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主题6
主题6 自我认识、自我管理与自我提升
分析贵州近5年真题可知,2024年贵州省中考书面表达以“The Change Made Me ”为题,要求讲述自身改变带来的影响;2022年黔东南州中考书面表达以“How to Develop Good Living Habits”为题,要求讲述自己在日常起居、卫生习惯、健康饮食、体育锻炼、交通安全等方面的生活习惯;2022年黔西南州中考书面表达要求为参加“英语文化节”应征成为志愿者写一封自荐信;2020年贵阳、安顺、黔南州中考书面表达以“Good Living Habits Make Me ”为题,要求讲述良好的生活习惯带来的影响。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知,此主题通常有以下命题角度:1.自我介绍(自身兴趣特长及优势)——主要用于写自荐信;2.成长与变化;3.自我管理;4.自我提升——如何成为更好的自己。
主题探究
角度1 自我介绍
(1) 基本信息
1.first name/given name 名字
2.last name/family name 姓
3.English name 英文名
4.come from/be from 来自
5.be born in/on 出生于
6.at the age of… 在……岁的时候
主题短语积累
(2) 外貌特征
1.look like 看起来像
2.take after (外表、举止、性格)像
3.look the same 看起来一样
4.wear a pair of glasses 戴一副眼镜
5.curly/straight hair 卷发/直发
6.a round face 一张圆圆的脸
7.be of medium height 中等身高
8.be tall and thin 又高又瘦
9.wear a smile on one's face 面带笑容
(3) 性格特点
1.be patient with 对……有耐心
2.be friendly/kind/nice to 对……友好
3.be good with 擅长和……打交道
4.be strict with 对……严格
5.be thankful to 对……心存感激的
6.be ready to do sth. 乐于做某事
7. try/do one's best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力做某事
8. be responsible for 对……负责
9. be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事
10. get on/along well with others 与别人相处融洽
11.keep on/stick to 坚持
12.be optimistic/positive about 对……乐观
(4) 兴趣和能力
1.be good at/do well in… 擅长于……
2.be skilled in/at/have a good command of 精通/对……掌握熟练
3.have rich experience in/be experienced in 在……上有丰富的经验
4.be talented in 在……方面有天赋
5.have the ability to do sth. 有能力做某事
6.like…a lot/be crazy about/be fond of/be passionate about/a big fan of 非
常喜欢/热爱……
7.be interested in/have a strong interest in 对……感兴趣
8. be excited about… 对……感到兴奋
9. prefer doing sth. to doing sth. 喜欢做某事胜过做某事
10.win many prizes 赢得很多奖项
11.take up a hobby 养成一个爱好
12.take part in 参加
13.play chess 下国际象棋
14.play the piano 弹钢琴
15.collect stamps 收集邮票
16.do/play sports 做运动
17.climb mountains 爬山
18.play football/basketball/volleyball 踢足球/打篮球/打排球
角度2 成长与变化
1.used to do 过去常常
2.in the past (three years) 在过去(三年间)
3.be poor at sth. 不擅长某事
4.be afraid of doing sth. 害怕做某事
5.with the help of 在……的帮助下
6.learn from 向……学习
7.make progress 取得进步
8.be confident 自信
角度3 自我管理
1.work hard 努力学习
2.be strict with sb. 对某人严格
3.a sense of responsibility 责任感
4.keep a promise 信守承诺
5.be always ready to do sth. 时刻准备着做某事
6.keep healthy 保持健康
7.different kinds of 各种各样的
8.have courage to face sb./sth. 有勇气面对某人/某事
9. overcome the trouble 克服困难
10.eat healthily/have a balanced diet 健康饮食/有均衡的饮食
11.keep away from 远离
12.get up early 早起
13.keep practicing 坚持练习
14.get well prepared for 为……做好准备
15.listen carefully to 认真听……
16. make you independent 使你独立
17.learn from mistakes 从错误中学习
18.obey school rules 遵守校规
角度4 自我提升
1.succeed in doing sth./manage to do sth. 成功做/设法做成某事
2.make up one's mind to do sth./be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事
3.improve oneself 提升自己
4.New Year's resolution(s) 新年决心
5.take acting lessons 上表演课
6. keep on writing 坚持写作
7.have to do with 与……有关
8.make more friends 交更多的朋友
9. enrich one's knowledge 充实某人的学识
10.open one's eyes 拓宽某人的视野
11.be brave to face challenges 勇于面对挑战
12.learn some life skills 学习一些生活技能
13.develop/form a healthy living habit 养成健康的生活习惯
14.exercise regularly 有规律地锻炼
15.take part in voluntary activities 参加志愿服务活动
16.help each other 互相帮助
17.talk to/with sb. 与某人交谈
18.take on new challenges 迎接新挑战
19.make detailed plans 制订详细的计划
20.put one's heart into sth. 全神贯注于某事
佳句积累
佳句赏析
►自我介绍
(1) 基本信息
1.I'm Li Hua, a 15-year-old middle school student from China.
