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主题8
主题8 劳动实践与劳动品质
分析贵州近5年真题可知,2022年贵阳中考书面表达以“Let's Take Part in Labor Activities”为题,要求介绍劳动实践与收获;2021年安顺中考书面表达以“Let's Do Housework”为题,介绍自己在做家务中的收获。结合全国近4年中考真题分析可知,此主题通常有以下命题角度:
1.劳动技能介绍;2.家务劳动;3.志愿活动与公共服务;4.劳动实践与
收获。
主题探究
角度1 劳动技能介绍
1.labor activities 劳动活动
2.cook meals 做饭
3.grow vegetables 种蔬菜
4.pick the strawberries 摘草莓
5.feed the animals 喂动物
6.milk a cow 给奶牛挤奶
7.do farm work 干农活
主题短语积累
8. water flowers 浇花
9. plant trees 植树
10.flower arranging 插花
11.develop labor habits 养成劳动习惯
12.learn some basic life skills 学习一些基本的生活技能
角度2 家务劳动
1.do the dishes 洗餐具
2.cook meals/dishes 做饭
3.clean up 打扫干净
4.take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
5.sweep the floor 扫地
6.wash clothes 洗衣服
7.fold the clothes 叠衣服
8.repair the computer 修电脑
9. take care of 照顾
10.make the bed 整理床铺
11.depend on 依靠;信赖
12.do chores/housework 做家务
13.sense of responsibility 责任感
14.do one's part in doing sth. 尽某人的职责做某事
15.balance studies and housework 平衡功课和家务
16.tidy (up) a room 整理房间
角度3 志愿活动与公共服务
1.volunteer to do sth. 志愿做某事
2.give out food 分发食物
3.clean up the city parks 清理城市公园
4.help the homeless 帮助无家可归的人
5.cheer up the sick kids 鼓舞生病的孩子
6.raise money for the disabled 为残疾人筹钱
角度4 劳动实践与收获
1.labor practice activities 劳动实践活动
2. a meaningful activity 有意义的活动
3.tired but happy 累并快乐着
4.a sense of achievement 成就感
5.reduce study pressure 减轻学习压力
6.be good for our health 有益于我们的健康
7.get a strong feeling of satisfaction 获得强烈的满足感
8.take care of/look after oneself 照顾自己
9. be more independent and responsible 变得更独立和负责
10.be confident about oneself 对自己感到自信
11.have a better relationship with parents 和父母有更好的关系
12.understand the idea of fairness 理解公平的概念
13.realize the importance of labor 意识到劳动的重要性
14.develop independence 发展独立性
佳句积累
佳句赏析
►劳动技能介绍
1.First of all, we should try our best to learn some basic labor knowledge and skills.
2.Labor education plays an important role in teenagers' development.
(play an important role发挥重要作用)
3.We can take part in activities such as planting trees and growing vegetables to enrich our real work experience.
佳句赏析
4.Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep me calm and relaxed.(①that引导定语从句,限定插花;②because 解释了想要学习插花的原因)
5. Only with more practice can we improve our labor skills.(only+状语开头的部分倒装句强调提高劳动技能的方式)
6.Forming good working habits is equally important.(高级词汇equally adj.同样地)
佳句赏析
►家务劳动
1.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.
2.As middle school students, I think it's our duty to help our parents do some housework.
3.It is important for us to learn how to do chores and help our parents with housework.
4.What's more, doing housework helps us develop our independence.
佳句赏析
5.By doing housework, we can not only reduce the burden on our parents, but also show our love to them.(高级词汇burden n.负担)
6.The more chores we do, the earlier we will learn to be independent.
(句型“the+比较级,the+比较级”描述做家务的好处)
7.It is high time that we should spare some time every day to help our parents with housework.
8.I decide to learn how to cook, so that my parents can have meals after a day's hard work.
佳句赏析
►志愿活动与公共服务
1.As an old saying goes, “The rose is in her hand, the flavor in mine.”
(谚语:赠人玫瑰,手有余香。)
2.Not only do I feel good to help others, but also I get to spend time doing what I like to do.(用not only位于句首引起部分倒装)
3.Being a volunteer helps to develop our independence and teach us how to love others.(develop our independence培养我们的独立性)
4.Let's start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a better world!
佳句赏析
►劳动实践与收获
1.Our school organized a voluntary labor activity last week to help us learn more about farming and the value of labor.
2.Through this experience, I have realized that good life actually comes from hard work.(that引导宾语从句)
3.Although I met with a lot of difficulties in the work, it helped me understand what labor means.
佳句赏析
4.As teenagers, we are supposed to form good labor habits which are good for our growth.(which引导定语从句)
5.Taking part in social practice can connect what I've learned with real life in an interesting way.
6.Labor education can not only improve our basic life skills but also help us develop the right view of life.
句子仿写
1)通过劳动实践,你可以学到很多有价值的技能,例如做手工、园艺和烹饪。[用短语such as仿写]
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2)只有有了基本的生活技能,我们才能照顾好自己。[用以only+状语开头的部分倒装句仿写]
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Through labor practice, you can learn many valuable skills such as making handicrafts, gardening and cooking.
