2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题11 家乡、社会的变迁与对未来的畅想

主题11　 主题11 家乡、社会的变迁与对未来的畅想 分析贵州近5年真题可知，2021年黔西南州中考书面表达以“Changes in my hometown”为题，要求介绍家乡过去、现在的情况以及对开展乡村振兴的感想和打算。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知，此主题通常有以下命题角度：1.介绍中国的发展变化；2.介绍家乡的发展变化；3.畅想未来。 主题探究 角度1　介绍中国的发展变化 1．places of interest 名胜古迹 2．be known/famous as 作为……而闻名 3．attach the most importance to 对……最重视 4．attract the attention of the world 引起全世界的关注 5．feel excited for the strength of motherland 为祖国的强大感到兴奋 6．be proud of 为……感到自豪 7．take place 发生 主题短语积累 8． develop rapidly 快速发展 9． a long history and vast land 历史悠久，地域辽阔 10．prosperous and strong 繁荣强大 11．traditional food culture 传统饮食文化 12．home and abroad 国内外 13．change for the better 变得更好 14．take measures 采取措施 15．make sth. a reality 使……成为现实 16．be the pride of 成为……的骄傲 17．make progress 进步 角度2　介绍家乡的发展变化 1．lie in/be located in the central part of… 位于……中部 2．by the side of… 在……旁边 3．have a large population 人口众多 4．ancient wall 古城墙 5．welcome to… 欢迎来到…… 6．be famous/known for 因……而闻名 7．the home of… ……的发源地 8．rich culture 丰富的文化 9． one of the most suitable living cities 最宜居的城市之一 10．cultural atmosphere 文化氛围 11．be free to 对……免费 12．have great effects on 对……有很大影响 13．in the past few years 在过去的几年 14．be suitable for 适合于 15．show sb. around 带某人参观 16．natural beauty 自然风光 17．have fun 玩得开心 18．poverty relief 扶贫 19．have a great victory in 在……取得巨大胜利 20．in the past 在过去 21. used to be 曾经是 22．living condition/standard 生活条件/水平 23．high and bright buildings 高大明亮的建筑 24．wide and clean streets 宽阔干净的街道 25．live a hard life 过着艰苦的生活 26．backward little town 落后的小镇 27．convenient transportation 便利的交通 28．be rich in 富含/盛产…… 29．spring up one after another 层出不穷 角度3　畅想未来 1．travel around the world 环游世界 2．in the future 将来；未来 3．enjoy oneself 过得愉快 4．achieve one's dream 完成某人的梦想 5．make great achievements in many fields 在许多领域取得巨大成就 6．the most developed country 最发达的国家 7．succeed in doing sth./manage to do sth. 成功做成某事 佳句积累 佳句赏析 ►介绍中国的发展变化 1．In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. 2．There are hardworking and kind people, who make China more and more prosperous and strong. (①who引导非限制性定语从句，介绍了勤劳善良的人们为中国做出的贡献；②高级词汇 prosperous adj.繁荣的) 3．There are many clean lakes and green hills, which make China more beautiful. 佳句赏析 4. There is rich and unique food that creates its traditional food culture. (①that引导定语从句，进一步说明了该地独特的食物的影响力；②高级词汇unique adj.独一无二的) 5．China is famous for its rich tourism resources home and abroad. (tourism resources 旅游资源) 6．China has made great progress in its space successfully, making China's space dream a reality. (making…是现在分词短语作伴随状语，说明了中国在航天方面取得的成就) 7．I'm proud of our country and I hope I'll be the pride of our country in the future. 佳句赏析 ►介绍家乡的发展变化 1．A beautiful Yangtze River Bridge, like a dragon, is over the Yangtze River. (like a dragon作为插入语，使读者对长江大桥的形象了然于心) 2．Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theaters have sprung up one after another. (高级短语spring up涌现) 3．I love my hometown and its people. We are working hard so as to make it richer and more beautiful. 佳句赏析 4．I'm honored to give a speech on the great changes that have taken place in my city. (be honored to do sth.很荣幸做某事) 5．High buildings can be seen everywhere and children can also get a very good education. 6．In the past, my hometown was very small, and people lived a poor life. 7．The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer. (三个比较级列举了家乡的具体变化) 佳句赏析 8．In the past, we had no other choices but to read books or watch TV in our free time, but now we can play games with our friends, watch films in the cinema or travel outside of our city. (have no choice but to do sth.强调了过去人们生活的单一) 9．The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful, which adds to our happiness. (which引导非限制性定语从句，说明了家乡变得更好对人们的影响) 佳句赏析 ►畅想未来 1．And we don't have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life.(①which引导非限制性定语从句，说明了将来的垃圾降解给人们生活带来的改变；②高级词汇 dissolve v．降解) 2．Even so, education will be more convenient, no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet. (no matter＋疑问词引导让步状语从句，突出强调教育的便利性) 句子仿写 1)在过去的几年，我的家乡发生了很大的变化。[用短语take place仿写] _______________________________________________________________ 2)中国有许许多多像吴孟超这样无私奉献的人，他们尽自己所能促进中国的发展。[用who引导的非限定性定语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In the past few years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. There are many selfless people like Wu Mengchao in China, who try their best to improve China's development. 句子仿写 3)看到高大明亮的高楼和干净整洁的大街，我由衷地为我的家乡骄傲。[用短语be proud of和高级词汇sincerely仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4)环境变得更好了，这里的人越来越富裕了，街道比以前宽多了。[用三个形容词比较级仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing the tall and bright buildings and the clean and tidy streets, I am sincerely proud of my hometown. The environment has become better, the people here are richer and richer, and the streets are much wider than before. 句子仿写 5)我们需要尽快采取措施保护我们家乡的环境，使其更美丽。[用短语as soon as possible仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6)无论何时来这里，你都能听到鸟儿在树林里欢快地歌唱。