2.Jack is a middle school student who was born in 2010.
佳句赏析
(2) 外貌特征
1.The man is of medium height with long straight brown hair and big eyes.(with作伴随状语丰富人物特征)
2.He has a round face, wearing a pair of glasses.(现在分词词组作伴随状语描述装饰)
3.Mr. Li wears a pair of sunglasses and a cap, which makes him look handsome.(which引导的定语从句描述外貌)
佳句赏析
(3) 性格特点
1.I'm quieter and more serious than most kids in my class. That's why I like reading books and study harder in class.(①用比较级对人物性格进行对比;②用That's+why引导的表语从句替代so引出原因)[八上U3 2b阅读]
2.Mary truly cares about me. When I broke my arm last year, she made me laugh and feel better.(when引导的时间状语从句说明动作发生的时间)[改编自八上U3 2b阅读]
3.I am an outgoing boy who can always get on well with others.(who引导定语从句,说明性格外向的具体表现)
佳句赏析
(4) 兴趣和能力
1.When I read books, time goes quickly.[七下U8阅读]
2.After I entered junior high school, I took up some hobbies like painting and playing the guitar.(用like举例)
3.I'm very good at speaking English. And I won many prizes in the English speaking competitions.
4. I'm fond of reading and it has become part of my life.(be fond of热爱……)
5.If I'm lucky enough to be given the chance, I will try my best to help them.
佳句赏析
►成长与变化
1.He used to be shy and quiet. When he talked to girls, his face always turned red.[九全Unit 4 2d]
2.She isn't shy anymore and dares to sing in front of crowds.[九全Unit 4 3a]
3.I didn't use to be popular in school,but now I get tons of attention everywhere I go.[九全Unit 4 3a]
4.Many time I thought about giving up, but I fought on.
佳句赏析
►自我管理
1.It is reported that many teenagers often depend on their parents in their daily life these days.(It is reported that…介绍青少年现状)
2.It is also useful to learn to plan our life properly.
3.In a word, if we learn to manage our life from now on, we will have a better future.(if引导条件状语从句,表达自我管理的作用)
佳句赏析
4.I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful life.
5.It's necessary and important for us to learn to manage our own life.
6.I think my free time is better used because I do what I want to do and I balance study and entertainment.(what引导宾语从句)[2024江西]
佳句赏析
►自我提升
1.I plan to take up some hobbies like painting and taking photos.(用such as/like对爱好进行举例)
2.My first plan has to do with my physical health.I will keep exercising every day to build up my body.(have to do with与……有关)
3.To improve myself, I plan to spend one hour a day in reading the books I'm interested in.(动词不定式前置作目的状语)
佳句赏析
4.If you want to make your dream come true, you should gain all kinds of knowledge to enrich your brain.
5.Only by improving ourselves can we have the ability to build our country in the future.(only+状语引导的部分倒装句)
6.We are supposed to master better learning methods and develop more good
qualities.
句子仿写
1)我向新朋友介绍自己时总会面带微笑。[用with作伴随状语仿写]
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2)制定计划帮助我保持专注并按时完成任务,那就是为什么我在开始任务前会制定计划的原因。[用句型That's why…仿写]
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I always introduce myself to new friends with a smile on my face.
Making a plan helps me stay focused and finish a task on time. That's why I make a plan before I start a task
句子仿写
3)在团队活动中,我能和我的伙伴们相处得很好并且一起完成任务。[用短语get on well with仿写]
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4)我过去在课堂上很害羞,但现在我已经鼓起勇气举手并分享我的想法。[用结构used to do sth.仿写]
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In the team activities, I can get on well with my partners and finish the tasks together.
I used to be shy in class, but now I have developed the courage to raise my hand and share my ideas.
句子仿写
5)自从参加了志愿活动,我不再仅仅用无意义的活动来填满空闲时间了。[用结构not…anymore仿写]
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6)人在成长历程中犯或大或小的错误是很正常的。[用句型It's+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.仿写]
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Since I started volunteering, I've not just filled my free time with meaningless activities anymore.
