? 1'm looking forward to getting the letter from you.
Yours.
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍学校、老师、同学及学校的日常活动;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to友好对待
②What about...?……怎么样?
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There are many buildings and a big playground in the school.(there be句型)
②I think it’s difficult but funny. (宾语从句)
9.请以“My School”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你们学校的建筑物的布局,可适当发挥你的想象力。词数不少于60。
My School
This is a map of my school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My School
This is a map of my school. When you enter the gate of our school, you can see a large sports field in front of you. On the left side of it, there is a dining hall, a science building and a sports hall. On the right side, there is a library, a classroom building and a teachers’ building. Our school is not big, but it is very beautiful. We are very happy here every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己的学校;
第二步,具体介绍学校的建筑物的布局;
第三步,书写结语,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①in front of在……前面
②beautiful美丽的
③every day每天
[高分句型]
When you enter the gate of our school, you can see a large sports field in front of you.(when引导的时间状语从句)
10.假设你是太湖中学的学生Jim,你们学校新来了一位交换生Peter,他想更多地了解你们学校,请你按照下面表格的内容,给他写一封信介绍你们学校。
地理位置
苏州中部
校园环境
教学楼很新;操场宽敞;教室干净明亮;环境优美
人文情况
师生勤奋友善,乐于助人,喜欢阅读;自拟两点
学校评价
学习和交友的好地方
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 文中包括所有要点,可适当发挥,语句连贯。
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【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Welcome to Taihu Middle School. Our school is in the middle of Suzhou. It’s very beautiful with new teaching buildings, clean classrooms and a big playground. There are many green trees and flowers around the teachers’ building. All the students and teachers are friendly and kind. They are always ready to help others. We like reading books, and every student studies hard to get good grades. There are many activities after school, like swimming, playing basketball and playing the guitar. I think our school is a nice place to study and make friends. So I hope you can enjoy yourself during your stay here.
Yours,
Jim
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,特别注意不要遗漏表格中需要自主补充的内容,可适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍学校的地理位置、学校设施以及环境;
第二步,介绍学校师生的情况,包括爱好、个人品质等;
第三步,表示自己对学校的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①welcome to sp.欢迎来某地
②in the middle of在……中部
③be ready to do sth.乐于做某事
④make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
We like reading books, and every student studies hard to get good grades.(动名词作宾语;动词不定式作目的状语)
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10Unit3书面表达10篇原卷版
1.假如你是LuCy,刚刚收到一封米自英国笔友Ea的电子邮件。请你阅读电子邮件内容后写一封回
信,回答她向你提出的问题。
Dear Lucy.
How are you?I am from the UK.I want to know about your school life.So what's your school like?What do
you learn at school?What is your favourite subject and why do you like it?Please let me know.
Love,
Ella
要求:()语言表达准确,语句通顺,可以适当发挥。
(2)60-80词,开头结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。
Dear Ella,
How are you?Let me tell you about my school life.
What fun things do you do at school?Please write to me soon.
Love.
Lucy
2.请根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作,所给提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出
你的学校名称和姓名。
假如你是李华,你的外国笔友m发邮件请你介绍你的中学学校。请你回信,内容包括:你的校园
里有什么设施,你最喜欢校园的哪个部分,以及你为什么喜欢它。
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提示词语:playground,.library,.fin,feel great
提示问题:
What are there in your junior high school?
What is your favourite place in the school?
Why do you like this place?
Dear Jim,
I am so happy to hear from you.I'd like to introduce my junior high school to you
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.
Li Hua
3.假如你是李华,你的英国网友David正在准备一份报告,主题为Schools in China,从未到过中国
的他想要向你寻求帮助。进入初中半学期的你对自己的学校也有所了解。现在请你写一封邮件向Davd介
绍你的学校。
Facilities(设克):
(classroom buildings,gym,sports
field...)
Activities:
y feelings(感受:
(clubs.field tip.)
My school
Teachers and classmates:
(kind.friendly.)
注意:
1内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺,意思连贯:
2.词数不少于70字(已给出的文章开头和结尾,不计入总词数):
2
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3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear David,
I am happy to share something about my school with you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4.请根据以下提示,以My School'”为题,写一篇短文介绍你的学校。
提示:
1,学校的位置:
2.学校的设施(教学楼、图书馆、体育馆等):
3.你对学校的感受。
要求:
4语句通顺,语法正确:
5.不少于60词.
5.学校近期将举行一次最美班级的评比活动,假如你是Tia,下图是你们班教室的照片,请你写一
篇短文参加此次活动,描述自己的教室,并谈论感受。
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参考词汇:clock,blackboard,computer,teacher's desk,bookcase,.basketball,ruler,.books,pencil box,key,water
bottle
要求:1参考提示内容,可适当发挥:
2语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等):
4词数:不少于50词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Hi,
Im
Tina!
This
my
classroom
6.假如你是Sandy,是一名七年级新同学,请根据下面的思维导图写一篇题为My new school"的短
文
1。
Introduce yourself(12 years old;
tall and slim;wear glasses;hobby...)
2.(1)Who is your
3.(1)School
new friend?
facilities(设施).
(2)What is he/she
My new school
(2)Your favourite
like?
place,why?
4.What's your school
life like?(subjects,
field trips.…)
要求:
1,语句通顺,表达完整,意思连贯:
4
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2.时态,语法正确:
3.书写工整,不少于100字(已给句子不计入词数)。
My new school
Hello,I am Sandy-a new Grade 7 student.
Let me introduce my new school to you.
7.假设你是李华,进入初中已经3个月了,请写一封邮件向你的笔友Jak介绍一下你的学校和你新
交的一个好朋友。
内容提示:学校的建筑、方位等:好朋友的外貌、性格、爱好等。
要求:1.包含提示内容,可适当发挥:
2不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息:
3.词数70左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
My
school
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Yours.
Li Hua
8。假设你是李明,你的朋友杰克想了解你的学校生活。请根据以下提示,写一封电子邮件给他,介
绍你的学校生活。
提示
1.介绍你的学校、老师和同学;
2.讲述你在学校的日常活动,如上课、做作业、参加课外活动等:
3.谈谈你对学校生活的感受。
要求:
1.语句通顺,逻辑连贯:
2.不少于50词。
9.请以y School"为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你们学校的建筑物的布局,可适当发挥你的想
象力。词数不少于60。
My School
This
a
map
of
my
school
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l0.假设你是太湖中学的学生Jim,你们学校新来了一位交换生Peter,他想更多地了解你们学校,请
你按照下面表格的内容,给他写一封信介绍你们学校。
地理位置
苏州中部
校园环境
教学楼很新:操场宽敞:教室干净明亮:环境优美
人文情况
师生勤奋友善,乐于助人,喜欢阅读;自拟两点
学校评价
学习和交友的好地方
要求:
1.词数80左右:
2.文中包括所有要点,可适当发挥,语句连贯。
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