Only with basic life skills can we take good care of ourselves.
句子仿写
3)我们有必要在我们的日常生活中与家人分担家务。[用句型It is+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.仿写]
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4)孩子们越早学会做家务,对他们的未来越有好处。[用句型the+比较级,the+比较级仿写]
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5)学校是时候组织各种劳动实践活动来提高学生的实践技能了。[用句型It is high time that…仿写]
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It is necessary for us to share housework with our family in our daily life.
The earlier kids learn to do chores, the better it is for their future.
It is high time that schools should organize all kinds of labor practice activities to improve students' practical skills.
句子仿写
6)我想学习如何植树,这样我就可以为我的家乡种植更多的树来使它更美丽。[用连词so that仿写]
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7)我相信每个人都能在志愿活动中发挥作用。[用短语play a part in仿写]
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I would like to learn how to plant trees, so that I can plant more trees for my hometown to make it more beautiful.
I believe that everyone can play a part in voluntary activities.
句子仿写
8)虽然学习劳动技能有时具有挑战性,但从长远来看,它会带来巨大的回报。[用连词although仿写]
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9)做家务不仅提高了我们的生活技能,还帮助我们形成了良好的生活习惯。[用连词词组not only…but also…仿写]
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Although learning labor skills can be challenging at times, it brings great rewards in the long run.
Doing housework not only improved our life skills but also helped us form good living habits.
[2022贵阳]劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此,青少年应该主动参加各类劳动,如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期,育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历,以“Let's Take Part in Labor Activities”为题,写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。
真题剖析
要求如下:
1.请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动;
2.重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议;
3.文中不得出现真实个人信息。
【审题】
主题:劳动实践与收获
文体:如果参考问卷内容介绍劳动及其收获并提出建议,体裁为_____文;如果结合自身经历介绍劳动及其收获和建议,体裁为________文
要点:
①列举参加过的2~3项劳动
②参加劳动的收获
③提出建议
说明
记叙
人称:以第______人称为主
时态:
参考问卷内容介绍劳动及其收获并提出建议时以____________时为主;结合自身经历介绍劳动及其收获和建议时以____________时为主
(注意:本文讲解过程参考的是问卷内容)
一
一般现在
一般过去
【写作框架】
连句成篇
Let's Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students' all-round development. In my mind, labor education can not only teach us some basic life skills, but also provide us with the chance to help our parents and others.
连句成篇
In my free time, I often help my parents do housework. And I clean the classroom with my classmates after In my free time, I often help my parents do housework. And I clean the classroom with my classmates after school once a week. ①In addition, I also take part in some volunteer work.By doing these labor activities, I gradually become more patient, more responsible and more independent. ②They also help me form good living habits.(要点1:列举参加过的劳动;要点2:参加劳动的收获)
连句成篇
Labor is the source of all happiness. ③In my opinion, the school is supposed to hold some competitions about the labor skills. ④What's more, as teenagers, we should spare some time to do labor activities.(要点3:提出建议)
连句成篇
①用短语“such as”扩写志愿活动的具体例子升格句子:
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②用句型“The most important thing is that...”升格句子:_______________________________________________________________
In addition, I also take part in some volunteer work, such as working in an old people's home or helping homeless animals.
The most important thing is that they also help me form good living habits.
连句成篇
③常用发表观点的短语:
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④用“动词不定式结构”表明做劳动活动的目的升格句子:
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as for me, in my view, in my case, as far as I'm concerned, as far as I can see, from my point of view, from my perspective…
What's more, as teenagers, we should spare some time to do labor activities to be responsible and grow up healthily.
【誊写】
Let's Take Part in Labor Activities
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Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students' all-round development. In my mind, labor education can not only teach us some basic life skills, but also provide us with the chance to help our parents and others.
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In my free time, I often help my parents do housework. And I clean the classroom with my classmates after school once a week. In addition, I also take part in some volunteer work, such as working in an old people's home or helping homeless animals. By doing these labor activities, I gradually become more patient, more responsible and more independent. The most important thing is that they also help me form good living habits.
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Labor is the source of all happiness. In my opinion, the school is supposed to hold some competitions about the labor skills. What's more, as teenagers, we should spare some time to do labor activities to be responsible and grow up healthily.
假设你是李华,你校广播站英文专栏以“Volunteering in Summer Holiday”为题,面向广大学生征稿,倡导同学们积极参与志愿者服务工作,鼓励大家度过一个愉快而有意义的假期。请结合以下要点,谈谈你对此的看法和建议,用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文进行投稿。
实战演练
写作要求:1. 短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 文章标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Volunteering in Summer Holiday
Do you want to spend your summer holiday in a meaningful way? ___
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me, I think volunteering is a great way to spend our holiday.
Firstly, many parents are busy with their work in my community. And they have no time to take good care of their kids. So I can play games with them and tell stories to them. Secondly, since the old people are always lonely during the day, I will chat with them. It is also my pleasure to take a walk with them on a nice day. What's more, we can help to pick up the rubbish and make a difference to the environment in our neighbourhood.
For
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What I want to do is to help people who are in need. I hope everyone can take an active part in volunteering so that the world will be a better place to live.
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