It is normal for people to make big or small mistakes during their growth experience.
句子仿写
7)我充分利用自己的绘画天赋为朋友们制作生日贺卡。[用短语make good use of 仿写]
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8)为了提高我的英语口语技能,我每天都和老师及同学练习对话。[用动词不定式作目的状语仿写]
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I make good use of my talent in drawing to create birthday cards for my friends.
To improve my spoken English skills, I practice making dialogues with my teacher and classmates every day.
句子仿写
9)如果你相信自己,你就会更有信心去实现你的目标。[用if引导的条件状语从句仿写]
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10)我们应该为自己设定目标来实现个人成长。[用短语be supposed to仿写]
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If you believe in yourself, you'll be more confident in achieving your goals.
We are supposed to set goals for ourselves to achieve personal growth.
【相关谚语】
1.Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
2.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
3.If you don't aim high, you will never hit high. 不立大志,难攀高峰。
[2024贵州]成长的道路上,我们努力改变以提升自我。假如你是李华,你校英语广播站正在开展主题为“The Change Made Me…”(改变让我……)的征文活动。请参考图文信息,积极投稿。
真题剖析
要求:
1.补全标题;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
由给出的提示词可知,空处可以填形容词或动词
【审题】
主题:自我提升
文体:________文
要点:
①介绍自身发生了什么变化;
②具体讲述自身发生改变的故事;
③表达自身改变所带来的感受。
记叙
人称:第______人称
时态:要点①:用______________________时;
要点②:用____________时;
要点③:用________________________时
一
一般现在/一般过去
一般过去
一般现在时/一般过去
【写作框架】
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
The Change Made Me ____________
Everything is changing, and so am I. I believe I will get better and better, just like the change that happened last year.
Better
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
①Before, I was impatient and not serious about everything I did. Therefore, every time I took an exam, I was anxious to finish the test paper without checking whether it was right or not. This led to my poor grade. ②When I saw that all my friends did better than me in the exam, I was depressed and made up my mind to make some changes. I reminded myself to take time and pay attention to every detail. Slowly, I became more focused and my grades got better and better.(要点1:介绍自身发生了什么变化;要点2:具体讲述自身发生改变的故事)
连句成篇
③The wonderful change made me feel happier and gave me the courage to face new challenges bravely. I am proud of my change, because it has made me better.(要点3:表达自身变化所带来的感受)
句子升格
①用固定搭配“used to do sth.”升格句子:
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②用“现在分词短语作原因状语”替换“when引导的时间状语从句”升格句子:
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I used to be impatient and not serious about everything I did.
Seeing that all my friends did better than me in the exam, I was depressed and made up my mind to make some changes.
句子升格
③用连词词组“not only...but also...”升格句子:
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The wonderful change not only made me feel happier but also gave me the courage to face new challenges bravely.
【誊写】
The Change Made Me ________
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Better
Everything is changing, and so am I. I believe I will get better and better, just like the change that happened last year.
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I used to be impatient and not serious about everything I did. Therefore, every time I took an exam, I was anxious to finish the test paper without checking whether it was right or not. This led to my poor grade. Seeing that all my friends did better than me in the exam, I was depressed and made up my mind to make some changes. I reminded myself to take time and pay attention to every detail. Slowly, I became more focused and my grades got better and better.
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The wonderful change not only made me feel happier but also gave me the courage to face new challenges bravely. I am proud of my change, because it has made me better.
随着社会的进步和教育的发展,我们初中生不仅要学习知识,更要注重提升个人能力和培养良好品质。校园报以“How to Be a Student”为题,面向初中毕业生开展征文活动。 请你用happy/good/healthy……将题目补全,希望同学们能结合自己的生活实际,分享自己的观点!
实战演练
要求:
1.要点要全面,需适当扩展;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.内容积极向上,不少于80词。
How to Be a __________ Student
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Happy
Nowadays, with the progress of society and the development of education, we junior high school students should not only learn knowledge, but also pay more attention to improving our personal abilities and developing good qualities. I think to be a happy student, we need to do the followings.
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First of all, we can make friends. Best friends bring out the best in us. Another way is to take up some hobbies, such as listening to music and reading books which we like. Also, we need to take part in sports and eat healthy food. Not only doing exercise builds up the body, but it also provides us with time to relax and fresh our minds, making us memorize things faster and longer. Last but not least, we should keep in a good mood though life is not full of sunshine. If we meet with difficulties, we had better talk with our parents, teachers or friends to share troubles and sadness.
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life and be happy students.
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