2025年贵州中考英语二轮复习主题写作课件：主题9 经历与感受

主题9 主题9 经历与感受 分析贵州近5年真题可知,2023年贵州省中考书面表达以“My Family Memory”为题,要求讲述家庭记忆并表达感受或观点。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知,此主题通常有以下命题角度:1. 描述经历;2. 表达感受。 主题探究 角度1 描述经历 1.collect information 收集信息 2.visit the science/history/art/space/nature museum 参观科技/历史/艺术/太空/自然博物馆 3.go to the farm/countryside/summer camp/ beach 去农场/乡下/夏令营/海滩 4.go to the old people's home 去敬老院 5.come up with a plan 想出一个计划 6.put up signs 张贴标志 主题短语积累 7. hand out notices 分发告示 8. stay up late to do sth. 熬夜做某事 9. give out food 分发食物 10.give away 捐赠 11.win first prize 赢得第一名 12.take part in an English speaking competition 参加英语演讲比赛 13.make a plan 制定一个计划 14.to start with/first of all 开始 15.come up with some ideas 想出一些主意 16.be chosen to do 被选择去做 17.make an effort to do sth. 努力做某事 18. with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下 19.the key to success 成功的秘诀 20.succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 21.see an old man lying on the road 看到一个老人躺在地上 22.shout for help 大声呼救 23.take…to the hospital 把……送去医院 24.be saved in time 及时被救 25.rain heavily 下大雨 26.on the way home 在回家路上 27.go off (闹钟、警报等)发出响声 28.get wet in the rain 被雨淋湿 29.miss the bus 错过公交车 30.the unexpected 不期而遇的事 31.pull together 齐心协力 32.let sb. down 让某人失望 33.cheer sb. up 使某人振奋 角度2 表达感受 1.have a heavy weight on one's shoulders 某人肩上有沉重的负担 2.be deeply touched 被深深地感动了 3.stare in disbelief at… 难以置信地盯着看 4.a strong feeling of pride 一种强烈的自豪感 5. kind of tired 有点累 6.jump with joy 开心地跳起来 7.completely shocked 彻底震惊(的) 8.an exciting day 令人兴奋的一天 9.be interested in 对……感兴趣 10.tired but happy 疲惫但开心 11.interesting but scary 有趣但可怕 12.so much/a lot of fun 如此多/很多乐趣 13.have fun/have a great time/enjoy oneself 玩得开心 14.leave soft and sweet memories 留下温馨且甜蜜的回忆 15.benefit a lot from the competition 从比赛中获益良多 16.countless interesting memories 无数有趣的回忆 17.be proud of 对……感到骄傲 18.be thankful to sb. 感激某人 19.broaden/widen one's horizons 打开某人的眼界 20.enrich my life 丰富我的生活 21.understand the importance of… 理解……的重要性 22.improve our communication skills 提高我们的沟通技能 佳句积累 佳句赏析 引出经历 1.When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, I'll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7. (When it comes to…一说到……) 2.During junior high school, what impressed me most is to take part in a volunteering activity. (主语从句what impressed me most引出印象最深的活动) 3.The purpose of making the poster is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. (动词不定式结构作表语) 佳句赏析 4.Last week, I took part in the community labor activity organized by the student union of our school. 5. Seeing the old people living alone in my community, I planned to organize a community activity to help them. 6.The meaning of the saying “Trouble is a friend.” is that although trouble may be frustrating and upsetting, it is also a reminder to be more careful and avoid bigger problems, just like a friend.[2024江苏苏州] 佳句赏析 描述经历 1.In the robot museum, everyone was excited to see robots in different shapes. 2.We went to a history museum, learning about many historical stories about the city. 3.To start with, we had a heated discussion and made a plan. 佳句赏析 4.We made an effort to collect information in different ways and asked our elders about their past living conditions. (make an effort to do 描述事件经历) 5.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that. 6. Thanks to Mr. Wang and the passengers, the man was saved by the doctors in time. 佳句赏析 表达感受 1.The experience not only widens my horizons, but also leaves me with beautiful memories.(widen one's horizons开阔某人的眼界) 2.How surprised and excited I was when I was told to get the first prize!(用感叹句描述感受) 3.Only if you spare no effort to work hard can you achieve your goals. (only if置于句首,强调条件的重要性,引起部分倒装) 佳句赏析 4.I've finally realized why my grandpa loves drinking tea and collecting tea sets. (why引导宾语从句) 5.Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together. (although引导让步状语从句) 6.It was such an interesting trip that I would never forget it. (such…that…引导结果状语从句) 7.Nothing is more valuable to me than helping others, and I will continue to do so. 佳句赏析 8.From then on, I become more and more confident, and I am determined to continue to try my best to study Chinese as well as other subjects. 9.I have learned a lesson that I'll never know how good I am without taking the chance to try. 10.Whenever I think of her, a strong feeling of thankfulness always fills my heart. (a strong feeling of thankfulness 强烈的感激之情) 句子仿写 1)当谈到我的旅行经历时,我有许多难忘的回忆。[用句型When it comes to…仿写] _ 2)在去年暑假期间,我印象最深刻的事是去做志愿者工作。[用句型what impressed me most is to仿写] _ When it comes to my travel experiences, I have many unforgettable memories. During the last summer vacation, what impressed me most is to take part in the volunteer work. 句子仿写 3)“一分耕耘,一分收获”的意思是不付出努力,你就不会取得成功或得到回报。[用句型The meaning of…is that…仿写] _ 4)为了提高写作技能,我努力读了很多书并且每周至少写一篇文章。[用短语make an effort to仿写] _ The meaning of “No pains, no gains” is that you won't achieve success or get rewards without hard work. To improve my writing skills, I made an effort to read a lot of books and write at least one article a week. 