[用no matter＋疑问词引导的让步状语从句仿写] ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ We need to take measures to protect environment in our hometown as soon as possible to make it more beautiful. No matter when you come here, you can hear birds singing/sing happily in the trees. [2023贵州一模]贵州自然风光秀美，地方风物独特。近日，贵州天眼新闻双语频道正在举办主题为“亮出贵州名片，我为家乡代言”的英语征文比赛。请你以“Beautiful ， My Hometown”为题，写一篇约80词的稿件。 真题剖析 要求： 1．补全标题； 2．稿件须包含思维导图中至少两条信息； 3．适当表达自己的看法及感受； 4．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。　　　 空处缺少地名，根据自己的家乡的名称填写 由此可知，介绍家乡具体情况时可从花朵图中选择至少两个花瓣中的内容进行介绍 【审题】 主题：介绍自己的家乡 文体：________文 要点： ①说明自己家乡的名称、地理位置等基本信息 ②介绍家乡的具体情况(名胜古迹、美食、风土人情等) ③省略号为补充要点，一般表达对家乡的热爱并欢迎大家去游玩 人称：第__________人称 时态：____________时 说明 一/三 一般现在 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 Beautiful ____________, My Hometown My hometown Tongren is located in the northeastern part of Guizhou Province. It is a place with a long history. (要点1：介绍自己家乡的名称、地理位置等基本信息) Tongren 连句成篇 ①There are many places of interest in Tongren. They always amaze both locals and visitors. Among them, there is the Mount Fanjing and Jinjiang River. When you climb the mountain, you can enjoy the attractive sea of clouds and the fancy mushroom stones. ②Jinjiang River is very clear, and you can clearly see a lot of fish swimming freely in it. ③Besides, the local specialties are also quite delicious. What's more, the local people of Tongren are warm-hearted and friendly. ④If you travel there, they will make you feel good. (要点2：介绍家乡的具体情况) 连句成篇 　My hometown is truly a beautiful heaven, a place with natural beauty and cultural atmosphere. I love it from the bottom of my heart. So, I sincerely invite all of you to come and visit Tongren! Tongren is sure to welcome you with open arms and leave you with unforgettable memories. (补充要点——要点3——表达对家乡的热爱并发出邀请) 句子升格 ①用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并两个句子，并用短语“fail to do sth.”升格句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ②用连词词组“so…that…”升格句子： _______________________________________________________________ There are many places of interest in Tongren, which never fail to amaze both locals and visitors. Jinjiang River is so clear that you can clearly see a lot of fish swimming freely in it. 句子升格 ③用短语“such as”扩写句子： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________④用短语“try one's best to do sth.”和“feel at home”升格句子： _______________________________________________________________ Besides, the local specialties are also quite delicious, such as the mung bean noodles and the steamed stuffed buns made with glutinous rice powder. If you travel there, they will try their best to make you feel at home. 【誊写】 Beautiful _________, My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Tongren My hometown Tongren is located in the northeastern part of Guizhou Province. It is a place with a long history. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ There are many places of interest in Tongren, which never fail to amaze both locals and visitors. Among them, there is the Mount Fanjing and Jinjiang River. When you climb the mountain, you can enjoy the attractive sea of clouds and the fancy mushroom stones. Jinjiang River is so clear that you can clearly see a lot of fish swimming freely in it. Besides, the local specialties are also quite delicious, such as the mung bean noodles and the steamed stuffed buns made with glutinous rice powder. What's more, the local people of Tongren are warm-hearted and friendly. If you travel there, they will try their best to make you feel at home. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My hometown is truly a beautiful heaven, a place with natural beauty and cultural atmosphere. I love it from the bottom of my heart. So, I sincerely invite all of you to come and visit Tongren! Tongren is sure to welcome you with open arms and leave you with unforgettable memories. 为庆祝2024年国庆节的到来，你校英语社团拟举办以“China in My Eyes”为题的征文活动，请根据以下导图信息，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你眼中的祖国！ 实战演练 要求： 1．文章必须包含导图中所有要点，可适当发挥； 2．内容积极向上，不少于80词； 3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 China in My Eyes __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hello, everyone! I am from China and I like my country very much. It's my great honor to give a speech here. Now I'd like to introduce my country to you！ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the National Day celebrations draw near, I find myself reflecting on the beauty and depth of my native country, China. In my eyes, China has rich history, brilliant culture, and hard-working spirit. On the one hand, China has many traditional cultures, such as paper-cutting and Traditional Chinese Medicine. On the other hand, in modern times, the wide application of high-speed railway and new energy vehicles has made people's life more convenient. Mobile payment allows us to shop without carrying cash. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As students, we are also responsible for achieving Chinese Dream. What should we do? From my point of view, we should be thirsty for knowledge and study hard from now on. At the same time, in order to realize Chinese Dream, we should never give up. $$