句子仿写 5)多亏了我朋友们在那段时期的帮助,我设法渡过了难关并且变得更坚强。[用短语thanks to仿写] _ 6)这是多么美妙而有意义的一次经历啊![用感叹句仿写] _ Thanks to my friends' help at that time, I managed to get through it and became stronger. What a wonderful and meaningful experience it is! 句子仿写 7)只要我能看到孩子们脸上的微笑,我就会感到快乐和满足。[用连词词组as long as仿写] _ 8)她意识到这次经历让她已经变得更强大、更自信。[用that引导的宾语从句仿写] _ As long as I can see the smile on the children's faces, I feel happy and satisfied. She realized/has realized that the experience has made her stronger and more confident. 句子仿写 9)每当我遇到困难,我都会记起父亲教给我的那些道理,它们帮助我找到出路。[用whenever引导的时间状语从句仿写] _ Whenever I meet difficulties, I remember the lessons my father taught me and they help me find a way out. 【相关谚语】 1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2.Knowledge comes from questioning. 知识源于质疑。 3.No pains, no gains. 不劳则无获。 4.It is never too old to learn. 活到老,学到老。 5.Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人。 6.Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles. 读万卷书,行万里路。 7.Knowledge starts with practice. 实践出真知。 8.Reading is to the mind while exercise to the body. 读书健脑,运动强身。 [2023贵州]请结合下图内容及提示,以“My Family Memory”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。 真题剖析 写作要求: 1.结合实际,用适当的形容词补全标题。 2.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。 3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。 由此可知,空处可填的词为warm, unforgettable, beautiful,… 【审题】 主题:家庭回忆 文体:_文 要点: ①描述家庭记忆(事件、时间、人物) ②表达感受或观点 记叙 人称:第_人称 时态: 要点①:用_时 要点②:用_时和_时 一 一般过去 现在完成 一般现在 【写作框架】 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 My Family Memory When I think back to my childhood, I am flooded with warm memories of my loving family. Warm 连句成篇 ①I always remember the moment when we gathered around the dining table for Sunday dinners. Although my parents were busy, they still made dinners for me every Sunday. The smell of delicious food Mom cooked filled the air as we chatted and shared stories happily together. ②Furthermore, my dad used to read bedtime stories to me. ③Every night, I climbed into bed, and he sat beside me and read stories that took me to magical worlds. His smooth voice made me feel safe and loved. (要点1:描述家庭记忆的事件、时间、人物) 连句成篇 These warm family memories have shaped who I am today. They have taught me the importance of love, support, and being there for one another. ④I am grateful to my warm and loving family, because they have created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a lifetime. (要点2:表达观点或感受) 句子升格 ①用句型“one of the moments I…most is that…”和高级词汇“cherish v.珍惜”升格句子: _ ②用when引导的时间状语从句升格句子: _ One of the moments I cherish most is that we gathered around the dining table for Sunday dinners. Furthermore, when I was a kid, my dad used to read bedtime stories to me. 句子升格 ③用现在分词作伴随状语描述“he”所做的两个动作升格句子: _ ④用who引导的定语从句升格句子: _ Every night, I climbed into bed, and he sat beside me, reading stories that took me to magical worlds. I am grateful to my warm and loving family who have created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a lifetime. 【誊写】 My _ Family Memory _ Warm When I think back to my childhood,I am flooded with warm memories of my loving family. _ One of the moments I cherish most is that we gathered around the dining table for Sunday dinners. Although my parents were busy, they still made dinners for me every Sunday. The smell of delicious food Mom cooked filled the air as we chatted and shared stories happily together. Furthermore, when I was a kid, my dad used to read bedtime stories to me. Every night, I climbed into bed, and he sat beside me, reading stories that took me to magical worlds. His smooth voice made me feel safe and loved. _ These warm family memories have shaped who I am today. They have taught me the importance of love, support, and being there for one another. I am grateful to my warm and loving family who have created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a lifetime. 实战演练 [2023四川南充改编]你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成)”为题向全校学生开展征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 要求: 1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥; 2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范; 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名; 4.词数不少于80词(短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。 Where there is a will, there is a way Have you heard of the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way? _ It means if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well. The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success. _ Let's take me for example. In Grade 7, I couldn't speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher's help, I made plans to improve it. I read English texts aloud for an hour every morning. I also made a foreign friend online. She helped me correct the way I spoke English. Day by day, my spoken English improved a lot. Last month I won first prize in my school's English Speech Contest. This experience has taught me that nothing is too difficult as long as you make the decision to do it, just as the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way”. $$